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Crisp autumn air. Green grass cut into sections by white paint. Noise. Expectation. The snap of leather on flesh and all the crashing bodies. Impact. The world turns left then right and constricts around you. Then you get back up, go to the line and do it again.
This fall, my son, Cole (8), has been playing football. His first game was against a team that his team had never beat. Ever. In twelve years they marked an L by that game. This year they started the season facing ‘that team.’ In their only night game. Under the lights. To a crowd of several hundred.
And won.
This is not just to brag about my son or get you inspired by a David beats Goliath story—
There was a point in the fourth quarter when we knew the game was over. It was 14-0 and the clock was ticking quickly away. All our boys had to do was keep moving the ball. That is when it happened. One of the spectators for the other team—when our team tried to snap the ball—started blowing an air horn and our guys just stopped and looked thinking it was the ref and the other team stripped the ball and took off.
The ref told our coach, ‘I know it is poor character, but it’s their ball.’
Life is not fair like sometimes. Sometimes people cheat to get ahead and our system rewards them. It even happens here. People show up with no intention of mingling with anyone or visiting others, but they don’t mind getting the comments.
Since changing jobs I work until 4 pm, so I now start my rounds much later than I used to and the last several weeks as I was visiting everyone, I was happy to see people that had commented before me on some of the poems. To me that shows the health of a community.
So I just wanted to take the time to say thank you to all those out there building this community of poets, encouraging each other, pointing out what they like—you are the ones that keep me doing this week after week.
You are dVerse poets.
So let’s get this party started! Welcome to OpenLinkNight, my name is Brian Miller and I will be your host. If you are new here, let me guide you to your next steps:
- Write a poem and post it to your webpage or blog, include a link to dVerse Poets so others can join in
- Click on the Mr. Linky button below and enter the direct URL or web address to your poem as well as your name
- Visit others that you see on the list
- Use the social media of your choice to promote yourself, other poets and OpenLinkNight
- Enjoy, I think we have some of the most amazing poets that link in here & some pretty cool people as well.
See you out on the trail! ~Brian
How do you all get on Mr. Linky so FAST? 😛
fast fingers…i tell you…smiles.
Glad I made it on time for this one!
This one’s called..Wake Me Up When September Ends…a thing about the new and the old..the lost or the sold…and yet…arrival..freshness..cold and Hope..
Awwww… I miss the days of football games… but the strange things that parents do for a win, not so much.
But every Tuesday here is a win in my book. Woohoo!
woot….smiles….it has been an interesting revelation for us this year….kinda crazy at times how many get really wrapped up in it…
I know, they are speed demons. poor Mr. Linky just got piled on.
ha…sometimes for sure…welcome susan…hope you are having a great week!
Hi Brian–so far it’s great! Hope yours is treating you well, too.
its been a good week…busy one but a good one…
Nice to be meeting you all again…thanks to the indefatigable Mr. Miller for hosting. Now, off to read.
why thank you kind sir….i need to look that word up…just saying…
That must have been an amazing game.
Can’t wait to see eveyone around.
Hey, laurie….i as well…gonna jump over and start the rounds here ina few minutes after checking in….
Hey Brian! I don’t know that anyone can get to a post before you!!!! I’m always astonished. Almost everywhere I go, either you or Claudia have left your tracks! Pretty amazing.
I take it your son won even with the cheating team! Agh. Grrr.
Mine is very silly tonight, but it does have elephants. k.
So true–sometimes Brian is so fast, I can’t believe it!
And he’s always on point too. k.
whew…sometimes i wonder…lol….yeah he won….we have had our losses as well but playoffs start next week…and if we lose we will be happy to gain back a bit of life as well….
i love your elephants….
I agree, you two are really impressive! Thank you for that 🙂
Always good to hear that traditions can be broken. And I love Open Link Night, and always try to visit some poems. However, this night, it might be postponed to tomorrow morning. Now watching football. Not the American kind, though :).
ah who is playing tonight?
Returning to d’Verse and to writing with the beginning of a series. Off to read other’s posts now!
woot always great to have someone return…be over shortly….
Lack of sportsmanship really gets to me and that’s when I count on Karma to do its thing. Last night in the Giant’s playoff game a St.Louis player (Holliday) wiped out (tackled) the 2nd baseman, Scutaro, who had to leave the game with an injury. The crowd took it out on him every at bat afterward. Giants won. Karma! I share Joe’s wonder at how so many get on Mr. Linky so so. At the stoke of noon my time there were 20 ahead of me! And there are lots of comments in this community…some of us in later time zones lag behind. You and Claudia are the superstars, though.
did you see the game the other week that the home team cheared when their own quarterback got hut…ugh….ridiculous…..
