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ManicDdaily (a/k/a Karin Gustafson) here, in the dog days of summer, that time of year when the season’s spark is gone (along with the fireflies), but somehow the heat goes on.
We’ve all, at least in New York City, gotten a bit tired of it. The July bravado that an egg can actually fry on our sole-melting sidewalks has given way to August’s irritation at being served up yet another gritty fried egg.
Even those who live in more rural locales may be suffering from summer’s dregs: the garden lettuce starting to thin, fall harvest not yet in, you may be stuck with zucchini. (Lots of zucchini.)
Summer is an age-old springboard for poetry (“shall I compare thee to a summer’s day”) in part because of its beauty, but also because of its many contradictions–not just Shakespeare’s “rough winds,” but growth and rot; drench and parch; romance (first kiss on the ferris wheel) and heartbreak (first break-up behind the concession stand); taking it easy and taking it (as in, protest) to the streets.
It is also a season that has indelibly marked most of our childhoods. (I immediately think of the backs of knees imprinted by hot car seat, grass stains on Keds, joy, sadness). In Three Songs At The End of Summer, Jane Kenyon beautifully describes the type of deep nostalgia summer evokes (as well as its inherent contradictions.) A couple of short segments from the poem:
“Across the lake the campers have learned
to water ski. They have, or they haven’t.
Sounds of the instructor’s megaphone
suffuse the hazy air. “Relax! Relax!”
(from the first part of Three Songs at the End of Summer)
“The cicada’s dry monotony breaks
over me. The days are bright
and free, bright and free.
Then why did I cry today
for an hour, with my whole
body, the way babies cry?”
(from the second part of Three Songs at the End of Summer, by Jane Kenyon, from Collected Poems. Copyright © 2005 by the Estate of Jane Kenyon; Graywolf Press, St. Paul, Minnesota.)
So, on that cheerful note (!)–and please let me clear — I LOVE SUMMER! – the prompt today is summer in any permutation that you wish — that is, shining hot and full overhead, or lurking only in the dry dust that keeps trying to clog your pen. (Only, forget about writer’s drought! If you have it-or even if you don’t – come visit your fellow poets here at dVerse for inspiration and more.)
Down to specifics:
- Write your poem about, stemming from, springing off of, swimming/sunbathing/lounging/fingerlicking, protesting, shivering or sweltering in, Summer! (For you in the Southern Hemisphere- the season is wide open! Though please feel free to write of your own summer months.)
- Post it on your blog
- Click the Mr. Linky button below, and in the new window that opens up input your name and direct url of the poem
- Have fun and visit others who have taken the challenge
- Share via your favourite social media platforms
For an extremely different take on summer and its dog days and even protest, you may want to check out the segment from “Dog Day Afternoon,” the Sidney Lumet film, starring Al Pacino and John Cazale (warning profanity, threatened violence):
P.S. – ManicDdaily is responsible for Pearl as well as the elephant above (and eggs), and holds all copyrights to those images.
kelly said:
I love autumn the best, but I have to say, this summer has been pretty fabulous! Even better when there is poetry involved….
claudia said:
poetry makes everything even better..right..? smiles
ManicDdaily said:
Yes!
Susan L Daniels said:
Great topic today, guys. Looking forward to all the fruit it inspires–but–PLEASE–no more zukes!!!!!!
claudia said:
hehe..i love them…
Susan L Daniels said:
Love them too, but am up to my EYEBALLS in zukes. Making zucchini pancakes like crazy here (like potato pancakes, but topped with a marinara sauce….yum!).
claudia said:
hmmmm…i’m getting hungry…
vivinfrance said:
The only really successful veg in the garden this year. Forgotten courgettes (zucchini in France) made some lovely marrow and ginger jam last week.
flipside records said:
YUM!
ManicDdaily said:
I like too, but Pearl has very mixed feelings. k.
Susan L Daniels said:
hahaha. Pearl…
brian miller said:
smiles…too funny….you know, the other day my kitten ate a tomatoe no joke…stole it right off the table and went at it…crazy cat…
Susan L Daniels said:
Ha 🙂
My Siamese kitten attacks zucchini–thinks they are toys. Have another who eats peanuts.
brian miller said:
peanuts? crazy….
