Hello poets everywhere, and welcome once again to Meeting the Bar here at dVerse. My name is Tony Maude, and it is my privilege to be your host for today’s entertainment.
Bouts-rimés (boo reeMAY) is French for “rhymed ends”. It is the name given to a poetic game in which a list of words that rhyme with one another is given to one or more poets who then make their own poems, all of which use the same rhyming words in the order in which they were given at the end of their lines.
The invention of bouts-rimés is attributed to a minor 17th century French poet named Dulot, of whom very little is known. The story goes that, about the year 1648, Dulot complained that he had been robbed of a number of valuable papers, including three hundred sonnets. Dulot’s audience were surprised to learn that he had written so many, until he explained that they were all blank sonnets. Dulot had written down the rhymes for his sonnets – and nothing else.
It is unclear just how serious Dulot was about this, but the idea caught the imagination of his contemporaries, who set about inventing rhymes of their own, then challenging others to fill in the blank lines. Soon bouts-rimés became the fashion and remained popular throughout the 17th century and into the 18th century.
The fashion was revived in the 19th century, and was known in English as ‘crambo’. Amongst known players were the Rossettis, William Michael, Dante Gabriel and Christina (above), who was considered particularly skilled at the game. Here is one of her bouts-rimés sonnets:
Methinks the ills of life I fain would shun;
But then I must shun life, which is a blank.
Even in my childhood oft my spirit sank,
Thinking of all that had still to be done.
Among my many friends there is not one
Like her with whom I sat upon the bank
Willow-o’ershadowed, from whose lips I drank
A love more pure than streams that sing and run.
But many times that joy has cost a sigh;
And many times I in my heart have sought
For the old comfort and not found it yet.
Surely in that calm day when I shall die
The painful thought will be a blessed thought
And I shall sorrow that I must forget.
In 1864 Alexandre Dumas invited the poets of France to display their skill by composing poems to a set of rhymes that he had selected for this purpose. No fewer than 350 poets took up the challenge, and Dumas published the collected results in a single volume in 1865.
Ron Padgett, in his Teachers and Writers Handbook of Poetic Forms (2nd Edition), cites the following example of rhymes intended for a bouts-rimés game; tanned, jump, fanned, lump; reading, lawn, misleading, yawn; yo-yo, death, no-no, breath; France and pants. Using these rhymes, Jack Collom produced the following poem:
Getting burnt, evaporated, bleached, or tanned
By the sun ain’t no way to jump.
I’d rather plop in shadow, be fanned
By some geisha girl, and lay around like a proverbial lump.
I’m not that hot for so-called good reading;
I just crave a cool drink on a bluegreen lawn.
I mean, don’t let me be misleading:
Where I’m at is sorta like the center of a yawn.
You know, excitement’s like being a yo-yo—
I don’t wanna beat the subject to death,
And it isn’t that repetition ain’t no no-no,
But the last thing I hope to be is out of breath.
So let somebody else go lost-generate all over France,
Or fly to the moon, discover Africa, some damn hotshot smartypants.
The skill in bout rimés lies not only in writing a poem that uses the rhyming words at the end of each line as required, but in using them in a way that makes sense and seems natural. The stranger the set of rhymes, the harder this is to do.
The Challenge
Today, I’d like to challenge the dVerse community to play bout rimés with the following set of rhymes, which are taken from a sonnet by a contemporary poet:
drive, side, night, lied, wage, saved, made, face, nurse, church, worse, purse, back, that.
As you can see, there are fourteen words, so a fourteen line poem is what we’re after. You might want to stretch yourself and try writing a fully formed sonnet in iambic pentameter (that’s 10 syllables in a line, with the stress on the even-numbered syllables), but you don’t have to … smiles.
You are allowed to use the rhymes as the last syllable of a longer word at your line endings as Jack Collom did; pants in the list of rhymes he was working from appears as smartypants in his poem. So, for example, side might appear in beside, aside, bedside or mountainside; homicide would also be acceptable – not a phrase you’ll hear often … smiles – because the ending sounds exactly the same; made could be replaced with its homophone, maid, or even with dismayed etc.
So, dVerse poets, are you ready to play?
Here’s what to do:
• Write your poem using the rhymes given above and post it to your blog.
• Add a link to your poem via the ‘Mr Linky’ below.
• This opens a new screen where you’ll enter your information, and where you also choose links to read. Once you have pasted your poem’s blog URL and entered your name, click Submit. Don’t worry if you don’t see your name right away.
