One of the tools that visual artists turn to when creating their compositions—whatever their medium of choice—is balance. In art, balance refers to the arrangement or relationship between objects within the painting, photograph or sculpture.
The object of balance is to assure that no part of the whole is overly powerful, overly weak, isolated, or overcrowded, without good reason. It doesn’t mean that the work lacks a focal point, that one thing that draws your eye into the painting.
There are three ways to achieve balance in visual art:
• Symmetry: placement of objects equally distant from the center line. Think of balance, proportion, harmony.
• Asymmetry: using different elements on each side of the center line but in such a way that they offset one another. The photo at the top of this post is an example of asymmetrical balance in photography.
• Dynamic balance occurs when all objects appear to be in motion but are not flying off the canvas.
But…how does this apply to poetry?
Form poetry caters to a sense of symmetrical balance. Use of rhyme and meter serves to create harmony within the whole, whatever the structure, and generates expectation within the reader who consciously, or not, hears the poem within a defined format.
The poet can also use shape to bestow visual balance to his or her work. This is especially effective when the shape of the poem speaks to the subject. In excellent example of this in a recent dVerse Poetics, poetess Laurie Kolp shared a poem about weather in the shape of a tornado.
A Different Kind of Storm
He knew all about the weather- Mother Nature’s
mood swings, her temperamental lows and highs, her
wishy-washy wretched ways of sweeping circuitous
chaos, whirling through lives like an undecided
lover. He knew how to track her storms,
predict her wayward path; even when his
life was at risk. He bravely stood in the
center of cat four and five hurricanes
while everyone evacuated, hanging
onto trees so he wouldn’t blow away.
He dared to chase tornadoes, getting
as close as a snake on the prowl,
recoiling just in time. When
earthquakes or tsunamis hit
without warning, shook
everyone’s lives into
disarray, he was first
to find the action
arrive on the scene
amidst the deadly debris
and destruction, while all
the while toying with threats
of the aftermath. Yes, he
could do all that and
survive, but he could
not stop drinking;
alcohol is the
storm that
took his
life.
©laurie kolp
Another way to attend to balance in poetry is through contrast of topics or ideas. Thinking in terms of opposites you will find poems that pair such subjects of life/death, love/hate, beauty/ugliness, air/earth/fire/water, winter/summer/spring/autumn, to name but a few. Use of complementary colors and other sensory details are two more ways of using contrast to achieve balance.
This week I learned a new (to me) literary term: merism. Merism is a literary device in which two opposite are placed together to indicate the totality of a concept. For example, in the biblical reference to the Tree of Knowledge of Good and Evil, good and evil means “all.” Thus it is a reference to the “Tree of ALL Knowledge.” In that respect, I think merism is a tool for balance.
A well-known poem that uses this idea of contrast, or dualism to illustrate balance is Gerard Manley Hopkins beautiful work, Pied Beauty:
Pied Beauty
Glory be to God for dappled things—
For skies of couple-colour as a brindled cow;
For rose-moles all in stipple upon trout that swim;
Fresh-firecoal chestnut-falls; finches’ wings;
Landscape plotted and pieced—fold, fallow, and plough;
And áll trades, their gear and tackle and trim.
All things counter, original, spáre, strange;
Whatever is fickle, frecklèd (who knows how?)
With swíft, slów; sweet, sóur; adázzle, dím;
He fathers-forth whose beauty is pást change:
Praise hím.
Gerard Manley Hopkins 1877, Public Domain
Alternate lines of dialogue or narrative/internal dialogue are another tool in the poet’s craft box. Here’s a short excerpt of a poem I’ve previously posted, Virginia Tech, that uses this technique:
…Did he go to the woods in Virginia?
Find comfort in leafy branches
that tickled his progression along that path
that no one else seemed to know about?
There, in the hollow,
beneath an old oak,
did he flail his fists at the void,
swallowing the scream rising from the
base of his spine like a snake of
the Kundalini species?
I understand it’s true of all
Creative People, if we didn’t do the arts,
we could hurt somebody.
Did he sleep the night before?
Or did shadows toy with his angst
while muffled snores from the other side
of the paper-thin dorm wall
ripped through him?
Taunt him in his evil purpose?
