Have you ever watched a movie, been to a play or read a novel involving complex relationships between diverse people and marveled that one writer could so convincingly bring such different characters to life? What kinds of skills—or is it magic?—allows a man to write the part of a little girl? An agnostic the part of an evangelical minister? A total klutz the part of an accomplished athlete? A single woman in her prime enjoying all of the benefits of robust health the part of an infirm grandmother? It takes great skills of observation, you will no doubt say, as well as close attention to personal experience. The writer may vividly recall her grandmother’s last years of illness, for example. Yes, but how to account for that uncanny sensation of getting inside another person’s skin, of seeing the world through their eyes? If the piece is well written and performed, you, the reader, the viewer, experience that uncanny sensation. You feel as though you are seeing the world through the eyes of a person who may be very unlike yourself.
Let us hesitate for a moment outside comforting platitudes such as ‘we are in essence one humanity’ and admit the existence of The Other. The Other is that person you do not automatically see when you look in the mirror. You have to try a little harder. The Other is younger or older, richer or poorer, the opposite sex, speaks a different language, worships a different god. The Other may even be the one who hates you. It is not necessary, in the interests of a poetry prompt, to go so far as to imagine one who hates you, but it’s helpful to recognize its possibility in order to understand the reality of he or she who is other than you.
Imagine that person who is other than you, and think about how you might construct a dramatic monologue in poetry. Think about the actor’s work. Sean Penn is not a murderer but he portrayed one convincingly in Dead Man Walking. What did he do, what could he do, but be himself as that person? Imagine that person (not a creature of fantasy or a beast, but a person) who is different than you. Draw on your skills as an observer, use your experience, your empathy, do some research if you want to. Then write a poem from their point of view by being yourself as that person.
Such poems have been called persona poems. Robert Browning introduced the persona poem to the Victorian world with works such as My Last Duchess. The twentieth century brought a flourishing of the technique by Rainer Maria Rilke and many others. The Portuguese poet Fernando Pessoa created bodies of poems by over one hundred different personas, complete with bios, which he called heteronyms. Although not all dramatic monologues, the poems are each written as one of the heteronyms, and thus from the point of view, in terms of style at least, of a person other than Pessoa himself. Here is one of my favorite persona poems:
The Song of the Tortured Girl
By John Berryman
After a little I could not have told—
But no one asked me this—why I was there.
I asked. The ceiling of that place was high
And there were sudden noises, which I made.
I must have stayed there a long time today:
My cup of soup was gone when they brought me back.
Often ‘Nothing worse now can come to us’
I thought, the winter the young men stayed away,
My uncle died, and mother broke her crutch.
And then the strange room where the brightest light
Does not shine on the strange men: shines on me.
I feel them stretch my youth and throw a switch.
Through leafless branches the sweet wind blows
Making a mild sound, softer than a moan;
High in a pass once where we put our tent,
Minutes I lay awake to hear my joy.
—I no longer remember what they want.—
Minutes I lay awake to hear my joy.
For those who would like more information, I recommend this article at poets.org. For those who are ready to get started:
Click the Mr. Linky box below, then add your name and paste the url of your one poem and submit.
Visit others who have taken the challenge, and have fun!
this is just such an awesome prompt mark….really looking forward to seeing in which roles people slip and how they see the world with someone else’s eyes… this is going to be a magical night..
Cool prompt, Mark. Darn it, I posted a persona poem, “Act of Contrition,” Tuesday for Open Link Night. But stepping inside another’s skin is part of the joy of writing.
I’m on it!! Thanks. — J
Dear Mark–this is a great prompt. I really love all the poems you mentioned that I know–the Browning and Rilke. (This morning I also re-read Andrea del Sarto by Browning which I like better I think than My Last Duchess, in that you feel very sorry for Sarto.) I will look at the other ones, and I’d suggest some poems by Sharon Olds. (I think she did some from some pictures in an early book which follow this idea and are wonderful.) I will try to look for them–they may not be in a different voice.
All that said! I surrendered to the silly! Something about all the news made it hard for me to focus on the serious. The world is just so sombre, even with the idea of the good lurking. (We knew one man who went down in Lockerbie, and were slightly acquainted with a woman who lost two children. Still, it’s a bit hard to absorb everything.) And of course, I’m very happy about the Iraq news. Still, I just couldn’t bear to focus on the dark. So what I did is kind of dumb! (In all senses!) Ha.
Thanks. I look forward to what others do. K.
