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Body of Water Poems, Dive in!, Do you hear the mermaids singing?, Get In the Flow Poems, Manicddaily, poetics, T.S. Eliot as Elephant
I hear lake water lapping
in low sounds by the shore…..
As I ebb’d with the ocean of life…
Break, break, break,
On thy grey stones, O sea…
And down by the brimming river,
I heard a lover sing....
Water, water, everywhere–surely there’s a poem in there.
Manicddaily, a/k/a, Karin Gustafson, here to tell you that it turns out there are about a zillion poems in there. For although there is a very great deal to write about in this life, bodies of water have been used as metaphor, backdrop, sound effect, for just about all of it. (The lines above are a tiny sampling from Yeats, Whitman, Tennyson, Auden, Coleridge.)
I confess that I am someone who sometimes has a problem drinking the stuff. It’s somehow easier for me to down tea, juice, wine. But, oddly, when water comes in a body, my reaction is totally different. Then I am eager to jump in (on a hot day, sure, but my children and I have been known to swim even if it involves breaking ice.) (Okay, I wouldn’t call our polar submissions actual “swims”–still, you get my drift–)
Bodies of water are simply compelling–they draw us; they frighten us; they surround us (if only, at a distance), they make us up. As such, they are …um.. well-springs for refection, renewal, song.
In The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock,” T.S. Eliot –you can recognize him by the hair and the trousers–heard mermaids singing, but thought they would not sing to him. Wallace Stevens, below, in The Idea of Order at Key West, listens to a more human sea singer. (I include only the first stanza).
She sang beyond the genius of the sea.
The water never formed to mind or voice,
Like a body wholly body, fluttering
Its empty sleeves; and yet its mimic motion
Made constant cry, caused constantly a cry,
That was not ours although we understood,
Inhuman, of the veritable ocean.
(Note that if you follow the link above, there is a recording of Stevens reading the poem. There is also, above, a link to Yeats reading “The Lake Isle of Innisfree.”)
So, dive in! At least dip your toe! Get in the flow! And sing! (But don’t get water up your nose.) The topic for the day—a body or bodies of water. For these purposes, a body of water can mean anything from an ocean to a mermaid (or man), a lake to a puddle, even, if you would, a glass, a tear, a rain drop.
After your post your poem (or even before), be sure to check out the work of your singing, flowing peers! It’s amazing how fulfilling it can be not just to return visits to your fellow poets, but to initiate the visits! This back and forth is what keeps our poetic internet waves alive.
For those new, here’s the drill:
• Write your body of water poem and post it on your website or blog.
• Copy the direct URL to your poem and paste it, along with your name, in the spaces Mr. Linky offers you at the bottom of this post.
• Swim over to your fellow poets. Read, comment, repeat! (Be sure to leave a proper link so people can easily return your visits.)
• Spread the word! Use your social media sites to invite some newcomers. It’s good to include a link to dVerse on your own post, too, so your followers can locate us.
• Above all, enjoy!
Laurie Kolp said:
I really appreciate your prompt, Karin. Water is so refreshing… I do drink a lot of it, love to play in it, and reflect beside it.
ManicDdaily said:
Welcome all! Since posting my computer overheated–I think it will be okay, but it forces me to use an iPad which is a great device but for some reason wants me to appear on blogger blogs with an old ID called Outlawyer. So if you see something from Outlawyer, know it’s me. I’m still not quite up with my post but looking forward to checking them out. k.
claudia said:
smiles…the outlawyer image makes this even more exciting k. – smiles… happy saturday all…and what a refreshing prompt… we hit 40 C today which translates to 104 F … and even at 9pm did not cool down much so far…
ManicDdaily said:
In Germany! Crazy. k.
brian miller said:
ha. i like your elephant swimming with the octupi…..i usually drop a little flavor in mine…or some lime….mmm…def a required element and one thta can be so deadly as well…i think i have written quite a bit on water….
see everyone out on the trail…
claudia said:
love the elephant pics and the vid…smiles
Glenn Buttkus said:
From the sea inside or bodies to the divers bodies of liquid that surround us, thanks for returning to the elementals, in creation, and the creation of poetry. I started off with Creation itself, then sailed the seven seas throughout time(s), and had a ball doing it. Like you I do not like to swill rock juice straight up, & prefer tea, juice, or wine.
