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“To play a wrong note is insignificant; to play without passion is inexcusable!” — Ludwig van Beethoven
smiles… starting this evening with one of my fav quotes
Have you ever read the “perfect” poem, seen the “perfect” performance, listened to the “perfect” song– ?
technically state of the art
and yet — it didn’t move you– you tried –but– couldn’t feel it
“oh it was good” you say (trying to convince yourself) “very good in fact”
yet you don’t look happy and that hunger in your soul for, for– (yeah you cannot really name it — but) it’s still not sated
The next day you go to a performance of your daughter’s school class – one of the kids throws up on the stage cause she’s so nervous (happened in a play I went to) – another forgets his text (ok, just parts of it) but hey – their passion’s palpable –and fills the room and your heart in a way that you think it’s going to burst every minute — and in the car on the way home you whistle and smile
Passion is the key – it makes the one big difference – doesn’t mean we should not work on our writing technique (i mean, surely Beethoven worked Hard) but perfection is not what touches people’s heart in the end
Hey – that encourages me – doesn’t mean I write passionately and lazy – on the contrary – I work hard on my technical toolset as well but def. try to put my heart into my work first… as good as I can… smiles
Here we go – happy OpenLinkNight!
..and if you’re here for the first time, this is how it works…
- write a poem and post it to your webpage
- click on the Mr. Linky button below and enter your name and direct web address to your poem
- read other poets that have linked in, comment on what you like, what worked, how it made you feel
- promote yourself on social media and use the #dversepoets or @dversepoets so we can retweet you
- have fun out on the trail
passion is def the key…you can tell when a poets heart in it…i would take imperfect with heart than a performance that is faked…you can tell…you know…smiles.
happy OLN…
yes – i know – smiles.
Woo hoo! Haven’t been here for a while : )
woot!
good to see you jim
passion – YES
nothing shines without it
isn’t it true… loved your glory without excuses
Your heart and your passion always show in your work, Claudia. And I so agree, that’s what matters most, that’s what we remember.
Happy Open Link Night to all!!
happy oln kelly and that guy beethoven was def. right
Hi Claudia. Foggy and damp early have faded to mostly sunny. Still on the prose-poetry kick that Sam encouraged on his last hosting. Good week to all ~
i so love the series about your gramma
Well as long as it is just your heart and no throwing up, I agree lol
i cannot promise anything you know…smiles
Oh I find that passion make all the difference… not every one of mine has it… but those of them that have.. sparked with anger, sorrow or love… those are the one I like the most… and I recall this so many times when I listened to music… same thing… saw an exhibition of photography… same thing there… some had passion.. and it could be seen.
same with mine – i like that most that i can feel – and i think it’s the same way beyond art – it’s in everyday jobs as well… those that have passion for their work will do a better job
Passion, yes of course ~ Thanks for hosting ~ Wishing you Happy Tuesday & Happy Hearts as well ~
happy tuesday to you as well grace
Evening Claudia, I’m with you all the way on that – ‘heart & passion’ is what it’s all about for sure…. And I’m sure there be plenty of both to touch base with tonight…
Hot on the heels of ‘Graced’ here is my new poem for Feb – hope it strikes a chord too… Looking forward to my late night read up with you all… With Best Wishes Scott http://www.scotthastie.com
smiles….late night read sounds good – have fun out on the trail scott
Your reference to Beethoven struck a chord with me. 🙂 (I worked as a symphony oboist for many years and I loved nothing better than to play Beethoven Symphonies.)
Here’s a silly old Beethoven Tanka of mine:
It’s Time To Tanka Beethoven
By Madeleine Begun Kane
The King’s Speech film score
gets Desplat an Oscar nod,
but poor Beethoven
is overlooked once again—
He needs a new publicist.
And here’s an even more silly double dactyl I wrote about Beethoven. (Of course, double dactyls are, by definition, silly.)
Higgledy Piggledy
Ludwig van Beethoven
Wrote the Eroica,
Sadly went deaf.
Incontrovertibly
Gifted and masterful.
Some say he’s better than
Brahms. Need a ref.
haha… a new publicist for sure… heck – he was so crazy talented – and how tough must it have been for him when he realized he’s going to be deaf one day
Hi Claudia! I agree with you … that’s a little of what I was aiming for in my poem … passion is so key, it seems that everything that is infused with passion is set apart. Hope you have a great evening!
hope you’re having a great evening as well..
Your post reminded me of watching my son at his Christmas concert, he was loving the music and his song so much he did a bit of freestyle moves between lines. It was THE BEST part of the play!
Passion matters, it is the heart. The soul. Being technically correct is good, needed often, but can be cold for my tastes. It can seem forced.