Grrrr!
Greetings all! I posted a video again. This live read stuff is a little addictive. Thanks to this community for helping me over come my fears of it.
i love your video….that was awesome! would love to see you live at an open mic sometime too….that would be cool…
Thanks! If you ever make it up to the “Lost Coast” I’ll show you my secret poetry lair…
nice…will have to see what i can do…smiles.
wonderful intro brian… that’s also something that keeps me going, the wonderful people here that read, comment, take the time and encourage each other..and those that are just linking up and disappear have no idea on what they miss out…
as i’m working in california at the moment, i’ll still be some hours in the office…so will be around later to make my rounds…looking forward to it…
smiles….how is the trip going?
Nice to see you, Claudia. You are always so sincere….even when you are away from home. And yes, those who just link at disappear have no idea what they are missing.
I keep trying to teach Chloe this. That cheating isn’t winning. It’s not achieving anything really. She looks up cheats on a game she’s playing if she can’t get by a certain part and then she’ll say ‘I’ve beaten such and such” and I tell her she hasn’t beaten anything, she cheated to do it. Cheating sucks. I am with you on that. WTG on your son’s team for winning despite the cheating that happened. Love dVerse. ❤
it is interesting how the sense of satisfaction is there still when they really did not accomplish it of their own accord….my boys & i have had similar talks on the cheats for VG….
Loved your intro tonight Bri, as I love you and your work…Always happy to be here! Hugs.:))
ah and i am always happy to have you here ma’am…smiles.
And when you still take home the prize…in spite of the cheating…that’s what you call a major win! 😉 Congrats to the team…and to the most dedicated commenter I know…one day…mark my words…I WILL overtake you…(despite how awful I’ve been these past few weeks…IRL…blech!)
smiles…i hope IRL gets better for you ma’am….killer piece today….
I might say the same for yours, Poet…will be ducking out early this evening to partake of the great debate :)…should have your piece read before they get started
haha…i wanted to read it last night on the field trip in the middle of the HQs but…i had students with me….
Thanks for the introduction tonight. Stuck in endless train journey from the frozen north so very patchy Internet access. Rustled up a poem about meetings as I seem to do nothing but at the moment.
seriously, you are on a train? that is awesome if you are…i want to take a train trip again….its been a while….be over in a bit john….
Hey Brian! You have read the poem I posted today, but I don’t think anyone else here has and I am hoping for more feedback.
I want to thank you too for the football story of wins and miracles and parents’ interference and good/bad sportsmanship and team playing. I have never warmed up to either football or to football fans, but for many years I had football players taking my intro theatre classes for an easy credit. The credit wasn’t easy and these guys were the BEST–disciplined, team players, creative, loud, helpful, happy. Gosh. If they learned all that in football, I like the sport for that. Like ballet, though, I expect it is not healthy for the physical form of the young.
i think you have to be careful surely….as you know my wife was a ballerina for 18 years so i df know what they go through…and as with most anything physical there are dangers…right now i think he is leaning on going back to soccer next year….
Ach! I know Nuthin’ about fooseball! (But my husband is addicted to it!)
Thank you, Brian, and thank you all else who are present and breathing.
Some days that is not in the cards. My poem this week is tacked on the bottom of a blog entry about Malala Yousafzai….the 14 year old girl in Pakistan who was shot in the head by the Taliban for avocating education for girls. This grabbed me by the heart strings, because education for girls is not to be taken as usual, even in this country (US).
K. of Manic Daily said something last week that is true: creativity is hard enough to obtain and maintain. Those girls in Pakistan and elsewhere denied an education face a life of mundane struggle.
Sorry to be so serious, but this event has grabbed my attention…and I am obsessive about some things.
And I know a kindred struggle.
Lady Nyo
no not a problem at all…its tragic and sickening…i read your post earlier this week…and everthing i have seen since…i was watching a program just last night on it…ugh….
Great football story, bro. Yes, people cheat. That’s why I try to comment on everything, unless I truly have nothing to add. Perhaps I need to extend that to my writing. Thanks!
ha. not at all…i have to wait long enough to read you as it is…smiles.
Back to longer poems. Thank goodness — I do still know how. 🙂 Now to try to tweet it (I’m very new to Twitter).
Wow! ITS BRIAN ON THE MIC TONIGHT!!! WOOP! WOOP!… Great intro! 🙂
Many thanks for this wonderful world you have created with other poets such as yourself.
