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Gay Cannon, Gerard Manley Hopkins, Modernism, Oxford, poetic form, poetry, poetry sharing, Prosody, Sprung Rhythm, Victorian Poets
When approaching forms, it’s always surprising to find how old some of them are. When considering modern poetry, it’s surprising also to know that poems we consider modern even revolutionary are over one hundred years old. I think the period after World War II must have curtailed the move toward “modernism”. And as I’m often reminded by one of our dVerse poets Arron Shilling, the most fertile modern movements in art, literature, philosophy, theater, music and dance was the period between the two world wars. Even though this type of poetry was conceived before that era, it has impacted and continues to impact the prosody of modern poets since its creation. The sound of it is new, different and exciting to a poet.
Gerard Manley Hopkins who is credited with the invention of Sprung Rhythm was born in 1844. He was the son of a poet and apparently could have been almost anything he wanted. One of those gifted young men, the oldest of nine children he attended grammar school in Highgate and won a scholarship to Bailliol College, Oxford. He graduated as its star. Having been tutored in drawing and painting as well as music, at university he opted for poetry. He was almost surely a manic/depressive personality with a strong Anglican faith. Seeking for “authenticity”, he converted to Roman Catholicism under the influence of Cardinal Newman who had famously converted from Anglicanism to Catholicism.
Becoming very devout, he took Holy Orders, and became a Jesuit Priest. Early on Hopkins (having read Thomas Acquinas) decided that it was distracting, and possibly sinful to carry on with his poetry. He burned all his early poetry and didn’t write again for seven years. After reading Dun Scotus in 1872, he changed his mind and began writing again. He studied Old English and having moved to Wales learned Welsh.
In 1874, he wrote a poem, The Wreck of the Deutschland, about a shipwreck that had killed five German nuns who had been persecuted. This was the initial use of his new theory about poetry, Sprung Rhythm. By not limiting the number of “slack” or unaccented syllables, Hopkins allowed for more flexibility in his lines and created new acoustic possibilities. In this meter of poetry, rhythm is based on the number of stressed syllables in a verse without regard to the number of unstressed syllables.
Put another way, sprung rhythm may be said to designate the meter of a verse which contains feet of varying number of syllables, with the first syllable accented in each case. The feet possible are the monosyllabic (a single stressed syllable), the trochee, the dactyl, and the spondee. The obvious result of a line composed of combinations of such varying feet is extreme metrical irregularity. The scansion of such poetry is, as W. B. Yeats noted, difficult because “it may not be certain at first glance where the stress falls”. The Poetic foot may continue to the beginning of the next line is noted in almost all the information concerning this technique.
When considering how to write it for myself, I more or less disregarded the concept of foot altogether. I believe the way to approach sprung rhythm is to consider only the number of stressed syllables per line. Choosing a number like four or five (both of which are common to English speech patterns) and employing that many per line seems to work. For the most part, I think lines begin and end with stressed syllables; however Hopkins liked the idea of enjambment rather than end-stopped lines. In such cases if the end syllable is stressed the following syllables at the beginning of the next line may be unstressed to keep the “spring” in the text continuing.
The Encyclopedia Britannica defines sprung rhythm as “an irregular system of prosody developed by the 19th-century English poet Gerard Manley Hopkins. It is based on the number of stressed syllables in a line and permits an indeterminate number of unstressed syllables. In sprung rhythm, a foot may be composed of from one to four syllables. (In regular English metres, a foot consists of two or three syllables.) Because stressed syllables often occur sequentially in this patterning rather than in alternation with unstressed syllables, the rhythm is said to be “sprung.” Hopkins claimed to be only the theoretician, not the inventor, of sprung rhythm.”
In addition to developing new rhythmic effects, Hopkins was also very interested in ways of rejuvenating poetic language. He regularly placed familiar words into new and surprising contexts. He also often employed compound and unusual word combinations, interjections, assonance and alliteration giving his poems counterpoint in musical terms. As he was both an artist and a musician as well as a poet, his poetry has color, texture and musicality that he would likely argue was present in English from its inception. He found that music in the rhythms of Irish and Welsh speech, in nursery rhymes, and the texts of Old English manuscripts.