Fabulous prompt, Mark. I’m stuck in a department store check out line, wondering what to write… I will try to be back with something after they empty my wallet. 🙂
Beth
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I put this poem up for Brian, please read annotations to see why.
I decided to take the tongue in cheek route with this one. Very fun prompt. Thanks!
Just wanted to let you know that I always try to comment on your site, but they often get sent back to me in email form. Please know that I rather enjoy your pieces just as I did today. Lots of wonderful rhythm and flow with many excellent lines.
lots of fun man….on a fairly regular basis i jump into someone elses skin to get their perspective and write from it…def a fun challenge….thanks for the inspiration man…and look forward to reading everyone!
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FANTASTIC prompt, Mark. I think of the shaman song here, where the singer becomes the world, its wind, its water, its familiars, its personae. And the mask that hung on a pole in the ritual drama of Dionysos, indicated that Mystery was staring out of the eye-holes of the personal. Very rich with possibility … looking forward to reading what pours forth.
As someone who writes not one but two “character” blogs, I think I’m clear on the concept! Now to write something fresh for this…
Mark, wonderful poetics. I’m submitting a poem that’s been around because I’m having “challenges” with my laptop right now. The whole idea of writing from a contradictory POV is such a good exercise in creativity and, in my opinion, empathy. I wrote my 2nd novel from a male POV–quite fun.
Re: Cindy Sherman–one of the most brilliant images I’ve seen of her was a computer-generated weaving created by Chuck Close. I’ll try to find a link to it. It’s worth a view.
I think I know the Close image you’re talking about, but if you can give us a link – thanks!
I think I do this a lot. I’ll try to come up with something, too. It is a brilliant idea for poetics. What a great group of poets we have here at the pub. Thank you so much for this special one, Mark!
I think this is one of the reasons I write…it allows me to escape MYSELF, and curl up in the back corner of someone else and their mind for awhile. This is awesome, Mark…but for something new will take some time…and leave it to me to be late to the party again! See y’all soon!
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Yes, like Sheila is the queen of the concrete/visual poems I think Fireblossom is the queen of the persona poem. I’d tell you more about my Perfect Secrecy poem except well, it’s secret :). I’m ill so I’ll be slow in making the rounds but I couldn’t pass up such an engaging prompt. Thanks Mark!
Why thank you, Anna!
aw, Anna, thank you. I agree about Fireblossom being the queen of personas. Just ran across her character blogs recently and was a bit confused (I thought she was suffering from a serious psych condition) until I realized what they were – lol.
Sounds like you been sick all week, Anna. Hope you feel better soon.
Thanks Sheila, me too :).
Really an excellent prompt, Mark, and some excellent examples. Just re-read My Last Duchess the other day, and it creeped me out. It’s hard for me to even conceive of being realistic in someone else’s skin. I did try my best with this, but not sure I escaped from my own true self much. But maybe that isn’t the point.
I really think the best artists never stop being themselves. They have a way of distancing from themselves, so they can speak as the other. It’s like your body is your instrument, but you’re playing someone else’s tune.
body is an instrument playing someone else’s tune – wow, I like that – you should tradmark that quote 😉
I have submitted a poem from poetic causes I wrote for alzheimers month written from a husband come carers point of view . I love writing from another persons perspective find it weird when people think it is what I have experienced,
Mark- This was very challenging… I really appreciate that. Thanks for all you do (and everyone else at dVerse.
Thanks Mark. I wrote one based on your prompt. I must admit, it took me out of my quiet mode as work and real life got the best of me. Happy to link up today ~
I’m having a great time seeing what everyone came up with. But I want to read every poem carefully, so it will take me some time to get to everyone.
alright peeps, stepping out of the pub for a bit…have a date tonight and need to get my mohawk sky ward bound….check in before bed…
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Just linked up, but I may have to come back to make the rounds. Helping my mother-in-law move today, but I was able to hide away to play for a bit. Thanks Mark for another excellent prompt 🙂
Well…one didn’t like my other 😦 Think I just lost me a twitter follower! Group hug! I am not The OTHER!!! 😉
haha…just one…that is a bad day tash….write it! let the chips fall…smiles.
Oh, we still support you!!!
Mark, nice topic tonight. I have a lot of pieces where I try to get into “character” I find it extremely helpful when I try to develop characters for my screenplays. Anyway, I’ve included one such piece I wrote a while ago…it’s pretty disturbing though, just a warning. Again, thanks for hosting
Hello Mark, thank you for a very interesting prompt. Looking forward to read the Other voices.
