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Welcome back to dVersePoets, poets and friends! I’m Chazinator and I’ll be your host again. Tonight we’ll write about the magic/conflict of machines. But first, a little history…
It’s often thought that machines and technology have fascinated and ruled the lives of humans for millennia. After all, we are the tool-making animals, as some scientists would say. And our fascination with techno gadgets from computers to cell phones to TV have accustomed us to the idea that humans throughout history have had such a passion for gadgets as we have. History, however, shows that modern technology, with its counterpart in capitalism, has created a unique phase in human history.
The presence of sophisticated machinery, on the level of modern technology, was once believed to be only a modern phenomenon. Indeed, except as toys or playthings, many ancient cultures simply did not have the type of technological expertise as our society does. However, the discovery of the instrument shown below in Greece shows that the Greeks were capable of sophisticated technological apparatuses. The Antikythera is, in many ways, comparable to a computer in complexity of design as well as operation.
No matter how marvelous such a machine is, nothing in previous human history equals the role that machines play in modern society. As many have said, in today’s world, the machine shapes us as much as we shape it. One has only to look at Science Fiction, filled with images of half-human, half-machine, beings to see how powerfully machines and technology have infiltrated the imagination, not to mention our lives.
Depending on your philosophical assumptions, perhaps, this could be a good or bad thing. Certainly, with the rise of capitalism along with technology, we see in western culture various reactions to the way that machines enter our lives. I spoke of the English Romantics last time; in this sphere as well, the Romantics led the reaction to the abuses and devastation inherent in industrialization. Many of you will recall William Blake’s poem about the “dark satanic mills,”
And did the Countenance Divine
Shine forth upon our clouded hills?
And was Jerusalem builded here
Among these dark Satanic Mills?
Technology and poetry kind of dismissed each other after the Romantics, though Realism in prose and drama undertook the theme seriously. Things moved more quickly in America near the end of the 19th century. Walt Whitman’s paeon to a Locomotive heralded a new understanding of the machine and its place in our lives. Celebrating quickness, power, and ability to shorten vast distance, Whitman becomes ecstatic in his tribute to modern technological advances.
Roll through my chant with all thy lawless music,thy swinging lamps at night,
Thy madly-whistled laughter, echoing, rumbling like an earthquake, rousing all,
Law of thyself complete, thine old track firmly holding,
(No sweetness debonair of tearful harp or glib piano thine,)
Thy trills and shrieks by rocks and hills return’d,
Launch’d o’er the praries wide, across the lakes,
To the free skies unpent and glad and strong.
Whitman’s spirit portended a growing trend in Europe as it embraced the machine as well. The Italian arts movement of Futurism celebrated the rise and spread of modern technology. The movement had acolytes in many European countries and arts, including France and Russia. And two opposing camps in the arts took shape: those who wished to embrace the modern technological advances and those who feared many of the consequences.
But there was also anguish about where technology was leading humans, and this anguish was voiced by the German Expressionists in poetry, painting and cinema. The image of the evil cyborg first arose in German Expressionism, and actually coined the term for these machines, “robots,” in the play RUR by Hungarian Karel Capek. The following clip form the German Expressionist film, Metropolis, exhibits both the attraction and repulsion that many felt towards machines and technology. Unfortunately, World War I seemed to bear out many of these misgivings.
In America, however, the love affair with the machine continued and grew unabated. It used to be said of American males, for example, that they often love their car as much as their mates. The following poem by ee cummings expresses this sentiment with much glee and charming inventiveness.
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know consequently a
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Of course, this is not the only issue alive in the question about machines and how humans will continue to evolve in tandem with machines. While I mentioned it at the beginning of this article, with the rise of the machine came the rise of capitalism. Which came first is still a question of hot debate. And the political questions fall outside the parameters of this piece.