I think to write using this technique is to listen to one’s own personal music. As it’s difficult to scan, there is no “right or wrong” in using this technique. It’s another tool in finding one’s personal voice using English words and rhythms as the music of poetry. I am including Pied Beauty, one of his more famous poems in a proposed scansion.
|Glory|be to|God for|dappled|things—
For|skies of|couple-|colour as a|brinded|cow;
For|rose-moles|all in|stipple upon|trout that|swim;
Fresh-|firecoal|chestnut-|falls;|finches’|wings;
|Landscape|plotted and|pieced—fold,|fallow, and|plough;
And|all|trades, their|gear and|tackle and|trim.
|All things|counter, o|riginal,|spare,|strange;
What|ever is|fickle,|freckled|(who knows|how?)
With|swift,|slow; sweet,|sour; a|dazzle,|dim;
He|fathers-|forth whose|beauty is|past|change:
|Praise|him.|
If there is a “challenge” today, it is to take this springing of stresses and use it in a poem of your own. Feel free to link below and share it; or in the comments, share your thoughts on its use.
brian miller said:
smiles…this one was lots of fun gay….i perform much better sprung….with no feet…and listening to ones own personal music….nice article as well. funny i am used to having to conform to fit in on formforall….i almost needed a bit of permission not to…smiles.
Gay said:
Your poem is inspired! What a loss it would have been if you hadn’t. I recommend this piece to all who read or/and link here. Just amazing use of words, texture, and rhythms in a most unusual love song!
Gay said:
Welcome to the pub today! So happy you could stop by. I’m not sure anyone besides G.M. Hopkins used “sprung rhythm” as a form in itself. It is a kind of prosody, another tool in our chest to make words “spring” off the page, to give a poem a kind of percussion, to accent the beats, enjambing the lines and using other tools along with it in whatever measure you decide to use.
So on this fine May day – pick your refreshment, your pen, keypad, or pencil, sit by a window, or take a blanket out to the lawn and compose a few lines. See how it suits your voice!
tashtoo said:
Oh my! I think I’ll have some fun with this one! I shall return 🙂
aprille said:
My oh my, Gay, you come up with the most inventive and amazing things for us.
As per usual, I have to do it wrong first and hope that I get it right in the course of the evening [which is only the next hour, so I’d better have some luck.]
Gay said:
Looking forward to it!!
ManicDdaily said:
First – congrats Brian!
Second – thanks so much, Gay. I really really love Gerard Manley Hopkins’ poetry–and I’ve been looking at explanations of Sprung Rhythm which made no sense at all to me until reaading yours. I hope to have time to try it.
I love the Pied Beauty — but I htink I like even better The Windhover –
I saw this morning morning’s minion kingdom of dapple-drawn-falcon etc. I memorized it once and may have that wrong – sheer plod makes plough down sillion shine, and all the generations of men have trodding! (Then gashing gold vermilion.) He’s just fabulous.
Thanks. k.
Gay said:
I think so too. this poem of Hopkins may have (along with Daniel Mackie’s work) inspired by post today:
As kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies dráw fláme;
As tumbled over rim in roundy wells
Stones ring; like each tucked string tells, each hung bell’s
Bow swung finds tongue to fling out broad its name;
Each mortal thing does one thing and the same:
Deals out that being indoors each one dwells;
Selves—goes itself; myself it speaks and spells,
Crying Whát I do is me: for that I came.
Í say móre: the just man justices;
Kéeps gráce: thát keeps all his goings graces;
Acts in God’s eye what in God’s eye he is—
Chríst—for Christ plays in ten thousand places,
Lovely in limbs, and lovely in eyes not his
To the Father through the features of men’s faces.
ManicDdaily said:
Well, he’s pretty amazing. k.
aprille said:
It sets off the odd ‘proper’ IP so nicely.
Somehow it reminds of some Rilke poems I read at school.
Maybe that is just coincidence.
vivinfrance said:
I love the words of Windhover – but the rhythm (or lack of it) makes me very uncomfortable!
