“O Duty!” wrote Ogden Nash, “why hast thou not the visage of a sweetie or a cutie?”
“Duty,” “obligation”–these can be trying words for a poet (especially one trying hard to get time to write). They can mean everything from a sink of dirty dishes to a day job to a requirement to smile.
If you are a U.S. poet (actually a U.S. person of any stripe), mid-April is a time when duty/obligation can feel especially onerous. (For those international readers, mid-April is the U.S. due date for annual tax returns!)
But on a deeper level, duty and obligation do not just signify burdens; they can also be doors to opportunity, goads for transcendence, moments of connection.
A wonderful example of the positive side of duty can be found in Pablo Neruda’s, “The Poet’s Obligation,” which he addresses to “whoever is not listening to the sea/ this Friday morning, to whoever is cooped up/in house or office, factory or woman/or street or mine or harsh prison cell.”
Neruda goes on to describe his obligation, as a poet, to:
“feel the crash of the hard water
and gather it up in a perpetual cup
so that, wherever those in prison may be,
wherever they suffer the autumn’s castigation,
I may be there with an errant wave….”
(Aaahh….)
Linda Pastan sets forth a darker view in “The Obligation to be Happy”: “It is more onerous/than the rites of beauty/or housework, harder than love.”
I urge you to read both of these terrific poems in full. But now to our own poetry!
The prompt for this week’s Poetics is the subject of duty, obligation, or any possible permutation thereof–whether the fulfillment, the shirking, the questioning, the particularizing (as in a list of chores), or even the V.A.T.
So, Poets, your duty today: tax your brains and write, post, and link a poem!
Here’s how it works…
- Write your poem.
- Post it on your blog.
- Click the Mr. Linky button below, and in the new window that opens up input your name and direct url of the poem.
- Visit others who have taken the challenge.
- Have fun!
brian miller said:
this was def a fun prompt k…and welcome on as one of our new pub tenders for poetics…i think you are a great addition to the team…so enjoy the duty…smiles…
i went a little trippy today on mine…i was listening to achtung baby album of U2 as i wrote this…anyway i wont blame it on them…thanks for getting us going today…
brian miller said:
fixed your link charles…
ManicDdaily said:
You are very welcome, Brian. I’m sorry not to be so great with some of the mechanics, but hope to get a hang of it, and looking forward to reading people’s posts. I just this minute finished mine, which I hate to say is more of a story than poem. But I’ve had it in mind several days so went with it. As mentioned to Claudia==I took more of a V.A.T. approach.
I liked yours – especially as a woman! K.
ManicDdaily said:
Hi Brian- I thought i replied but jumping between blogs is a new experience for me, and I’m not sure I have all the mechanics down very well. Sorry too for any little “edit ” things in brackets! I’ll learn.
In the meantime, thanks much for the opportunity. I liked yours! Especially as a woman!
I just got mine done–a bit more prosey than poem but I guess shows how widely people might want to range.
Thanks again. K.
ManicDdaily said:
Ha! you see my issues with mechanics!!!!!!
Agh!
hedgewitch said:
You’re really making me feel good about my own …ahem, technical difficulties, Karin. I have deleted by accident so many of my comments when I’m hosting, trying just to edit them, and then had to redo them, not to mention, thought I’d scheduled an OLN only to find it was still a draft at door opening time! Fortunately I got it up before the crowd (or the boss–he’s such a slave driver) got wise. Thanks for hosting, for thinking of such a cool prompt, and for making me feel better. Welcome to our insane world. ;_)
brian miller said:
ahem…you do realize i read these hedge…smiles….haha
grace always….
ManicDdaily said:
Ha! Yes, I was worried that i was going to press a wrong button and post early or do something stupid. I am a bit prone to that type of thing! K.
Semaphore / S. Peralta said:
You should have seen my technical difficulties! There was even an article lined up behind me just in case I had total systems failure!
Welcome, Karin, so glad to see you here with the crew. 🙂
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks so much, Sam.
aprille said:
Hedge you’re blinding me with science: What’s an OLN?
Semaphore / S. Peralta said:
OLN = Open Link Night
brian miller said:
thanks for grabbing that sam
Shawna said:
Are you talking to yourself, Karin? 🙂 Welcome to the dverse “staff.”
ManicDdaily said:
Yes! Well, I don’t talk to myself too much, but I do laugh at myself quite a bit. Mostly ruefully. K.
Shawna said:
Oh my goodness, that is a blessing—to be able to genuinely laugh at oneself. It is my salvation.
