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Armistice Day, Beauty and Truce, dVerse Poets Poetics, Karin Gustafson, Let's Make Poems Not War!, Making Peace Pieces, Manicddaily, poetics, Truce Poetry
Ninety-four years ago tomorrow, at the eleventh hour of the eleventh day of the eleventh month of 1918, the armistice ending hostilities on the Western Front of World War I went into effect. Although legal documents declaring the armistice were signed in a French train car at 5:10 a.m that same day, there were, between 5 a.m. and 11 a.m., nearly 10,944 casualties. Of these, 2,738 soldiers died.
All of the commanders and many of the soldiers knew of the scheduled ceasefire. Still, troops were ordered into battle (especially, it seems, on the Allied Side) until literally the last minute, with the last Allied casualty, an American, Henry Gunther, killed at 10:59 while charging astonished German soldiers.
How, after the planned ceasefire was already announced, could generals keep sending their troops to their deaths?
It’s a complex story (and, frankly, it’s clear that some generals showed a terrible disregard for the lives of individual soldiers.) But World War I had gone on for years; millions had died. Some commanders simply could not believe that any truce would hold and wanted to better position their troops. And they were furious. Even as the whole world was exhausted.
Truces are difficult. As dearly as peace is desired, it is hard to let go of hostilities. This is not only true on the military level and, as we are all acutely aware in the U.S., on the political level, but also on the personal level. At least for me, Manicddaily, a/k/a Karin Gustafson. I’m the kind of person who often insists on being right rather than happy, on making my point rather than making peace.
Which, Poets, brings me, to today’s Poetics prompt!
Consider ‘truce’, ‘armistice’, ‘making peace’ in whatever form or with regard to whatever battle you wish.
Then write a poem. It can, if you like, be about an end to war, that frisson you get whenever you see that wonderful World War II Eisenstaedt photo of the sailor on VJ day wholly kissing a passing nurse in Times Square.

Very respectfully based on the photo by Alfred Eisenstaedt, taken on V-J Day in Times Square, NYC (adjustments by Manicddaily)
But it can also be something lighter – your making peace with your straight hair, your frizzy hair, your complete absence of hair.
Or that understanding you finally found with your neighbor when he brought back your phillips head screwdriver and you stopped screwing his _____________. (You fill in the blank).
That Christmas you realized that your folks were too old/deaf/wounded to ever make right all those things that felt wrong as a child.
Or it can be about someone else’s battles; someone else’s truce.
Take the topic where you will. The only rule: that, in writing your poem, you take no prisoners. (Which means, for those not familiar with the expression, that you try to give it your all.)
So, for any one new, Welcome! And here’s the drill:
*Link in your truce/armistice/making peace/still battling poem – (1 per blog, please)– by clicking on the Mr.Linky button just below and cutting and pasting in your link.
*Don’t forget to let your readers know where you’re linking up and encourage them to participate by including a link to dVerse in your blog post.
*Visit as many other poems as you like, commenting as you see fit. Remember that making a strong and dVerse community is just a great way to make peace! When you read someone’s poetry, you can’t help but see them as a real person.
*Spread the word. Feel free to tweet and share on the social media of your choice.
* Have fun!
For further inspiration or just interest – here are some sites about Armistice Day (now called Veterans Day in the U.S. and Remembrance Day in the UK), Wasted Lives on Armistice Day, a chilling World War I poem by one of my favorite poets, the British Wilfred Owen who was killed just one week before Armistice Day, and a Denise Levertov poem called Making Peace that calls for poets to give an “imagination of peace.” (But please do not to feel limited to writing about actual war with this prompt.)
Agh! A lot of technical difficulties on my end – somehow getting visuals from one device to another so I have pushed Brian and Claudia to the absolutely last second! I hope they will make peace with me! I am supposed to be doing Nanowrimo but will be visiting and commenting and putting up my own truce poem shortly.
peace to you k…smiles….as i said in the email, i was not sweating…smiles.
