Greetings, all. Hedgewitch (Joy Ann Jones) here, and I ‘m guest hosting Poetics this time around for Brian Miller, who has kidnapped his wife and taken her off to an undisclosed location for a well-deserved extended birthday weekend.
Okay, this post has absolutely nothing to do with Humphrey Bogart, or Casablanca, except that I stole his famous line to the piano player in Rick’s Café Américain for my own nefarious purposes. I’ve titled this prompt ‘Say it Again, Sam’ because I’ve been impressed lately by how many poets do just that: say it again, repeating a word or a phrase, or even parts of either, to emphasize what they’re trying to do with their poem.
Poets routinely use many ways to deliver and enhance their words: rhyme, meter, enjambment, alliteration, and poetic forms such as the sonnet, haiku or villanelle as well. One of the most ancient and effective poetic devices is the use of repetition. You can find it working its hypnotic magic in everything from music such as folk ballads and the blues to modern rock, from bardic oral history and the drama and poetry of the Classical era, to every kind of form and free verse in modern times. It can be used intellectually to underline an idea or thematic concept, such as this little snippet from Burnt Norton by T.S. Eliot:
“Go, go, go, said the bird: human kind
Cannot bear very much reality.”
or to speak purely to our emotions, as in the following classic evocation of atmosphere by a poet we all most likely read in middle school, Edgar Allan Poe. Poe is a good place to start, because he used repetition frequently in his works, as in his more famous poems, The Raven, with it’s reiterative catchphrase of “quoth the Raven, “Nevermore,” and more extensively (some might say too extensively) in The Bells.
Here in Ulalume, he begins by setting the scene:
“ The skies they were ashen and sober;
The leaves they were crisped and sere-
The leaves they were withering and sere;
It was night in the lonesome October
Of my most immemorial year;
It was hard by the dim lake of Auber,
In the misty mid region of Weir-
It was down by the dank tarn of Auber,
In the ghoul-haunted woodland of Weir.”
Here Poe draws the reader into the world of the poem by repeating structurally the construction of the line beginnings, ‘the skies were,’ ‘the leaves were,’ ‘it was,’ ‘in the,’ and so forth, and he repeats an echo in almost every line of its predecessor: ‘crisped and sere,’ becomes ‘withering and sere.’ the ‘dim lake of Auber,’ becomes the ‘dank tarn of Auber,’ and so on, tolling the place names like a mournful bell, and building a mental picture with them. Many of the individual vowel sounds are also repeated, in and out of the rhyme scheme. He continues this throughout the poem, intensifying as he goes, till he reaches the poem’s climax:
“And we passed to the end of the vista,
But were stopped by the door of a tomb-
By the door of a legended tomb;
And I said- “What is written, sweet sister,
On the door of this legended tomb?”
She replied- “Ulalume- Ulalume-
‘Tis the vault of thy lost Ulalume!”
Here the dirge-like repetition of the (very alliterative) dead Ulalume’s name is used for dramatic effect, to immerse the reader in the emotions the poet is trying to convey, his sense of the past, and of loss. Poe’s use of repetition is always consistent, usually rhymed and very obvious to the reader.
In this piece of free verse, by the modern American poet Charles Bukowski, the approach couldn’t be more different. It’s called 2 Flies, and you see a much more subtle use of repetition, barely noticeable, yet insistent:
“The flies are angry bits of life;
why are they so angry?
it seems they want more,
it seems almost as if they
are angry
that they are flies;”
Repetition here is used in a circular way, to bring the reader through an image to an idea. Later in the same piece Bukowski utilizes it once again, but in a different manner:
“…and they join
in circling my hand,
strumming the base
of the lampshade
until some man-thing
in me
will take no more
unholiness
and I strike
with the rolled-up-paper –
missing! –
striking,
striking…”
Here the repetition is both subtle and direct, with the use of the –ing suffix predominant, finally emerging in the impact of the last quoted lines, giving them a sense of power and finality.
