Good day to all and welcome to Poetics! My name is Stuart McPherson and once again I’m very proud to be tending the bar!
So…how are we feeling today? Has anyone been to work? Is anyone going to work? Is anyone tired from the Monday to Friday rat-race? I AM! It’s been a hectic week for sure, but in the midst of it all I found myself stopping and thinking about “what IS work?”. I thought about how it impacted on my life & what it meant to me. I can honestly say that I think it has made me feel every kind of emotion from utter elation through to dagger mouthed misanthropy. It’s these feelings that I want to focus on as a source of poetic inspiration.
So then- Work…we all ‘do it’ or have ‘done it’…but what does it mean? For something to be constituted as ‘work’ does it have to be paid? Does there have to be an income? What about voluntary ‘work’ and what about us creative types who talk about ‘our work’– our poems, our writing, our painting, our photographs- that’s pretty meaningful to us right?
Perhaps more importantly what perceptions does work create within society? Is some work seen as better than others? Are the highest paid jobs the most satisfying? Or is it something else? After all, we talk about job and work satisfaction don’t we? Why does it even matter?
And I wonder, how many times have you met a stranger only to be asked that question of ‘what do you do?’, because in some way work defines us (or can be perceived as defining us)
To be frank- all of the above tends to baffle me. It actually makes me quite angry. Do we really judge each other on based on these ‘accepted’ criteria. Hey- look, I know it’s not ALL bad- some people have jobs that genuinely contribute to this world.
From an artistic point of view let me provide some examples to encourage more ‘poetic’ thought around this subject. This painting by Maximilien Luce called ‘Morning, Interior’ shows a man readying himself for the day ahead. Luce’s paintings often centred around the world of work and this piece is no exception.
What strikes me about this picture is all of the things that surround the figure- the fold-out bed, the sparse furniture and the seeming lack of companionship. But then his expression and body language seems to imply such emotion, probably because we have all been there sat on that bed in the early morning light. I wonder about this man and about his feelings and purpose.
The point I want to get across is that our interpretation of work is incredibly personal. It plays such a huge part in our lives. We might love it, we might hate it, we might be indifferent (until we lose it) and it is this I want us to tap into…what’s your perspective on it?
What do you see when you see people working on a day to day basis? Do you see the people or the work? What about people who are ‘out of work’- how would you feel if you couldn’t work. What if you got fired? Would your perspective change? In a climate where unemployment and redundancy is rife- this seems so relevant to consider.
At this point, I’d like to take the opportunity to introduce award wining Irish Poet and Spoken Word Artist- Stephen James Smith. Stephen has kindly given us permission to use one of his spoken word pieces- ‘Signing Your Life Away’ for the purposes of this prompt. For me, this piece is so eloquent, so poetically descriptive and emotionally relevant- I couldn’t NOT ask to use it for this prompt. The poem speaks for itself. I implore you to listen to it and to check out more of Stephen’s work from the links below
http://www.stephenjamessmith.com/
http://www.youtube.com/mrstephenjamessmith
https://twitter.com/SJSwords
OK, and finally, a poetry prompt about work would not be complete without an addition by Charles Bukowski. Bukowski was always at odds with this world. The poem ‘the trash men’ speaks to me about the contrast between work and life. The trash-men come and go, hurriedly and with purpose…they can’t see the poet whose trash they are taking away…maybe Bukowski felt that their work blinded them to the existence of humanity, of people, as signified metaphorically by the trash (such a human product of life itself)
the trash men
here they come
these guys
grey truck
radio playing
they are in a hurry
it’s quite exciting:
shirt open
bellies hanging out
they run out the trash bins
roll them out to the fork lift
and then the truck grinds it upward
with far too much sound . . .
they had to fill out application forms
to get these jobs
they are paying for homes and
drive late model cars
they get drunk on Saturday night
now in the Los Angeles sunshine
they run back and forth with their trash bins
all that trash goes somewhere
and they shout to each other
then they are all up in the truck
driving west toward the sea
none of them know
that I am alive
OK- SO- let’s get to WORK (sorry…couldn’t resist)…
For this weeks prompt write a poem about work.