In the morning, did he wonder
if this was the day,
or if today,
like yesterday and the day before,
he’d steal a nap before class and
find enough release in sleep
to buy a few more moments of time
from his accrued life span.
Lots of people, I understand,
plot the sequence of their lives every day,
ahead of time, step-by-step…
And so, for today’s prompt, let’s play with the concept of balance. Here’s a few suggestions about how to do that.
• Write a poem with a balanced visual appearance;
• Intersperse dialogue and narrative in your poem…or narrative and internal reflection;
• Pen a poem that directly addresses the concept of balance; “Balance” could even be it’s title;
• Notice the element of balance in the world around you, whether in nature, sports, relationships and let that be the source of your inspiration;
• Write an ekphrasis of a piece of art (any medium), focusing on aspects of that work that relate to balance and its impact on the viewer;
• Create a metaphorical poem that represents balance;
• Write to contrasts, merism.
To participate:
• Write your poem and post it on you website or blog;
• Access Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post and add your name and the direct URL to your poem;
• Visit other poets who have participated and comment on their work…especially those who have cared enough to read and comment on yours;
• Have fun…and you might think about inviting someone new to join us at the pub.
For dVerse Poets’ I’m Victoria Slotto—delighted to be tending the pub this week. I’d love to have you stop by my website, too!
tashtoo said:
I think I’m up for the challenge at hand! Winding down here at the office and looking forward to heading home and playing poet (balance…certainly a term not often found in my bubble!) The twitterverse also seems to have got it’s groove back…phew! Thanks for the prompt, Victoria…my pen is salivating 😉
Laurie Kolp said:
Victoria- Thanks for including me in this scholarly post, and for teaching us about the different kinds of balance … something which I strive for in my life, but never seem to achieve… and “merism” is new to me, too!
brian miller said:
it was cool seeing your verse in there…smiles.
Laurie Kolp said:
Thanks, Brian.
brian miller said:
very cool article victoria…at a time i find myself out of balance a bit, i am seeking it in my verse today…some interesting technique you introduces as well…i tried using regular dialogue to hold mine together…
charityv said:
Brian,
I appreciated your balance between hard reason, and the reality you are creating for your boys.
Quiet applause from my corner!
claudia said:
very cool prompt victoria…think balance is a big theme as most people find it not easy to balance their lives..at least i don’t find it easy…but i keep trying…smiles
Susan L Daniels said:
Nice prompt, great article–thanks for sharing it. I shared my most balanced poem, I think, LOL. I will leave it to all of you to tell me if it is askew.
claudia said:
ugh…still can’t access your blog victoria…will try again tomorrow
dannypereyra said:
I like this prompt. It proved more tricky then I thought 🙂
Daydreamertoo said:
Very interesting prompt Victoria, and ‘merism’ a new word for me too. Have a good night everyone.
Daydreamertoo said:
Can you let me know if it works now, or do I need to add it to the linky again please?
claudia said:
just found the post and changed the old link..it’s working now..
Victoria C. Slotto said:
So glad to see you all aboard, so far. If you had problems accessing this post, it was because I had neglected some photo credits and had to edit…my bad. And it seems a few are getting malware notices for my personal blog (liv2write2day.wordpress.com)…but only a few. I’m not sure how to handle this…I just renewed and up-loaded my Norton anti-virus program.
Anyway, I’m looking forward to getting some balance back in my life through your poems!
Archna said:
Hi Victoria, lovely to meet you. This is quite the interesting prompt, I’m moved by the mix of visual and material here. I am also having trouble visiting your post, I will definitely keep trying though!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Still working on the problem. So far, only happening with a few people. It started after I renewed my antivirus program.
ManicDdaily said:
Cool post, Victoria. I have something but am unfortunately about to get on a train, if I don’t miss it, and will not be able to do anything till much later tonight. Agh. k.
brian miller said:
oop catch that train k…we will be here when you get back…smiles…..
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Looking forward to it, Karin.
John (@bookdreamer) said:
Interesting prompt. Tried to play with the suggestions with a new form call a Sudo invented by Michael Egan
brian miller said:
that is def an interesting form john..will have to look into it some more….
Myrna said:
Nice challenge. Don’t know if mine meets the criteria, but it’s what came to mind when I saw the word balance.
