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Growing up, I had a friend—Charlie. He was one of those guys you just had to hang around long enough and you knew something crazy was going to happen. There was the night four of us sang to our waitress at a pizza parlor—only to find out her boyfriend was the cook, and carried a very big butcher knife. Another night we went to Goodwill and bought the zaniest outfits we could find (fitting was not a concern) and went to the minor league baseball game to put on a little act.
Mud bogging in a four door sedan. The night, at 3 AM, when the knocking on my window did not wake me up, but my dad went outside with the shotgun while Charlie hid under the car. Setting the table with the fine china at a friends house, while he and his family slept upstairs.
Charlie got me to do things I never would have done on my own.
Don’t get me wrong, I was a willing participant. Smiles. This is part of the magic of OpenLinkNight. Every week when I read, you inspire me. If you read, you will be inspired. There is always someone that tries something new. A new way of saying something. A perspective. A word. A rhyme. A rhythm. Something that challenges me to try it.
My name is Brian Miller and tonight I will be your host—fresh off a week break—and ready to get this poetry thing on…
Here is how it works:
- Write ~ a poem, post it to your web page
- Link ~ by clicking on the Linky button below and entering the URL to your poem
- Read ~ pick some poems to read
- Respond ~ leave them feedback, what did you like? what inspired you?
Hey, anyone can do that eh? If you can do those things—welcome, we are glad to have you. Smiles. I will look for you out on the trail! ~Brian
kelly said:
Happy Open Link Night everyone!
brian miller said:
welcome kelly….just got the kids out of the classroom and on my way around…
Pat Hatt said:
More than a week! lol
brian miller said:
cat….that did not even rhyme…you are slipping…smiles…
1emeraldcity said:
Missed you last week, Bri…Glad to see ya’ again! Cheers!
brian miller said:
cheers back to you j…
good to be back
claudia said:
haha..think we all had and have those charlies in our lives and sometimes were those charly…ha…smiles… happy oln everyone and it’s good how we inspire each other… that’s one of the things that makes this such a rich place for me…smiles
brian miller said:
sometimes we are those chalies…haha…true that…and i agree on the inspriation…thanks for your hard work last week claudia…smiles.
Heaven (@asweetlust) said:
You (and everyone) inspire me to continue writing and trying out new forms ~ Nice to see you Brian ~
Happy day to all ~
brian miller said:
happy day to you as well grace…
i can say the same…smiles.
wcg1670 said:
Mr. B….just a short for me, please….thank you…funny how the days draw us here and there and yet the magnetism of friends and words feel like home and we return…comforted by familiar hands and faces…your open door policy is cherished by many, including myself
Peace
brian miller said:
home is a good word…and familiar hands and faces…good to see you friend…need to rap with you again sometime…got a new number so will have to email it to you…
wcg1670 said:
please do B…sailing in the morning, but I’m always connected
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I love to have you back Brian.. I read your post and tried to visit many posts and try to do the same tonight….
brian miller said:
thanks man…claudia said she saw you out on the trail a lot this weekend…that is very cool man…i will be out there soon….a little slow today…smiles.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I need to go to bed now – last night babysitting my niece who went to a Bieber concert…
claudia said:
haha…sleep well björn
brian miller said:
oh my…a bieber concert eh? ha. bet she was singing all day…smiles.
johnallenrichter said:
Hi Brian….. Childhood friends are the best, and the memories born there have carried me through out my life. I wouldn’t be who I am today if I hadn’t experienced those incredibly insane yet fun years. Others often tell me not to live in the past, but I do so treasure my memories. Anyway, soon today will be the past. And so the comraderie, poetry and whimsical nature of some acutely fine artists here at d’verse will be with me always. Again, thanks for for sharing your time with us Brian….
brian miller said:
ah i agree…those years def shaped part of who i am today….our past def informs our present so we can not escape it…
M. J. Joachim said:
Sounds like a fun blog hop. Count me in.
brian miller said:
welcome…smiles.
ladynyo said:
I had a Charlie in my life…his name was Doug…and he did the most outlandish things in life. Hard to follow him up.
I don’t know the interest in haiku here, but I found “Basho on Poetry” and used some of his words. Haiku can be very confusing, but this text of Basho makes plain and simple this issue of haiku. At the end I have added some of my own. Shield up for the bricks….
Operative words for haiku from Basho: Weirdness and Oddness. FIts.
