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Samuel Peralta here…
In 2000, the United Nations opened a reading series called Dialogue Among Civilizations Through Poetry.
For its spotlight piece, the UN chose the poem “Planet Earth” by the renowned Canadian poet P.K. Page, to be simultaneously read at locations around the globe – including at the UN headquarters in New York, Mount Everest, the South Pacific, and Antarctica.
“Planet Earth” was the one poem that Patricia Kathleen Page wanted to be remembered for.
Fittingly, the poem is a glosa, a form of poetry re-discovered and popularized by Page, and was inspired by four lines from the poem “In Praise of Ironing” by Pablo Neruda.
At once a tribute to Neruda, but with a thematic independence, “Planet Earth” sings.
Its full text can be found here.
If you were here two nights ago on Open Link Night, and checked out the link to my Semaphore poetry blog, to my poem “The Dream”, you opened a window into a form of poetry that, for me, has proven amazingly liberating despite its structure.
If you missed it, here’s the poem again, a glosa inspired by four lines from P.K. Page’s “This Heavy Craft”; I’d completed it days after she’d passed away.
THE DREAM
where a bird
night after starry night
while I’m asleep
unfolds its phantom wings
— P.K. Page
is perhaps
a dream of you.
And the bird your
last unfinished verse
before you fell to earth.
And the night this world
without you, suddenly
overwhelmed with
loss, a song unheard,
where a bird
finds feathered rest.
And I am stirred
to whisper words
as would fly through
this glass air, as would
recall you, bright
as metal, incandescent
coal, rose-fragrant
words to take flight
night after starry night
when your absence
tests this faltering
hologram of faith.
No, not my words, but yours,
migrant across the pages,
flying across the deep
pleated blue of the ocean,
like arial shadows
in memory steeped.
While I’m asleep
your verses thread
into my dream,
as if they would embroider
with flowers and birds
this heart that only knows
that you are missing
still. Night after starry night
while I’m asleep
your poetry sings,
unfolds its phantom wings.
The glosa is a form of poetry from the late 14th century and was popular in the Spanish court.
The introduction, the cabeza, is a quatrain quoting a well-known poem or poet.
The second part is the glosa proper, expanding on the theme of the cabeza, consisting of four ten-line stanzas, with the lines of the cabeza used to conclude each stanza.
Lines six and nine must rhyme with the borrowed tenth.
There are no rules governing meter and line length, except that traditionally, they emulate the style of the lines in the cabeza.
Because of its structure, the glosa is ideally used as a poem of tribute – as Page did for Neruda in “Planet Earth”, and as I do for Page in “The Dream”.
In writing that tribute, you weave your lines with the lines of the opening cabeza, collaborating, as it were, with the spirit of the poet you honour.
I’d only ever known P.K. Page from her work, but when she passed away, it was like I’d lost someone I’d actually met.
My heart was torn and I wanted to say how much I missed her though I didn’t know her, how it was sad that after so much poetry no more words would be written…
But I also wanted to say that that the words that she had written – her influence, her inspiration – would live on, in my heart, my thoughts, and in my own poetry.
It was thus a great honour for me when “The Dream” was selected for publication by The Malahat Review as part of its permanent online tribute to P.K. Page.
Tonight, I invite you to contribute your own glosa, a traditional form that lends itself so well to contemporary poetry.
Use it to pay tribute to one of your favourite poets, songwriters, mentors – via the cabeza and the intertwining of that writer’s words with your own.
I hope you’ll join me in writing and sharing tonight.
Thank you.
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Samuel Peralta – on Twitter as @Semaphore – is an award-winning Canadian poet, author of The Semaphore Collection – Sonata Vampirica, Sonnets from the Labrador, How More Beautiful You Are, Tango Desolado and War and Ablution – all Amazon Kindle top five best sellers in poetry.