Ha! I was. I had done another image I liked better but I just could not get it to load so had to sort of start again a bit late in the game. Oh well. I liked this one too. (I’m talking about the first. The second was just speed elephant!)
speed elephant…ha…worked well…
leaving here in a few minutes….mom was in a car wreck this morning (yes, my gramma fell and broke her ribs last week)…but mom is ok….they hit her in the side and spun her into oncoming but everyone stopped…car totalled…she pretty shook up….dads out of town…so off to take care of for a bit…but i will be on/off through out the afternoon evening…
Oh my gosh, Brian. Terrible. You have a lot of adventure in your life – you handle it very smoothly but ugh- hope she is okay. k.
she seems to be…really shook up though…yeah i could do without a bit of the drama you know…ha…but at least it gives me stuff to write about…oy…maybe life will afford me a nice bird song poem…smiles…catch up in a bit…
Take care. An accident is very nerve-wracking (literally) even if one is more or less okay. k.
Brian, how awful. I am glad she is pretty much okay except for being shaken up. I’m sure she’ll appreciate you being there. Take care.
Lord, Brian–one thing after another. Your poor mom–that would just level me, even if I weren’t injured. Glad you can be there for her.
seriously hedge, its like a flip book…what is this like 2 years now…ha…
oh wow….great visuals…that first one is really cool…and the last one just makes me smile….kissing elephants…you are too cool karin….really a great prompt…apropo in our current place as a people…peace everyone…happy saturday…see you on the trail
Thanks, I realize I spelled Eisenstaedt wrong – left out e. So will go in and fix it.
Love your rendition of “the kiss!” I went with making peace with oneself, one of the tasks of the later years of life! Thanks, Karin.
Yes – mine to be a bit of that. k.
good idea really! I wish I would have thought of that. I did enjoy your poem.
I really like your examples, Karin. I do have a neighbor that’s a hoarder, but I don’t think I’ll come to peace with that for quite some time.
Today is the Marine Corps birthday, too.
Yes, I saw that. Pretty amazing. I don’t think it has anything to do with Veterans Day/Armistice Day–just falls around same time. Happy Birthday to all Marines and may they please please stay safe.
You and yours too. k.
I think it does… maybe I should call out the Marines to clean that house!
Ask them to stop by mine too! k.
I have entered an old poem for this night’s prompt as it fits in perfectly. Thank you.
Sounds great! Will check out. k.
martin…intense….great piece….
Thank you, Brian.
Loving this prompt Karin….so many possibilities with it. Fantastically written poetics prompt….this should turn up some beauts!
whassup stu! glad you got a break from your book-ing and travel-ing…always great to see you…and a killer write tonight…as i said on twitter…i may have to jump a ship just to come hear you sometime…
Timely prompt given that both sides of the pond remember those who gave life in wars we sometimes believe in. However, I have gone for a domestic spin and the truces and peace negotiated in marriage.
Understood. World War I, I think, doesn’t really get enough attention these days. Well on this side of the pond. So incredibly sad. Anything by Wilfred Owen is great – I had not realized he died so soon before the end. I don’t think I picked a best, but just one I hadn’t read before.
I also did not write about war though, but haven’t gotten mine up yet.
Excellent prompt, K–that is a gruesome poem by Owen–I read a lot of him and Rupert Brooke in my young days, possibly because their writing is so young, tragically so, as they neither lived to grow old.
Love your passionate elephants. I am working on something–will see how it goes.
It’s a terribly gruesome poem -and probably not one of his best – but one I had not read before – and very well, telling, about the war. About war. I think I liked them for the same reason – I realize now that it is probably Brooke that did that “move him into the sun” one, which I was half thinking of when I was looking through some of the Owens.
I was just so shocked to see how close Owen died to the Armistice. k.
No kidding, and I was shocked to see Brooke died of a mosquito bite gone septic on his way to Gallipoli–irony, of the bitterest sort. I am up—with a rather cynical take, I’m afraid, but that’s what I got.
