Welcome to Poetics! Fresh off spending a few days in New York with Claudia, Chazinator, Blue Flute and ManicDDaily, I am home once more in Lynchburg and excited to write some poetry. We have quite the treat today as well, as I asked Stu McPherson, a regular at the pub with his incredible verse, to inspire us…
Hi there. My name is Stu McPherson and I’m proud to be tending the bar at dVerse #Poetics.
Today I’m asking you all to dig deep and to explore the more uncomfortable side of the human condition- Nightmares. If poetry can be considered a conscious process through which we make sense of the world, then the world of dreams and indeed nightmares is our subconscious trying to make sense of many different emotions, some of which are often not easily faced. However nightmares, as a specific ‘dream state’ can be seen as particularly appealing to the poet, as it’s within this dark world that we face our fears, our personal pains, and our pasts.
It is also worth remembering that a ‘nightmare’ does not necessarily have to happen whilst we are asleep. Indeed, it could be an emotionally powerful event that happens during our journey through everyday life. Conversely, to have ‘A Nightmare’ could be taken in an ironic sense, imbuing a life event with dark humour.
And finally, a more open take could simply be to see and write about something ‘nightmarish’- a real or fictional event that evokes strong feelings of unease or horror. From every angle- this prompt should be something that all of us can relate to, whether we are deep sleepers or not!
This crystallization of thought; albeit sometimes abstract, sometimes very tangible, is a subject matter that has pervaded the creative arts for many years. For example- take Henry Fuseli’s ‘The Nightmare’ painted in 1781 (see below)
This gothic picture (a great influence on William Blake) depicts a grim scene whereby the sleeping woman is visited by a ghoulish horses head and sat on by an Incubus. The painting has often been described as Fuseli’s metaphor for a sexual interaction, with the horse being the ‘act’ and the incubus being the ‘libido’.
From a more poetic perspective, read ‘The Childless Woman’ by Sylvia Plath (below), a horrific exploration of a woman’s infertility and its anguish caused. See the way that Plath uses metaphor to conjure a nightmarish world (the rattling womb- the blood) to the point where the words literally scream from the page
The womb
Rattles its pod, the moon
Discharges itself from the tree with nowhere to go.
My landscape is a hand with no lines,
The roads bunched to a knot,
The knot myself,
Myself the rose you achieve
This body,
This ivory
Ungodly as a child’s shriek.
Spiderlike, I spin mirrors,
Loyal to my image,
Uttering nothing but blood
Taste it, dark red!
And my forest
My funeral,
And this hill and this
Gleaming with the mouths of corpses.
And so- now I’ve got you in the mood! Here’s how to participate.
- Write a poem about a ‘nightmare’ – This could be one you have experienced in your sleep, a situation that you found ‘nightmarish’, or simply something (real or fictional) that is nightmarish.
- Try and explain your poem metaphorically – get across to the reader what you think it meant, or what it could mean, and most importantly- what it means to you.
- Don’t hold back! Try and write something cathartic, something honest. Confront those feelings- I want to feel it!
- Visualize as strongly as possible- let us see into a world that until now only you have seen, experienced, and interpreted.
- Post your poem to your blog and then link into the group via the ‘Mr. Linky’ button below.
- Don’t forget to tell people where you have linked your poem and encourage them to get involved and contribute!
- Once posted please visit and read as many other poems as possible, leaving comments, and letting other writers know that their work is being read.
- Share, share and share via all of your favourite social networking sites!
brian miller said:
loving the prompt stu…sorry it was a minute late going up…the net went down…a nightmare itself…looking forward to the grit this is going to bring….
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
Thanks Brian- so pleased to be here! Ha- the internet was doing that on purpose!
brian miller said:
fixed the comments as well…you should be free flow now…
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Cheers chief! Phew! Ha ha
tashtoo said:
Plath, Blake, and nightmares in one post? Have I told you how much I love you! Fantastic prompting Stu…and color me green with envy over the poetic gathering in the Big Apple…could I tempt y’all with my country roads? Off to show a house…be back soon!
brian miller said:
would def be up for it…let me know when and where and we’ll have the party…smiles.