Shawna said:
Love me some U2.
brian miller said:
me too…saw them in baltimore last year…so much fun…watched the documentary this week on the making of achtung baby too…on their reimaging of themselves after joshua tree…pretty cool
Shawna said:
Oh, Joshua Tree was good. I have a couple of CDs somewhere. Do you remember CDs? 😉
So jealous you saw them live. I wonder if I’ll ever go to a concert again.
claudia said:
very cool prompt karin…and great having you on the team now… looking forward to what people are coming up with… got a business call in the middle of the linking in process….and now i’m no. 5…ha
ManicDdaily said:
Well, I haven’t fully proofed mine. Life is short/art is long! I liked yours very much, Claudia. Thanks much. K.
Shawna said:
#5—That is tragic, Claudia. 😉
aprille said:
Hiya Karin,
I chose disconnection, rather than connection, as a manifestation of obligation.
Didn’t really want to wax poetic about the tax returns 🙂
Nice to meet you.
I’m now going to have my cup of tea – green.
brian miller said:
found your comment and fixed it aprille…it got caught int he filter for some reason…happy saturday…and yeah i want to forget the taxes too…smiles.
aprille said:
Ta Brian.
I reckon WordPress looks down its nose at us blogspotters 🙂
Shawna said:
That’s why I blog in both worlds. 😉
Laurie Kolp said:
Enjoyed this… I’m so glad to see you as a contributor now, Karin!
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks very much, Laurie.
Ruth said:
Nash had a way with words, didn’t he? – I’m not entirely sure my poem qualifies, but I did think I saw duty sneak in there a time or two 🙂
ManicDdaily said:
Well, it’s meant to be a broad prompt, so I’m sure it’s just fine. Nash is so funny. K.
brian miller said:
oh i def have an obligation to the rhythm ruth…smiles…nice piece of writing…
Mark Kerstetter said:
I like the fact that it’s broad. I think it’s a great prompt.
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks, Mark. On the one hand, you want to give people a springboard – but also not to be too restrictive, and if they have something older, they are inspired to turn to, I think that’s fine too. My sense is that you just want to help people (including yourself) keep up a flow. K.
Shawna said:
Agreed. I wrote about bread. 🙂
Heaven (@asweetlust) said:
Thanks Karin, I enjoy the article as well as the links.
A challenging topic as my mind is on a weekend mode; no duties and obligations at all in my brain ….. 🙂 Will have to see where this one will take me ~
ManicDdaily said:
Well, that sounds wonderful. The freedom from obligation is a perfectly GREAT subject. K.
Heaven (@asweetlust) said:
Really ? Okay, will try to write one ~
Daydreamertoo said:
This matched my thoughts today on a movie I just saw recently, thanks. Have a great night all.
claudia said:
a fine write bren and i could see the movie touched you…think i need to check it out as welll
hedgewitch said:
Just popped in from the garden to check this out—great unmined subject–Neruda is amazing in the way he looked at the world and saw all the small cracks where poetry would fit.
I have several potential victims…er,drafts, which might work out–will be back later to lay one of them on the sacrificial altar of poetic duty. Thanks, Karin.
brian miller said:
yes, we are doing sacrifices now…bwhaha…hope you are not getting too burned out there in the garden hedge…got a little sun myself at the baseball game…
hedgewitch said:
Naah–I love the garden. My body doesn’t always feel the same way, but it’s all a trade off. I trust no idiot adults were accidentally brained by angry parents at your game.
ManicDdaily said:
I have been inspired by a daughter (not here) to dig around a bit. I find it very hard to both come up with a prompt and write for the prompt, I don’t know why, so my own piece is kind of odd. On the other hand, you do what you do and see what happens, so that’s okay too. At any rate, good luck. k.
claudia said:
i didn’t think your piece was odd k… really liked it
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks.
Shawna said:
It’s performance anxiety. It happened to me when I was up as well. I found it very stressful to write a poem when I hosted. I’d probably write my best poetry if I didn’t think anyone would read it. 😉
I haven’t read yours yet because it’s LONG. I have to prepare myself ahead of time to read long pieces. LOL. But I’ll definitely head back over in a few minutes. Your writing is always interesting, creative, unique, and wonderful. And “odd” is the best kind of poetry.
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks so much. It is too long. I feel a bit like Madame de Sevigne writing letters–if I had more time I’d make it shorter. But there it is. You are wonderful at compression. k.
Shawna said:
LOL … I’m just lazy, but what a sweet way to say it. 😉
Yours is not at all TOO long. It’s just that my brain is all ADD. So I have to prepare myself to read longer passages. I love reading books; I just have to know ahead of time that I’m going to read one. Headed over now.
Shawna said:
“all the small cracks where poetry would fit” … Perfect.
claudia said:
i would really love to wait and see how hedge lays one of her draft victims on the sacrificial altar of poetic duty…but still not 100% healthy again..so will go to bed early and catch up with the overnights tomorrow….
brian miller said:
sleep well…and hope the healing continues so you reach that 100% soon claudia…great piece today…
hedgewitch said:
Good thing you didn’t wait Claudia–i had to tear everything up and start all over about five times–finally went to bed myself, woke up at 3:00 AM with an idea, and finally got something up. I think the Muse is on board with the whole duty thing Karin’s started here. ;_)
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charlesmashburn said:
I’m in! Although, I might have mis-played my hand. I wrote this one, and a follow up to it, a few days ago, and I’ve been itching to post it/them. So, I just changed one teeny little thing to make it fit the prompt. I hope it’s okay!
aprille said:
That’s the spirit.Charles.
