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Living in the Present Moment, Mindfulness Meditation, Poetic Inspiration, poetry prompt, Sensory Details, Victoria C. Slotto
I am not a Buddhist, per se. Aspects of Buddhism, however, have inspired me for many years, in particular, mindfulness meditation—a practice I find both enriching and, for my crazy, active brain, challenging. The moments when I feel most whole as those moments when I’m most aware of what’s happening in the present moment.
This is where I am in the now:
Sounds: click HERE
A mockingbird outside my window, the soft churning of the washing machine, low voices from the ladies tee outside our place, the swish of a driver, the clunk of the ball strike, then the release of the brake and the whirr of a golf cart making its way to the green. The flow of breath, in and out—mine and my Jack Russell, curled in sleep between the legs of my office chair.
Sights: the Santa Rosa Mountains, barely dusted with snow and palm trees mirrored in my computer screen, the glare of the sun trying to conquer the layer of haze covering the valley.
Scents: the heady smell of the lime tree blossoms outside the window, the one the mockingbird inhabits.
Taste: cold pure water sipped through a straw flushing away the lingering mint of mouthwash.
Touch: the warmth of my laptop beneath my hands, the hard plastic of the keyboard, the cushioned support of my office chair and the subtle irritation of the label in the back of my blouse.
All of these perceptions came about because I made a deliberate attempt to notice them in the now.
As I read the poems created for Saturday’s dVerse Poetics prompt, inspired by the photography/poetry of James Rainsford, this poem by Louise Hastings jumped out at me as a perfect example of being in the moment. Louise brings to life the details of the photo, and in the process creates a distinct mood without overtly saying, “I really want to get beyond the depression that comes from winter and I’m counting on the change of seasons to help me. Check it out:
One Summer (in England)
A sudden rainbow across heavy skies
brings rare sunshine and fleeting light on water.
I throw off the winter cold and bare pale skin
to the sun, paint myself anew with colours
fresh and bright. The days go by
like a smile on an empty face
and I ripen in the sunshine
beneath an oozing, soft green light,
tangling serotonin in my hair,
lemon-blossom from the meadow at my feet.
But a shadow drags behind me
whenever the weather breaks.
Steady rain lashes at the window,
splashes city parks and dead end streets,
trickling down my neck and collecting at my wrists.
As the darkness spreads there’s not much of me left.
I run towards the fragile, summer sun.
©2012 Louise Hastings, Used with Permission
Louise’s fine observations become the metaphors and similes that speak to mood. As readers, we are able to enter that moment with her.
When we create, when we write poetry, even if we draw upon the memories of the past or leap forward into the future, the words we commit to paper or hard drive are born in the present moment. In order to create, we need to carve out a place and time of silence. We need to slow down and notice details, to block out distraction, and open up to inspiration. Silence, awareness, focus—these are the womb in which poetry takes shape.
For today’s prompt, Let’s take the challenge to be totally alive in the present and write to our perceptions. Perhaps we’ll want to venture out into nature, or close the door to our rooms. If there’s time, maybe we’ll go to a coffee house, museum, thrift shop, shopping mall, care facility… There are so many poems out there waiting to be noticed. Let’s allow our muses to steal the show by being open, completely present in the now.
To participate:
- Go someplace where you can take in the present moment. You may even want to grab a camera so you can share your experience visually.
- Write your poem and post it on your blog or website.
- Access Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post and add your name and the direct URL of your poem.
- Now, come on into the pub and visit other poems. Take a moment to comment on their work, especially if they’ve done the same for you.
This is Victoria C. Slotto, happy, as always, to be tending bar. I will be spending a few days with my mother, but when I return, I look forward to reading your poems.
Dear Victoria,
You have caught me on probably the only day for years that flowers don’t do it for me and tranquillity is outside my grasp.
I hope you don’t think my post is too far from the requirements.
But it certainly is the NOW. Although not a happy one.
Maybe I can have a go at precisely your intention in a few days when I feel human again 🙂
Nevertheless, thank you for the inspiration over the past two weeks (isit really only that short? It feels like I’ve been playing along for years.
Hannah…I wrote that post a few days ago. I just spent a few hours in So. California traffic, so, trust me, my “today” is quite like yours, so your post is perfect. :0)
This prompt came along at the perfect time. I was in Walgreens earlier and this occured. Thanks, Victoria!
Great take on the prompt, Laurie.
Thank you so much, Victoria for featuring my poem. I learned mindfulness meditation about a year ago, as a way of calming my mind and anxiety. The practice has been so beneficial to me and my writing, too…it taught me about accepting ALL my emotions, not just the good ones…and knowing that feeling them was OK…being in the NOW is what’s important…You’ve inspired my muse to write another poem… 🙂
It is exquisite. Thank you so much for sharing your work.
Thank YOU, Louise!
I so hope I did this exercise correctly. I love it when you experience a “poetic moment’ … and my evening of the other night truly was. I even had tears in my eyes as I was photographing my two youngest children… 🙂
Perfect moment, Margaret!