• If you write more than one poem, it’s OK to link them separately … smiles.
• Read and comment on other people’s work to let them know it’s being read.
• Share your work and that of your fellow poets via your favourite social media platforms.
• Above all – have fun!
fun stuff tony…
i play bouts at another site on a pretty regular occassion…
its fun to see what people come up with and how different it can be out of the same end line words or syllables….
Oh yes, it’s going to be interesting to see what folks come up with … smiles.
i did not realize that on dumas either…that is intriguing…wonder if you can get ahold of that book?
I suspect you need to be pretty wealthy, Brian … smiles.
https://archive.org/details/boutsrimspublis00dumagoog
found it
now i need a translator…ha
how cool… have to dust off my french a bit me thinks…
if you could forward english translations to me, that would be great….smiles.
Hey Tony – I needed to make time to write today. Great article and prompt. I like this sort of thing. I played a little loose with the rhythms – but hey – a little meter, a little rhyme, a kindasorta sonnet for fun.
Thanks Gay,
I’m glad you enjoyed it. This is just the kind of thing to take to a writer’s workshop, if you ever have to lead one … smiles
throw in some fun ones too…like elephant…or unusual words…it can get really interesting trying to link them….
Hi folks, and welcome to Meeting the Bar. In the spirit of fairness – and because I’ve had a pretty busy day – I haven’t actually started writing my poem for this prompt … smiles. The question is, can I write a poem and tend the bar simultaneously?
oh i think you can…smiles.
And NOW we know you did! Thanks Tony
first time that i heard about bout rhymes and got it wrong first as well… ha – it’s totally challenging to use a fix set of words and see where it takes you… strangely enough took me back to an exhibition i’ve seen last summer in berlin… happy thursday – and looking forward to read what others will do with those words…
It’s a different sort of challenge, for sure, but sometimes it produces fabulous results. I’ll be round to read after I’ve written mine … smiles
What a fun challenge… I love this type of things.. I think it’s perfect for a challenge like this… I will soon have mine done.. I had to try to do it in pentameter too… wouldn’t be me otherwise… 🙂
masochist….ha
From you, Björn, I expected no less … smiles
smiles… always raising the bar a bit higher..
Tony – thanks for bringing up such an interesting chapter of history. Loved reading it – the challenge is good. I will look forward to writing.
I shall look forward to reading; right now I’m writing too … smiles
Tony, thank you for such an interesting prompt – I write this originally on Friday – in my office and somehow misplaced it and couldn’t post in time. Now that the link has expired – I couldn’t share it – hence, leaving a comment.
http://www.abhrapal.in/2014/02/17/kings-speech/
looking forward to read what you’ll bring to the table…
Thanks Claudia – it was very interesting challenge and building a story around the rhymes was difficult for me. But I loved it 🙂
I have never heard of this game. Interesting. I believe it must have been a competition, too, for those taking part, and having the poems published must have been a kick off. Thank you, Tony, for telling us about it.
But the words you have chosen do not rhyme, many of them! It is impossible to make a decent poem out of them!
i disagree….i think there have been some pretty great poems made out of it so far….
I’m fairly sure some of those old poetry games must have become pretty competitive … smiles.
And the words do rhyme (or near-rhyme by vowel assonance.)
Either-or, priest. Either we are left, or we are right. The hoof of the animal should be split all the way up. Being “eclectic” is being bad.
*smile*
alright…we have like 16-18 inches of snow on the ground and its still coming down…i built 2 forts and made sled tracks….time to go enjoy them a bit…and make some snow ice cream….be back in a bit…
Have fun, boss … smiles
yep…everybody decided to come so i shoveled the walk and am waiting on everyone to get dressed…lol.
I knew I shouldn’t have come here. I’m supposed to be writing performance evaluations, not poetry! I was hoping for a challenge that would not interest me (not really), but this just looks like too much fun! Peace, Linda
Should I be sorry to have been the cause of (un)wanted distraction, Linda … smiles?
hahaha being out of school for snow again tomorrow…saved me to be able to play…cant wait to see what you have linda….
