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Christopher Smart, Gerard Manley Hopkins, List Poetry, poetry prompt, Robert Herrick, Victoria C. Slotto
No, I didn’t mean listening! But now that I have your attention and ear, let’s talk about List Poetry.
List poetry has been around for centuries: think of those tongue-twisting genealogies in the Bible or Homer’s recounting of the names of heroes in the Iliad. Think of poets such as Christopher Smart and Robert Herrick, who wrote 200-300 years ago. And more recently, Walt Whitman.
This poetic device is just what it says: a catalog or list of thing—an inventory of people, places, things, ideas. But it is no simple shopping list or to-do list, though I suppose it could be if a little thought and a dab of poetic creativity is added to the mix. It’s not just a simple one-two-three—rather, to be successful, it is a well thought-out, complex process. Here, I’ll show you. Consider this classic, well-known poem by Gerard Manley Hopkins:
Pied Beauty
by Gerard Manley Hopkins
Glory be to God for dappled things–
For skies of couple-colour as a brindled cow;
For rose-moles all in stipple upon trout that swim;
Fresh-firecoal chestnut-falls; finches’ wings;
Landscape plotted and pieced–fold, fallow, and plough;
And all trades, their gear and tackle and trim.
All things counter, original, spare, strange;
Whatever is fickle, freckled (who knows how?)
With swift, slow; sweet, sour; adazzle, dim;
He fathers-forth whose beauty is past change:
Praise Him.
Public Domain
I noticed, when researching this topic online, a number of educational sites suggest list poetry as a great way to introduce children to poetry writing. You might want to include your children or grandchildren when you approach this prompt, either expanding or integrating their poetry with your own, or writing yours to complement or contrast with theirs.
Before we move on to the prompt, though, let’s take a look at another list poem. This one by the aforementioned Robert Herrick:
The Argument of His Book
I sing of brooks, of blossoms, birds, and bowers,
Of April, May, of June, and July flowers.
I sing of May-poles, hock-carts, wassails, wakes,
Of bridegrooms, brides, and of their bridal-cakes.
I write of youth, of love, and have access
By these to sing of cleanly wantonness.
I sing of dews, of rains, and piece by piece
Of balm, of oil, of spice, and ambergris.
I sing of Time’s trans-shifting; and I write
How roses first came red, and lilies white.
I write of groves, of twilights, and I sing
The court of Mab, and of the fairy king.
I write of Hell; I sing (and ever shall)
Of Heaven, and hope to have it after all.
Public Domain
Robert Herrick
I just realized that both Herrick and Hopkins were clergymen and both poems progress from the banal to the divine. Not a deliberate choice on my part, but I tend to dip back into time to find examples that are no longer bound by copyright restraints, and this is what I found. There are so many contemporary poets who use this poetic tool with quite different results.
Another poem from that earlier time that you might enjoy is Smart’s poem about his cat, Jeoffry. It’s too long to include here—so here’s the link. It has a bit of a divine twist to it, as well, in its own way.
Poets use the list poem for writing humor, irony or satire, opinion (I saw one arguing against vaccines), descriptive poetry, and children’s poetry.
So, for today, let’s write list poems. There’s a few ideas already mentioned in this post, but I’m sure you will come up with something more to amaze…maybe even a poetic shopping list. Take it wherever you like.
To participate:
• Write your poem and post it on your website or blog.
• Copy the direct URL to your poem and paste it, along with your name, in the spaces Mr. Linky offers you at the bottom of this post.
• Hang out a while with us at the Pub, or, if you must, come back later to read and comment on other poets’ work. Please be sure to acknowledge those who do the same for you by returning the visit and the comment.
• Let the world know about what’s going on over here, using your social media sites to invite some newcomers. It’s good to include a link to dVerse on your own post, too, so your followers can locate us.
• One of my own wishes: when you comment, please leave your complete URL or the link to your poem to make it easy to get back to you. Often enough, when I go to return a visit I get a site that is no longer in use or an incomplete URL.