Lady Nyo
brian miller said:
ha. no bricks here…i have a growing appreciation of haiku this year…not all of it mind you as many are sloppily written…but…i am sure you are good…will be over soon…
Tony Maude said:
I have a friend like that right now. She knows who she is 🙂 For example, we went to an exhibition of Edvard Munch’s work and the cafe menu had some of his work in the design. I found myself blagging a menu for this friend because she is a designer. And I did tell you all about the creative writing group I’m starting next week, didn’t I? She was mixed up in that happening too.
brian miller said:
sounds like she is a good/bad influence….lol…fun fun on the class as well….must have missed the intel on the class…would love to hear about it…
Tony Maude said:
It’s the one at the Grassmarket Community Project in Edinburgh – launch day is 3rd May. It’s coming in fast …
charlesmashburn said:
Hi, I’m Charlie. Ha! Not that Charlie, but if you’d been around in my younger days, you’d know it could’ve been me Brian was writing about. I cut quite a path when I was a yute.
brian miller said:
ha. yes if you notice the tag…i probably could have been in jail for a few of the things we did if they would have caught us…smiles.
charlesmashburn said:
That’s what I’m talkin bout!!
joanna said:
Happy Open Link Night to all. 🙂 pour one for me, B.?
brian miller said:
you got it…
and maybe a side of calamari…
joanna said:
😉
ManicDdaily said:
Hey Brian – So great to have you back! You get us to do all kinds of things we wouldn’t otherwise! Thanks much. k.
claudia said:
great to have you back as well k. – so enjoyed your india posts
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
Thanks so much for this wonderful forum, and happy Tuesday!
claudia said:
happy tuesday to you as well madeleine
aprille said:
Don’t the weeks just fly by. And such a good week for being outdoors. At last. Must have been Claudia’s Spring prod prompt from last Saturday 🙂
claudia said:
spring…wonderful spring…was biking to work today…. it was wonderful…blue sky…sun..cherry blossoms…sigh…
marilyncavicchia said:
Happy Open Link Night! I tried a triolet.
Susan L Daniels said:
Brian, I have missed you. So glad you’re back! Hi to everyone else–and yes, I’d miss you too!
brian miller said:
smiles. i missed being here as well…
Pamela said:
Nice to see you back with us, Brian. I hope the break was good for you. I will be round to read a bit later. Happy open link to all.
Pamela
claudia said:
happy oln pamela…just coming from your place…smiles
vivinfrance said:
Welcome back Brian. I’ve written so much poetry this week that I didn’t know which to link. Eventually, I decided to link the poem that I have least confidence in, partly because the prompt was so complicated. I do hope people will feel free to critique it.
claudia said:
a poetry backlog is a wonderful thing viv…smiles…on my way over..
brian miller said:
i feel you….i wrote a ton this last week and will filter them in as i dont want to give up that daily discipline of writing new stuff as well…
claudia said:
guess what i’m listening to and singing while out on the trail… the chances of anything coming from mars are a million to one he said…ha…so if there’s a green martian shadow with my comment…don’t wonder…smiles
Wyeth Bailey said:
Hi Brian,
My Charlie’s name is Patrick. Best friends for over 35 years. There was that time I ran into a business colleague at the grocery store. “Is that your husband”? she asked as he scurried away down the aisle. “No, my friend. We’re shopping for a party.” As we said our goodbye, she added, “Some party!” Little did I know that as I had been speaking with her, he had been filling up the cart with box after box of condoms and packages of lard, pigs feet, pickled eggs, anything gross he could find. I was only mad for 45 seconds.
I have 2 rare things tonight: a good mood and some spare time (right after bills are paid). That may leave me with no poem to write, but I’ll try. And I’ll be reading for sure! 🙂
brian miller said:
smiles…hope that poem falls in your lap…hey it could even be about bills…smiles….hahahahahahahaha on the shopping trip…that is awesome….lol….you are going to have me chuckling for a bit…smiles.
claudia said:
bedtime for me over here…will be back tomorrow morning to catch up…
brian miller said:
sleep well…
Apryl Gonzales Sweet (@SweetApryl) said:
Welcome back Brian! We all need a break every once in a while, it’s good to see you again. Happy Open Link Night everyone!