In this week’s prompt, write a poem that references in some way the technological or machine spirit of our time. To accomplish this, you might
- tackle the big question about technology and its effects on our world
- write a poem about what machines you use in your job
- engage in poetic conflict with the technological world-view
Cool? Then let’s get it on. Here’s how it works:
- Post a poem based on tonight’s theme to your blog.
- Link in the poem you’d like to share by clicking on the Mr.Linky button just below.
- This opens a new screen where you’ll enter your information, and where you also choose links to read. Once you have pasted your poem’s blog url and entered your name, simply click Submit.
- Don’t forget to let your readers know where you’re linking up and encourage them to participate by including a link to dVerse in your blog post.
- Visit as many other poems as you like, commenting as you see fit. Chances are if you comment on others they will comment on you. Funny how that works.
- Remember, we’re here for each other. Engage your fellow poets, talk, chat, comment, let them know their work is being read, and enjoy the input you also will receive. Feel free to tweet and share on the social media of your choice.
Finally, enjoy–this is poetry alive.
*Antikythera, Locutus, Dynamism, and Muscle Car images from the Wikimedia Commons. Commons is a freely licensed media file repository.
what an excellent, excellent prompt..and big challenge as well.. as usually…i’m more a kind of a non-technical person…smiles…love it chazz and looking forward to lots of inspired and inspiring reads..
ha. beware the collective….this is def fun…and cant wait to see what people will come up with…mine is a bit of a battle witht he machine…hehe….
Hiya Chaz,
I’m having a bit of a problem here:
About five weeks ago I wrote how machines were affecting me. Can’t really do it again, as I felt so strongly at the time. But some people have read that and it isn’t too long ago.
I suppose a post I wrote today, about Elizabethan conceits and code writing wouldn’t quite fit the bill 🙂
let it marinate…you may come up with a fresh approach for the morning…
I’ve seen pictures of that greek instrument before Chaz and found it fascinating-they posit that it’s a navigational device I believe, since it was found underwater, but who knows. Thanks for the interesting prompt(and the cool music.) I will have to brood on it all a bit and see if anything hits the assembly line.
Awesome…on it! See you soon, Chazinator!
Welp – tried! May have failed. Strayed wayy away from where I started and ended up with something that didn’t really resemble what it should have! Tried to use a bit of machine-y punctuation as well…
That is a profound and fascinating article Chaz … I can imagine many interesting hours whiled away in the pub with a glass of malt exploring all the roads this one opens up! ..and love the cummings poems ..new one to me so thnx for that!
love the cummings poem as well…
idd …. btw shan’t be round for few days – real life poetry stuff kicks in …. staying at Dylan Thomas’ former house in Laugharne over the weekend and in a real pub reading poetry next tues as part of town’s month long festival of arts and music
nice…very cool trip…have fun man….
Sounds like a poet’s vacation fantasy come true. I’m sure you’ll have an amazing time.
Hi Charles! Very informative and interesting and thoughtful (as always). Haven’t been able to listen to clips but so great to include them–and as much as we complain – so great that we have machines that can play them! (Ha.) Thanks. k.
great prompt even though i cheated and posted my haiku to Google written some time ago… cheater! ah!! but you have compelled me to face my fears of technology and tackle this subject with more zeal in the future….thanks Chaz!
your haiku was pretty cool…and spot on
Really good prompt Charles. Thanks. Have fun all.
crazy how much has changed in those last ten years..love the pic you posted as well..
Thanks so much as always for your fun and thought-provoking prompt. Here’s my Limerick Invention.
great and interesting article. I have had this topic brewing in my mind for a few weeks now (specifically related to cell phones.) Thanks for the prompt to sit down and finally write something out about it 🙂
of course i now have the phone number stuck in my head as well…smiles.
it is a catchy tune, isn’t it? at least my name’s not Jenny 🙂
I decided to have a go at this but haven’t put it only blog as it doesn’t sit well amongst the style I usually write about… But I did want to share it anyway, it’s my interpretation of the potential for machines ie computers or even robots and virtual reality can create distance and normalisation of sexual exploitation.