Jamie Dedes said:
Absolutely wonderful job on this, Victoria.
brian miller said:
hey jamie, you going to jump in?
Jamie Dedes said:
Thinking about it! 😉
Victoria C. Slotto said:
This should be right down your alley, Jamie.
Heaven (@asweetlust) said:
Thanks for the interesting and challenging prompt ~ I wrote about a personal event, without giving out too much details about it ~ I can definitely relate to finding balance and direction in our lives ~
Irene said:
Hi Victoria, there’s a warning against your site and I wasn’t sure whether to proceed anyway..Irene
pmwanken said:
Loved reading about balance…I’m needing more of it in my life! Trying to find time to write AND read…not always easy these days. Happy Thursday into Friday, all. 🙂
charityv said:
In the balance, commerce, production, and homespun joy!
The jersey ironstone of Batsto Village, an early Iron Works village that stands hundreds of years after the industry and the families have moved on..still, the homestead and farm buildings stand!
brian miller said:
interesting….on my way over to see what you got….
ManicDdaily said:
Hi Victoria – made my train and then we got caught in big storm – could see it ahead, and train stopped for some time re fallen trees etc. A conductor, who was almost gleeful in our plight, nearly sent all back to GCT (Grand Central) but most trooped across the platform and just got on another train – along with two other trains full of people! Talk about balance! But everyone stayed in the middle aisle, and we made it with no further mishap! Quite tired now, but looking forward to people’s thing (probably manana.) k.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
That doesn’t sound like a fun way to spend the evening. Yikes.
ManicDdaily said:
Well, I was lucky to have a friend on the train this time. It was fine–it was also kind of comical since the conductor of the first train was so castigating that we should all have listened to the weather reports and not chosen to travel on such a day! Most people are regular commuters. k.
Raivenne said:
Love the prompt, Victoria. Knowing I likely won’t have time to conjure up something new before Mr. Linky expired -uh, no pun to any gentlemen with the surname of Linky- , I decided to go for a write I did a couple on months that fits at least 2-3 of the criteria. Happy weekend all!
Joseph Harker said:
Thanks for the nifty prompt! You certainly got the muse-brain going…
Polly Robinson said:
What an interesting prompt with great examples, thanks for this one Victoria
brian miller said:
good morning poets….jumping in and catching up…then on the road heaidng home all day….so anyone that joins in throughout the day …i will catch late tonight….
Raven said:
This was a thoughtful and excellent piece! Thank you so much!
Raven said:
I am late and have been away. How nice to come back to writing to such a well thought out article, so filled with valuable information. Thank you.
Lydia said:
What a great prompt, Victoria! As always, many thanks.
(Drive carefully, Brian…)
K. McGee said:
My poem is about balancing perspective. Hope you enjoy.
K. McGee said:
Oops… I wasn’t finished with that comment. Anyway…
In my poem I tried to balance the voice of a mother with the voice of her child. The mothers being more mature and symbolic, the teens being sharp and unmasked. I also tried to show the balance between perspective. The mother seeing the child as she was innocent. The teen sees the mother as angry and jaded. Yet in their speaking parts each thinks the opposite of themselves.
I’d love if someone would leave feedback and let me know if any of these attempts showed through in the poem. My opinion, of course, is jaded.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Good morning, all. I’m always late catching up…my excuse is I live in the far west, cowboy country…does that work? I have an early appointment, then looking forward to continue reading. Balance is a challenge in more ways than one, heh?
tigerbrite said:
Great prompt Victoria, had a really busy day and can’t get around to something good and new before expiry. I have posted one of my Tarot Poems.
claudia said:
hey sorry, i’m late..long day at work and packing my bags for a little escape…so on the trail for a bit and then off to bed early..
Emily said:
Thanks for a fun prompt! This one was more challenging than I expected at first!
Ruth said:
hmm i’m in, but not sure i quite met the bar on this one…
brian miller said:
oh you did wonderfully…and a second tarot inspired response…i liked….
brian miller said:
ok could not take another couple hundred miles int eh car…had to take a break for the evening and playing catch up on the days versings….but soon to bed to get up and knock them out…home is calling…
Dick Jones said:
Enjoyed the prompt, Brian. I hope this fits the bill.