His poems have appeared in Existere, The Malahat Review, Metazen, MiPoesias, Poets and Artists and other journals and anthologies. Literary honours include awards from the BBC, UK Poetry Society, a Palanca Award, and shortlists for the League of Canadian Poets, ARC Poem of the Year, and the Elgin Award.
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this is a cool form sam…first i thought i go goethe…then rilke… finally i went with tolkien…not exactly a poet but def. a writer i adore much… happy thursday everyone…just coming in the door after 14 hours in the office…so i may be a bit slow getting around…ha….i need some poetry to revive me again…smiles
I think Tolkien is a poet. I think he wrote poetry outside The Lord of the Rings. 😉 but it was nice choice no matter what. I contemplated to use Highway to hell 🙂
haha…now that would’ve been interesting as well…smiles
nice…you should totally write that for OLN…
I second the motion!
I’m working on it 🙂 I think I can do it
Living’ easy, livin’ free
Season ticket on a one way ride,
ask me nothin, leave me be,
takin’ everything in my stride …
Oooops – a minor memory leak just occurred … smiles
Smiling back
Highway to Hell… now that would make for one interesting cabeza…
Tolkien sounds great!
Sam, a glosa isn’t written that quickly! I can give you one I wrote fairly recently, using Shakespeare’s Sonnet 76 , http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2012/11/18/glosa/
or I can write a new one which will take several days!
What I’d really like to do is base my glosa on PK’s Planet Earth glos – is that a step too far? I’ll make a tentative start, and await your answer
Another question (Sorry!) can the cabeza be not a self-contained quatrain picked from the original poem intact, but separate lines from different parts of the poem, arranged in a different order, a bit like a cento?
we have to wait for sam to answer that question…i personally would think it’s possible….but…
Thanks Claudia. I’m kind of freewriting at the moment and it may all come to nothing! I’ll wait for Sam.
I’m in transit from work! But I didn’t want to leave you hanging. Of course, it’s permissible to use a cabeza from “Planet Earth”! Also, the glosa is such an old form that there have been many variations to the classic structure over the course of its history.
In addition to the glosa’s traditional 10-line stanzas, one will find from 4- to 8-liners. Some poets will impose meter and rhyme. Some variations repeat the first line of each stanza and the last line (borrowed from the cabeza). The borrowed line sometimes comes at the top of the stanza, or in the middle.
So… can you use a cento of four lines from a poet as the cabeza? I personally wouldn’t do it, as part of the fun is writing around an existing quatrain. I haven’t seen any example of it (which is not to say that examples don’t exist). I would only do it if the four lines I choose make a thematic logic, and if I were sufficiently confident in my ability to write traditional glosas (which is why I’m pretty confident in breaking traditional sonnet rules).
It wouldn’t be a traditional glosa. However, if you’re conceptually happy with it, you’d be in good company given how the glosa has been experimented with in the past.
Thank you so much Sam. I think I will break with tradition – the four lines I have chosen do make sense in the order I’ve given them. But that’s not to say that’s how it will end up! I have a tentative first stanza and rhymes in place for the rest, but you know better than most how poems have a will of their own!
I am so grateful to you for breaking your journey home. I have to go to bed now, but you can be sure the words will be churning away ready to go in the morning.
look forward to it viv…
Give us both old and new, we don’t mind!
Happy Thursday and FormForAll everyone!
I almost feel as though I’m cheating here. The Glosa is my favorite poetry form and I’ve submitted several in dVerse for Open Link Night. In fact, the my poem for OPN was a Glosa. If I’d known this was going to be this week’s form I’d have saved it for today.
don’t ever save a poem…they are meant to be spilled…recklessly…just saying…smiles..and i don’t mind cheating…smiles
Love this form. I really like collaborative poetry, and doing this you can collaborate with any poet of your choice.
Couldn’t have said that better – glosas enable you to collaborate with any poet of your choice. 🙂
So true Claudia, so very true.
Sam, as there is no set rule that says one must not let the other lines have their own rhyme, my Glosas rhyme throughout, with the required rhymes incorporated within. So in the vein of “cheating” I’ve posted an old Glosa of mine, but one never submitted here on dVerse. And, it just happens to work with the prompt.