ManicDdaily said:
I come and go with it! Looking forward to your piece. k.
brian miller said:
g, i would love to sail the seas on a big mast ship….go find a new continent somewhere…smiles.
claudia said:
ha – you could hire me – maybe not as a sailor but as a cook – smiles
brian miller said:
ah we def need a cook…smiles…
Grace said:
Your visuals and video are so delightful K ~ Thanks for the interesting prompt on the water as well s the examples ~
I will be by to read everyone’s work as I have to pick my daughter now from the airport ~ Wishing you all Happy Weekend ~
ManicDdaily said:
Have a good weekend too, Grace. k.
brian miller said:
yeah? where has your daughter been?
Grace said:
She stayed one more week in Vancouver Brian ~
And its uncanny that now we have pouring rain ~ But tomorrow the sun should be back ~
brian miller said:
she brought it home with her eh? smiles.
claudia said:
nice…. hope she had a good time…my son is in greece at the moment..he should be back tomorrow..
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I’m in with another old one. Thanks for the fun prompt, Karin…especially the elephants. They always make me smile! Happy Saturday…I’ll be back later to read. Busy day here.
claudia said:
was just mesmerized by that first stanza….
ManicDdaily said:
Will check it out, Victoria.
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
Great prompt and visuals! I don’t have time to write anything new today, but here’s a limerick I wrote for National Maritime Day back in May:
A Seafarer Returns (Limerick)
By Madeleine Begun Kane
A fellow returned from the sea
And was greeted by tears from mate Leigh.
“I missed you,” she moaned.
“I sure wish you had phoned,
Cuz your absence seemed fishy to me.”
brian miller said:
seemed fishy indeed….ha…he probably smells like it too…lol….
claudia said:
haha…he better had phoned…oy… maybe it’s too late now…smiles
ManicDdaily said:
Ha==well, what about Leigh–could she not have put a message in a bottle? k.
claudia said:
will be out for a bit – we’re going to a light party in a town close by where they illuminate a big park and also have a fire work a bit later…. will catch up when i’m back…
brian miller said:
have fun at the party c
whocouldknowthen said:
hello Karen and friends,
oh my, do i love the animation and illustrations, so whimsical!
well, i can’t believe the timeliness of your prompt, water, water everywhere. because i just finished a poem i planned on posting tomorrow morning. i’m always so terrible with prompts, so i appreciate being on point and on time today. thank you so much!
happy reading…..*smiles*
ManicDdaily said:
Thank you! k.
Maggie Grace said:
Love the elephant drawings and the prompt. What I wrote started seeping out before I got back to my blog.
ManicDdaily said:
So great, thanks. k.
ManicDdaily said:
I will be out and about a bit – maybe swimming! Look to visit on returning. k.
hedgewitch said:
I grow old, I grow old, said the elephant–I shall wear the bottoms of my trousers rolled! Loved your animation and drawings, k. You said I could fudge with my latest, since it revolves around, among other things, a bunch of small bodies of water falling out of the sky, so I did. Will be by to read and visit over the course of the weekend–everyone have a lovely one.
ManicDdaily said:
Yes, no peach but hair is parted in the middle. k.
brian miller said:
hiya joy….
Mary said:
Great prompt and visuals, Karin. I look forward to reading what everyone comes up with. Have a great weekend, all…and drink lots of WATER.
brian miller said:
esp if its hot where you are….smiles.
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks, Mary. I really liked your poem. k.
KATiE MiA FredericK! said:
Thanks so much for the great prompt Manicddailly! Still getting use to how Dverse works…but so far it is so much fun! Love It!!
A Free Verse said:
Great prompt! I too find water VERY inspirational. You can find my liquidy contribution here: http://afreeverse.com/2013/07/another-old-poem-for-dverse-poets-pub-east-twin-tour-for-dad/
brian miller said:
nice…i have included water in quite a few of my writings…enjoyed your share as it def brought memories…
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks much for participating! k.
ninotaziz said:
Karin,
I loved the animation. Your elephant is as usual, adorable.
brian miller said:
bid the south china well for me….smiles.
lovemorestudio said:
Great topic and intro– not sure if I’ll post, but I’ll wait and “sea”– and I’ll be sure to check out the other submissions 🙂 ~happy Saturday, Jason
janehewey said:
Water! I hope to get into the flow today, karin. I love the sound piece, nice steady repetition : )
ManicDdaily said:
Yes–well it was one of my first animations – I was not very good at coming up with much so had to repeat. I am afraid to say that I think the sound was done in a bathroom sink! k.