I’m sure everyone has their own favorite example of repetition, as it’s one of the most common and effective of poetic devices and it would be difficult to find a poet who hasn’t at one time or another used it. The trick, it seems to me, is not to overuse it, and render the words banal or meaningless.
So the prompt today is to write a poem where the poetic device of repetition is an important component to the structure. You can repeat individual words, sounds, lines or phrases, even couplets or stanzas, and utilize as many other poetic devices such as alliteration, rhyme, meter or whatever, as desired. You can write in a repeating form, such as pantoum, triolet, roundel or villanelle, or in free verse. The possibilities are endless.
Follow the steps below to link up with dVerse, and have fun repeating yourselves!
- Post a poem to your blog,
- Link your poem to dVerse (1 poem per poet, please) by clicking on the Mr.Linky button below.
- This opens a new screen where you’ll enter your information, and where you also choose links to read. Once you have pasted your poem’s blog url and entered your name, click Submit.
- Don’t forget to let your readers know where you’re linking up and encourage them to participate by including a link to dVerse in your blog post.
- Visit other poets, and see what they’ve done with the prompt.
- Spread the word on the poems you enjoy if you’d like. Feel free to tweet and share on the social media of your choice.
- Enjoy this chance to play and experiment with us in the dVerse sandbox.
claudia said:
an excellent prompt hedge…the villanelle is my favorite form poem form because the repetition is so smart and effectively placed – and also repetition used wisely in free form poems can create great effects…thanks for this…and looking forward to read what you’re all coming up with..
hedgewitch said:
You’re welcome claudia–yours was a great example of using repetition subtly in free verse to create a mood. Loved it.
claudia said:
thanks hedge..and by reading your comment just learned that the plural of repetition is still just repetition…ha…
hedgewitch said:
English is just not a logical language, I’m afraid.
hedgewitch said:
Welcome poets! My apron is on, and I’m ready to serve up another round of the same in a whole new way today. I meant for this theme to be very open-ended, so feel free to run with it in your own direction of choice. I also just wanted to mention it’s fine to link an already-written poem if you feel it really exemplifies the idea of repetition.
I really look forward to seeing what everyone will do with this prompt–if past is prologue with this group, I think we’ll see some really interesting stuff.
Sheila Moore said:
thanks, hedge! great and thorough post with both the examples and your insightful commentary. I will see what I have to link and if nothing then I will see what I can come up with, up with, up with… 😉
hedgewitch said:
I think I see a theme emerging here. ;_) I did one of each, myself, one new one and one old one–so i definitely got into the whole repeating thing. Look forward to seeing what you unearth or create, Sheila.
tashtoo said:
Gotta go with an old OneShoot piece inspired by a pic by Roger Allen Baut (aka @ChasingTao) I LOVE repetition in poetry…and perhaps rely on it too much to help convey my point…hmmm? Joy, the entire piece inspires much thought. A wonderful prompt for me…and as the real world drifts slowly to the fringes once again, I’m so glad I could make it for your post.
hedgewitch said:
Glad you think it suits you, Tash, and glad to hear things are calming down in RL. And you use repetition like an old master uses oils, so I have no doubt your piece holds plenty of poetic goodness for us. Glad you could make it.
manicddaily said:
Hi Hedgewitch! A wonderful prompt. I also went with a villanelle, which is a form I like a lot. But repetition in general, such a wonderful tool.
hedgewitch said:
Enjoyed both your villanelles–you handle them well–form following function.
Heaven said:
Thank you for this interesting session, Joy. I enjoyed this. Would like to write a more serious poem using this theme next week. But for now, just a fun post from me…will be running out for a bit but will come back to read everyone’s poems.
brian said:
ok no one is looking….
slips into the pub and gives joy a quick hug for filling in…
“great job hedge..”
back out the door before anyone notices…
claudia said:
haha – i saw you…smiles
enjoy the time at the beach
hedgewitch said:
ew—now i have sand in my frappicino…
have fun, boss and don’t forget the sunscreen.
lori said:
Oh, I am missing dVerse lately. We’ve had flooding issues the past few days (dealing with wet floors and restoration), and today is my husband’s birthday. Off to celebrate away from the mess, but I hope I’ll have time to steal away tomorrow. Have fun!