myrthryn said:
I was the good son..didn’t have those kinds of crazy things in my childhood..nowadays…..hmmm
Felipe Adan Lerma said:
Welcome back Brian 😉 Won’t be posting yet, but look fwd to seeing what some folks write 😉
Tony Maude said:
Time for me to head off for my beauty sleep; either it doesn’t work or I don’t sleep enough 😦
Ginny Brannan said:
Hey Brian, It’s been a couple of weeks since I stopped by OLN, good to see you hosting tonight! Just coming in from work and happy to be spending some time at my favorite pub! Love your story! I was actually a rather quiet kid, until I too met a friend Charlie (same name, seriously!) and his sisters. We never did anything mean or harmful, but sure had a lot of good times. Actually still do, they took me in at 16, and have been my family since! You already commented on my share for OLN a while back, but stop by and say hello if you get a chance!! See you inside!!
brian miller said:
ah you know i will…smiles….
i was a quiet kid…early on…ha…teen years changed that just a bit…i would not say we did anything mean…but we def had fun as well…funny on the same name too…hmm….
wolfsrosebud said:
glad smiles are back
brian miller said:
big smiles….
The Course of Our Seasons said:
Good evening and happy open link night,
I have just posted a epic poem – and it is long – maybe ridiculously long for Tuesday night. Maybe I should give a prize for anyone who finishes it – lol.
Looking forward to reading everyones wonderful poetry tonight – see ya! K
brian miller said:
ah you know i will…smiles…
and thank you for your emails during my time away…you def gave me much to think on…and some perspective as well…smiles.
The Course of Our Seasons said:
smiling back atcha, my friend! K
PoppySilver said:
Warm blessings to all 🙂
brian miller said:
whassup poppy!
Poet Laundry said:
You’re back! Great to see you Brian–and everyone else too. I’ll be ’round throughout the eve. Happy OLN!
brian miller said:
smiles…good to see you…and a wonderful magical verse tonight….
Robbie Pruitt said:
Glad to be joining you all tonight!
Laurie Kolp said:
Sorry I’m so late, but we’re having some family situations… it’s all going to be okay. Brian, you naughty boy you… but why am I not surprised?
brian miller said:
haha
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Such fun memories. I hope was all have a few like that…glad that I do! Maybe not the same caliber, but…Out all day today, now it’s good to come home to POETRY at dVerse.
brian miller said:
smiles…good to see you victoria…poetry time is good time…we had lovely weather here today…was out earlier tossing ball with my sun…so it was good to be out…
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Glad it’s getting nice. My memories of spring in your neck of the woods are of beauty and amazing azaleas. And I was out smacking a ball around a golf course…way too many times.
brian miller said:
i grew up playing par 3 golf, so my short game is not bad…you just dont want to be driving by when i tee off…just saying…smiles.
Margaret said:
Ha ha! Sounds like you had great fun and great friends. And I’m sure they have made their way in to many of your poems. Glad you are back and hopefully refreshed!
brian miller said:
it was good to get away…and def helped to find some perspective as well..yeah i had a few nuts…charlie was def one of the biggest…
Margaret said:
And thank you for always putting in 110% effort!
claudia said:
good morning…back and catching up…
brian miller said:
good morning…about to head to bed my self…have a wonderful day claudia…
be back in the AM myself…
claudia said:
sleep well… biking to work now… back in the evening to read more..
dragyonfly said:
Glad to see you back, Brian!! I was hoping your would come back soon. I had a Charle but her name was Cafern..Well thats what her dad called her. I called her Cat……Crazy Cat to be exact. She chose my fifieth birday to leave this world. It s just her way, though, she has to be the first to do everything first. Miss you hunny. Our kids are making me nuts…..Cant wait to have that beer and joint in heaven together.
brian miller said:
smiles…ha….def something to look forward to you know…smiles…i am sorry for your loss, but glad for the time you had…
connellykevin said:
I always enjoy this poetic space but to my shame never interact as much as I feel I should. SO, today’s resolution, I have linked a new poem (more relevant to a previous evening, howsoever!) so I will systematically read through and engage with absolutely as many of the links as I can today. Looking forward to my mission, see you all on the way, Kevin.
brian miller said:
have fun with it kevin…we def dont want to dictate someone having to read a certain number…as you cant dictate community…but i think there is much to gain in our rubbing together…sharpening each other…
Writer in Progress said:
Hello everyone! I miss writing with you all. As, soon as I have extra time I will. Always thinking of each and everyone of you.( New Job, dif hours.)
claudia said:
best of luck in the new job leah.. and hope things calm down soon so that you have time to write again…thanks for saying hi…
brian miller said:
hey new job is a good thing right…smiles…congrats on that…
Lila said:
Nice to have you back brian. Love those Charlies in life. I think of them from time to time, and I hear them cheering me on when I need it.
Great post this is.. fun reading through the comments.
brian miller said:
smiles…thank you ma’am…and they def can be an inspiration…