I’ll remember that for another time 🙂
ManicDdaily said:
It’s wonderful, Charles. And, as noted, it fulfills its duty to be springy and life spirits. K.
charlesmashburn said:
ah’ight den!
tashtoo said:
Late to posting but was ready early…welcome to my bubble! Technical difficulties and no buttons to push…trust us Karin…you are not alone! Welcome to the view behind the bar and thank you for a FANTASTIC prompt…this side of the border we’ve got til April 30th to get our taxes filed….but I exist well outside government deadlines…They stressed me out so bad they refired my poetry pen…so yeah, my priorities are a little different now…and what’s penalties and late fees to a gal with her head in the clouds…right?
ManicDdaily said:
Ha! Absolutely! Unfortunately, I am in a situation where I sometimes cover these things for others, so can’t quite abdicate, but certainly see your point of view! Thanks much, Tash. k.
Mary said:
Karin, this prompt really threw me for a loop at first (as Brian knows), but eventually I found my way. I usually do, but sometimes it is harder than others!! I’m enjoying reading what others are doing with it. That’s half the fun.
Shawna said:
Sometimes you have to let the prompt simmer for a while before the words start to bubble.
brian miller said:
you found your way well mary….smiles….
ManicDdaily said:
Mary, it was terrific. K.
welshstream said:
Interesting challenge ….. posted something that the taxman should never have had! Late because been out celebrating an 80th birthday .. not mine ~I hasten to add!
ManicDdaily said:
Ha! I will go check out. Thanks. K.
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
Karin, what synchronicity! I’ve only just posted to my blog a poem which is right on topic.
brian miller said:
yes it was…and very heart felt as well…
ManicDdaily said:
Rosemary, your piece was just beautiful. Hope all is well. K.
duaneflounder said:
Good prompt, I can really relate, it seems like everything is a duty today. Been away for a while good to be back
duaneflounder said:
Sorry here is the actual link to the poem http://blueridgemountainboy.blogspot.com/2012/04/got-to-get-going.html
ManicDdaily said:
Duane, I am having a hard time commenting on your post – wordpress/blogspot issues – you describe so well that wheel of samsara–pain/obligation/drudgery–that is so hard. I am going to give it another shot–I probably will have to comment on an old blogger account called Outlawyer. K.
Shawna said:
Welcome back, Duane. Great to have you here. And yes, we go through seasons when everything seems to be about duty.
brian miller said:
good to see you duane…
Mary said:
I know I posted a comment here a while back. You might want to check your spam, DVerse. Came back to see it agan, and don’t see it anywhere. Odd, unless I offended someone which I don’t think I possibly could have. Sigh.
claudia said:
your comment was in the “to approve” list which is strange…not sure what happens with WP at the moment…same at my blog…stu for example ends up in the spam filter each time he comments… you surely offended no one…smiles
ordinarylifelessordinary said:
Okay, I’m in with a piece I wrote a few weeks ago as ironically, duty calls tonight! There’s something about languishing in a Sunday morning and beating off the obligations of another week before it whisks you away!
Shawna said:
Amen to that, sister!
ordinarylifelessordinary said:
Ha ha… Yes, Amen indeed Shawna x
brian miller said:
your sunday morning sounded rather delightful to me…
ordinarylifelessordinary said:
Oops sorry folks, in case it doesn’t work, here is the link to the actual piece for this week… http://wp.me/p2dIML-14
ManicDdaily said:
Lovely poem. Thanks so much. K.
John (@bookdreamer) said:
Should have been in bed a hour a go but the prompt grabbed me – you get a sonnet and a video!
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks so much, John. They were both super cool. K.
poemsofhateandhope said:
Awesome awesome prompt- I wrote about what seems to be ‘obligatory’ I’m my small, back of the arse end of nowhere town…hoping I met the prompt ok…it’s 2am- so gonna grab some kip- will be back for my Sunday dose of dVerse in a few hours – cant wit to read what everyone else has come up with
ManicDdaily said:
Yours is wonderful, Stu. I’m in country at the moment, but most of the time live in NYC where no one much cares what you do! (As long as you don’t step on their foot dashing into the train. Then they get pretty p——.) Anyway, thanks much; K.
brian miller said:
dude you slayed this one….top notch stuff stu…
hobgoblin2011 said:
Thanks for hosting tonight karin. It was definitely a fun evening reading these tonight. Hopefully after a few hours of mindless TV there will be some more added. Again, nice theme and thanks for the bartending.