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joshuA (@expoetics) said:
Great prompt hedgewitch!
My post is an old one, but as Brian Eno said:
“Repetition is a form of change”
😉
-joshuA
hedgewitch said:
Still laughing and/or crying at the reap eat one–remember the one you posted–most excellent also.
snakypoet said:
Meanwhile, it is pleasant to gaze upon Bogey! 🙂
hedgewitch said:
Always. 🙂
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Bodhirose said:
Thanks for the invite. I had tried what is called “loop” poetry some time back. It uses repetition as well.
Gayle ~
hedgewitch said:
Cool. There are so many ways to use this–always glad to learn another one. I’m making my way around–be there soon.
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Patricia said:
Hey there!… makes me think of that old Cheers theme song (sometimes you like to go… where everybody knows your name….) Thanks for your good commentary on this… great hosting! … every time I read your name… I think Joy Ann Jones has such a poetic ring to it! Beautiful. Here’s looking at you kids ; )
Brendan said:
Great prompt, H — I love the way you play in the sandbox. Sorry to muck things up, but I bring along with me a veritable cloud of funky-musk — that’s right, the love bugs are here … Brendan
hedgewitch said:
We occasionally are visited by those critters here, but never with quite the… panache your Floridian variety seems to display. Thanks for playing–made my day.
Beth said:
Excellent prompt and poetry offered here. I have to leave to go to a birthday party (oh, cake, YES) but will read more when I return.
Thanks for a prompt showcasing such a potent poetic device.
Beth
hedgewitch said:
Your welcome Beth. Enjoy the cake. (mmmmmmmm.)
Daydreamertoo said:
Not too sure if what I did fits the prompt or not, hope so. Great subject for a prompt.
Joe Hesch said:
I know I’m going to regret posting this poem in response to your great prompt, Joy. But post it I have.
And I may have beat the repeating thing to death.
Great job, Hedge, m’dear. See you around out there.
hedgewitch said:
You’re intriguing me, Joe. I shall be by soon.
Glynn said:
Great prompt. It coincided with another poject I’ve been working on about “work.”
claudia said:
great poetry out there on the trail…resigning for the night now….see you tomorrow…
hedgewitch said:
Thanks for helping out behind the bar, Claudia. Have a great evening.
Laurie Kolp said:
I love that this prompt gives us the freedom to move in any direction. I love that this prompt gives us the freedom to move in any direction.
tashtoo said:
Ha! You made me smile~
hedgewitch said:
Ha! You made me smile~
(Too,)
claudia said:
Ha! You made me smile~
(Three) haha
Ted said:
originally published in 1979 — Turn as the Seasons are Changing
written for my German girlfriend…Anetta…who was returning to Germany
note the allusion to Goethe — “earth gape” as in earth gape and swallow Faustus
http://8thavesouth.blogspot.com/2011/09/turn-as-seasons-are-changing.html
Anna Montgomery said:
Shockingly I’ve written my second form poem this week, this time a ghazal (and a love poem, ack). Thank you Joy for your wonderful article and inspiration.
hedgewitch said:
That must be why it reminded me of a ghazal! i am so brilliant. I loved it, whatever it was. ;_)
fireblossom32 said:
Hedge, I am here and have tried to come up with something especially good, to support your theme!
hedgewitch said:
You have surpassed yourself, dear friend–one of the best I’ve read and pure vintage Fireblossom. Thank you, and if this prompt was part of getting that to happen, I have not prompted in vain. :_P
fireblossom32 said:
It was, in fact. I got the basic idea on the way to work this morning, forgot and then remembered it, and wrote down the key points so I could write it when got home. Naturally, I came to see what your prompt idea was, and that is why used the repetition, which tbh, took it from okay to something I’m really proud of.
kez said:
an older poem ….busy busy this week but thank you for hosting and giving me the opportunity to share and read others thank you x
hedgewitch said:
Taking a supper break, but will be back. I’m just amazed with the variety of takes on this prompt–from surreal, stream of consciousness to strict forms and everything in between. This is a talented bunch and it’s truly both a pleasure and privilege to get to read all these.
oceangirl said:
Thank you for a great prompt. I liked to speak repetitive before I learned from dVerse that less is good. But there was one poem that I felt, responded to your prompt tonight perfectly and so I hope it is okay that link it in and not write a fresh poem, for lately I find myself struggling to be poetic again. Thank you again Hedgewitch.
hedgewitch said:
Older poems are just fine, oceangirl. I’m almost at your place now.
