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Thanks for being here with us this Saturday afternoon. I can only hope that wherever you are in the world, the weather is as beautiful and inspiring as it is here in Western New York right now.
For today’s Poetics I’d like for us to delve into all things beautiful. There really isn’t any one way to feel or in that matter, express beauty. The entire process is quite subjective, and life offers every perspective something that will entrance the beholder, stirring forth emotions of expression that release endorphins, calm the clutter in the mind and just inspire us to reflect upon the wonder that exists all about us.
Certainly it is easier to find beauty on a day like today. All the light bathes everything in its well-lit path. The greens look greener; the sounds of children playing in their yards echo a free and youthful vibrancy we often tend to not remember during the cold and wintry months. But again, this is just one aspect of the beauty that is, again, literally everywhere. When approaching such a subject, I like to think one’s impression and reaction to what they consider to be beautiful comes from a place within, a place that is specific to each and every person. What I find beautiful, another may consider being mundane or even devoid of attracting qualities. This is one of the reasons that make humanity so intriguing from a psychological viewpoint. Oftentimes we keep our likes and dislikes inside of us. This is fine, if it fills you, it still fills you however you choose to filter your expressions. However, I find it so incredible to find out how and what others visions of beauty are, and a lot of this comes down to what one believes in and how they use that belief to process their art.
I believe in love. In fact I’m a fool for it. It is in my nature, and I make no apologies for what permeates my consistency.
I believe in the beautiful. My vision of beauty is not the Hollywood Pin-Up ideal, however, that vision certainly does garner its own appeal. I believe in points of attention and the extrapolation of traits and characteristics. These, one, two, three, four, five or six, perhaps more, each can represent the beautiful, superseding all else that may deteriorate the vision seen by narrower eyes.
I love contrast. I so very much delight in its existence. There, in my opinion, is no better way to immerse the senses in what love or beauty stands for, than to create a universe of abysmal things, where the most prominent point(s) of attention, the one(s) that drown(s) the rest out, is the object of one’s truth and affection. This ideal, I believe, is the purest avenue for eliciting overarching depictions of just how one feels within. Such a process seems to me as idyllic when one is immersed in the whirlwind of emotions spawned by or towards your inamorata(s). Often, amongst the landscape of bleak or darkened cartography, the beautiful will transcend all things ugly and from this contrast, the most heart-felt serenade of beauty is birthed.
I tend to harp upon a topic until it screams at me with its brilliant lungs. Then I go back and slay the words that the sentiment had broken apart from. If a sentiment is pure, I feel there should be no limitation to one’s devotion. The same metaphor, each identical contrasting thought, is wonderful in its own manner. Each offers up a different facet of adoration. Each exemplar brings with it, a sense of wholeness, and a form of balance, truly worthy of the deportment found within the author’s soul.
There are many ways to describe a work of art, which, to me, is exactly what one’s predilections of all things beautiful stand to be. The object(s) themselves are of beauty and then, through this object, another work of artistry is created within the beholder’s being. Such delineations can be rare to find, yet many also appear mere centimeters from one’s last vision. Here, we may believe we’ve seen a beauty being comparison, one that we feel strongly will never be experienced in our lifetimes, yet, in the next frame, life surprises us, by offering a vision that is no less provident than the image seen but moments earlier.
Nevertheless, with this all said, I find my metaphors varying slightly in each depiction, where the slightest deviation bears the fruit of a brilliance many moons away. The beautiful never fails to amaze me. The slightest detail often contains the code to internal significance. Each import to the sentiment exposed within, where, residing in us, lives the expressions of many lifetimes, all seemingly crafted out of what the casual observer could claim to be but a slim difference from the ordinary.
Each person has his or her own unique definition of beauty. This is, in itself, is an amazing feat, not in regards to individuality or preference alone, but as to how the nature of what is conceived as beautiful to one, can be ugly or commonplace to another. This notion, to me, is what living is about, to be open and aware to the many variations of beauty that exist in life. If one keeps their eyes alert to possibility, he or she can travel dimensions and worlds away, into a rapture that is only a mere vision from where we currently stare.