I look forward to it. You see I took a kind of odd approach also. I thought afterwards that a wonderful/sad poem (or movie) could be written about that day – the culpability so tremendous – and the stories –
I enjoyed this prompt, Karin! I wrote a more traditional ‘armistice’ poem in honor of Veterans Day, but M enjoying everyone’s writing so far. So many different ways to utilize the prompt. Thank you.
A wonderful poem, Mary.
I got myself muddled tonight and wrote this thinking it was Open Link Night, but when I read the prompt it still felt appropriate to post it as it is based on some personal battles I’ve been tackling all week… One after another! Lovely to join you anyway, look forward to reading you all.
Will check it out! It really is a pretty broad topic, so don’t worry! k.
haha- i promise i took no prisoners writing my poem.. smiles.. sneaking in from beautiful laguna beach to say hello.. will read and comment in the evening and i guess by then be completely art- and beach drunk.. lots of cool art galleries here… def. stuff to inspire one or two poems…. see you later…smiles
Ah!!!! I love Laguna Beach. Of course, I haven’t been there in something like 30 years! But I really did love it the once I went in that other lifetime. I am up in the country and it is cold. (And grey.) k.
PS – loved your Haight poem! k.
I meant to say Haight Asbury -is it Ashbury – a long time ago for that too! k.
At the pub, yes war it seems to have always been there. But now we are so advanced must we kill a life we never get back. Punishment should be workouts maybe. Idk. I linked mine from a few days ago, it’s lengthy. The optimist in me wants no more war, but I know it’s not simple so I honor our men and women. Thanks.
Thanks, will check it out. K.
great prompt… so many ideas to pick from…
thanks for the inspiration, Karin!
Thank you, Miriam. k.
Great prompt Karin. I like how you let us each choose our own ‘battles’ to write about so to speak. Love what you did with ‘the kiss’ pic, great 🙂
Ha! Thanks. I’m just getting mine up and will be over shortly. Thanks much. k.
Love the prompt k!
smiles….good to see you…
Mine is up finally! Thanks for your patience. Will check people’s out – though also in and out before sun goes down here (soon.) k.
A perfect prompt and challenge, Karin; made me dig deep to fully embrace some of the feelings I have and struggle with daily as we watch War trump Peace all about us, at every juncture, every minute. It was John Lennon that became my muse today, my mantra. Hope you dig my effort.
A very personal share today…a horror of a time in my life…but all ended well. Thanks for the inspiration, Karin.
i am glad it ended well…and def felt the hard emotion of that for you..ugh to be pulled between…def hard…
Thank you for sharing and participating. These issues of divided loyalties and domination are very powerful. k.
I think it’s more common than we think… A lot of suffering going on out there.
true that…sadly
Brian, I hope your mom is going to be fine. We just had an office mate sidelined for a month because of a car accident too.
This one is a personal share from me ~ An on-going thing with my son ~ Happy weekend to everyone ~
Will check out, k.
smiles…an endearing piece grace..i like how you started in the mountains as it makes a fine allusion for our own rounds with our kids…and how hard it is too as they grow into their own…
When I was living in Belgium – Flanders to be precise – we drove to Hill 60 and what was left of the old trenches.
It was a sobering experience. In the back of this pub/museum they had an old photographic machine with images from the time so I would look at the same scene, of devastation, and then look up on green fields, a bit bumpy, but green all the same, and flowers and it was surreal.
What struck me with the images was how many women and children were seen walking or standing in the shattered cities or obliterated landscape. We live with the lie that men fight wars but they never did and still don’t.
In truth I am not greatly taken with war memorials and Rememberance days because I think they glorify and encourage something which is never noble, or honourable or heroic although those elements may exist at some times for some people.
Yes, I certain understand that point of view. The glorification can certainly be misplaced. But I think the memorial – the remembering- is important – first because of the terrible sacrifice and suffering -and perhaps as a warning if nothing else. Thanks. k.
Hey K – lovely article and love the elephant peace kiss – I wish people would leave elephants alone – just cherish their existence. I haven’t quite been able to wrap my head around a poem about peace, but will try.