Daydreamertoo said:
That’s a fabulous Dog and zucchini pic 🙂 Great prompt K.
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks so much. She is a great dog–will be 18 in about ten days. k.
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ManicDdaily said:
Ha! A few process notes! The prompt is about summer however you want to serve it up – not necessarily as “dog days of summer.” It has actually been a very pretty summer for me, and today (up in the mountains) it was cool enough that I was wearing a (very thin) down jacket. So I feel a bit like a hypocrite to sound complainy, though I know it’s still very hot for many.
Also, re protest in summer – sending support here to the three young women in Pussy Riot, each sentenced yesterday to two years in prison–and to all of their ski-masked (and unmasked) supporters in Russia.
Finally, I hope the Dog Day Afternoon clip is not offensive to anyone. Pacino is just so good– and the clip brought up a more gritty side to the prompt (and summer life)– (a difficult time in New York) –
Anyway, I haven’t gotten my own poem done so will be in and out for a while.
k.
claudia said:
a wonderful prompt k. and for us over here it was a scorching hot day…so really felt like summer… have a great time in the mountains and yes, def. sending support to those brave women…was really shocked when i heard it in the news
poemsofhateandhope said:
Karin- loving everything about this prompt! Some very cool responses already!
brian miller said:
including yours karin….wow, vivid and real…and moving…
Archna said:
Hi Karin, thanks for this lovely prompt. Summer air is just as much a poetic muse as the dampness of fall.
ps~my link duplicated, will someone erase the second one please? 🙂
claudia said:
yep…will do..
Archna said:
Thanks, Claudia!
brian miller said:
loved the pic of your little bean…smiles…
Archna said:
Ahh, thank you. She’s our only girl, so a special bean. I too enjoy your kids, the conversations you share with your boys…smiles…enjoy your weekend.
The Course of Our Seasons said:
Perfect prompt for today – just back from swimming : ) K
brian miller said:
are you trying to rub that in? smiles…
could use a dip in the pool…a river…a mud puddle even if it was cool…smiles….
flipside records said:
Mud puddle. 🙂 Ha.
brian miller said:
hey karin…thanks for taking us out of the season with style…smiles…been at a football tourney all morning…just blowing in and about to make the rounds…
ManicDdaily said:
Nothing says fall to me but football – only I know from my nephews down south (Texas) who practice from mid-summer on, that’s no longer exactly true. Congrats on all. k.
brian miller said:
i can not wait til fall…it is my fav time of year….def got some sun burn out on those aluminum bleachers today….but we won…and more importantly they had fun…smiles…
ordinarylifelessordinary said:
Evening all! We’ve had all four seasons during summer where I live it seems, so not nearly enough lazy summer days to be turned into poetry but I hope there is a hint of it in my poem tonight.
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dannypereyra said:
Summer and I have a ‘love/hate’ relationship. 🙂
claudia said:
now that sounds interesting…smiles
Polly Robinson said:
Fab prompt k. I loved the concept and had just written Mañana Seaside Days in response to a workshop prompt, so it was perfect, I think, for this one too 🙂
claudia said:
it def. fits perfectly…and i enjoyed it much
Polly Robinson said:
I so love your little elephants k. ~ the one at the top of this post is dripping, bless him, with his fried eggs … smiles …
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks, Polly. k.
kkkkaty said:
Oh, goody!
vivinfrance said:
It’s all very well you relishing the dog days of summer! Ours has only just started: I went out in a cotton frock today for the first time this year. Likewise first meal in the garden. When our guests have gone, though, I’ll have a go at writing a summer poem.
ManicDdaily said:
I look forward to it! k.
brian miller said:
who knows how long ours will last…it may be december before it really cools…ha….look forward to it viv…
claudia said:
ok…just 10:30 over here but the heat today has sucked all energy from me… early bedtime and be back tomorrow morning…
brian miller said:
sleep well claudia…hoping the sheets are cool for you…smiles.