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
Tash- totally- although I am planning to come to the US at some point this year- maybe Boston/New York- hey- maybe Canada! didn’t stop me feeling a tad jel though I must say! I LOVED your poem for the prompt- gave me goosebumps…see ya soon!
Tony said:
Tash, I’d love to visit New Scotland. IF you want to see the old country …
tashtoo said:
I’ll turn you all into Blue Nosers! ha! No better place than Canada’s Ocean Playground…just ask Bren 🙂
Laurie Kolp said:
Stu- I really enjoyed this well-written article. I knew exactly what to write about…
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
Great Stuff Laurie- I really enjoyed your poem- made me feel like I was falling through the floor! (that is a good thing! ha ha)
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
Good afternoon! Very proud to be tending the bar today! I hope you all enjoy the prompt and it gives you plenty to get your mind going! From what I’ve read already- this is gong to be great!
Daydreamertoo said:
Grateful to Brian and Claudia who gave small hints with their own pieces as to the prompt subject. Thank YOU ..
Thank you too Stu. I’ve actually used that picture of the Incubus for my poetry in the past here and there. Spooky picture.
Great prompt. Have a good time all.
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
Hey Daydreamer- yeah I LOVE that picture- just eerie, and goes to show how nightmares have always been a focal point for art- I guess because of the strong emotions attached to them- thanks for stopping by!
Anna Montgomery said:
You’ve given us such rich material here! The Plath poem is rending. You’ve given us a prompt that will inspire the whole gamut of expression and I look forward to reading what others bring to the dimly lit, blood-stained table. Thank you!
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Thanks Anna! and thank you for your very creative take on the prompt! Loved it
Beth Winter said:
Stu, Wonderful article. Nightmares are the catalyst for much of my poetry. I hope to write something new if life gives me some time and a stress break. Wishing you a fantabulous dVerse event. I may return soon with a link.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Thanks Beth and nice one for stopping by. Seeing as you are clearly a murderer for your day job- (check the Facebook picture people) this should be right up your street! Please do come back with some words! Can’t wait to read!
Beth Winter said:
Rather than a murderer, the dominatrix made an appearance. Great prompt, Stu. Thanks so much
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Beth- this poem had better not make me blush! Ha ha- heading there right now – thank you for writing!
Edward Rinaldi (@blindedbeatpoet) said:
Such a good article and wonderful encouragement to scry the dark parts of our soul that we eye in the lens of our dreams,to slay or submit where we can fit the shards in our skin to bleed back to the light again…thank you…Edward
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
Thanks Edward- glad you liked!
hedgewitch said:
I don;t know how anyone could equal that Plath piece, but this is a great prompt, Stu. I posted a poem not too long ago on my last really horrific nightmare, so I had to go far far back in the past and do some digging for this one. I’ve often thought about using that Fuseli painting at my place, but something about it is just creepy, isn’t it? You’d need just the right poem.
Thanks so much for hosting, Stu. Can’t wait to see what turns up for this one.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Howdy hedge! Yeah- I agree- the plath poem is just like a sledgehammer – she managed to pen some of the most complex but emotionally powerful pieces ever. I also agree about the Fuseli painting- its so so eerie. I love the horses head….so strange and nightmarish….look forward to reading your poem…AS ALWAYS!
Luke Prater said:
Great article, Stu. I’ve posted an older one, but it is a description of the darkest time in my life. Nightmarish, for sure.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Thanks Luke! Can’t wait to see how you’ve laid it down… This type of cathartic poetry is definately my fave- just raw life spilled out onto the page
Luke Prater said:
one of poetry’s most important functions…
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
I absolutely agree with you…
claudia said:
hey stu….great prompt you cooked up for us…just jumping online for a few minutes before i’m heading for the airport… will try to hit some of you now and otherwise back on sunday evening EST to catch up with the rest…
brian miller said:
smiles….was not sure you would make it claudia…safe travels
claudia said:
thanks bri…i got a bit lost in the Met…smiles…great artwork…returned with some poem ideas in my pocket…but the internet is terribly slow here…so will log off now and do the commenting on sunday…
hedgewitch said:
Have a safe and peaceful trip Claudia–look forward to seeing what your pen makes of NYC.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Cheers Claudia! Safe travels back! Sounds like you had an awesome time in NYC!