• Above all, enjoy writing, reading and supporting this community of poets.
For dVerse Poets’ Meeting the Bar, this is Victoria Slotto.
Last week I self-published a very short article on Kindle: Beating the Odds: Support for Persons with Early Stage Dementia. It’s directed at those people who are in the early stages of Alzheimer’s and related memory disorders but is also meant for their loved ones: family and friends. The purpose is to help people remain independent, but safe, for as long as possible.
As a nurse, I worked with dementia patients for over forty years. About 10 years ago, maybe less, my mother began to show worrisome symptoms of memory loss. After a few years of resistance on her part and extreme concern and frustration on mine, she accepted her memory deficit and we worked together to devise a plan to keep her at home. It did keep her there, living alone, with minimal support from family, for about five years. At 92, she’s still at home, though with care-giving support.
If you know someone this could help, it’s available through Kindle for $.99 or free through their lending program. If you really need it and have no access (or no one with access) to Kindle, let me know and we’ll arrange something. It’s very simply written and not rocket science—just brief, practical advice. I hope it’s useful to someone in this most difficult time of dealing with a devastating illness. You can access the article here.
Welcome, everyone. I look forward to seeing what you’ve come up with.
list poetry is a cool thing – i can understand why it is a good form for kids to write poetry and i think it can also help in times with so called writer’s block… really cool victoria – not quite sure if mine meets the bill – i tried to list my thoughts that i had while waiting with my bike in front of a red stoplight…. then there was this guy in front of me on his bike and i wondered what it is that makes me decide if i overtake someone on the bike or not – ok – that’s how it started – my mind just doesn’t work in such well organized patterns..smiles
good thought in regards to getting a poem going using a list…
ha, so what is it that makes you decide to overtake someone claudia? lol
are you laughing at me…? smiles…
no honestly… some bikers have the newest bike and a mega sporty dress and are still slow – some have an old bike and are dressed very normal and are fast – so it’s not in the clothes – it’s not in the equipment – it’s in the body – you see it if someone is well trained – that brought me to think about appearance and titles and that brought me to that specific guy who was really, really smart and had a high position and still was so refreshingly normal and we had such fun with our quotes back and forth…ha
laughing with you…hows that…smiles..cool to see how your mind works…
kinda logical – don’t you think…? smiles… and yes… laughing with me sounds good…smiles
I don’t think it needs to be organized. More creative even, when it’s subtle, don’t you think? And more to our modern minds. The poem I posted, to me, is one of my least favorites in terms of poetry, because of its…je ne sais pas quoi!
smiles…i think it is easier on the mind when it is subtle…
and appreciate your honest opinion of your own verse, have a few of those,
but i saw nothing wrong with yours…smiles.
Like alliteration, I use the form of list poetry regularly, so I jumped the verse shark on this one comfortably. Interesting in how each of us picks up little stylistic habits as we crank out hundreds of poems. But it is beyond cool that each week through the dVerse prompts, we stretch our poetic muscles & horizons, and find new directions to travel; thanks.
i think it is cool how we come up with different approaches and even work the tools in our style…i think that is what has helped me with form poetry, is deciding i can still play within and not lose my voice…
And I love where that verse shark took you.
why am i hearing JAWS bass tones….smiles.
Thank you for another educational post Victoria ~ In a way, I was reminded of our anaphora poetic devise, there is some repetition in the verses as things are listed.
And congrats on the publication of your book~
Happy day to all ~
yes victoria – congrats on the book publication – it sounds really awesome – so cool that you took the time to write your experience down to help others with
Just to clarify, it’s a short article. Just did it to try to figure our the mechanics of formatting for Kindle. Kind of fun, but tedious. Thanks, all.
cool thing to play with victoria…i like shel silverstein’s Sick which is a list poem…i played a bit in mine…have a few lists contained within….
need to check this out… when i was in california, there was a gallery that had paintings, inspired by silverstein’s poems…that was pretty cool
ah his poetry is delightful…its very much for children but adults as well..a very endearing poet that ken higginson reminds me off….
smiles…loved his kiss that missed…
yes, a very cool OLN poem….
