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Hi all hope you are doing well – it’s me, Abhra, back to hosting the poetics tonight. I have been thinking over a week – what theme to pick for tonight, and to be honest, I didn’t come up with anything – well, at least not until now, when I sat beside the window, looked at the setting sun, the mellow light falling on the neighbor’s fences and became pensive.
I shifted to this wonderful locality earlier this year and in a matter of few weeks, I will be moving out of here. I tried to look back and remember the countless times I shifted my nest from one place to another – within the country first, where I shifted from east (where I was born) to all the corners in India and then outside – so many times I just moved to a new place, got used to staying in the changed surroundings and I knew that I had to move again. It had been a painstaking process to quickly get accustomed to a new place, food, people and then not to get too attached, to be able to move again.
All of a sudden, my eyes fell upon the tree outside my window and saw a whole bunch of starlings – shaking water off their wings, sitting on different branches. I realized I wasn’t feeling sorry for moving again – the simple reason being I was going home. I stayed by the window for a while more, until I was one of the birds, and prepared to fly home. I could live the freshness of my garden, feel the dews touching my feet, smell the home grown spices, see the smile on faces I have not seen in ages and what not. In that moment, I was not there on my window – I was back home.
Tonight I want you to write about home coming – have you felt it like me, what it is to stay away and the coming back after a long time – have you been worried that the place you call home has changed all the time you have been away? When I was a young boy, I always imagined what fun it might be for a sailor to set out on a voyage for months – I was a big time fan of some Viking adventures back then and could live the life of my heroes. Tonight I want you be the sailor, eyeing a telescope in search for homeland.
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Abhra, I loved the prompt.. I’m trying to catch an inspector Morse show.. so I will come back later. 🙂
Thanks Bjorn – you won’t believe but I haven’t written my own piece yet. 🙂
Hi Abhra, and everyone else reading this… ha… great prompt. for my write, I thought of long drives and that feeling of relief when you’re finally home… ah, peace.
I lived at distance for a long time…and had those long drives…and def the relief after being in the car for 13 hours….
Thanks Anthony – smiles, yes – that road to home. I am eagerly waiting for next few weeks. Back home at the end of this month – but planning one more road trip.
a cool prompt abhra… i feel at home in some of my poems and of course when i am with the people i love… i love to travel as well and in some places i’ve been felt a sense of home even though it was far away from home and it was mainly because there were people that made me feel welcome…
i would’ve loved to join but still sick and feverish – so i thought i just pop in to say hello and maybe tomorrow i can make a small round and read some… have fun!!
I hope you continue to feel better C
Yes, saw your mail earlier – take care of yourself.
hey abhra. cool prompt and I hope you are soon feeling a bit more settled in and life back to usual….and interesting prompt for me…it touched a more melancholic nostalgic side of me….
I will be around and reading…smiles.
Thanks Brian – I have had a lot of traveling around India and England over last one year. I just need some calmness and comfort of my home.
I got a new poem up now. Based on the home-coming theme. I know you all will like it very much. 🙂
whassup Charlie….a bit different style for you tonight…
Indeed. I just wanted to say what was in my heart and what I felt.
Trivia about me: Most of my poems that I have written are “cut up” and by ‘cut up’ I mean the influence of William Burroughs. I love experimenting with words and styles. However, once in a great while…I like writing flarf. but I don’t write flarf all the time..I usually do cut up poems. 🙂
cool. its def cool art man.
and interesting too in the development of cut up from his sending over the manuscript in random order and then liking that order better.
Once again the murderer is caught.. I will make my rounds. the prompt suited me fine.. Just had a discussion with a badger and the moon 🙂
ha. our tv season starts end of September so there is nothing on here but re-reuns….which is kinda fine for me…
a badger and the moon eh? smiles.
I wrote something futuristic, Abhra, before reading your essay and finding out I am slightly off subject. Your essay is beautiful and thoughtful. I am so lucky that coming home to my little apartment from near or far always feels relaxing and good. Enjoy your own homecoming.
Thank you Abhra for hosting tonight. I enjoyed your writing. Although moving can be so stressful, your thoughts are soft and filled with anticipation. Good luck.
Hopefully, I’ll post something later, but not sure if I’ll get some ideas to write.
well, I’ve hit all in the 1st wave… will be back later on tonight. Good day/night.
thank anthony for reading…
i caught most…skipped a few that link and never visit…
understandable… I’ve skipped one for same reason, ya know…
Abrah and all, I am late as usual and will tend to reading and commenting in the morning…I couldn’t decide what to write for the great prompt, could have gone in two or three different directions, but settled on something at hand I guess I needed to write about….thank you, and Claudia, I hope you feel better soon…….
I posted something about a recent homecoming between two sisters and myself that I grew up with and I even had a “sleepover” in their hotel room. Just like the old days! I love my time with them.
Thanks for a great prompt, Abhra. And Claudia I’m sorry to hear that you’re ill…feel better soon.
Gayle ~
so now I have done my rounds.. and there were some brilliant takes on the prompt there.. 🙂
Thank you for this prompt, Abhra. I visited my hometown in July and have difficulty processing the emotions. This helped.
Feel better soon, Claudia!