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
Good prompt! Thanks for the inspiration! Here’s my Poet’s Nightmare.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Thanks for stopping by Madeleine! Looking forward to reading and commenting!
Glenn Buttkus said:
This was an old nightmare of mine that
always played out like an episode on
THE TWILIGHT ZONE.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Glenn- cant wait to read- and at your request- here’s some good old fashioned English pub snacks- peanuts, pork scratchings, bangers and mash, jellied eels, oh and fish and chips of course!
ManicDdaily said:
Hi Stu and Brian, this is a wonderful prompt. Plath piece is terrific. I was thinking of this during the day, having seen Brian’s poem, and went with a kind of a prose poem. This is what came to mind (sorry), as I hate to do something long when people have to read a lot, but hopefully, it won’t hang anyone up too much. It’s what came to mind so I went with it.
A very good prompt though and after doing this one thought of a bunch of others, so will keep this with me. Thanks, as always, for inspiration and opportunity. K.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Oh this was REALLY good- it sure didn’t seem long when I was reading it – the problem is- I want more- can you write a book please? Maybe finish it off tonight and email it to me? Ha ha- great stuff
brian miller said:
no i really enjoyed it k…and you took your time in a good way to develop it….
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Compelling article, Stu. I agree with Joy – Plath’s poem is intimidating and brilliant. This, as everyone knows, is not my usual territory – not that I don’t find the terrible, ghoulish and grotesque in its own way poetic and inviting, it’s that I try to push away those images in my daylight hours and haven’t had many in my sleeping ones either. But I’ll try to find something to add in a little bit. Glad to see you behind the bar. Thanks.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Thank you Gay…really pleased to be here and I’m having a ball. The prompt itself doesn’t necessarily have to be about something grotesque as such- maybe a ‘nightmare’ situation or something that was so ‘nightmarish’ it was funny!
brian miller said:
and you are doing a great job stu…
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Well thanks to your advice and fab prompt, I have at last written something that may suffice. It’s up #59 I think! See y’all on the trail.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
I’ll be there asap to read! great stuff
charlesmashburn said:
I got ya covered on this one! I hope y’all enjoy it!
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Can’t wait to read!
Louise said:
Hi Stuart! I’m a bit late, but I’m here…terrific prompt! 🙂
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Hey Louise! Nice one- great to see you. Looks like its going to be a late one for me in the UK…can’t wait to read ‘white lillies’- it’s not helping me that there’s a horror film on in the background called ‘buried’ about a girl suffering from nightmares about being buried alive- freaky
Louise said:
hahahaha….rather you than me! Hope you can sleep after! 😀
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Stu, great prompt…a trip to the darker side awaits us!
brian miller said:
nice..can’t wait to see what you come up with victoria….how is your mom?
James Rainsford said:
A real challenge from Stuart tonight. Not sure I could rise to it, but then remembered the picture which illustrates my poem. Took me a few attempts to capture the essence of this image. Hope some of you think I’ve suceeded.
Intriguing prompt Stuart, thanks.
brian miller said:
i think you did well james….my eyes are scratching a bit after the read…smiles.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Hey James! You’ve just got back from the pub? (ha ha) proper pub that is(Glenn b- you’d like it)…can’t wait I read what you’ve penned!
Ruth said:
great job, Stu – and that’s some scary pic you posted… my contribution isn’t quite like that but then, who am I to say? – it wasn’t my nightmare
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Hey Ruth! Thanks for stopping by! Can’t wait I read- this prompt is do open its can be interpreted in many different ways- intrigued to see what you’ve come up with!
Hannah Gosselin said:
Great prompt, thank you everyone!