- Write a poem inspired by the pictures, thoughts, or words above
- Pen a poem about ‘Your work’- however you define it- it could be the office, it could be the paintings you paint or the poems you write.
- Write an observational piece from inside or outside the workplace- what do you see?
- Write about a form of work that you find deeply satisfying
- Write about a memorable encounter relating to work (this could be playful, funny, or melancholic)
- Explore what problems work can create in society (unemployment and it’s impacts for example)
- Write about your first job, a past job, a worst job,or best job.
- Write about aspirations and dreams with regards to work
- Write your poem and post it to your blog
- Add a link to your poem via the ‘Mr Linky’ below
- This opens a new screen where you’ll enter your information, and where you also choose links to read. Once you have pasted your poem’s blog URL and entered your name, click Submit. Don’t worry if you don’t see your name right away.
- Read and comment on other peoples work to let them know it’s being read
- Share via your favourite social media platforms
- Above all- have fun!
Of course- might not be a good idea to write something about your boss that they will see and ultimately land you in hot water!- unless you’re feeling gutsy of course! Just saying! (I’m writing this prompt AT WORK… shhhhh don’t tell OK?)
See you out on the road.
Stuart McPherson
http://www.poemsofhateandhope.com
very cool prompt stu…work is such a big part of life..def. worth writing about it… well mine is actually an ad for FullServiceStation Inc. you know…they wanted to revive their business a bit…so… smiles… happy writing poets!!
Ha ha- loved your poem claudia- it was great!
really like the spoken word piece man…that rocks and will have to look at his website as well….as much as i hate thinking about work on the one day i dont have to do it…but ha, been cutting down trees & clearing land all afternoon so i am still working…so, here is to work…oy….smiles.
happy tree cutting…smiles
Ha ha- sorry Brian! Still- sounds like you’ve still been workin hard regardless! Choppin trees down? Manly!
well you know…saw dust and sweat does add quite the topping…smiles…just watch out for splinters…
oh and stu…did you celebrate the queen today…? i mean 60 years..that’s something…right..
Yep- its the Jubilee weekend! But unfortunately no celebrations for me! The wifes got me on a decorating mission! And then fly to Dubai Tuesday night- so I’m probably going to be busier than if I was actually AT work! 🙂
Awesome to have you back Poet McPherson…and what an entrance to make! Fantastic article, Stu..and much love for the hint…off to hob-knob now with the haters…which mask shall I wear 😉 Counting on the thought of the prompt responses to get me through! See you soon…and wish me luck! Chances are I’ll be three-sheets to the wind upon my return (I believe we call it survival!)
ooo have gun hob knobbing tash…smiles…survival of the poetess…
Tash! Don’t drink and write! (or do)… I wonder what you would come up with! Your poem for the prompt was AMAZeBALLs btw!
snort.
Hey all!- welcome to poetics! Cool to be tending the bar once again….and yeah- sorry for dragging work into the weekend…ha ha….can’t wait to see what people come up with! Have already read some AMAZING work…
Great prompt Stu. Work has been many things for me over the course of my life, and no doubt it’s a huge part of all our identities. Will give this a think and see if I can come up with something new–if not I may have an old one I can link.. Thanks for hosting today.
Thanks Joy! Whatever you choose to post will be a pleasure to read I’m sure! Looking forward to it!
Excellent prompt! And I remember commenting more than once in my column the other day that, oh, it’s been one of those weeks at work – gritty and overlong. So this is such an appropriate topic.
So in my poem offering, I imagine sitting at my desk looking out the window, working away, cloistered in my cubicle like an animal in its square footage of space in a zoo or a circus, when all at once, I see outside, making their own escape… “Giraffes”
Sam! I Can’t wait to read!!!
I’m giving you another oldie, about following a dream, because basically I’m living mine now, love my job 🙂
Ahhh that sounds cool- it’s so easy (for me anyway!) to get all grizzled about work- be awesome to read a piece that is upbeat in this way- ill be there soooon!
shan in the house!