Thanks for the reference. I love Silverstein’s work. And yours!
That Errant List
By Madeleine Begun Kane
Oh, what have I done with my list
Of the things I must do to exist?
Every errand and chore,
Bills to pay, forms galore—
They’re all itemized … even my tryst.
oy…i’m all for un-itemized trysts…smiles
ha mad, you are my wife incarnate….she makes lists of everything…
and leaves them for me too…smiles…
i, not so much….
Mad, you amaze me. A limerick about list’s…you could use that for one of your prompts. Very fun.
Thanks everyone!
What a wonderful prompt, Victoria! Thanks for cooking it up. Insanely busy work day for me, so I have shared a poem of mine that is a list inside lists…
smiles…a list inside lists…the dangers and joys of loving a poet…smiles
I had so much fun writing this one a few months ago, I had to share it. Glad you liked!
I’m off to read it soon, as soon as I read comments. Sound good.
Many congrats, Victoria – that looks like a book I could use! Or essay.
I have a big work day going on so don’t know if I can get to this but will see. Thanks. k.
cool. hope we get to see you k…
Me too! Someone was telling me today that I was more present at my office since my move than before, but I think that when I am in the City, I am here (at office) many hours, and when I’m away, working a lot to prove that I am working a lot! Ha. I think it will get better, but not yet. k.
i promise that should i ever become an animal i will not eat you k…
smiles.
Thanks, Karin. Good luck at work. Well, I guess that almost over for you. The time zones confuse me.
Interesting prompt.. sometimes we use lists in our poems without even thinking about it. that tells how amazing are the lists part of poetry writing.
and they make quite an enjoyable read as well.
thanks for the information and examples of list poems. 🙂
i agree we do use them without even thinking…as with many of the tools we seem to bring up…i dont know if i ever intentionally did it before though…
neither did i.. 🙂
but participating in dverse is a good way of learning about such techniques and forms..
Yes, I found a few of mine that fit the prompt that weren’t meant to. It’s just our way of organizing thoughts, I suppose.
yes… that is true..
I enjoyed your prompt, Victoria; and it was fun coming up with a poem. I think I have written two other poems that might be considered ‘list poems’ in the last little while. I do like the technique. I enjoyed Christopher Smart’s poem & found it interesting that he apparently wrote it when he was in what was called an ‘insane asylum.’ I thought it was quite clever, and actually it was my favorite of the list poems you shared, Victoria, because of its uniqueness. Thanks again for the prompt.
And apparently he died in that insane asylum. I think it’s a risk factor for poetic minds…or maybe it’s what helps us to see things differently.
Great prompt– I’d already written for today, but I’ll need to revisit the list-poem style at a later time; it seems like a fun write. I’ll check out what is submitted, though. Happy poeming~Jason
cool…the prompt is open until midnite tomorrow so if you have not written for then….
I ditto what Brian says. Would love to see your work….and your photography.
I liked doing this. I think I need to apologize for the same theme of much of my writing but it was my life and have nothing else to draw from…yet. Except Sedona. Hope I did you proud.
ah, dont apologize for that…my poetry is pretty much my life as well…you have quite the story and journey as well maggie…
I think we all have themes that recur. Mine hover around nature and death. It’s who we are. Sedona…I knew it back in the early 60’s when I studied nursing in Phoenix. There was nothing there back then, only nature. And energy.
List poetry is very cool although I apologize for writing such a dreary piece…I know much of my work is dark but this goes beyond the pale (no pun intended) even for me…oh sigh…
http://leapingelephantenterprizes.blogspot.ca/2013/07/pages-of-sorrow_25.html
I so understand that. Mine goes there, too. Off to read, now.
omph….powerful piece….
caught up…will be in and out for a bit…there is a christmas in july party at the ice cream shoppe…got my christmas tie on over my t-shirt so i can get some free ice cream….