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lolamouse said:
Wow, I just wrote something for another prompt and it fit this one perfectly! Don’tcha love it when that happens?
hedgewitch said:
Even a blind mouse finds a little cheese once in awhile, yes?
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Mark Kerstetter said:
It’s a pleasure, Joy
It’s a Joy pleasure
To add a link & sip a brew
Not to annoy but can I have 2
While I measure my seat
Allow me to repeat:
What a pleasure, Joy
What a Joy pleasure!
hedgewitch said:
Thank you, Mark, for the tribute to my humble self and also for reminding me of a great Nilson song.
(Joy to the world
was a beautiful girl
but to me joy meant
only sorrow)
snakypoet said:
Mine is a long and somewhat discursive poem that was difficult to write, but I wanted it as part of my moon series. I am hoping that the repetitions serve to keep the reader on track with the main foci
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chris said:
To all the great dVerse Poets, I hereby award you, as a group, with the Versatile Blogger Award! You all deserve it.
http://chrisgalvinwriter.wordpress.com/2011/09/24/seven-blogs-and-seven-things/
hedgewitch said:
Thank you Chris! We’re honored. (I love it that you hate blue cheese, also–I only like it with buffalo wings–but it comes strangely from someone who’s eaten fried ants. ;_) )
hedgewitch said:
I’m signing off for tonight, but I’ll be back as soon as I revive myself with copious applications of caffeine in the morning. Till then, enjoy and thanks so much to everyone who’s sharing tonight.
Lori McClure (@lorimcspeaks) said:
It’s been a crazy couple of days. Hope to join the fun tomorrow 🙂 Love me some TS Eliot, and this is a great prompt, Joy.
hedgewitch said:
Thanks Lori–always good to see you here at the pub.
Gay said:
Ah sweet Joy, our head witch ehr…I mean hedgewitch..your potions are formidable tonight. So inviting, so delicious that I skipped conversing at the bar and made directly for the bulletin board. I posted a quickly written poem inspired by the type of poems I’ll be covering in the next FormForAll. Stay tuned. And for those driven off by long, formulaic ones, (yep, sestinas) these will be short and oh so simple.
hedgewitch said:
I loved your poem Gay, as you could probably tell by my verbose comment. Now I have to go reread it and see if I can tell the form.
Gemma Wiseman said:
I tried a few forms for this and somehow they ended up sounding a little like nursery rhymes! So scrapped the lot and flowed with a villanelle!
beckykilsby said:
Thanks for a great prompt… mine is an oldie..(tho not as old as Bogey).. and hopes fits the bill. So if repetition is the order of the day, guess it’s time to get the second round in…then the third.. 🙂
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Linda Kruschke said:
I linked to a poem I wrote a couple of weeks ago in which repetition of the word “picture” was an important element, and hopefully isn’t overdone. I would have written a new poem for this, but it’s been a crazy day; there just wasn’t time. Peace, Linda
Anna Montgomery said:
Thanks again all for a lovely Saturday night, I’ll be back around tomorrow afternoon (though I may sneak a read or two in the morning if I can manage it :)).
Reflections said:
Sorry I wasn’t able to pop in sooner. Just posted a poem from long, long ago. Will be around in the morning to check out more of the shares. Great post Joy. Have always been a fan of the impact of repetition.
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Debbie Dawnslight said:
Joy – this is a great theme and you wrote about it in a very interesting way, stimulating me to write – even if not my best…
today’s my birthday – so – drinks on me!