I love it when a prompt come together.
And yes, I love it when a prompt comes together!
Hmmm… how about a glosa based on an A-team script? 😉
I am so glad to find another glosa-lover here, this will be great! I am looking forward to seeing what your offering will be like.
A very lovely and challenging form Sam, thank you for introducing me to this ~ I have enjoyed taking my inspiration from published writers but never knew that you can weave their work like this into one own words.
Wishing you all a Happy Thursday ~
Grace
kinda like a duet…
Yes, weaving an admired poet’s words into my own composition, like a duet, is amazing. Thanks for the kind words…
I love this form–and will take it and play with it a bit–
i hope you do audrey, it was a lot of fun…
Looking forward to see what you make of it, Audrey!
sam, i had a lot of fun with this form…its really not as hard as it first seems…
sorry i am late…we are testing at schools and the filter would not let me get here…oy…only 8 more days of school…
Yes, it looks daunting at first, but then you realize that the rules are actually quite minimal – the cabeza lines re-used at the end of the stanzas, and then a couple of other rhyming lines, with no strictness on required meter or rhyme or line-length. It’s a very free-verse-friendly form, isn’t it?
Getting late-ish here now, and I have a creative writing group to lead in the morning, and preparation to do for Sunday, but I so want to have a go at this. Several potential problems occur to me:
First, choose your poet;
Second, choose a poem by your poet;
Third, choose a quatrain from that poem.
I imagine that once these hurdles are overcome, things might become a little easier, but as someone who suffers from terminal indecisiveness, I’m not sure … smiles
haha…i hear you…i think on the first, you just have to decide…once i did i sat down and flipped through looking for quatrains, so i did not put much emphasis on the second step…
i laid out the four end lines on my paper as a road map as well…and asterix-ed rhyming lines….method to the madness you know…
Just go for the first poet/poem/quatrain on your list, and promise to do glosas for the others later down the road!
oh, Samuel. Once again I am nearly quivering, having been struck by the sheer power and beauty of another of your writing prompts. Your poem (I missed it earlier) is so magnificent that it could have been the only one published between the covers of The Malahet and her craft would have been properly praised. I hope to clear time to attempt this one, but if I don’t get back here in the next hours I wanted you to know how much I appreciate you and your inspiring instruction.
Lydia, thank you so much for stopping by, and your kindness. I’d love to see what you make of this form, so I hope you make it within the time allotted… but if you don’t, link it in OLN or somewhere, and feel free to tap me on the shoulder on FB or Twitter to let me know that you’ve put it up.
Well, it took all night but I wrote a glosa. (Disagreeing with Brian that it was not difficult!) Will see others after I try to sleep after such a stimulating prompt. Thanks ever so, Sam, for this one.
Wowzers! Been without the internet for two weeks, back online today and discover this stretching challenge. Many thanks Sam for a form I’ve not come across. My raw effort is up! Cheers all
you did well, it carries a rather ominous tone..but def felt….
Very cool! I’ll be heading out on the poetry road later tonight, so I’ll keep my eye out for your work.
It’s always Friday morning here by the time I see these prompts, and Friday is my very busiest day and evening. I do so wish there were more than 24 hours in which to respond! Would it hurt to make it 48? (Brian? Claudia?) Don’t know if I’ll manage this one in the time, but am very glad to become acquainted with the form, of which I was unaware, and also to learn of P.K. Page, of whom I was also unaware.
OK, off and out now, for the next 7 hours. 🙂
ah but there is 33 hours…and you still have 29…
the reality is that those that join as late as 33 hours rarely visit anyone else…and we have OLN as the catch all, so if you write one and you have missed the prompt you can always put it in there….
Rosemary… as Brian said, if you miss it – and I know sometimes the forms can be complex, so it does take time – link it up at OLN and please, feel free to tap me on the shoulder on FB or Twitter so I know you put something up! There’s so much to work on and read these days, that I know I miss a lot of excellent poetry.