And to those who claim they can only see the darkness or the ugliness in the world I truly feel sorry for them. These people only see those images that rage easily, as they find a sickened sense of solace in observing misery. These are those who allow their souls to fall prey to such vulgarities the world has to offer, never taking that extra moment to find the silver lining or moment of natural beauty amongst the carnage they too easily succumb to.
Yet, it is true, that such victims become inundated by those sights painted, and painted prevalently they are, across life’s informational mediums. Such scenes exist in abundance, from the violence and depressions depicted on our televisions, to the biased and deflated worldviews printed in our newspapers and magazines, and to those stories of pain and suffering that readily are labeled as public interest stories and thusly fill up so many of the sites frequented on the internet.
While it is important to keep abreast on current events, it is also ultra-imperative to keep one’s bearings, to remain positive and open, even when things are bleak, oppressive and seemingly untenable. Unfortunately there are many more who fail to see beauty and to those people, all I can say, is that it is a pity that they choose to keep their minds closed off to the never-ending offerings that abound and teem, within every single moment of every single day.
For those that truly remain open to the beautiful in the world, they will find it, in folds and folds, as beauty is ever-present and available, to all who choose to see. And those who can and do accept such visions, well, then, I believe it is easy to claim, that these people will never see the world the same again.
Contrast, again, is a very important device at one’s disposal. By choosing to illustrate your choices in such a manner, you are not only illuminating the beauty that you wish to be found within, but are also creating a sense of balance as well. Balance is wholeness and becoming whole should be a quest we all heartily welcome in our lives.
I’ve included a few examples of how one can harvest beauty, or anything for that manner, by using contrast as a thematic point of emphasis. There are many, many variations and methods for using such a powerful device as contrast, these are but two of the ways I’m choosing to include for the purpose of highlighting and heightening the use of beauty in one’s writing.
Example:
A tiger, in all her glory, seductively prowls the terrain. It slow-dances across the conquered gazelle, whose flesh lay tattered and torn. Yet, amidst the carnage, one cannot ignore such an observation, as that of a heart that beats still, proving the glory, persistence, endurance and depths the heart can take, making such grand impressions upon each and every of of us that chooses to observe with an openness rarely found in the modern world.
This passage takes the predator and the prey, romanticizing elements for each, which, in metaphor, both fit aptly to the object of one’s affection.
Then, you could also have something like this:
A million hours have been spent descending past the wreckage. The plane was supposed to take us to the
Promised land, the site as to where all dreams would find their realization. Instead, nightmares cloister the atmosphere, deep, dark terrors of the mind. The flames rise above the smoke and signal victory to the watching heavens. Congested from the massive inhalations, the lungs feel as if they shall combust upon the next jag of wind expired. Each step taken is a year removed. Bone fragments pierce through flesh, basking in the ill-tempered breeze. Step upon step, the mortality within subsides, until, there is flat rock and no further steps to take. We pander onward, feeling the wretched heat pulsate up through the rubber soles and into the sensitive portions found in the arch of each foot. The piercing sensation, like a thousand white-hot daggers injected with a fervor unknown to any living being, does not subside, yet garners more and more fury with each step taken into this darkened realm. Beneath the wreckage, now, many, many miles above, we pray for finality. Exhausted, ravaged and ready to desist of whatever hope still remains, we encounter yet another obstacle. The sound streaks upwards and out, swarming about us like a tempest on holiday. The tonality is deafening, and only described as a billion souls screaming in the most brutal agony imaginable. Their suffering absorbs the sky and all its surroundings. The din and calamity grows and soon is everywhere, no matter the direction or determination, it will be heard and each sound will be felt a thousand times over. Yet, therein lives the contrast. Amidst the screams of torture, an abruptness collides. Where each victim’s plea for cessation is the like the loudest cry imaginable, a mesmerizing countermeasure comes to life. As these poor souls, brittle from eons of such extreme examples of sadistic gamesmanship, simply wish for relief to end their ordeals, a shift in observation reveals a light previously cloaked within the miserable setting. Here, a single harp is revealed. Its beautifully cleansing notes could be heard a trillion miles away. It emanates from some unseen dimension, well beyond anyplace, man, living or deceased, is accustomed to. And despite the present situation, this single pluck of string fills the heart with the most resounding thralls of joy, hope and a beauty that shall pervade the depths of the chasm itself.