ManicDdaily said:
PS – Jane – hope to see you! k.
Jamie Dedes said:
🙂
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks for stopping by, Jamie. k.
charlesmashburn said:
I’m in, and the water is FINE! Been busy busy busy, but had to throw this oldie at ya. It’s pretty amateurish, I reckon, but, hey, we all got to start somewhere! Right?
brian miller said:
hopefully making love by the river is never too amateurish…smiles….good to see you man…been missed….
heading out to the park for an evening stroll…then maybe the bookstore….be back in a bit and catch up with those still coming….
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
I’ve given you two for the price of one prompt tonight one old, one new; one serene, one grumpy.
ManicDdaily said:
Serene is great, but grumpy sounds like it fits just about any one’s bill! Ha. Thanks, Viv. k.
howanxious said:
When I think of water in a poem, i always recall that famous verse of The Ancient Mariner..
Interesting prompt.. now going to read what every one has come up with. 🙂
ManicDdaily said:
Yes, exactly – me too. Such a cool poem. k.
brian miller said:
back in and catching up….
aprille said:
Such a fun post, Karin. We are wet, wet, wet and shivering here in the UK. Had to quickly build a temporary shelter to save some of the herbaceous border from the forceful downpours. I want to have a few petals left on the flowers.
I’m not ready to jump into our pond at the minute :-).
But we are saving rainwater and that will have to do for a topic. Later though as I had forgotten it was Saturday, now Sunday.
brian miller said:
are you using the rainwater to water the plants or..you have me intrigued aprille….
oy, that is a lot of rain to have to shelter the flowers….but good on you for doing it…
ManicDdaily said:
It was quite wet here too, then got terribly hot – all evaporated in an instant. Now, actually, in the mountains where I am, it is just lovely – cool, starlit. k.
Gary said:
Great idea! We’ve had near-monsoon conditions where I live, so perversely my poem recalls a drought we had recently. But there is a body of water in it. http://wp.me/p1OZkZ-7A
ManicDdaily said:
Will checkk it out. k.
Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) said:
Oh, how I love your elephants and octopi!
When it comes to poems about water, my all time favourite is the Beautiful ‘Dover Beach’ by Matthew Arnold. (One of my favourite poems altogether, actually.)
I am recycling old poems at present, trying to spend more time on revision than new writing — and the prompts help, because then I find poms which I thought were good but now see as needing work. So the one I have linked to, five and a half years old, has just had a verse removed, which I think improves it. (One can be so ruthless when time has elapsed, lol!)
Now I’ll have lots of reading to catch up with, as I am still visiting blogs from the previous dVerse prompt! But it’s always a treat, so I’ll get there. 🙂
claudia said:
smiles…take your time… about to make my morning round here…smiles
ManicDdaily said:
So nice to see you, Rosemary. I also really like the Matthew Arnold. Thanks for the reminder of it. k.
rosross said:
It is the source and sustenance of all.
ManicDdaily said:
Yes. There is a broad scope here. k.
brian miller said:
good morning all…coffee in hand i have read the overnights…ducking back out for now and will be back later to see who else is milling about
Arnab Majumdar said:
I couldn’t write a poem on this particular idea today – ended up writing something else. So, I posted an older poem out here instead. I hope that’s not considered cheating? 🙂
Hope you guys enjoy it nonetheless…
claudia said:
smiles…just coming from your place…and i do hope ms. ocean never grows up…you know…smiles
Ruth said:
water water everywhere – there are probably as many poems there as there are drops of water in the seas 😉
Miriam E. said:
Beautiful, beautiful prompt, Karin! Thank you so much for the inspiration… wonderful illustrations… 🙂
Just got home and linked up – still have to do some chores (ugh)… will be back to read later… can’t wait to see where you all will take me… probably
♫ Somewhere beyond the Sea ♪…
brian miller said:
sing it…smiles…
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks Miriam! Enjoyed your poem1 Thanks so much for participating. k.
lovemorestudio said:
Okay! Poem up! Thanks for the inspiration yet again! Happy Sunday, Jason
ManicDdaily said:
Thank you, Jason. k.
claudia said:
caught the last ones with my morning coffee and locking the doors now..smiles… see you for pretzels&bullfights later