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Hey Hannah – nice to meet you! Hope you have fun delving into this!
Hannah Gosselin said:
Nice to meet you, too!! I did have fun, kind of gut-wrenching but fun none the less! Thank you!
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Just read and commented- v brave of you to revisit something that was so scary and for so long….good for you
Hannah Gosselin said:
Thank you, it was fairly painless, it has been a long while since dreaming this particular dream but still makes a little tension ball in my gut to write about it. 🙂
I think this is a wonderful idea BTW, maybe very therapeutic for some.
Thank you so much for visiting and talking with me!
brian miller said:
very nicely done hannah, you have been a delight to read the last little bit and tonight was no exception..as i noted at your place to have to watch yourself commit acts and feel as if you had no control…wow that is pretty intense…
Hannah Gosselin said:
The feeling is mutual, Brian, I’ve so enjoyed learning everyone through their writing and styles.
Def. an intense one, and now that ‘m thinking on it I wonder if it translates into anything deeper. Like if dissected the elements all stand for other things in real-life…you know how they do in all those dream translating books? I’ve always been intrigued by the study of dreams and subconscious.
I’m so grateful for the feedback, so generous and helpful. Thank you!
Semaphore / S. Peralta said:
Excellent article Stu. Not sure if I’ve got enough time to put together something for this (it’s tough exploring those darker reaches of the psyche!), but I’m sure that I’ll enjoy reading the poems out there.
Semaphore / S. Peralta said:
…I may link to an old nightmare, however. An old, recurring nightmare. An old, recurring, horrific nightmare. Brrrr.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Samuel- after leaving such tempting comments- we have to see……share- you’ll feel better for it! Of course- as Brian pointed out- there is a danger that a doctor will see this page and we’ll all end up in padded cells eating mashed bananas
brian miller said:
haha you saw that did you…smiles….ugh yeah but at least we will all be together right….
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
ALL OF US TOGETHER? can you imagine? ha
brian miller said:
the walls of the padded cell covered in poetry….haha
Semaphore / S. Peralta said:
Why soooooo serious?
brian miller said:
haha great ref sam….no slamming heads on pencils though please…
Shawna said:
Good thing I like mashed bananas! Especially with peanut butter and honey. 🙂
Tony said:
Great article Stu – and some fantastic responses too. Thanks for the invitation to take a stroll into some very dark and disturbing places.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Yes tony! So glad you managed to stop by! Can’t wait to read! Hope you enjoyed the crazy warm weather up there in Scotland!
Tony said:
Loving the unseasonal warmth, although the temperature is more normal today. The weather guessers are saying we could get snow on Tuesday! Springtime in Scotland 🙂
K♥Maeby♥B (@karenmaeby) said:
This brought out something interesting for me. I collided three dreams I remembered I had (and on my blog) to make one.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Sounds VERY interesting! I’m on my way to read!
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
p.s if anyone can get in touch with Gavin P- unfortunately I’m unable to comment on his blog fr some reason BUT- if someone could be a sport and point him in the direction of these comments- I would be very grateful
hey there- this was EXACTLY what I was looking for. This is the worst kind of Nightmare- something firmly rooted in reality. This was short but packed an incredible emotional punch. ‘how can I miss her when I’m gone’- that just destroyed me. this is real life, your reality, and of course I pray that this never ever ever happens- and I’m sure it won’t. good health to you and your family
Heaven (@asweetlust) said:
Stu, a very good prompt and challenge. I am enjoying the linked posts. I only hope I get to sleep well tonight 🙂
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
aw thanks! I’m having a ball- some AWESOME poems- some great insights into our fears as well…very much enjoyed yours! sleep well!
brian miller said:
just getting back from dinner and have a little catch up to do….great stuff so far…
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
Nice! very much enjoying myself here!…although its 2am…time to get the coffee on1 ha ha ha
brian miller said:
go to bed man…got it covered…that way you can wake up fresh and knock out the over nights….