UNSEEN THROUGH VIRTUAL EYES
Move for me, yes, that’s it…
…slow, just there, now bend a little…
touch… and now turn to me…it’s alright
don’t be shy, no one can see… just me
It’s harmless
I’m not hurting anyone
I didn’t lay my hands
leave dirty finger prints
where virtual angels fear to tread
just looked at the screen
voyeur of the cyber eye
seeing everywhere
but nowhere to be seen
so it’s not real, no pain
no consequence remains
just satisfied sighs
as I watch naked thighs
and justify actions
that now normalised
didn’t really happen
it’s just a computer
I didn’t touch anyone
yet in your denial you touched them all…
yep…that is an incidious lie we sell ourselves on yet the whole time rob ourselves and those we are intimate with….
Thanks Brian.Really dont know where my happy sunny poetry goes sometimes… This is just what came to mind, but without the direct context of the prompt it might have seemed a bit out of place on my blog. Promise something sweeter for Saturday!
eh, i used to worry about what i posted…smiles….
My grandson jumped into my mind immediately and I saw machine dreams through his eyes and got excited. Thanks!
yours was a very cool piece….
Wow, I love this prompt, I will be writing a whole series of poems on this. For today I went for truth being stranger than fiction and give you my humorous and experimental piece. Thank you for inspiring me to finally have a conversation with Cleverbot. I am still floored by it.
I’m in! I’ve probably gone with a familiar and popular theme, but… there it is!
Thank you for the interesting article and prompt Charles ~
I have posted my share (its in my other blog) ~
Grace
Charles, your articles and prompts are so very good–you may force me out of my blogging break. (Maybe :0>)
yay…..smiles…
Hi Charles – well, mine a bit silly, but a villanelle and rathre down on technology (coming from an addict) so it’s up. k.
I’ve posted but think it’s a bit “soft” for dVerse…mental pause when it came to writing tonite.
Do enjoy the subject, will re read the post by Chaz…very interesting but alot for me to digest… and plan to read as many posts as I have time for.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
oh it was enjoyable…gave me a chuckle a bit…smiles…..
Hi Charles, just got a chance to look at the Metropolis clip – whoa! So great. I’ve not seen this whole film though heard about it – quite amazing. Thanks. k.
Hi Chaz et. al – I’ve submitted a poem I wrote last year, that is the title of my recently published ebook “I Hate Poetry 2.0: Formatted for Mobile Devices.” Available now at amazon http://amzn.to/Jn1FHa – 100 poems for $9.99! (Shameless promotion!)
alright…good night poets…i will be back in the AM to catch up with everyone!
Okay, I have fabricated a mechanical phantasia, and got it up–will be back to read in the morning.
Cool topic and great info and poems Chaz … thought I had more in me for this but in the end kinda crapped out and went small – oh well, sometimes the magic works and sometimes, not so much …
http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.ca/2012/05/deus-ex-machina-redux.html
nice..made my rounds but have to run to work now…could maybe someone invent a time zip machine…kinda..you zip time and when you need it, just unpack to an unbelievable volume…? ha
I defrosted a little something for you, Chaz.
Another one with so much choice… wonderful!
You always come up with great challenges, Chazz. Really gets the gears turning …
Central AC-Heat, dishwashers, dryers & washing machines, trash mashers, disposals, auto drip coffee grinders & makers, electric stoves, refrigerators with ice makers, blenders, juicers, electric can openers, TV’s, copy machines, faxes, scanners, cell phones & Kindles & computers…
A little late, but I made it in. This one feels very experimental to me, just a bit uneasy about it I guess. Very thought provoking prompt!
I am in with a really old poem. Too much yard work today to compose a new one! I’m still catching up on reading Poetics, especially by those who kindly visited and commented on mine last time. So if I owe you a visit, feel free to skip over my silly machine poem!
Really fascinating prompt, Chazinator. Thanks for all your work on this one.
been off the grid most of the day….out on the trail now playing catch up