I love this prompt, Victoria. Wrote a little something for you, and tried to puta picture of the old dog in the post, but for some reason couldn’t get it to load. Maybe I can add it in a few minutes. Glad to join in again!
I love this prompt! This would be a good exercise everyday.
I love your post and prompt. I also find my center in meditative moments, or at least in controlled breathing. I find principles of Buddhism fascinating, particularly the fact that the purpose of meditation is actually to keep one present and not to disappear from the moment.
These sections of Louise’s poem speak to me:
“and I ripen in the sunshine
beneath an oozing, soft green light,
tangling serotonin in my hair”
“trickling down my neck and collecting at my wrists.
As the darkness spreads there’s not much of me left.
I run towards the fragile, summer sun.”
I would so delight in going to a coffee shop to write my poem. But perhaps venturing out into nature will be more feasible.
Whoops…forgot to say hello! Still trying to find my moment!
Victoria, Thanks for the awesome prompt! On Thursdays I always do a Thankful Thursday poem, but today I was at a loss as to what to write. You gave me the perfect thing to be thankful for – the present moment. 🙂 Now it’s off to read some poetry. Peace, Linda
Wow, what a great prompt…takes me right back to my favorite books on writing, Wild Mind and Writing Down the Bones, both by Natalie Goldberg. 🙂 Sometimes I struggle with actually getting myself “in the moment” but will certainly give it my shot, hope to be back later tonight!
I do love these moments… 🙂
Welcome everyone. I’m not usually in the pub on Thursdays, but staff is thin on the ground today. We’re all glad to see you come through the door to respond to Victoria’s excellent prompt, and we’ll try to get out on the reading and commenting rounds as soon as we can. Thanks, Louise, for sharing your beautiful poem with us–a perfect example of experiencing the moment.
Hello Victoria, your prompts stimulate and motivate!
I absolutely wrote to the prompt: this was my day today – easy, pleasant, perfect, weather, great friends. Hope you enjoy AND NOW…Thanks Victoria for a super article and great prompt for my day or these words would never have bloomed. G.
great prompt & write up victoria, thank you 😉
i’ll be out of pocket w/dr appts til later friday, but i’ll see if i can catch up then
take care, thanks ya’ll
Back with my poem. Worked at it for a while, and then had my moment while watching the news…
I love your quote, “Silence, awareness, focus—these are the womb in which poetry takes shape.” I added it to my posting with your name and linked to here, hope that is good with you! 🙂
What a valuable practice of living in the now no matter what religion one is immersed in.
I truly enjoyed crafting after having been here with you. Thank you, Victoria!
Smiles to everyone, I look forward to your “now,” poems!
Excellent prompt. Couldn’t fail to be inspired. Any failure would have occurred subsequently.
Hi Victoria–wonderful prompt. I am afraid I’ve handled it in kind of an unBuddhist way! Going the silly route. Agree with David–any failure in my post due to my own framework. Hope you are well. K.
Is blogger dead? I cannot seem to comment on any blogger sights… 😦
Hi Victoria,
Your prompt reminded me of an experience I had a couple of weeks ago which I had meant to write about and somehow never quite got round to. Then yesterday I took a walk in my town and saw lots of the signs of spring, so today I took a camera with me (I must learn to always have my camera with me, but that’s another story). As I was walking I heard an unmistakable sound of the approach of summer, so I combined all these into a “perfect” memory of something that never quite existed.
Thank you everyone for the kind and inspiring comments. Since I’m time-limited (visiting my mom who’s not doing too well–she IS 91) instead of commenting on the comments, I’ll focus on visiting your blogs. What I’ve read so far is wonderful! And now, back to it! Happy, poetic weekend, everyone.
Love your poems they are so inspirational. Ive written mine a long time ago and just started blogging a few weeks back. I must admit I felt like something was missing in my live and Ive started writting again and it makes me feel pretty good. Writting poems isnt a choice its a lifestyle, a way of expressing oneself when no one understand how you feel or why you feel it. Im so glad their are so many great poets out there and you are one of them.
So glad to welcome you to our community, slyviolet!
I’ve been working at meditation lately. I’m not zen, just zennish. Good prompt!
This drifted in after meditation. Thanks for the prompt.
(Pokes he into the pub)
Hey everyone…just getting home from NYC and a whirlwind couple days with Claudia, Chazinator, Blue Flute and ManicD…and while it was incredible and I got a ton of inspiration….i need to sleep before i put it to use…smiles…
Thanks for keeping it rocking and rolling…great prompt victoria…sorry i missed it…and will catch up with everyone after a little shut eye…
smiles.
I missed the boat again! I swear that Linky blinks and goes out! I did try, honest! http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/
Suggestion to all who “miss the boat,” as Viv did…when it’s happened to me, I’ve posted it in Open Link Night. Thanks again for wonderful moments.