Obviously this passage is much longer than the first example, yet it also contains the contrast of desire and reality, good and evil, pain and endurance. But most of all, it shows how a trait of beauty, in this case a simple sound, can be so meaningful, that it can drown out the pangs of perdition, bringing forth a sense of hope, to a seemingly impossible situation previously devoid of anything remotely synonymous.
So, for today’s Poetics, get your pens ready. Dig deep down into your toolkit for metaphors, adjectives and adverbs, yes, adverbs, and create something beautiful. Although I’ve spent much time speaking on the advantages of contrast, it is not necessary for you to choose the same course for your own work. Perhaps contrast doesn’t work for you in the way it does for me. The object of this Poetics is to keep your eyes alert to the beauty that surrounds us, whether it be staring at or into the most beautiful person you’ve ever seen before, or plucking out the beauty that can be found everywhere, and then to construct your piece with this notion of beauty in mind. Contrast is but one tool at your disposal if you choose to, yet there are many, many others that you may also consider, again, as beauty is found, within everything.
Heres How It Works:
• Write your poem and post it to your blog
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just coming back in the door from the ART basel … just in time..smiles…happy saturday everyone…and happy writing
nice…went to an art festival with my boys today and chalked the sidewalks in glorious color and met another writer and spent some time talking craft…
wow..that sounds very cool
Art festivals are really fun. I was out on my “failed” adventure out west when it was going on here, first time I missed it in long, long time. Sister said it wasn’t very good this year, a lot of the standout regulars didn’t show. But you know, I think she was just trying to make me feel better about missing it. Oh, I love when I meet other writers about, typically so open we are, which makes for great conversations and craft talk is always fun isn’t it
I tend to harp upon a topic until it screams at me with its brilliant lungs. Then I go back and slay the words that the sentiment had broken apart from….ha the best description there fred….ye it is like that at times…
i have learned to see the light & the shadow…and find the beauty in each…
found a little bit for you…happy saturday everyone…
see you out on the trail…
Thanks Brian. Actually took me a long time to get over the dark clouds and find the beauty and life within the colorless or dark, but really ever since I have, even though it is at times still very difficult in certain situations, opened me up a great deal.
mine was the opposite…i saw the beauty first and had to find the shadow…
Perfect prompt, Fred. Just came in from the garden where beauty abounds thanks to the decay of last year’s leftovers. I’ll be back later to read.
nice…happy gardening victoria
Sounds great Victoria. Not a gardener per se, but I love the finished products, can spend hours just staring at everything. Lucky for me, my dad has a green thumb on both hands and does a great job. The only unfortunate thing, is that the good weather is so short in duration that we only get to really enjoy it a few months out of the year, thank God for the internet and photo sharing sites, while not possible to replace the beauty of nature up close and personal, it does offer the appeal to the eyes, which in that case we revert to our experiences to bring a presence to the images seen. Thanks.
My husband’s the real green thumb. I’m the weeder/dead-header and occasional earwig-squisher.
By the way, should anyone have penned a Father’s Day poem that they would like to share, I’ve added a link to the prompt I posted last Monday in today’s post. The link will be available till Monday 5:00 PM PDT. I would love to see some of these talented poets join in.
Been having trouble writing lately anything with focus, but I was actually planning to try write something for my Dad, so, if it comes out I’ll post. Thanks for doing that.