Once you read my poem I’ll let you be the judge of that. 🙂 Now it’s back to work. I’ll be back later to read some other poems. Linda
Enjoyed reading yours, Linda – just as I have enjoyed reading everyone else’s so far … smiles
I’ll let you be the judge of that when you read my poem. 😉
In reference to your question to the previous comment, absolutely not. You stopped me dead in the middle of a video game! I thoroughly enjoyed the exercise. Thank you, Tony.
what game you playing margo?
uh oh. That was on yours, Brian? I thought I was talking to Tony. My apologies!
oh you are…tony is here…i was just jumping in to see what game you were playing….
Hi Margo,
You were talking to me, but I’m afraid I wasn’t paying attention; too busy writing to the prompt. Please accept my apologies.
I’d like to know what game you were playing too … smiles
Ohhhh… that game! I had to come back to my comment to see what the heck I had said. I play adventure games. This was an old game: Syberia.
cool…dont know that i have played that one…
Cool! Pub games for poets 🙂
bring it lupita! smiles.
That was pretty fun! Never wrote a sonnet before 🙂 Thanks for widening our poetic horizons Tony!
That’s what we try to do; sometimes you come across a form or another challenge that just clicks for you and frees up another aspect in your poetry. I love it when that happens … smiles
I have enjoyed the variations so far.. great. Who could have thought that would come… really great.
That’s my poem written and posted; a little slower than I had hoped, but this multi-tasking isn’t easy … smiles
Tony, this is a fabulous game. I, for one, wouldn’t mind seeing this as a semi-regular feature. It’s a real stretching (but fun) exercise to write to set end-rhymes!
I’ll have to see what the bosses have to say – but there’s a never-ending supply of potential word lists … smiles
its def a fun game…
I could definitely see myself doing this more regularly… Actually my thinking was a little bit similar as writing a sestina… My first ever sestina I wrote on 6 prescribed words from a 6 consecutive days in a words on twitter… anyone up for that challenge? I guess that would be even harder 🙂 … With good choice of words that have homophones as well as different meanings it could be doable…
Don’t know if has ever been done as a challenge… anyone knows.
I’ve never written a sestina simply because finding six good line-endings has so far proved beyond my abilities. But bout rimes is not limited to sonnets, that’s for sure.
There’s another, better-known, poetry game I’m thinking about bringing to the bar at some point, but I need to think more about how to make it practical for an on-line challenge.
Writing a sestina… especially if you add your challenge to go pentameter… It usually takes me days.. But I think words that go well with bout-rimes would also go well with sestina’s …
Some very unusual rhyme combinations in this Simon Armitage poem. It is good to see the different combinations arranged and somehow put into a method. Too difficult to get my head around though. At this stage anyway.
I wondered how long it would take before someone worked out where I’d taken the rhymes from … smiles.
I chose this poem because so many of the rhymes can be either nouns or verbs, which gives a great deal of flexibility to the players of the game.
give it time hanna…doors will be open all day tomorrow as well…
maybe read a few too and see what others have done
to get you going…
Had a go, Bit of fun and nonsense.
Meanwhile it’s getting on for midnight here so my visits will have to wait till tomorrow.
Thanks Mr. Maude. didn’t mean to give the game away. But it did help the writing.:-)
No worries, Hanna. In a community like ours, someone other than me would know the poem and the poet … smiles
Well, I’m off to sleep now. I’ll be interested to see who joins in overnight, and what they bring to the party … smiles
sleep well good sir…
and you and well hanna
Hello tony and thank you, my heads a tad fuzzy this morning, but I shall attempt it, here I was thinking there was only one way to rhyme.. How daft I am 😦
ha. look forward to what you bring…smiles.
Oh dear no pressure! Smiles.
smiles. email if you need.
Thank you my friend 🙂
I have 🙂
Not daft at all; one of the team needs to take a really detailed look at the whole concept of rhyme because there’s quite a lot of misunderstanding around it. Look forward to see what you come up with.
A wonderful new game as a prompt Tony – thanks. Took me some time to do too – but finally got there.
Kind regards
Anna :o]
you did really cool with the words you came up with that incorporated the given words….nicely played anna
An old-new game, which I’m glad you enjoyed, Anna. It’s definitely worth filing away for use at any workshops you might be asked to lead … smiles
Well now I have had a go at this I can look and see what others have made of this challenge.
Thanks Tony. Interesting and I could well return and try to improve it, but I am posting as is!
Will be round reading soon … smiles
Glad you made it Rachel….since you are the one that introed me to Crambo…smiles.
This was such fun Tony. Thanks !