Cheerio!
smiles….thank you FK
Thanks for the intro tonight Brian–a great reason why kids should play sports, to learn about life as it is really played, light and dark sides. I expect to see more cheating on camera tonight at the presidential debate–or maybe outright lying would be a better way to put it. I’m going to do some visiting and reading now, but it may be tomorrow before I really am able to return the comments of the people who come read my work week after week–thank you for thanking them for me, boss.
ha….i have been watching…interesting to say the least…its too bad we can not do real time fact checking you know….i know we have the tech to do it…but i wish they would do pop ups or run it across the bottom…ha….
Thanks so much, as always, for this delightful forum! Although I linked my latest Limerick-Off in Mr. Linky, your “life is not fair” comment made me think about politicians. Can’t imagine why. 🙂 So I couldn’t resist linking my latest political limerick about Paul Ryan’s sham PR visit to an Ohio soup kitchen: Ryan’s Soup Kitchen Visit Doesn’t Wash.
Running in from work, just an hour since doors opened, and already at #70. The place is rockin’ today!! Good of you to remind us to “play fair.” I always try to visit as many as I can, but sometimes it takes me a couple of days to get there! BTW, you have already visited my post yesterday (always so good of you to drop by!), so you can zip right by today. Headin’ in to start reading!!
ah i still pop in to say hi you know…smiles….
Ms. Too…
“You are dVerse poets.” …what a imposing comment…we all come and go…Life gets in the way and we wander, but for me, I steer here in knowing the words are welcome and the company is always good…am I guilty of “hit and run’?…at times, but the pleasure is in the sharing and the reward is in the reading…I will pass on the cocktails today and head to the words…straight…no chaser…and I know in my sober moment of lucid enjoyment, I will find us all
we are d’verse poets
Peace
Happy open link night. Had my head in my work today..nearly lost track of time.
Enjoy! 🙂
Once upon a time I managed to visit every single one, but dVerse has taken off to such an extent that the task is daunting. I’ve developed a kind of strategy – one week I’ll tackle the first column of links. Another week I’ll pick – say – every fourth name. I must confess that when time is short I dip in and out, reading where I know I’m in for a treat. Yes, I should make a space to visit everyone I DON’T know, but my eyes and then my brain give up on me after about a dozen.
It really is so many! I don’t visit them all but I have a strategy as well. I usually start with the names right above mine and then visit up and down getting farther from my own name.
i think we all have to find our rhythm….i would not suggest visiting all…it is taxing…even if it is good poetry….but i like the few above and few below and returning comment to those that visit you….
I posted the wrong poem! If possible, could someone remove the link for me? I’ll try to get another one posted shortly!
yep…will get over and do that shortly man…
Thank you, Brian!
Great story, Brian… thanks for hosting!
I have no idea how this little poem came out of me after reading your words, but it did. 😉
Now off to reading…
cool…out there now myself…and will check back in shortly….
I will check back on the others in a bit!
http://poetrytech.com/2012/10/16/tracking/
cool deal…thanks gary….good to see you sir…
Nice intro. Thanks. I’m having trouble with Mr. Linky, but will try again later. Here’s my poem : http://creativityorcrazy.wordpress.com/2012/10/16/open-link-night-poem/ .
saw you got linked in…and nice piece tonight….
Thank you for the reminder of what makes dVerse such a beautiful place and I think you much be the fastest reader/typist in the universe, it’s like your superpower :). Now, of course, I wish I had a quick-witted name and costume idea for that but I don’t. I’m a bit intoxicated by poetry at the moment. Maybe someone else can come up with it?
Mr. Linky seems to be missing in action. I can’t link in. I’ll try again later.
Never mind. He’s back. I’m in. See ya’ll later.
that was just a little magic trick i cooked up for you…ha…
Good football story, Brian. I’m sure your talking to Cole about various things as these football games go on. Good for Cole’s team for winning against THE team. Victory is sweet; but I know you know that it is even sweeter to know that one tried one’s hardest.
You are right also about what makes dVerse a great place. People who ‘link and run’ miss out on the community feeling that has developed here. I appreciate ya’all so very much and do my best to support the community and comment on as many other poems as I possibly can.
I’m always thrilled when I can comment on someone before you do. Hard to do, as you have fast fingers. LOL
Have a good evening, everyone! I posted a ‘political’ one, but truly not connected with either US party. But can’t ignore the fact that it is Debate Night in the USA!