Though I just couldn’t come up with a POV from another is so short of time, I did finished this from the omniscient perspective…still, that’s not a Persona Poem, I know! I’m sorry. Please forgive; but I did want to produce something, so this is it.
http://wp.me/p102ON-6x
I linked although I am not sure it is really a persona poem although it is written from a viewpoint of someone that I am nothing like.
Hail, Poets!
http://pullofthesun.wordpress.com/2011/10/16/on-the-verge-of-holy-island/
Shawn
Or persona poem:
http://pullofthesun.wordpress.com/2011/09/16/plastic-bag-windows/
I’m thinking last week’s taboo topic may have unfettered us. Bold stuff this week!
LOL! that makes me happy 🙂 I noticed this Tuesday night with the OpenLinkNight poems. I think we’ve all just become a bit more comfortable with one another, wouldn’t you say? – which I consider a good thing.
Absolutely inspiring prompt, Mark. I just rained home from Seattle, so, even if its too late to link up, hope to write something tomorrow. Thank you for the wonderful read…always nice to recall Pessoa ~
Pessoa blows my mind.
How fun was this? However, my persona used my voice to record her poem – UGH! It was like invasion of the body snatchers – she possessed me – and yet, I still thought it was super fun. Weird.
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Off to watch the rugby now, but will be back to see all the lovely entries later this afternoon. Thank you for always having such great prompts and for giving us the opportunity to share!
Nice prompt, I stayed up late to write a poem for this. Thank you for a wonderful prompt and no, I have never killed anyone.
Nice prompt, enjoyed writing a poem as a condemed killer. I wrote it under my pen name Duane F.
I think we often think of poetry as a vehicle for our own personal expression, our projections and our “self”, However,often when a poem becomes too introverted it severs its emotional appeal to the reader. It becomes simply the extension of an internal dialogue intstead of an integral part of a converstaion.
I love the way Sherman shows how many personalities can exsist within one individual. Often the qualities we most dislike in another are the qualities we most dislike (and are afraid of) in ourselves.
On the first point, yes, I agree, self expression is pointless if it’s not about connecting with the world.
On your second point: yes, it’s a perturbing fact of life. Even after years of vigilant self-watching, it can come back and bite. I know I’m always growing and healing.
Yes again, Cindy Sherman is amazing. I remember the first time I encountered her work and she still fascinates me. She also manages to continue being controversial, which is quite an accomplishment.
🙂 yes, I am always working through that second point!
Writing in a different voice is such a wonderful practise!
I haven’t found a chance to have a go at the prompt yet, but II shall to try to find some time later in the week…sans wriggly baby on knee 🙂
Thanks for the inspiration!
a sad poem with i hope a happy ending
ted
Nice to see a prompt that gets us to see beyond the narrow range of forms and focus that we think are poetry. Mine is a affectionate monologue of a certain type of northern English working class woman that also touches on the bleakness of those lives
It is hard to enter into another’s persona. I have written a few poems like that, and the one I have included in Mister Linky is one that I think comes off. It is not new – dating back to the beginning of this year.
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good morning everyone! grabbed some coffee and ready to read some poetry….happy sunday!
Hi Mark, Thanks for sharing such an interesting concept to write about!
Coming in on this a bit late again–tough to work Fridays and Saturdays and then play “catch up” on Sundays! Posted something I’d been working on for a while. Not exactly in a poetry format, sort of reads like lyrics, I think. But this is how the stream of thought came to me, so this is how I wrote it. Hope it fits the bill!
This post inspired a dark poetic study of courage and hope. It is disturbing, but at the same time points to the strength of the human spirit in the face of great adversity.
Thanks to everyone who responded to the challenge. There have been many delights and I’m still reading….
I’ll be back to read tomorrow!
good afternoon everyone…been at the pumpkin patch most of the day…playing catch up now…gorgeous here…hope you are having a lovely day!
Does the widget to link always expire after two days? I think the same happened last week.
C’est la vie
http://pspacer11.wordpress.com/2011/10/24/who-am-i/
I hate having missed the last few prompts. We travelled out of state to visit family for a week and a half, and my mom doesn’t have Internet service. I just posted my “shaped” poem, but it’s too late to link up to anything I missed.
Thanks to all the poets who shared concern and caring expressions on the loss of my brother. You really lifted me up, and I appreciate you all. : )
Sorry. Here’s the link:
http://iamthat-shawna.blogspot.com/2011/10/abcs-and-poetry.html