Somehow the simplicity of your prompt pulled at my muses, and they stalled out for a time, but then a poem began to form, filled with beauty of all kinds, some obtuse, some terrible. The poetics found their own path, created its own message, and I just held on for the ride; thanks.
gotta love it when that happens…def rings of myth good sir…
very cool when the words just flow and we only kinda have to catch them…smiles…and there are first and second commenters…ha…smiles
Glenn, love the way your piece came out, great, great job weaving storytelling and myth into the theme. Masterful. And I love when something just comes to mind, it’s truly like a gift. thanks
Beauty is easy to see now… daylight is forever, all greenery.. had to think hard for contrasts, but without contrasts the beauty goes to waste.
A wonderful saturday evening here.. had a wonderful ride on my roadbike earlier today. The early summer is so full of beauty.
smiles…sounds like a great time on that bike…and it is..spent a bit of time downtown today…a different kind of beauty…
very cool…we went with our bikes to basel as well…love my street bike.. i always feel a bit like flashdance when i ride it…smiles
We have extended the reach slightly.. so today we went for a 90 km ride on the countryside. There will be rain tomorrow…. so better do it now.
ah, miss riding bikes. Can’t do that anymore with my back, but love watching the bikes riding by. The country is so amazing this time of the year as well. Truly easy to see the beauty about. Glad to hear you’re getting some good weather as well.
Fred, your prompt is a beauty in itself. Thank you for your wonderful words! Now… poem is linked, glass of red wine (it’s 9pm here, so i’m allowed) stands ready and I am looking forward to reading about beauty – in all its facets.
Have a great day/night everyone – wherever you are…
smiles…you are in for a good night for sure…
smiles…enjoy the red wine…i’m drinking fennel tea…haha..cheers
ha, talk about contrasts… cheers!
Thanks Miriam, really appreciate that. If I still drank, it’d be a bit early for that here, but a nice glass of wine some nice summer views and a bit of a peaceful wind is always a great unwinding. Loved your poem. thanks
I’m a bit in and out today, as the beauty of life has me mesmerized. Great prompt, Fred.
nice…good to be mesmerized by life’s beauty..
thanks Laurie, love that line, beauty of life has you mesmerized. My nieces will be over in a couple of hours, so I’m sure I’ll get their lovely mix of contrast soon enough lol But really, kids are a perfect metaphor for what I’m talking about here, beautiful as they are, yet, when they get to screaming and tantrums, it offers that contrast a little bit. Life does have a way of mesmerizing us. Thanks again.
Now I must apologize here, but I have never got to grips with understanding stuff like adjectives and adverbs etc., I Googled adverb, looked it up in my OED and still it baffles me so I just wrote what a poem on beauty and life etc., hope you like it 🙂
ha…i can relate…we learned in first class that there are do-words and how-words..i kinda stayed with this…much more concrete than verbs and adjectives…smiles
ha, that’s fine. I just love that you looked it up in the OED, I adore that text. Anything is fine. Look forward to reading your piece. Thanks
I remember wondering what was meant by ‘the’ adjective, in Kipling, and it turned out the one he meant was the word ‘bloody’, and he used the word adjective as a euphemism.
Hi Fred,
Thank you for lovely post ~ We are having a warmer afternoon and all my red roses are blooming so beautifully ~
I tried to use some tools like metaphors in my post ~
Wishing you and everyone a happy weekend ~ And a Happy Father’s Day ~
happy weekend grace…you should take some pics of those roses to show us at oln…i have roses as well…i think…need to go check after the storm the other day…smiles…
Good idea Brian ~ Though I have used my fading rose as my image for Cherished (rondelet prompt) ~ Mine are hardy ones, they survive our cold winter, ha ~
oh sounds gorgeous Grace, I think you’re pretty close to here, so I think the weather is quite similar, beautiful indeed. Great poem tonight. thanks
Great prompt! Having a lovely warm day, and the first line got me. I had just posted one and it seemed to fit. Happy summer!
fits wonderfully….
will be back in a bit….we are cooking out for fathers day so off to enjoy the grill and some sun….
nice..have fun…we celebrated fathers day a few weeks back already
yes fits well indeed. Glad you had a wonderfully warm day as well. Thanks for sharing it with us.