Haven’t been able to access Mr. Linky…not here and not to add to my post for Thursday! Anyone else having problems?
weird…really? email me your link….
checking in while I wait for the water to boil – pasta is on the menu tonight! Brian, you always do an excellent job reminding us that really what we have here is very special. I am so grateful to have found this amazing site and to read these wonderful words written by such talented poets. will read as many as I can before the debate tonight! Thanks – K
glad you are here as well…and one of the dverse poets i have met as well…our meeting while i was on vacation was as much of a testiment to what we have here more than anything…
Just loving reading all today’s poems despite the fact I’m soooooo tired and my eyes keep closing, I can’t stop . . . . just one more . . z z z zzz
get some rest rest…we will be open all day tomorrow…
My poetic news column is lacking regular readers… I hope you don’t mind me sharing it here instead of a post from my blog. I would definitely appreciate some feedback. Thanks for hosting the pub! 🙂
not at all…need to find my password so i can leave you a comment there…smiles.
it seems like i always have to eat or sleep before i get to visit others, but i promise that i do! nice to see you hosting, Brian!
hitting just a few more and then i am breaking and will be back in a bit…if i have not got to you…i will…smiles.
I’m never surprised by seeing your name on the comment section of the poems I read. I know you read each one, and I’ve never had the impression that you skim over or don’t pay attention. Your comments are always sincere and I know you really, really read each poem. How you do it is beyond me. Perhaps as one of the Dverse posts you can design a little course on how to read all the poems on the internet, post almost daily, have a full time profession, an active family, and still be a positive, friendly and all around good person who enjoys a life. I have so much to learn.
Too bad, but I guess there will always be people who try to ‘win’ by trickery or dishonesty. I’m sure you used this as a little lesson for Cole. As far as the people here who don’t comment, well they’re not the winners.
In case I haven’t said it enough lately, thank you Brian, for all you do here, on your blog, in your life. It’s so nice to know you.
Hello Brian and Everyone;
I chose for some reason to participate today for the first time. I thought I had everything under control. I put a link to dVerse in my post, shared my link on Mr. Linky, made a comment (that I guess did not stick because it is not here) and then started reading other poems.
I guess I should have read the other posts first. I thought “openlink” was a pun off of “open mic” as in the subject matter was open. As it is the poem I chose to share has nothing to due with the debates, the election, or anything of the sorts.
I am sorry for misunderstanding the pun of “open mic” as in the debates. I hope you do not all think I am the horn blower in Brian’s story. I was not trying to cheat the Pub.
Cheers,
Delaina
oh you did not cheat at all…it is wide open as far as topic….i think the debates have been on peoples minds today for sure and i have read quite a few poems on it tonight but it is wide open so you are more than welcome…smiles.
Thanks Brian;
The pour of poetry is awesome at this pub. Nice to be a part of the atmosphere. 🙂
Now if only I could post without issues.
As John Boy and Billy used to say, “Try it now!”
holy cow i almost forgot to link in… i’d miss yous guys terribly….
hey joanna…good to see you
hey…finally made it to the pub…good to be here… though very jet-lagged…so please bear with me… i must look terrible…believe it or not…just went to starbucks and ordered a coffee and when i wanted to pay the guy said it’s on the house…so…smiles..out on the trail now…
free coffee is not a bad thing….might need to mess up my hair and stop in at the coffee shop…smiles.
So sometimes life hurts, swallows you whole. Yet the struggle of living is so much more welcomed than the still stiff cold of death. Breathe, write, read, smile, repeat. You got it!
so true..
First time visiting here, thanks for the chance to share 🙂
welcome…we are glad to have you….just woke up so will be over shortly to read what you brought…
really nice verse…..felt….getting caught up, been there…i would comment but i am not on FB, so maybe a few that are can stop by….
i’m on FB.. will stop by…nice to meet you kathleen
alright…bedtime for me…good night poets..see you in the AM…
Brian, thanks for hosting tonight. Been a long day. These pints of poetry tonight definitely hit the spot.
ok…off to work now…be back in the evening..have a great day everyone!!
I am with Victoria about sportsmanship. It should be taught. Thanks for hosting.
the filter at school today is crunching on everything…so i will visit the ones from the day when i get off work….have a great day poets….
just got caught up….good stuff…will check in through out the evening as well….still 7 hours to go….bring it.
I’m coming into this pretty late–I have a lot of reading and commenting to do!
ha….welcome…be over in a few minutes….
just entered a nice piece also great poems guys keep up the fabulous work
I made it! Not sure what’s going on Brian–can’t seem to stay in the lines this week–at least there aren’t any here 🙂 Congrats on the game! (even if some people didn’t play fair)
Brian,
Great words of wisdom, to which I can greatly apply in my days at work, thank you. To all of you poets at dVerse, you are all very talented and I enjoy reading your poems when I get a free moment of time. Thank you for your hardwork and dedication. Your words bring smiles to people’s faces and joy to their hearts. I look forward to reading more from you all.
~Corbie Sinclair
awww..thanks corbie….smiles…i thik you are pretty awesome as well…
i will visit the last couple this evening….still blocked at work…