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brian miller said:
alright taking a break…be back in a bit…we have a back to school picnic i need to get to….play catch up here later with some return visits…
hollyannegetspoetic said:
Nice prompt Karin – and loving the picture with the zucchin! Or courgette as teh7’re called in these parts… 😉
ManicDdaily said:
Ah, yes, a gorgeous courgette.
hollyannegetspoetic said:
It nearly inspired a much ruder poem with much silly innuendo…
brian miller said:
ha. yours was incredible ma’am…
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Laurie Kolp said:
Summer is my favorite season, but I am so ready for it to end.
ManicDdaily said:
Ha! Almost here. k.
ManicDdaily said:
So, I’m up finally! I’m going to make some rounds that will be out of commission briefly, but will check up on everyone tonight. Thanks so much for your poems! k.
ManicDdaily said:
I meant BUT will be out of commission briefly – house guests – dinner – not that will be out of commission. k.
John (@bookdreamer) said:
Thanks for the prompt, Used it to play with another Irish form – lots of slant rhymes and alliteration.
John (@bookdreamer) said:
Oh, and should add it’s on the way to the witching hour and bed time here so I’ll do the rounds tomorrow.
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks, John. I look forward to it. k.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Great prompt, Karin. I’ve taken it and combined it with Gemma and Gay’s prompt for Thursday that I didn’t have time to complete. Have fun with your guests.
ManicDdaily said:
Coming right over, Victoria. Glad to see you. k.
Kristina said:
Heading out the door in a few but already have a thought on the prompt. Will have to work on it later!
brian miller said:
nice…look forward to it….
Kristina said:
Okay, got it up
flipside records said:
You’re so cute, K. I love the eggs frying on the ground and elephant’s head. 🙂
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks so much. Poor guy is pretty hot. k.
sonny said:
i’d say summer is my favorite…but then i’d say the same about autumn or winters or every other mth….even the monsoons right now…..lovely theme….glad to be joining this time…..:)
brian miller said:
great to see you here sonny…be over in a minute…
ManicDdaily said:
Yes, I agree. All seasons are great to write about, I think.
poemsofhateandhope said:
Funny how this prompt landed on the hottest day of the year in the UK…it’s ok for me though…. I’ve thrown all the food away and moved into the fridge
brian miller said:
wont that be a surprise for the next one to look in for a drink…smiles…
ManicDdaily said:
Ha!
ManicDdaily said:
You know, I used to do yoga quite a bit, and once was asked to sit beneath a wooden shelf in a very old fridge with my head on a plate for a halloween party. (slit plate.) The children were quite frightened–so if you know anyone you want to scare….
flipside records said:
Ha! I’m so visual, this is unbelievably hilarious. 🙂
hedgewitch said:
I have grown extremely tired of the summer heat–though as I also dislike winter, I try not to complain too much, but the last two summers here, with a month or so over 100 degrees, have been brutal, and the whole state is in not extreme, but the last category, *Exceptional* Severe Drought. So today, when the front came through and dropped the temps to the 60’s and dumped an inch of rain on us was a very good day. I hope to have something new up for tomorrow–if not I’ll accept your kind invite, K, to post my double huitain from Thursday–though it’s only very slightly about summer. ;_) Thanks for hosting.
brian miller said:
nice…rain is good…hoping for a bit a little later today was a scorcher…and the heat seems to be lingering a bit…
hedgewitch said:
You’re due for a break–I won’t gloat about how we have 86 for a high today then. ;_)
ManicDdaily said:
So glad you’ve gotten some relief. k.
hedgewitch said:
Yes, and so–I wrote about it. ;_) I’ll be around later after chores to read and visit. Have I mentioned, your elephant looks lovely in her fried egg millinery? though a tad bit bemused. 😛
ManicDdaily said:
Yes, he’s tired out, poor thing. (I don’t quite know why I say he.) (Ha.) k.
charlesmashburn said:
I was busy all day and I’m late getting to the Pub but thankfully Karin played right into my hands. This prompt enables me to pay another tribute to my dear wife, Sherry, on this our 17th anniversary. Thanks, Karin!
brian miller said:
hey happy anniversary man…that is awesome…smiles…hope you are doing something special together….
ManicDdaily said:
Yes, happy anniversary, Charles! k.
Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) said:
It is hot here in Texas. Summer will end by Thanksgiving maybe. Thanks for the prompt although my poem is not quite what was expected.