Thanks, guys. Home now, with a busy evening ahead after a long day. We shall see! I really want to give it a try, though. I do sometimes use OLN when I dont have enough time on my Friday. 🙂
Thanks for introducing me to the Glosa Sam – second attempt but finally got there. It is after midnight here now – so intend to read others works and then go to bed. Have a good Friday folks.
Anna :o]
Hi Anna, glad you could make it out! I’ll catch your site when I get out on the road. Looking forward to it!
woot…glad you made it anna after stopping by this morning…just got back from a school play and will check yours out..
Wonderful, Sam. I’ve put my pen to paper and will see what I can conjure up.
That’s fabulous, Beth, I know whenever I visit your site you’ve always got something remarkable to read.
http://roslynrosssmallstones.blogspot.com.au/2013/05/transformed.html
I have not had much time for poetry of late and not sure I could manage a glosa but I look forward to reading what others contribute.
heya…good to see you…i bet you could…its a bit intimidating on the surface but actually lays out fairly easy…the choice of cabeza def plays into it…as you have to think in terms of each line being an end line…
can’t believe i am defending a form here…haha
…And don’t forget P.K. Page’s work as well. As much an introduction to the glosa, I’m hoping this introduces a few more people to her work, which is well worth seeking out. Thanks for dropping by!
Been out today, but looking forward to trying this, Sam. Very fun and interesting prompt. Hopefully I’ll make it for tomorrow…if not, OLN. (That’s becoming a habit with me.) Thanks for the inspiration. I’ll visit tomorrow.
nice…looking forward to read what you will come up with victoria..
The glosa is easier than it looks, but I can understand the time it takes to polish something up to the point where you feel comfortable with sharing it with the world. I’ll be looking for that, if I miss it, feel free to tap my shoulder!
Ah! this is quite a form, perhaps, reads the most challenging of all the few that I have attempted here. Now I am in line with Rosemary. Its friday morning by the time i see the prompt and then work and a three yr old waiting for me to get back home and all the etc., at home. But have time till sat mornign to post….let me see and to catch up on others too! I had to give OLN a miss this week…It becomes so tough to catch with 100 and odd wonderful poems!!
It’s a wonderful form, and I love the way it enables me both to pay tribute to and collaborate with a poet that I admire… am looking forward to your offering!
glad you made it back…i def enjoyed your verse, what a person you chose to honor as well in your words…
Wow–that was a challenge. . .thanks, Samuel for the introduction and for putting us up to it. 🙂
For some reason, my title didn’t save, but it’s “Image”
I relinked as my first attempt had a glitch.
Oh, very glad to see you here, and that you took up the challenge! It’s easy to fall in love with the glosa form, isn’t it?
Yes, looking forward to trying another soon. Lots of poets came to mind for this form of tribute.
Oh Samuel, I feel as if we are somehow breathing the same rarefied air just now. I only just returned from a short vacation in Victoria with a slim volume of Page’s tucked under my arm. Her “Hologram” is a set of glosas paying homage to those who she feels most influenced her own work and which, she says in her forward, took her many years to complete, as she struggled to do justice to the likes of “Neruda, Thomas, Bishop, Stevens and Sappho” to name just a few…I too learned of her shortly after she died but became so fascinated with her (I am a great fan of the cento so thought her immersion in this form quite intriguing) that I also felt as if I must have known her and began to read everything I could find of hers.
I am sure that she is somewhere smiling contentedly that “The Dream” graced The Malahat’s tribute and as such a marvellous example of the glosa…it’s so wonderful that you’re carrying on the form in such grand tradition and have introduced it here as well.
I hope I make it in time tomorrow to get one together for this prompt. It’s a challenging form to be sure but well worth the effort. Thanks so much for sharing the elucidating info and your own work as well. As always, it’s a pleasure to read what you put up.