I played with an idea today for OLN, and lo and behold another came right behind it so there are two poems on my share tonight.
freestyle moves between lines sounds awesome – ha – sounds like he had real fun – and you as well…smiles
He sure did! I’ll have to find the video and email you the link. 🙂
oh yes please
check your email! 🙂
loved it!
🙂
Thanks for hosting Claudia!
Hello all, mine is an erasure poem plucked from Herodotus. Hope you’re all well.
-joshuA
hey – great so see you josh
whassup man! havent seen you in some time….
I agree with you about the passion. Some days I see the passion in my poetry, some days I don’t. Maybe it’s my reading mood, because I always start with saying NO to the poem and then write when it insists. Today’s for example: Noticing the many types of windows here after so many years, I had to write, but (like ministry in Quaker meeting), I might have taken longer to discern if the message is for me or for the public–and how to deliver it. I had more free verse originally, but cut to 14 rhymed lines.
ha – i like poems that insist to be written… they have their own head sometimes…smiles
I have a poem published here today that has to do with the devil and not with love or hearts or home or sprains! http://apiarymagazine.com/please-let-introduce-susan-chast/#more-15727101
I’m excited.
Hello all!
hey amy – good to see you
no lack of passion here,Claudia! Set
em up, if you please. Cheers!
Nice to have passion and talent helps, You, fortunately, have both. Thanks for hosting Claudia.
…. and there’s def. always a lot of heart in your poems as well myrna
Thanks for tending bar tonight Claudia-great to see you 🙂 I would much rather read a poem or listen to a song that has heart and passion over a perfect piece. Without the passion, there is no movement, flow or feeling. I notice I do much better in my writing when I turn my head off and heart on. Happy OLN all.
i haven’t found the switch yet where to turn my head off… i sometimes wish i had…smiles
ok – bedtime for me over here – will be back in the morning to catch up… have fun writing and reading!!
When there is no passion in my poetry, I know it is invisible….when it makes not connection, it is dead in the water.
“Winter Widow” …..we are expecting a ‘catastrophic’ ice storm tomorrow. thanks, weathermen, for the panic.
Lady Nyo
Hi. I don’t remember if I’ve posted here before. I write stuff, mostly filk [sic] songs. Filk is the folk music of fantasy and sf fandom, but (to quote myself on the subject):
We may sing of stars and spaceships or of dragons and of knights
Or of randy cats with pistols rolling seven-sided dice
Or of history of science or the two of them combined
Or of any other topic that may come to mind.
Sometimes it’s silly, sometimes it’s serious, which also applies to my output.
At the moment I can’t access my blog, so I’ll put up here the latest little thing, which seems particularly apropos:
With nothing much better to do,
I thought of a poem for you
With a bit of a trick:
It’s this limerick,
Both self-referential and true.
i like that first lyric…and the connections you draw….
welcome….
Hi Claudia,
Good to see you behind the bar tonight! The perfect “thing”… what a moment in the ether, where time stands still, all actions are slow motion and the pleasure is unbelievable… nothing can possibly go wrong… Thanks for being here to tonight!
Oh, I so strongly agree about passion. Really I think one can SEE the passion in some poems…and those poems, I think, are truly gifts to the reader.
That encourage me, too, Claudia. And how well it applies to life, too. So here’s my imperfect poem, based on my imperfect memory.
Sometimes I don’t have the passion, but I find that it’s best to keep working anyway, rather than waiting for it to reappear. Happy Open Link Night, everyone, and thanks for hosting, Claudia!
So glad to come to the pub and hang with the poets…looking forward to some passionate reading tonight!
Thank you, Claudia…I so agree…passion in the writing sure makes me a more interested reader. And I do try to infuse mine with feeling!
good morning… back and ready to catch up…
good morning…on my way out…be back manana
sleep well… off to work now and will be back to read in the evening
Claudia, i was actually thinking of you when I wrote my poem today, and the sketch..although inspired by you certainly not in the same league and yet still, from the heart. I so enjoy your words!
smiles…i did enjoy your sketch…and the layers…smiles
Hopefully I have done justice to OLN … thank you Claudia, I had inspiration from two this week DV and another reader that I follow.
Late to the party, but certainly my passion trumps my form (or should that be non-form) every time! That is a great quote by Beethoven.
Hi. I did a sketchbook poem. I’ve never pushed publish without editing. NEVER. That doesn’t mean go easy on me, just sharing the info.
Tina @ Life is Good
smiles… sometimes the messy ones are the best… will be over in a minute
Hey dear Claudia! Passion is def everything to me… I don’t care how ‘good’ an artist is, if there’s no passion behind what they’re doing it really ruins the work in my opinion…