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
oh I’ve got a bit left in the tank! I’m a night owl!
gardenlilie said:
Have fun tonite folks. So Stu…not prepared for my nightmare as in do not have a poem like that …..yet! Will think on it for the future, off on vaca. Nite.
brian miller said:
nice…where are you heading?
gardenlilie said:
Fla!
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
Also- RENE FORAN- unable to leave a blog comment :(…hopefully someone can pass these comments on:-
There’s something helpless about this poem- the marionette, the waxy hospital walls, just feels like somebody has slipped into a coma and is unable to escape.
the body a vessel
the soul
a marionette
hijacked, voiceless
Hijacked by what or by who I wonder. The ending made me feel like you were trapped in our sleep- almost like paralyses – which is a very real condition for some people. thank you for sharing this!
seingraham said:
nightmares – the stuff of dreams (pun intended!) love this prompt and all the info supplied … have actually tons of poems re same but decided to try and write something new … can’t wait to read some others … thanks for this Stu, good one
mines posted on THE WAY EYE SEE IT at
http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.ca/2012/03/taste-of-copper.html
Stu McP (Hate & Hope) said:
Just read and commented- SURREAL for sure! crazy imagery- quite amazing what the mind sees while the eyes are closed- enjoyed this very much! 🙂
jcosmonewbery said:
I got very excited and did two!
brian miller said:
nice…on my way over…
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Both nice takes on the prompt! The first one really made me smile 🙂
Shawna said:
“My landscape is a hand with no lines” … That IS a nightmare—not having any lines on your palm, an unknown future.
David King said:
Another prompt to relish. Much thanks for.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
David- your contribution was excellent- very much enjoyed 🙂
nevadanative said:
A marvelous prompt. Good to deal with those nightmares!
Lydia said:
arggh. wordpress keeps publishing the name I initially signed in with (see above)…wonder what changed. It’s a nightmare, I tell ya!
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Gremlins Lydia! Gremlins! Nice to see you here!
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Lydia- just read your poem and commented. A copy of it is being printed out and pinned up on my desk tomorrow! 🙂
mlydiam said:
Really? That makes my day…..made my night when I read it! Thank you, Stu!
brian miller said:
good morning poets….catching up on the overnights…and as far as i remember no nightmares last night…ha…surprising a bit
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Right then poets! Just stepping outside for some fresh air ! Will be back about 2pm EST to continue with the fun!
claudia said:
ok…back home again…and on the commenting trail finally…have quite some catch up to do…
brian miller said:
welcome home…
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Glad you got back safe and sound Claudia! 🙂
Eve Redwater said:
I really enjoyed this one DVerse! Thank you. 😀
brian miller said:
nice remodel of your site eve….and nice pic you drew as well to go with yours…
Ginny Brannan said:
Hi Stu, great topic! I love anything dark and eerie.
Coming in late again on this one, tough working Fridays and Saturdays. Glad I could make it. Sharing my acrostic “Nightmares”. Excited to step inside to see what evils lurk in the dreams of my fellow poets. Thanks again for the great prompt.
brian miller said:
i def would not wanting to sleep and walking around like a zombie after that one ginny….freaky pic too
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Ginny- I cannot wait to read your composition! Working friday and sat must be hella tough
Bodhirose said:
Thanks for an inspiring idea, Stu…easy for me to tap into my dark side.
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Hey- great to meet you! Look forward to seeing what darkness you’ve penned!
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
I am back! And I see we have a few more additions! Right- let me get stuck in ! Can’t wait to reeeeaaaaaddddd!
Mary Mansfield said:
Always happy to go playing in the dark with my poems! I gotta admit, I kind of freaked myself out a bit with this one, not sure how well I’ll be sleeping tonight 🙂
stu mcp (hate & hope) said:
Mary- if yiu’ve scared yourself- then I CANNOT wait to read! Nice to meet you and nice one for making it over here!
brian miller said:
nice…just coming back online after an afternoon at the skate park…nothing broken…except a little pride maybe…ha…off to read….
Gary said:
I’ve been thinking about writing about this, oddly enough…