ManicDdaily said:
Really, no expectation. I don’t like to make prompts so long, but I always mean to stress that it is only a jumping off point, not a limitation. k.
Gemma Wiseman said:
The ambiguous joys of summer are rather remote to me right now as I’m still wallowing in Winter’s icy rain with brief glimmers of Spring on the golden wattle horizon! Just be reading and probably sighing on this one!
Gemma Wiseman said:
Back again! Changed my mind! The more i here of your summer dregs, the more I realise how remote this seems to Wintry me! I felt a poem unravel!
Gemma Wiseman said:
Perhaps I could spell “hear” correctly and precede it with “I”! OOOOps!
claudia said:
ha yes..always forget that it’s winter in australia right now..
ManicDdaily said:
No, no – I was worried about Southern Hemisphere people – you should write about what’s going on there right now, if you want, or imagine your own summers! k.
Susan said:
I enjoy your style and humor, K, so much! But I got slightly serious and self-conscious in thinking over this prompt, even after a half day listening to many versions of “Summertime” by Gershwin, ordering 2 Janis Joplin albums and reading about her early death which, of course, I had mourned and invented conspiracy theories about along with any other half hippie in college in 1970. Whew. I also have zucchini and eggs in the refrigerator. Thank you, K.
ManicDdaily said:
Yes- you know I thought a lot about here – and especially when I used my dog’s name Pearl. I thought a lot about putting a track from her in as she sings Summertime so beautifully–and of course, I thought about all those old summers that were so intense – the summer of 68 for me especially -though I was pretty young – but I am always trying to shorten –I look forward to your poem. k.
Sharp Little Pencil said:
Can’t believe you showed Pacino in Dog Days. I lived in Attica, NY, and the town never got over that scene of his inciting the crowd to shout “At-ti-CA! At-ti-CA!” at the police! Great prompt, emphasizing the fun aspects of summer. Thanks for hosting, Karin!
ManicDdaily said:
Oh dear! Well, you know, it’s a crazy scene. I honestly have been thinking a lot about Pussy Riot -and of course, that’s a whole different situation – and then also about all those minors in South Africa – another totally different situation – and then that movie popped into my head because of the title and that scene. I just wanted to broaden the mood. It is incredibly intense. I think a lot of that was ad libbed honestly- maybe then re-shot though. Crazy time in New York City at least and I can only imagine what it was like up there. k.
hobgoblin2011 said:
Karin, thanks for hosting Poetics tonight. Very appropriate theme, and open enough to offer a wide variety of responses. Can’t wait to see what everyone’s composed. Cheers
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks, Fred. I will get started reading again shortly. Look forward to yours. k.
claudia said:
good morning…just enjoyed my read through the overnights.. 9:30 over here and already unbelievably hot.. summer at its best..ha.. have a wonderful sunday everyone!!
brian miller said:
a nice gentle rain here…it is a beautiful thing….
David King said:
Good to be back. Thanks for this one to ease myself in.
ManicDdaily said:
So happy to have you back, Dave. Hope that you had a nice break. k.
brian miller said:
good morning poets…just got caught up….loving exploring all the facets of summer….def some different takes on the prompt and loving that….
great to have you back dave….
will be in and out today to catch those that stop in…two more weeks and i wont work on sundays..woohoo!
ManicDdaily said:
You are quite amazing, Brian. What you need now is some computer – iphone app maybe–that can go to blogs, read them aloud to you while you drive, and you can dictate back into it. Crazy. k.
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dani said:
happy Sunday to all!
i’ll be back to read asap.
♥
ds said:
Something must be wrong. It’s still Sunday afternoon, and I’ve posted. Hope there isn’t an overabundance of my topic, but it is August…
Now I get to read (always the best part)–yippee!
Many thanks, Karin, for the fun prompt.
ManicDdaily said:
Thank you, DS – I loved your tomato poem – a friend of mine planted some on a balcony in Manhattan that grew over 7 feet tall! Crazy. Thanks much. k.
Dick Jones said:
A third draft that just squeezes into the prompt!
Joseph Harker said:
Tossed a flowery thing into the basket…
ManicDdaily said:
On my way over. k.
Raivenne said:
Whew! Just over an hour before expiration point. This summer (here in NYC), has been worthy of the prompt.