Hi all! Wish you a very happy new year – I hope this year you find new success in your creative journey. I had a difficult time recently, having gone through an accident and the recovery – but things are shaping up slowly, so I look forward with a lot of hope. So wish you the same and on that note, let me open the bar.
I have had this idea for a few months now, but there is an interesting story behind this. Let me share that first. These days I am working from a city, where I have never lived before – Hyderabad. Few days back, I went to see the old fort – which used to be the main city couple of hundred years back (the fort is at least a 500 years old). Apart from usual features like big boundary wall, army barrack, ammunition, courtyard, palace – Golkonda fort has some interesting acoustic engineering built within the structure, for example, if you just enter the gate, stand in a particular spot and clap – the sound will be heard to all guards, but others, standing feet apart won’t know – this was sort of alert mechanism in old days. What caught my interest was the fact that the king’s hall was designed in such a way, so that all secret discussion of the subjects gathered in the hall could be heard and monitored. Though the fort is merely a shadow of its former self among ruins – this alert mechanism still works, you lean against a wall and you can clearly hear what people in the other corner are talking about.
While it is not such a great thing to have someone eavesdrop to our secrets, I thought it must be interesting to handle the subject and started reading through poems on secrecy to see how the subject has been handled so far. I came across this beautiful piece and interestingly the author is not known – so this one truly lives up to its name.
The secret (anonymous)
We have a secret, just we three,
The robin, and I, and the sweet cherry-tree;
The bird told the tree, and the tree told me,
And nobody knows it but just us three.
But of course the robin knows it best,
Because she built the—I shan’t tell the rest;
And laid the four little—something in it—
I’m afraid I shall tell it every minute.
But if the tree and the robin don’t peep,
I’ll try my best the secret to keep;
Though I know when the little birds fly about
Then the whole secret will be out.
So what about poetics tonight? I want you to write about your secrets – well, of course, without actually revealing them. I am sure you will find this fun and creatively challenging.
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claudia said:
nice… there’s a whisper arch at the basel cathedral as well… i tried it and surprisingly it works pretty well… ha… here’s to a night of secrets in the pub… cheers
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
What a nice thing.. I have only read about those whisper arches.. but there’s a point in our office where you think no-one can hear you, but in reality everyone can 😉
claudia said:
hahah…oh my…that is dangerous
brian miller said:
i have not heard of a whisper arch…i need to google that…
Abhra said:
He he – yes, it is surprisingly fun…..I thought of posting a picture as well, but then thought it would be better to let people look up if they were interested…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I’m lousy at keeping secrets.. so I really had to think about how they affect me.. but it was fun to write to the prompt of secrets.
claudia said:
so no skeletons in your wardrobe?
smiles
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I think they are quite benign.. maybe small one made of plush.
kelly said:
I love this idea of about writing secrets without really telling them… i think we all have a few… Looking forward to seeing what everyone else has come up with for this.
Hope you are all mended, Abhra! And happy Poetics to all…
claudia said:
happy poetics kelly – and good to see you in the pub
happy new year as well
kelly said:
thanks claudia, I am glad to have some time for poetry! Happy New Year to you!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hi Kelly.. I really liked yours.. a whole narrative without telling it, and with just a few words..
kelly said:
Thanks so much Bjorn! It was a challenge to know when to stop on this one…
Abhra said:
Happy poetics Kelly – am glad you like the idea.
katiemiafrederick said:
Hope you don’t mind if I used a poem I recently wrote; however, i think it will work for this, and will be back to comment after dance walking the shopping routes with my wife.
Sorry, it’s not too word intensive but very photo intensive if one can stand the beach..;)
claudia said:
hahah..it took me quite a bit to get to the bottom of the post…smiles
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Thank you for the reminder — I’ll rush there now.. Probably it would be impossible to do on a mobile..
brian miller said:
ha. I cleared the pipes a bit on mine…
I had another written as well…I might keep that to myself for now…
don’t want to let all the secrets get out…
hope you are feeling better when you read this abhra…
Abhra said:
Hi Brian, thanks – actually I have not healed completely from my accident and my doctors say that head injuries take longer time to heal – so these days even little cold is affecting me worse than I’d have ever thought. However, I am fighting back….
Linda Kruschke said:
Awesome prompt! I wish I had time to write something new today, but it just so happens that the poem I wrote on Sunday involves a secret that needed to be told, that I feared, but survived, telling. Peace, Linda
claudia said:
nice.. thanks for sharing it with us linda
Abhra said:
Thank you Linda…
Glenn Buttkus said:
My goodness, Abhra, the secrets are spilling over hot & heavy out on the trail; hell of a cool prompt, sir. Somehow, in my verbose fashion, I tipped the reader off to my secret early on, but like when the reader is aware of who the killer is, but the characters do not, it creates a special tension; I hope.
Abhra said:
Smiles, thank Glenn – yes and I always like your treatment. I wasn’t up very late last night – will go and read today…
charliezero1.wordpress.com said:
This Blog prompt sounds fun.
However, I have a big secret to tell you all poets.
I can’t tell you now, but if you read my new post based on this prompt,
maybe my secrets will be exposed to you or not?
🙂
claudia said:
my lips are sealed – ha
Abhra said:
I will head over there now, i am running one day late because of the time difference mainly…
claudia said:
bedtime for me… will be back in the morning (which is no secret)
smiles
Shaista said:
Having just returned from India it was so lovely to read about the Hyderabadi palace – thank you!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Hope you are feeling better.
gailatthefarm said:
Gave it a shot. Thanks for the challenge.
brian miller said:
and a cute shot at that….
gailatthefarm said:
Thanks
claudia said:
good morning…caught up with those that read… and off to work… have a great day or night depending on where you are..smiles
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Good morning Claudia.. Did some catchup too,
Prajakta said:
I hope I can get something done given the massive work – the same work which is hell bent on transferring me to Hyderabad! Reading your words about Hyderabad made me think, maybe it is a sign? I hope not!
Looking forward to read everyone’s entries – perfection for a nosey person like me.
Abhra said:
Thank you, I look forward to read your piece if you can make it.
brian miller said:
good morning….woke to school closed and sleet and snow on the ground….catching up with the overnights….
brian miller said:
wow…so few readers in the second half of the link in….
claudia said:
back and catching up as well now… hope you’re all having a good day…
Abhra said:
Yes, me too Claudia –
ManicDdaily said:
A very charming prompt, Abhra. I am working pretty intensively mid-week these days, so don’t know if I can come up with something. I was in Hyderabad many many years before. An interesting city. Thanks for your description of the fort. K.
Abhra said:
Thank you so much Karin – you have been here before? Good to hear that – I came to this city for a few weeks and work pulled me back here. Look forward to your piece.
ManicDdaily said:
Abhra–I will be late for the prompt but will try to do something. I was in Hyderabad in the early 80s for a few days by myself. I had gone as a tourist when I was visiting various temples in South India–so I’d gone to Tirumala and Tirupati–it’s pretty near there, right? After spending time in Madras/Chennai and Mahalibapuram–which I am certainly spelling wrong! It was all incredibly interesting. A little hard to be by myself, but I had a very interesting time. Thanks. k.
Imelda said:
Finally, I got to join in the fun again. 🙂 Thanks for the prompt, Ahbra.
ManicDdaily said:
Hey Brian, Claudia, Abhra–I have very belatedly done my poem for this prompt. Thanks Abhra–I enjoyed the prompt. Don’t worry about going to it! It is a super odd poem and very late! But here’s the link if interested!
https://manicddaily.wordpress.com/2015/01/17/no-person-an-island/
brian miller said:
i found you k.
smiles.
b