Joining in, my poem started out being about how my grandmother worked as a nurse, it kind of took me to a different place, but I hope it still fits the theme…
Hey Kelly! Nice to see you this fine afternoon! Can’t wait to see what you’re come up with!
Ooh, thanks, Stu. This is a fascinating prompt!!
Thanks Laurie! Always great to see you here!
What a cool prompt and verse! Thanks for inspiring this limerick:
Poetic Fantasy
Hey Madeleine – love your limericks and can’t waitmtonsee what you’re come up with!
alright back to the trees for a bit for me…be back in a little bit later to catch up again…
Loved the article Stu, and would love to write about work if I ever get enough time not working to write. I’m always behind the 8ball since I work by computer from home. I have to research information on oil and gas leases so it does take a bit of time. Will see if it leaves me time to write, and if not at least I’ll try to make it by others on the rounds.
Gay- I’ve totally been there this week….just not enough time to do anything but work! So it would be GrEaT! To see you pen something- but of course completely understand! Glad you liked the prompt! 🙂
Okay, I’m in. Be back later to do some reading.
Great prompt Stu. Have a good night all. Thanks to all at the pub.
Hey daydreamer! Just seen you posted? I’m making my way over ASAP!
Hi Stu, I’ve been a psychiatric nurse for twenty-odd years now, and I’ve posted a wee piece about the ambulances we used to use in emergency detentions or in blue-light cases…
Brian- that sounds very cool…20 years as a psychiatric nurse? Ooooof….bet you have SEEN some things…
Being a lazy so-and-so, I’ve often pondered on this topic. Could write an essay, but not a poem. It is such a debate. Are we talking ‘occupation’ , or slave labour for somebody else, being our own boss, doing something we love doing, housework, homework, shop for a neighbour, go out to work because we can’t stand being alone in the house? The nuances are endless, as are the reasons for doing anything at all.
I have come to admire people who do jobs I profit from, Not just doctors and nurses, firemen and supermarket people, but those in the Far East sewing a straight line in my cheap t-shirts and the chap fixing the sink.
Justification for not getting it together quite as I planned 🙂
It’s easier in paint.
Aprille- I think you a completely right…it is SO personally – such a difficult subject- n one hand why do we HAVE to work for someone else- what is to stop us from dropping out altogether? And then on the flip side – without people who do jobs such as doctors, nurses, counsellors, fireman….we would be screwed….from my own personal point of view- my experience is very corporate- but due to things in my life (deaths e.t.c) I kind of find it ridiculous- it becomes a crazy place where people stop being people and non issues and unreal unimportant processes become god…..just blows my mind…..but then if i didn’t have a job how would i feel? Very very scared probably…but why? Oh the debate could go and on…..maybe we need a @dVersePoets webinar to discuss it!
So good to be here. I don’t stop often enough, although I always stop by. This topic hit a nerve.
As always, thank you for a fascinating posting.
Hey Margo! Great to see you here and glad you like the prompt!
Well this was an enjoyable thorough posting, Stu!! Thank you! I mixed mine with a “blues stanza” prompt too, it seemed to work pretty well with the idea of work!!
Hannah- glad you liked!- ‘blues stanza’ eh? I like the blues…..can’t wait to check it out
Thank you!!
Thank you, Stuart. I loved the video..enjoyed it very much. I just so happened to be writing a poem today on my younger-day-dreams of being a rock star…so there you have it!
Bodhirose! Great to see you – why does it have to be a dream? BE A ROCKSTAR!!!!
we should plan a rock night in the pub to get you on that stage bodhi…smiles
smiles….very cool…enjoyed the read and would def open up the stage for you….may even relive some dreams myself and get up there…
Yessssss ROCK night for sure- can I sing Africa by Toto? Pleaeeeaaassseee
you first stu…smiles…
“the pollution is free” PLUS charles bukowski! – very nice prompt stu 😉 thanks!
Thanks Yoga- Adan! Couldn’t have a work prompt without the Buk- total hero!!