Get a photo of that, Brian!
ha. i am stuffed now…ready to work it off reading some poetry…smiles.
Thanks for the prompt and Congratulations on the book Victoria. This is a subject matter that effects so many people.
Thank you “mum.”
You are most welcome, my mum is 84 and showing signs, particularly the repeated questions. Most days are still lucid – but it is approaching.
Thanks for hosting, Victoria, and for the interesting information on “listing.” Sharing a poem I wrote a couple of weeks ago, before this prompt, but figured it fit the bill, as there is a series of listings of sorts in each of the stanzas. I think sometimes we write using “lists” without even purposely planning or thinking about it!
I agree, Ginny. I think we use a lot of devices we’re unaware of in a somewhat instinctive way. Glad to have you in this evening.
I’m submitting a really old one for this prompt. It’s a list of metaphors, actually, but with a single focus.
Busiest day of week ahead; will have to come back later and read everyone else’s.
hope that all goes well with your busy day rosemary….
I found my old one in a folder called “Poetry Unpublishable” It is good to revisit old ones, and to edit to make it better. We learn a lot along the way, don’t we?
I enjoy your thorough prompts, Victoria. Especially this one. I hope to write a list poem and read many before the day is out.
Yeah–I always look forward to your poems, Jane.
ah look forward to what you bring jane…
Thank you for your understanding,both through working with those with memory issues and from having a parent with similar problems. My own father began showing a bit of issue last year and in the Spring we had a scare where he went missing for 24hrs. He no longer drives now but due to my sister’s care for him he is doing quite well and nearing his 90th birthday. It’s amazing how well someone will do when given the care and love they need.
That must have been so scary for you, Renee. I hope things go well and don’t forget to remind your sister to take care of herself. That could/should be another article. I’ve seen it all-too-often when the caregiver goes before the patient (usually in the spouse-to-spouse situation). My mom was caregiver for my dad who had Parkinsonism and had a massive heart attack in the middle of it. That’s when her cognition began to decline. Anyway, it’s so hard to deal with.
Thank you for your concern. My sister, ultimately, got someone to come in three days a week and she takes dad places and keeps him busy. He does much better when he has company. To dad, she is a housekeeper but is also a liscensed social worker. Dad likes her quite well and likes getting out and about now he no longer drives. Yes, it was a bit much to know he was missing and we had no idea where he was. We are just happy it turned out well. Take care.
Have a good rest of the day or beginning of a new one everyone. I have an early morning tee time, but will be back to finish reading as soon as I can…Pacific time, so who knows what it will be where you are. I’ve enjoyed those I’ve read so far (up to 25). Hope more will be waiting tomorrow.
swing well victoria…great job tonight….
Swing well? In my dreams.
got through 25 as well…going to bid you good night poets…i will be back in the morning to see what the overnights bring…have at it…
smiles.
Great idea!! I’ll be up for this 🙂
cool….look for you in the morning…smiles.
Me too…only it’s already afternoon…
nice…read through the overnites and off to work now… who knows…after that prompt i may turn into a list person…smiles
Fun essay and prompt, Victoria. I’m at Philadelphia Yearly Meeting–and, having had a great day after a sleepless night–list what it feels like to wait for clarity on a leading. It’s funny to me that in preparing for this meeting, I –for the first time EVER–completed every item on a too-long check list.
That feels so good.
good morning poets…playing catch up with my coffee…smiles.
This was fun, Victoria. My boys have been asking for a poem about them so a great idea to use this as an interactive prompt. And Pied Beauty is one of my all-time favorites. Interesting how mundane leads to divine. God is in the details, though, right?
so cool you obliged your boys with some poetry…smiles…
So glad your boys will get into the game.
Victoria, I love the prompt and the poems you picked to illustrate list poetry. I don’t have time to write a new one today, but I knew I’d written some list poetry before so I found one I especially like and linked to that. I hope to get back to read some more. Peace, Linda
Glad you’re here, Linda.