I don’t know if my poem has contrast enough but I think that rain and cloudy days are pretty, especially when there is a rainbow afterwards. 🙂 I am sorry though I depended on so many prompts to make make this piece. 🙂
i love rainbows…as a kid i always wanted to walk on one..well i still want…smiles..enjoyed your piece imelda
I agree, the cloudy days do have their own appeal, and the rainbow afterwords is just icing on the cake. Really nice piece. Thanks for the share
ok…bedtime for me.. will be back in the AM to catch the overnight beauties..smiles
Left a link to some beauty — not created by me, but just captured, and referred to a link that is a contrast. Does that count? Sometimes things just happen that way…
ha. you have me curious now…
ok, anyone who goes needs to follow the link….
yes, I agree, it’s very good. Thanks for sharing with us Marya
I am already into sunday, IST. Its amazing sometimes to see where we are at a particular point of time if we could hold it static and have an overall view, Wishful, visual thinking! 🙂 happy weekend everyone, I have mine packed, guests at home but will catch up
smiles. glad you joined in even with guests…just cleared the house here and got the boys to bed…T is out as well so nice and quiet….
yes, it is amazing. wishfully visual thinking is outstanding. Have a wonderful weekend as well. thanks for the share.
alright, off to bed…have a great night/day poets…i will be back in the morning…
Just finished struggling with my piece… 1:30 pm. Too late to comment, but I will squeeze time in over the next two days. Happy Father’s Day to all you dads!
really nicely done Margaret, can’t tell you struggled with it at all, it’s very good. Thanks for the share tonight, and yes, happy father’s day to all indeed.
really love the reflections and images of beauty born and shared tonight. Truly another outstanding Poetics in my opinion, as always loving the wide range of styles, tones and harnessing that subjective allure of beauty itself. Can’t wait to see what the evening springs forth for those poems to be born in the morning and tomorrow. Have a great Father’s day to all, but especially to the dads out there.
Great prompt. Nice and open ended.
thanks Dave, great share
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder but where there is the greatest ‘art’ there is always beauty which in essence, is harmony of form and that can be found anywhere and in anything. I remember reading once about someone who collected barbed wire – he found it beautiful.
barb wire is rather beautiful…it makes for an interesting contrast in its rust against the green fields….even if it left a very long scar down my leg…smiles.
definitely agree. And you know, barbed wire is one of those things that people often ignore its beauty as they focus on what it could do to their flesh if they try to climb over it. It definitely does have a beauty to it, the way it’s shaped and how it encompasses borders as well. Really nice insight here. thanks
happy fathers day to all the dads out there as well…smiles.
Fred – thanks for the wonderful prompt and your post was just beautiful! : ) I will apologize in advance – having connectivity issues, as they say – well, I do live in the Ozarks where we have electricity brought in by mules each morning. But having probs staying online and will read and comment as I can. Posted a rondelet for Tonys prompt too this morning – just couldn’t get it posted on Thurs- ahh well – such is the life out in the ridges and hollows – have a beautiful day! K
hope your mules bring you a nice load…smiles…ha…have a great day kathleen…
smiles..that sounds a bit lord of the rings…do you have hobbits living close by..? smiles… happy sunday kathleen..off to read yours..
The ozarks are very nice. Only spent a short time there, but was so nice how different it was from other places. I hope you have a beautiful day as well. thanks
Hey Fred – thanks for the inspiration. k.
Karin, your (Mr.)link(y) links back to this page… just fyi
fixed it…smiles.
Phew…think I made this on time…hope so anyhow (esp ’cause I was able to combine 2 prompts–I love it when that happens) This really was a case of “stumbled upon beauty” as we went to the gallery to see a Renaissance display (playing tourist in the town where we both grew up before we head home Tuesday) and found this amazing piece…Happy Father’s Day Brian (and all the Fathers out there).
http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2013/06/a-sun-as-pale-as-moonshine.html