The polluted air is free…goody! I can think of a hundred things to write, yes I’ve worked a long time. Probably read others or make it short n sweet, not. lol.
Hey gardenlillie- how cool is that spoken word piece eh? Please check out some more of his work- very cool. SO- what are you gonna write?!!
Yes his voice you-tube poem was awesome! Do you want a nurses view? What is so cool is that you announce this and it’s ready set go, do it. Thinking.
Here’s my contribution. It’s another post about salesmen. Here’s the link:
http://bit.ly/GBdjLk
James- enjoyed this immensely- althought it was a bit close to home, a total reflection of my current job role. How do I end up in sales? I couldn’t care less if you wanted to buy something or not!
Well, DANG, Stu! I posted the perfect poem for this prompt Thursday! Let me see what else I got layin ’round here!
Here’s the one I posted Thursday, in case anybody missed it: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/05/31/dreams-like-that/
Hi folks, sorry I’m late, so much on at the moment, but missing you and your words so HAD to make some time. Never apologise, never explain… those were the words of a former boss, but I jus did both. Just one of the reasons I didn’t make a good employee I’m sure! Hope you enjoy my poem which came out as a sort of mental unpacking of my dusty old briefcase that now sits redundant by the bed. Thanks for another awesome prompt Stu!
smiles..nice write ma’am…just jumping back in myself….long day working here but not in my usual….
Vannessa- your poem was great…and comforting to me that I’m not the only person who feels this way!!
Right- sleepy land beckons for tis late in the UK! Back in the morrow!!!
I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed the post -video and poem ~ Thanks for the wonderful challenge ~
Grace
Thanks Heaven- really really enjoyed your poem- excellent
sleep well brother…
I’m getting some awesome comments on the poem I posted this evening. I appreciate them, and apologize for not reading and commenting on others yet. Been a busy day, and time to get some rest. I’ll get some poetry reading done first thing in the morning! G’nite y’all!
sleep well sir…and look forward to seeing you in the morning…
Great prompt Stu– I am not in a position to blog right now. I scribbled something down on a program between lines, but can’t even type it up. Hope to do something down the road. Thanks for the wonderful prompt though. k.
hope all is well k
Thanks, Brian, Stu–all well, just too much going on in a way where there really is no down time. So very tired. But only complaints are really kvetching in my case! Thanks. k.
Hey K- glad you liked….hope all is cool?
loved stephens video – awesome reading and the typography rocks! Thanks for sharing that.
woohoo…great to see you sheila!!
thanks, brian!
Hey Sheila! Stephens spoken word piece rocks right?
My slant was more on what we don’t tell, rather than what we do.
really cool use of the chorus…and nice twist as well opening it up a bit…
This sounds fascinating- ill be there to read ASAP!
Really luved this presentation Stu. I was already working (ha) on something and thought I would trial on this prompt. I found a big tech mistake but too late to fix in second stanza. But it will still work (ha twice). Look forward to reading the other works………
the change up of voices was really cool though man…thought you might have been freestyling a bit on the dropped line but it was good man…
Difficulty translating tonight. A little diff voice. Just like playin’ around. Thanks, I thought the voice switch was a kool as well. I may play with that some more. Filter my voice through a diff voice. Off to sleep. Read as many as I could this evening, but one jazz poem took up most of my time; it was excellent and we had to play around with it a lil. Be kool. I appreciate all of your comments and support at this site.
Hey Henry! I’ll be there to read ASAP! Sounds interesting what you’ve come up with? And I think to play around- different voices e.t.c- well that’s all part of the fun- there’s no right or wrong!
to bed with me…be back in the morning poets
good nite…this is for you uk folks!
Nice one Gardenlillie!! Headin over to read!
Thanks for a brilliant challenge – and sorry for failing to link to the correct poem in the first instance 😦 On a happier note, the garden poem might be relevant to gardeners 🙂
Hey polly! Good job I like gardening! Ha ha….well…when I say i like gardening…this means sitting in the garden with a beer…that counts right?