You’re carrying a copy of “Hologram”? Excellent! You’ll be able to appreciate all the other allusions to P.K. Page’s work that I’ve put throughout “The Dream”, including the direct reference to that book, in the ‘hologram of faith’. References to her poetry fill this tribute poem, it’s self-referential, a subtle ars poetica.
I’d love to sit and discuss P.K. Page’s work with you sometime, she is such a craftsman, always precise in her language, something I aspire to… And thank you so much for your kind words on “The Dream”.
thank you Sam, for this wonderful prompt and for introducing me to this beautiful poem by P.K.Page.. i truly loved working with this
You are truly welcome, I’m glad you enjoyed the essay, and hope you read more of P.K. Page’s poetry! I look forward to reading more of yours!
Interesting form this, much enjoyed attempting it – though I think I may have cheated a bit on the tenth lines! Thanks for this one.
David, cheating is allowed, this isn’t the university entrance exam! Thanks for trying this out.
Hi Sam, Stopping by to read about this new form I have not tried yet. I’ve decided to give it a shot; however I work the weekends and can’t put full attention to it like I want to until after tomorrow, too late to share here. Will share at d’Verse OLN when completed though. My biggest challenge is not the idea or the format so much as the free verse flow and style. Will let you know when mine is complete and ready to go. Thanks always for these wonderful ideas that help us stretch and learn something new!
Hi Ginny, definitely tap me on the shoulder when you link your glosa in, I’d love to see it…. and thanks for the kind words about the essay!
My first time here. I may give this intriguing form a try this weekend. Thank you, Samuel!
warm welcome Linda…and i agree, it is an intriguing form..less complicated than it looks on first sight and a lot of freedom between the rhyming pillars as well..
welcome linda….hope you do…and if the linky is closed we have a big ole poetry party on tuesday you can add it to…
Thanks so much for the warm welcome, you two. I’m loving all the wonderful poetry here!
Welcome, Linda! ….I just got back from a long workday, so am catching up. Thanks so much for stopping by – there’s a lot of excellent poetry to find here, as well as great camaraderie 🙂
Just loved this form. Thank you Sam. My cabeza was an aria from Handel’s opera ‘Semele” I am going to do some more of these.
Oh, a cabeza from an opera! That is unique – will keep an eye out for this!
I enjoyed writing to this form
nice job on tightening the form man…
Glad you enjoyed this, it’s a wonderful form, a good balance between structure and free verse.
Whew…made it. Not entirely satisfied with the outcome but I think glosas are something (like most poems) that could be reworked many times. Also, I write differently when I feel overly emotionally invested as I did with this poem. This child’s death occurred over this past weekend and at a restaurant with which I’m very familiar…the grief ripples have been enormous. One interesting outcome–I’d hate to call it a bonus given the circumstances and subject matter–but while looking for my four lines for the glosa, even though I’ve read Neruda’s “Ode with a Lament” before, this is the first time I noticed he wrote it “for his mortally sick daughter”. It’s funny but when you think of a poet in one way (romantically in Neruda’s case) it’s easy to overlook the other facets of his life.
http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2013/05/table-for-four.html
I’m really glad to read that you were emotionally invested in the glosa you were writing – it does make a huge difference in the quality. Also, what an amazing thing you found about Neruda, it’s true that we think of his poetry mostly in the romantic sense, but definitely there would be other aspects of his life that would inspire his poetry.
I think this is the most exciting form prompt I have ever tried to interpret. I hope glosa will come round again in the cycle. Sam ,I am cheering your skill at steering us through the maze. I think everyone without exception has loved this one.
Oh, so glad that this one worked out! The glosa is a favourite, and I am hoping to be able to write more of them. It has great appeal, I think, because of the balance between structure and free verse, and the ability to pay tribute to and collaborate, as it were, with a loved poet.
This is both an interesting prompt and lovely tribute, Samuel. I am just getting to it today and won’t make the Mr. Linky time-out but will def. be getting my hands into this compelling form.