ManicDdaily said:
Thank YOU, Fred. K.
Hannah Gosselin said:
I’ve posted an obligation that I love to tend and this late hour is forcing me to retreat to the shadows. I’ll return tomorrow for some reading! 🙂
brian miller said:
cool…be over in a minute hannah. i will let you be the last i read for the night before i hit the sack myself….be back in the morning to catch the over nights…peace poets
ManicDdaily said:
A bit out of the loop this morning, but look forward to checking it out, Hannah.
Hannah Gosselin said:
Thank you, no hurry, I appreciate this…Smiles!
Wander said:
I am always so late to the pub! I have obligations that only-for the most part-to post on my blog at night. And seeing as how I love on the left coast…ha ha a bit of political nonsense…my time is much later then some.
I do like this venue…many creative and gifted poet/writers come here…and Brian is fricking prolific…dude how many WPM can you type?
have fun tipping a few at the pub!
Wander
brian miller said:
smiles….thanks for the boost wander….its the ghost in my head man…
stephenjash said:
Great prompt! It really got me thinking and fueled something unexpected!
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks, Stephen. Look forward to checking it out. K.
Ted said:
This poem is a reflection upon retirement. I will be retiring at the end of this school year, June 2012. They made us teachers with 30 years or more an offer, I couldn’t refuse. The poem speaks about duty several times but it is more about facing ones freedom like we first do at 18. Retirement is like a second launching. I handled my freedom fairly well at 18; I hope I can do just as well at 56.
claudia said:
after reading your piece ted, i think you will have a wonderful freedom ride into retirement..
ManicDdaily said:
Sounds like its a big loss to the school district, but a great time for you for a second start. K.
claudia said:
took me a while but finally made it back…and on my way to read..
hedgewitch said:
Hope you’re feeling better Claudia.
claudia said:
slowly but surely… just read your poem hedge..it’s awesome
kelly said:
late to the party but jumping in here… a good excuse to spend Sunday morning reading poetry 😉
claudia said:
hehe…true that…
bareyournaketruth said:
The character Pablo Neruda in the movie Il Postino inspired me to look up the poet’s work and start writing my own love poetry! You can read more about it here: http://bareyournakedtruth.wordpress.com/about-nicole-luongo/
ManicDdaily said:
Will do. k.
bareyournaketruth said:
I appreciate it – thanks! 🙂
brian miller said:
good morning poets…looking forward to catching up with the overnights…rainy and i have a flat tire too…oy…so give me some cheer…smiles…
claudia said:
ugh…happy tire changing…maybe there is even poetry in flat tires..you know…smiles
brian miller said:
there is…i wrote a funny little piece of poetry for later this week about a man i met…that told me the same story about 30 times…
Kelly said:
I guess my poem did not process through blogger before I made the link: http://simplydeeppoetry.blogspot.com/2012/04/mothers-duty.html
claudia said:
have updated the link for you kelly.. thanks
Kelly said:
Thanks. I’m so sorry. My old and dying Acer and poor internet connection makes participating quite a task!
But I love all of your poetry!
Patti said:
I saw my duty and I did it. I’m in.
Patti said:
Arg. WordPress insists on grabbing my Blogger address and changing it to another I have on WordPress. My entry is is here:
http://pattiken-pattiken.blogspot.com/2012/04/duty-un-burdened.html
brian miller said:
WP has been a bit wonky the last day or two…
ManicDdaily said:
Hi! I think I’ve gotten to everyone on Mr. Linky as of 12:44 Eastern Daylight Savings Time! Please note that I do have technical difficulties at times – especially in the interplay between wordpress and blogger – so if you haven’t heard from me, let me know! I am very interested to see eveyone’s take on the prompt–one thing I can tell is that we are a somewhat burdened bunch! As a person, I tend to think of duty in somewhat positive terms, but as a person trying to get time to write the calculus definitely changes – I see I’m not alone! Take care, K.
Linda Kruschke said:
I just stopped by to copy the link to dVerse when scheduling my Tuesday poem, and the title of this post caught my attention. Even though I didn’t read the prompt ahead of time, the poem I wrote and posted yesterday touches on the subject of duty and reliability, as in one stanza I shirk my chores in favor of sitting in the sun. 🙂 Peace, Linda
ManicDdaily said:
Hi Linda – sitting in the sun sounds great–raining here! But took a long walk in it which makes it a bit better. Will check out your poem. K.
Glenn Buttkus said:
Came back late today from the coast, but even with only 4 hrs. left, I posted my 55, HOKA HEY. Only G-man usually reads them, but they are fun to do.
brian miller said:
hey man…welcome back…hope you had a great time at the post…i take it you saw where g is out sick…a little worried about pops…
claudia said:
good morning…about to catch the overnights with my coffee before i’m off to work..