I enjoyed the post – which took you a lot of work to put together! But I have no time to write a poem within the linky life, as I am off in about half an hour to a weeklong poetry WORKshop! And I haven’t had breakfast, which I need to feed the poetry.
oh nice viv…have fun on the poetry workshop…and enjoy the breakfast..smiles
A weeklong poetry workshop???? That sounds amazing!!!
And hold on…why wasn’t I invited viv? He he 🙂
oh wow…weekling poetry workshop…that sounds like fun for sure…
Stu,
Because they might ask you to hold a workshop yourself……
Now that would be something for those of us within striking distance.
A weekend would do, once you’ve finished the redecorating 🙂
That would be a great opportunity to have the nerve to ask you to read one of my [ahem] poems. There is one I can hear in your modulating voice and intonation.
I’m so glad it is raining today, and not just a drizzle. Ha ha, Queen getting wet. No, the sun will come out just in time to keep her dry. I’ve seen it happen before. She has a direct line to above.
Aprille- if you want me to read a poem for you – it would be my pleasure! Maybe we need to organise a dVerse weekend! A dverse boot camp! Ha ha
There’s another one at the end of June, with Rosie Bailey, Normandy the venue! Email me if you want to come.
It is amazing. First morning over and I’ve come home for a breather – having written 2 poems at home first and 5 at the workshop (WIP of course) – before going back for the evening read-around.
Sounds brilliant! Normandy eh? Not too far from me- just need to negotiate that little stretch of water between us!
Superb prompt – a fortnight in which to respond would have been nice!
Thank you David! You can borrow my flux capacitor if that helps you to time travel? 🙂
Right then- where is that Natasha Head? I wonder if she’s got a bad ‘head’ this morning? I’m hoping to hear stories of boozed up trouble making! Ha ha ha
haha she might be sleeping it off…smiles…
Or in jail….ha ha (so sorry Natasha- we’re casting such aspersions about your character!!)
back to read in a bit…WORKING on the yearly tax return…ugh..missed the deadline..
Ouch Claudia 😦
survived it… the daughters were baking apple cake to sweeten up the work a bit…smiles
So 48 poems so far! Not bad…just off for a bit of ‘jubilee’ lunch with the fam- then ill be back to keep reading and commenting! Some awesome awesome poems for this prompt – I’m blown away
This one was–excuse the phrase–a lot of work! But I think I finally came up with a good angle. Thanks for the prompt!
Awesome Julie! Glad you enjoyed!
I haven’t actually done a single day’s work since 12th April for medical reasons, so I decided to take a different approach to this one. I’ve not been around much for the same reasons – it’s good to be back.
Thanks for the article and prompt Stu.
Tonnnyyyyyyyy!!!! Great to have you back!! And great to hear that your on the mend!!!
been popping in through out the day…catching up…working most of the day and on break now so catching the last two…hope all are enjoying their sunday!
Because I ain’t ready to go back yet!
http://wp.me/pPury-wx
Ahh…My poem is posted, but it is not exactly finished. I still think I will keep it that way.
on my way over sir..
Alas! 8 minutes too late for a proper Mister Linky. . .:(
But thoroughly enjoyed the video and one needs a good dose of the originator of going postal. . .here’s my tardy offering. http://punnypalaver.wordpress.com/2012/06/04/on-the-train-21/
Hey!- Stephens spoken word is great right? Shame on missing the mr kinky- you could always post it for OpenLinkNight on Tuesday? That way tons more people will get to read and comment? Either way- I’m heading over to read!
Oh no!!! Never mind….just headin over to read! 🙂
Lazy Lazy weekend–I looked for poems I had already written about the meaning of my work, but did not attempt new writing. I found one from my first job, and one after retirement–and someday I may come across the brilliant poem I wrote about teaching which I cannot surpass. Or it may be the fish who got away, forever. Thank you again for these great prompts and all of the great company they generate!
Darn the time difference! I came here to see the linky expired! 😦
However, I shall share my post here for I am sure there are enthusiasts waiting for it for the love of pOETRY!
🙂
http://priyankazneverland.blogspot.in/2012/06/all-play-no-work.html