Jane, I’d love to see your glosa, so please, whenever you put it up – even if you miss Mr. Linky for this cycle – give me a tap on the shoulder on Twitter or Facebook, so I can have a read. Thanks!
Thanks for the prompt, Sam. Today, not only did I complete a difficult challenge but also got to know Langston Hughes as I had to look for poems that I could possibly work with. This was like an extra-difficult crossword to finish but was ultimately satisfying in the end. I did have fun writing (until I had to scramble for words that will meet the rhyme requirements). 🙂
hughes is awesome….great choice…have a huge book of his complete works…you did really well with it…
Thanks for stopping by, Imelda, I just got home from a late business dinner, so I am a bit behind, but am looking forward to sitting down and reading what I’ve missed. Glad you had fun!
whew, made it… with half an hour to spare! 😉
5:50 am here – now for a cup of coffee and then off to reading… good morning all!
Oh so glad to see you here Miriam, and I’m glad you made it under the wire! Am going to look at poetry now, in between sips of my morning coffee… 🙂
Dang! Missed it by two hours. (That is often the case: frustrating to so nearly make it. I should just resign myself, I think, but I always fall into the trap of hoping.)
It was really hard, but I’m so glad I did it.
It’s here: http://passionatecrone.blogspot.com.au/2013/05/wanting-to-comfort-sylvia.html
But if this is missed by too many, I’ll also link to the next OLN.
you should def. link it to oln rosemary and maybe visit some of the others, leaving your link for them to visit back… on my way over to you..
Yes, Rosemary, link it up at OLN! Looking forward to it!
It took me a while to visit every blog linked in Mr. Linky and in the comments – but I finally did it.
I have to say that this outing has been the most enjoyable of my entire tenure (so far) at dVerse Poets.
Despite the time constraints, the glosas collected here were beautifully done, and I don’t know if it’s the fact that most of the glosa is essentially free verse, which many are quite comfortable with; or that the fact that one is honouring a loved poet strengthens the writer’s resolve to give the piece everything they’ve got; or the fact that the rhyme and tradition to emulate the honoured poet’s works tend to produce poems with a voice that combines the best of the source and the writer.
Whatever the reason, I’ve read some beautiful, moving poetry over the past few days, and I thank you all for joining me.
Good-night, until next time.
Have to share this, a new glosa by Ginny Brannan, coming in outside Mr. Linky… but so welcome!
http://insideoutpoetry.blogspot.com/2013/05/yet-love-remains.html
And the glosas keep coming, this one from Susan…
http://susanspoetry.blogspot.ca/2013/05/a-song-for-song.html
I really enjoyed this form with a humble tribute to my favorite Frank Herbert lines. Thank you Sam. It was a real treat getting to know the gloss.
I hope you know how appreciated you are.
You forgot the link to your glosa, glad you were able to put one together!
http://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.ca/2013/05/liberation.html
…And thank you so much for the kind words…
And yet another one – this one from Bjorn, built on a cabeza from AC/DC 🙂
http://brudberg.wordpress.com/2013/05/28/color-of-concrete-acdc-glosa/
Birth Our Future
Living capsules
anchored by density
yet jostled amongst
history and space
This freedom of will
a confining zone
Hear the chanting
Through countless rounds
Of Repeated unknowns
‘Our lives are not our own.’
Inviting light’s flow
flood ancient mantras,
moving cornered
thoughts to
possibility’s curve
which upon descent
into time and space
easily transmit
truth’s current.
We are bound to others, past and present,
relay stations
conducting
thought’s signals
from there to here
Abandon
past blindness
around why
we exist as
Creation’s bases
and by each crime and every kindness,
reveal
variation
expansion
of form
a voltage
enabler
of fount’s
potential
Upon Earth’s alter
we birth our future.
© Lori Fleming, 2014
This glosa woven from the following:
Our lives are not our own.
We are bound to others, past and present,
and by each crime and every kindness,
we birth our future.
~ David Mitchell
Cloud Atlas