Brian – hope your mom is fine and this is smoothly handled. So sorry it happened!
See everyone later hopefully!
Hi Gay – thanks. I wish people would leave elephants alone too. People are approaching this from many different directions. I wanted to honor Armistice/Remembrance/Veterans Day, but many people, including myself, are not particularly writing poems about peace so much as “making peace” – etc – Anyway – good luck. k.
thank you gay…thanks for a great form the other day as well…
I kneel at Denise Levertov’s feet, rise, and strike up a conversation.
Gosh, what a beautiful essay and challenge, K!
what an intriguing conversation that must have been…and i would wonder at the outcomes of it as well….cool piece susan…
Thanks so much – I really liked the Levertov too, but I thought that any quote from it would focus the prompt too much on war and I really didn’t want people to feel limited to war. November grey enough! Thanks, Susan – your own conversations on your poem so interesting. k.
This was very inspiring, creating my most adamant anti-war poem yet (that take no prisoners prod was what I needed). I wanted to write something positive but this is what was birthed for better or worse. Great article and I learned a lot, thank you.
Thanks so much, Anna. It’s possible that you took prisoners but they will not have much of a shelf-life.
(I’m sorry to repeat my joke! But I don’t come up with so many!) Really terrific poem. One of my favorites of yours – well I loved that cube one – whatever that form was – and many others, but great job. Thanks! k.
ooo now i cant wait….just popping back in…took mom to go see gramma (from last week) and back home now…out on the trail…
Hope they are all okay. So wonderful that you have a couple of generations going on. k.
Thank you, I was very busy today but so fortunate to get a chance to join in your fantastic prompt!
Thanks so much for taking the time. k.
alright– i’m back and ready to read..did i say k. that i love the “adjusted” pic with the the sailor and the nurse..
Ha! Thanks. I ran into so many difficulties with the first one that this one was done very fast – but I thought of it last night so was kind of determined to squeeze in. It’s such an amazing photo. I’m imagining you in LA – some sultry breeze I hope. k.
so was it hot enough out there to get a tan today claudia? smiles.
Ha! (Claudia = you can see those on the grey East Coast are jealous!)
haha…smiles…it was a wonderful sunny day…i walked the beach for hours and enjoyed every single minute of my last day here….tomorrow i’m already in a plane that takes me back home…smiles
hope the travels go well…and i know you will be happy to be home to your love…
Good evening all – Well, I couldn’t bring myself to write anything but a love poem. Hope it will suffice. K
nice…i love love poems…on my way over…
oh it more than suffices…and great to see you are well!!!!!
I look forward to it.out of commission last night. K.
I am trying (still) to make peace with myself. Thank you Karin for a great prompt.
sometimes not easy to make peace with ourselves…
but the ocean is a beautiful place to try…loved perigrinates…may have to use that this week….
Wonderful write, Karin, and glad to see you here!
So much going on right now in my regular life, that I’m not sure I can contribute a poem… (Although my new poetry book “War and Ablution” is – fittingly to your theme – a memorial to those who gave their lives for us, in revolution and in battle…)
…But it was wonderful to read your article, and see so many writing their odes to peace.
cool to see you in the pub sam…and i agree…it’s wonderful to see so many writing their odes to peace… enjoyed my time on the poetry trail… now off to get some rest..good night poets or good morning…where ever you are in the world…
Thanks, Sam – it is a very wide prompt–peace comes in many forms and truces for many periods – long and short – so feel free to put in something older that you think might fight. Nice to hear from you! k.
good to see you sam…would agree on your book as well man…but yes feel free to drop something older in…life is def busy these days…hope you are well though…
Great idea. I entered my first submission. I will check out the posts of others tomorrow. I was encouraged to join in by the lovely wordsmith Miriam. Great blog. This is a truly wonderful concept for a blog. I look forward to reading everyone’s amazing poetry. I will try to contribute as well, here and there.
mending the torn pieces to become one peace….surely enjoyed your poem david..warm welcome at the pub…
Welcome, David! Thanks Miriam! k.
welcome to the pub man…and enjoyed your first submission and esp the word play of that last line….look forward to see you around man…
Karin Ma’am,
I tried many times to post and link. I finally managed to, but I took much time. Thanks for visiting me early. Appreciate your kind words!