Beth Winter said:
Fabulous article and challenge! I have two contests to finalize then I think I will see what I can do with Sprung Rhythm. I am afraid that my iambic tendencies will make this a big challenge for me. 🙂
Gay said:
That’s easy Beth, just drop the first unstressed and you’re on! Eager to read your submission!
Laurie Kolp said:
I have no idea if I did it right or not… but this is a great post, Gay!
all time oldes said:
Hi, ok please forgive me if I’ve got this form all wrong. By now you probably know I’m just trying with all this and have no education as such behind me. I hope you will enjoy my entry anyway, no matter if I haven’t understood. I’ve had a try 🙂 Thanks for bearing with me x
brian miller said:
no sweat…this is def a safe place to try and have fun with it…i dont have a poetry background myself either…so..
claudia said:
just coming from a barbecue….and with the wood fire smoke still in my hair ready to hit the trail… an excellent article gay… quite the challenge….and i tried to listen to my own music and rhythm while writing…..smiles
Gay said:
What a joy, Claudia! Your poem captures art in your unique voice as skillfully as any painter!! Wonderful use of the stresses.
Gay said:
It’s afternoon, here at the beach & a lovely day. Have a few errands to run. I’ll be along in a little while to read your posts. Looking forward to them.
claudia said:
have a good afternoon gay…and take the time for a little walk along the beach as well, feel the soft breeze in your hair… ahhh…wish i would live somewhere close to the beach…sigh..
brian miller said:
yeah no kidding, even just to hear the waves gentle roars…and maybe a moonlight wading….
claudia said:
sigh….yes…
Gay said:
Thanks you guys, the beach was fine, the water rushing blue and white.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
You have presented an interesting challenge today, Gay, but it seems to open the door to a lot of creative potential. I like Hopkins–recently downloaded a collection of his work. Maybe I’ll read a few and sees what happens.
claudia said:
nice…i bet once you start reading you will get inspired and can’t wait to write one yourself…smiles…
Glenn Buttkus said:
Christ, the form has unsprung my syllables, and yet let loose the symbiotic similes that I dearly love. I had been working on a Mother’s Day poem for a few days, and thanks to your challenge, I was able to put it into some focus, some specific form. As several have said, written, typed, uttered under their cyber-breath–most of us will be flying bat-ass blind with this one. It turned out to be very emotional for me, since my mother passed away when she was 39 years old, and the more aged I become, the more fragile my emotions. I seem to weep after I open a can of chili, as I smell the TexMex goodness, and can’t wait to dive in, spoon at the ready.
My poem, PROJECTILE, sits also at the ready over at
http://bibliosity.blogspot.com/2012/05/projectile.html
brian miller said:
glenn, you made me cry man…
Gay said:
An exceptional piece Glenn. I think that like brushes, palette knives, paints, crayon, chalks, pencils, charcoal, paper, canvas, board, and plaster are the tools of an artist’s trade, so iambs, trochees, spondees, anapests, dactyls, feet per line, repetitions, refrains, assonance, sprung rhythm, assimilation, similes,& metaphors are the tools of a poet. One should learn how to use them, and then learn how to use them to suit what one wants to say. If a certain tool unlocks the story, the emotion, the art of the soul, then it’s there to use when you need it. Each art has its own vocabulary…the more you know, the more you’re the master of it. You certainly mastered your work today!
Daydreamertoo said:
well, I’ve given it a go but, have no idea if what I did is what the prompt was asking for… you explained it all so well Gay but, I am not good at writing to form at all. I tried though 🙂 Have fun all.
Heaven (@asweetlust) said:
An interesting poetry form Gay. Let me put on my poetry hat, wrap my mind around it by reading more examples of this. Thanks ~
Semaphore / Samuel Peralta said:
G.M. Hopkins is one of my favourite poets, and I love how you turned the spotlight on him tonight, Gay… Not sure if I have the wherewithall to contribute a poem, but I’m certainly looking forward to some great offerings tonight!
henryclemmons said:
WHEW!!! That was a challenge, Gay. I seriously doubt I strum the right note, but I give it me best. Tried to find G,M.’s voice, but I think I sounded more like a car.
aprille said:
Henry, you make me smile over my breakfast cuppa.