🙂
deb
claudia said:
oh nice…happy birthday deb!
hedgewitch said:
Happy Birthday–you’ll have to imagine all the dVerse staff surrounding your table and singing the Happy Birthday song at you while you try to hide behind the menu. No birthday is complete without being embarrassed in public. ;_)
Debbie Dawnslight said:
Thank you… oohhh… I’m blushing – although there are great voices and musicians in here 🙂
DeeDee said:
Hi! Brian, Claudia, and Crew…
Even though I’m not a poet this style Of writing poetry is very interesting.
Thanks, for sharing!
deedee 😉
claudia said:
hi deedee – great to see you in the pub!
Lydia said:
Well, Happy Birthday to Debbie Dawnslight and to Brian’s kidnapped wife!
I loved your prompt and was so impressed by your commentary with great instruction and encouragement to try.
rmp said:
I’ve always been fond of repetition…was fond of repetition long before I even realized I was fond of repetition. I can trace it back to one of the first poems I ever wrote. I seem to do the whole repetition thing without even noticing. maybe that’s why when I started toying with form I was draw to those employing repetition. who knows…who knows…
Gary said:
I must be psychotic, er, psychic. I wrote the first pantoum I’ve written in a while earlier this week.
Gary said:
I wrote an additional piece. The concept’s bee rattling around in my brain for a while, both the subject and the form. Sorry if I’m being – repetitious? by going back to the well.
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dani said:
i have to be off-line today, but i’ll visit everyone asap tonight. have a lovely Sunday!
hedgewitch said:
You too, dani. See you tonight.
brian said:
good morning! popping in to wish everyone a great day! about to head out and embrace my day…have returned comments on most and wil catch everyone else tonight…
hedgewitch said:
Good to see everyone already up and running. I’m sucking down coffee #1 and I’ll be coming by to see what everyone’s come up with on this beautiful fall day (in my locality anyway.)
hedgewitch said:
Just got a surprise call from my son–he’s on his way over so I’ll be offline for awhile, but back later to finish paying everyone a visit. Excited to see him–it’s been awhile.
claudia said:
oh nice..have fun hedge…i’m leaving for a poetry slam now…excited..!!!
hedgewitch said:
Have a great time, Claudia. I’m back on board and will be around as soon as I grab a snack–my son and I had a wonderful visit, catching up. He lives in another state and we seldom get to see each other, so this was a big surprise.
claudia said:
good to hear you had a great time hedge…my poetry slam was very cool as well…loved it
Seek the Sun said:
A little late to the party but I found an old poem that fits this theme. I will be reading everyone’s poems tonight , after work. I am a blog newbie and have not been successful with adding the “Dverse” link on my blog. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
Louise G. said:
I got inspired this morning by Glynn at Faith. Fiction. Friends. Nance at A Little Something and then this prompt.
What a great way to start my day! thanks!
claudia said:
great to see you louise… enjoyed your poem
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California Ink in Motion said:
Hi everyone, I elected to write a Sestina. Please enjoy.
hedgewitch said:
Thanks for sharing with us,TheMsLvh. Hope all goes well for you in the next few months.
claudia said:
good morning everyone… just having a quick breakfast …it’s a wonderful crispy morning over here…decided to go by bike to my workplace and inhale some fresh air.. will catch up with you in the evening..
Padmavani said:
The linky seems to have expired 5.5 hours ago :(. Is posting restricted to Sunday only? Maybe next time.
hedgewitch said:
The Poetics prompt runs from Saturday at 3:00Pm EST to Midnight Sunday EST, Padmavani. Hope you will come back next time, or share with us on Open Link Night, Tuesday 3:00 PM EST to Wednesday midnight.
hedgewitch said:
Just wanted to say thank you to everyone who participated. As always with this amazing bunch of poets we had every kind of repetitive device and poetic form imaginable posted. It was a pleasure to see all the creativity flowing, and look forward to reading and sharing again in our other prompts. Chris Galford will be around later today with Pretzels and Bullfights, a look between the covers of published poetry at whatever poet he’s decided to highlight this week for us.