Hank
great anti-war poem hank
Really enjoyed your poem, Hank, and so glad you could make it. k.
glad you made it as well man…computer issues can be so frustrating…
Nice one, lots of scope, for which much thanks.
Thanks, Dave. I look forward to your poem. k.
A great prompt. Thanks.I could write several poems on this truce topic…but it’s OK I wont:)
Monstrous , that those men were orderd to attack in the last few hours of WW1 . Another example of man’s inhumanity and the insanity of bureaucracy .
Yes – to give a sense of the scope of it – there were more casualties on Armistice Day than on D-Day. Of course, D-Day was an actual attack – on Armistice Day the truce was already scheduled just hours away. k.
It’s good to take a day where we can reflect on peace with ourselves, with those close to us and those in the world who do not have peace. Some of the best poetry ever written was during times of war when peace seemed so precious.
i think we forget some of that preciousness when we are not truly at war…of it does not affect us…
That’s certainly true. Thanks. k.
@ Karin: Great prompt — and very, very cute pic. Seems like the technical challenges were easily overcome.
@ Brian: Wow, what a household of chaos — with you running around on your white stallion — keep up the good work, mate!
I’ve discovered that “Forms” can be a blessing when inspiration is dry.
thanks sabio…hoping that the time of chaos will soon be over, but it is family you know…and when it is family you are there to do whatever…
Ha! Thanks, Sabio – Brian is very like that – I don’t think his household is chaos! But he’s certainly living in the real world with many others and is at least a hero to all of us.
Thanks – my technical challenges were with a picture I had to give up – I was using it instead of the first one – I do all my pix pretty much, and I had worked on the drawing and then transferred to a photo modifying app that wouldn’t then allow me to “share” it even with myself for some reason, so had to switch to a different app, with different options. It was fine but a nervewracking when the clock is ticking.
Forms can be a blessing. I love them. k.
Well, you pulled off this prompt superbly — and I always love your Elephants!
BTW, Karin. If you look at the bottom right side of the Chinese/Japanese Character in my avatar (Yuan), you can see it shares the body and legs of an elephant.
See here
Thanks, will do! k.
Ha! Thanks for the Kanji site – sorry if mispelling – well I’m not sure it’s THAT elephant like, but it is a beautiful character and very interesting analysis. Thanks much. k
I think I have visited everyone but if you are on the list and haven’t stopped by -please do send a comment! Thanks to all for your wonderful poems. k.
good morning… had no coffee yet but catching up with the overnights..smiles
about to catch the last few before i check out of the hotel and make my way back to germany…see you on the flipside…
Have a super safe trip back, Claudia. It must be an immensely long flight. Bring hand sanitizer!!!! (Against colds.) I’m not in the least germ-phobic, but it’s pretty easy to get sick on long distance flight! Take care, k.
yeah…12 hours flight plus 3 hours in advance at the airport plus mad traffic ride to LAX plus train ride from zürich to basel… sums up…gonna be a long trip..i have a good book though to keep me company…and a laser sword to fight the germs…see..i’m already in a bit a silly mood…smiles
Ha! I never think of the germ stuff until it’s too late, or until I’m giving advice to someone else!
But that’s a mammoth trip. Hopefully, they will not bother you all the time! Take careK.
hope you have a great trip claudia….and hope you enjoyed your time…i think you did…enjoy that book…and see you soon.
yeah…def. enjoyed my time here..met some awesome people and was kinda tough to say good bye…so i’m leaving with a tear and a smile…
just swinging back through making sure I have caught everyone, still a few hours to go…so i will stop back in the AM to catch any last minute poets….
thanks to those that visit other as well…you make it a community and not just a cork board…smiles.
Some really wonderful last minute posts – I hope people can go through the list – just some great ones here slipping under the wire! Thanks to all for participating. k.