I agree. It isn’t easy to shed our notions of regularity in metre and let it all hang out.
claudia said:
i think you did a great job henry…and you know…some racing cars have kind of a sprung rhythm sound as well…just saying…smiles
Abhra Pal said:
It was really interesting read. Thank you. I have understood but not quite sure what I am going to link is exactly fulfilling the rules.
vivinfrance said:
I have not yet read the poems posted so far, nor the comments, so I hope my take on the prompt doesn’t ruffle too many feathers! I shall come back and read tonight, when our guests have departed.
claudia said:
hehe…you know..rebels are always welcome in the pub..smiles
David King said:
Definitely the most challenging challenge yet. I have never been able to get to grips with sprung rhythm, much though I enjoy reading G.M.H.’s use of it. Still, I’ve had a go and posted something.
Eve Redwater said:
I adore Hopkins’s work! Perhaps I’ll give this a shot. 🙂 Thank you for the great prompt Gay!
brian miller said:
oh do eve…it was a lot of fun…and would love to read one by you…smiles.
Eve Redwater said:
This was a joy to complete, loved it. 🙂 Thanks again!
SallyJ said:
Gay, this seems like one for me, who finds it impossible to write in iambs at the best of times. I am caught up with Olympic Storytelling at the moment so may not be able to link, but be assured I will play with this. I love the ‘dappled things’ poem. Your ‘form for all feature’ is always a must, even if I can’t respond often at the moment. Thank you for providing yet another missing piece in my poetic understanding.
brian miller said:
a few suggestions to those struggling to find rhythm…while rap or hip hop may not be your music of choice i find that listening to it and how they turn phrases and or the words within a song has helped me to be able to find rhythm within my own poetry. A book i recommended a while back to Claudia and on here, in the comments i think, is ‘Book of Rhymes: The Poetics of Hip Hop’ which is really good basics for writing in rhythm and rhyme. Saul Williams is a really good example as well. He is a performance poet and reading his works have also helped as well in finding that rhythm. just thought i would drop a few thoughts in here. take them or leave them. smiles.
Gay said:
I’d love to get a copy of that and read more. It sounds fascinating. Of course, you could hop in here anytime and give us an article??? (smiles)
Heaven (@asweetlust) said:
Thanks Brian for the suggestion.
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Gay said:
Good morning everyone – well it’s a late good morning, but I’m shaking out the cobwebs. My internet was wonky when I first awoke, so at last getting plugged in and will next be rocking over to read last night and this morning’s posts. I”m very pleased with the ones I’ve read so far. I think each poem has captured new rhythms and at the same time stayed true to the unique voices of the poets who wrote them. Interesting too, a couple of themes seem to be natural to all of them – love and a certain kind of spirituality. It’s completely a random thing, yet I think there is that connection. Thanks to all of you for linking to the article. It felt a little esoteric, but it is something I wanted to explore.
Joseph Harker said:
Dropped one in the bucket. Don’t know if it’s quite got the same music as Hopkins’, but one does what one can…!
geraldine snape said:
thankyou for this challenge…I hope that this goes a bit towards it…just keep trying!
Cressida de Nova said:
‘Pied Beauty’ is one of my favourite poems. Never done one of these sprung rhythm verses but will give it a shot. Thank you for the challenge
Clive Goodhead said:
Thanks for a timely reminder of my earliest encounters with Hopkins and sprung rhythm. At fifteen years of age, my GCE A-level English teacher introduced me to them both and I have been grateful ever since. Verse speaking was a passion of mine then, when it was perhaps more widely used and appreciated than it seems to be nowadays. We also practised prosody and were actually given it in our exams. Your example pleased me greatly. Thank you.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Thank you. I learned as I wrote these articles. I began writing in free verse as a woman coming of age in the 60s, I was at first influence by Poe (in middle school) and later by the Beats especially Ferlinghetti but also Yeats and Eliot. At the time of writing this, I was being influenced by Seamus Heaney. Still I remember all the poets of my studies and I grew to appreciate form and the challenge to composing in it. I love its musicality.