Glad you enjoyed it, Cressida … smiles
this is COMPLETELY a drinking game of poetry, Tony. You fiend. Double, rocks, then another. 🙂 ~
oh now that could make this really interesting…haha
Well, what is a pub without games; pool, darts and bout rimes … smiles
drive!!!
i yell, flip the tape to the b-side,
at the dawn of night,
to our parents we lied,
labored for wage
& saved
all we made,
painted on our friday face,
to find a nip to nurse,
get our sin on before sunday church,
hey i know guys done worse,
won’t come home til we empty the purse,
when in the mirror monday grins back,
yeah we roll like that
ha, just being goofy before bed…see you in the morning poets…
haha…thanks for the smile… and good morning…. i’m not yet awake and found i’ve strewn my good morning comment from half an hour earlier somewhere in the middle of the stream…oy… friday… will be reading now…
NIce work, Brian … smiles
This one was pretty fun! I’m in!
About to head back out onto the trail … looking forward to what I’ll find … smiles
Tony, thanks for the fun prompt, a bit like doing a wordle with the added rule of the words being end-rhymes. I haven’t done it yet – maybe later.
I take issue with you that iambic pentameter is 10 syllables: I’m always banging on about this, but syllable counting doesn’t make a metre in a language like English, which uses stresses that are not always in the same place in every word.
Counting the beats = rhythm. Counting the syllables = uncomfortable, unnatural. In true iambic pentameter (eg Shakespearean sonnets) the occasional anapest can be slipped in to keep the rhythm going, which sends the syllable counting haywire but makes for a ‘musical’ feel to the poem.
Agreed, Viv, but as I tried to say, the stress should fall on the even numbered syllables, so giving the five beats of pentameter. I was really trying to help some of our poets who find the concept of meter more difficult, and who break out in a cold sweat when they see terms like anapest and iamb. In the end, counting syllables and then working out where the stresses were is how I learned the little I know about meter, and I thought that thinking of it like this might help some of our less experienced poets and encourage them to give it a go.
You’re right. Perhaps I should have said: It is OK to add the occasional unstressed syllable, so long as the line flows clearly when read aloud.
For those who are in a cold sweat about metre, do try and read “The Ode Less Travelled” by Stephen Fry, which is an idiot’s guide to metre, and my bible when writing metric poetry.
I will second your recommendation of Stephen Fry’s The Ode Less travelled; I wouldn’t be without mine … smiles
Great prompt. Interesting and stimulating.
… and something you can take away and try again and again … smiles. NIce to see you Ros.
The prompt did come
to bring some fun,
so everyone,
can let words run,
and when it’s done,
we all have won.
🙂
all the more when we give back
to one another
25 fun responses so far; I’ll be back later to see if anyone else has joined in.
just waking and have a little catching up to do…i slept in after all the fun in the snow yesterday…i am sore too….lol….oy….coffee in hand and playing catch up
Nice one, Tony! This is one of those prompts where my first impression was, “Nope. I can’t do that.” But the prompt words kept jumping into my thoughts, and after a while, I came back and gave it a shot.
At first it looks hard, but after a while those end-rhymes take on a life of their own, tell their own tale and make you write it … smiles.
Will be round soon, Charles.
I dreamed of writing this poem last night, or rather chasing the words around trying to rope them into a poem! Looking good though for it to broke to ride! Thanks for a great prompt Tony. You’ve done a great job stretching our poetic and creative muscles.
This is definitely an idea to keep; there are so many sets of end-rhymes available to work with … smiles
Love to make my last round… reading all the great entries in front of my fireplace… cheese and ham, and a cool champagne… hey it’s Valentine…
happy valentines b…
just got back, we broke out of the house for a bit…main roads are clear…hit the bookstore and did a bit of reading….watching life…writing….
playing catch up myself now…
Difficult rhymes. But, I wrote something that might be good with it…will post it soon!
looking forward to read james
http://sejdb.livejournal.com/336719.html
And here it is! It sort of lies along movements in my life right now…
Okay (gulp), I did it! Challenging, FUN, and definitely weird. Thank you, Tony, for this most interesting prompt. Now to read. Happy Valentine’s Day to all!
you did wonderful…a fresh take on the words…and a story in an intriguing direction…
Thank you, brave poets, for taking part in the game. There’s quite a variety of responses out there; I hope Simon Armitage would be impressed by the way each of us has taken the line endings from his poem Poemand made them our own.
Now I just need to do a little tidying up here … smiles
OK now I know where the words came from. Thanks!