Victoria, thank you so much for this prompt. I love Hopkins, but you have given me a new appreciation for that poem. And I’ve read so little of Herrick, it’s wonderful to have him appear here, too. Thank you.
Herrick has written some interesting things. I only discovered him recently.
Yay! THanks for the push– I needed that. Got one up 🙂 ~peace and happy weekend, Jason
Always ready to oblige, Jason. Glad you got here.
Back in and it’s already afternoon. Had a miserable, but fun morning of golf with the girls. Looking forward to seeing what’s arrived overnight.
how did you do vic?
Horrible…my usual SOP, but we had fun. I will never be a good golfer but it gives me exercise, fresh air, friendship, and the beautiful landscape of Northern Nevada. Lots of cotton tails on the course and I didn’t kill any of them, so that’s a good thing! :0)
haha…its a good day when your golf ball does not take out any rabbits…lol…its like that for me except its usually cars…smiles.
Kate, as before, I can’t comment on Discus, so here’s mine: This is so full of symbology, much like the book of Revelation. It deserves a close read. I liked the inclusion of the tsunami and Ivan…and the hawk most.
Hi Victoria. The last 4 months have been a wonderful ride for me. Quite a few people have suggested I am insane, but every single word of that mother of all blog posts that Brian identifies are carefully laid out with research and meticulous care. I would love to discuss any detail with anyone. My doors are always open on my Facebook blog messaging system. I don’t understand the symbolism until after it happens. It has been complete flow for me from waking hours to sleeping hours..
Fortunately, my wife takes care of all my needs even telling me where the start button is for the gas station pump. Allowing me to live completely in a Universe of Imagination. If I was not truly a scientist at heart I would probably be running down the street naked yelling the prophet is here. It seems all a divine comedy to me…very pleasurable, I can’t imagine ever feeling fear again. Love Ya truly another friend.
There was no question in my mind that the participants here would be at 47 when I came back to respond to see your comment here. That says the whole of this experience for me. Life is all a spiral of One meaning that will take one into eternity. when one finds a small glimpse of the full beauty of it. It is beyond all words for Love.
There is no way I could of done this if anyone truly reached out to be my friend on this journey in the small talk way. The fact that Brian was one of 47 that responded and gave me simple information to respond in an elegant symbolic way continues a beautiful story that I am humbled to hold a key for. One digit at a time tapping into infinity. That is truly how it feels.
Sorry to be so late to the party. Life is still challenging as every day has things that pulls me away from the computer. I think this effort may fit the definition – I will appreciate any comments. Again forgive the tardiness of the hour.
smiles…i have been out all afternoon so just coming back on…yours got me thinking gay….
It was worth waiting for, Gay. And I’m in late today, so that’s okay. We’re here..
Caught up for now. Will check back this evening. Have a good night those of you getting ready for sleep.
hi Victoria and everyone,
sorry i’m so late but Fridays are kinda’ tough. being terrible with prompts, i have a poem i wrote i April during National Poetry Month that might fit the criteria. it was only the 4th i ever wrote, so it was sure interesting to read it again. would that be ok with everyone?
toss it in….
Absolutely. Looking forward to reading it.
list poetries flavoured my morn cuppa! Quite sometime since I did this, up in the IST saturday morning. 🙂
Wow, it’s still just 8:30 PM here.
I am very late for the party but I am glad to be able to join. 🙂 This was a fun prompt although it was hard to focus on a topic.
You’re not late as long as the link is still open, Imelda.
Hi just testing the parameters of this machine:)
Poetics will open at 3 pm with the next prompt…
Thanks for the heads up Brian!
Good morning! Sorry I am too tardy to post to this wonderful prompt, Victoria . But wanted you to know how much i enjoyed it – love lists! I am a list maker for everything and have always enjoyed ‘lists’ in poetry. Your examples are two of my favorites. I did write one and have just now gotten it posted and enjoyed eveyones contributions – thanks again – K
Glad you made it.. .I’m off to read yours and any others that have shown up. Poetics just an hour and a half from now.