Poetry form is not always the easiest thing for me, and I have not always appreciated its constrictions—ha—but i can appreciate all that I have learned from our pubtenders and several other poets that have stretched me to learn form poetry. One poet that I have enjoyed for the last several years is Vandana Sharma. It is my pleasure to invite her in to host MeetingTheBar today and teach us a new form. Thanks Vandana.
Hello friends, Vandana Sharma here saying hello from New Delhi, India and I will be your host today. I am so grateful to Mr. Brian Miller for this lovely opportunity. This is my first time as a host for any poetry forum. Feeling nervous and excited!
So, not taking much of your time, let’s come to the point. Today we will be learning a new poetry form called “Pleiades”. As you all must be aware that “Pleiades” is a star cluster in Taurus constellation and is also called as “Seven Sisters”. (Greek Mythology)
Going by its properties the form “Pleiades” was invented in 1999 by Craig Tigerman. It consists of seven lines, each line starting with the same letter as the title. The title is a single word.
Later on Hortensia Anderson restricted the length of each line to six syllables. Hence, this form can be defined as a seven line poem with each line beginning with the same letter as the title and having six syllables in each line. The title must be of one word only.
Here is an example:
Here’s what we have to do today: write a poem in “Pleiades” form. As an extra challenge add a reference to a celestial body (any planet, star, constellation, meteor etc.) as this form has been inspired from a heavenly object. Looking ahead to read wonderful poetry and roam the celestial space!
If you are new, here is how it works:
- Write a poem in the Pleiades form and post it to your web page or blog
- Click on the Mister Linky button below and enter your name and the direct URL or web address to the poem
- Read others that participate and let them know what you think of how they used the form, or how the poem moved you
- Stop back in throughout the next 33 hours, as people will continue to join
- Have fun with it, we are all learning
A very interesting form, V; fun to use. I skipped the syllable count, & had it ready before the note to mention a heavenly body, but hey–welcome to hosting; it is always a pleasure to see a new face behind the bar. Pour me a diet Coke, if you would, star-crossed poetics can bring on a powerful thirst.
whassup g…you know me, bending form is a specialty…ha…
v will do great as well…
🙂 at your service! hahaha
smiles….I will fix the spacing issue on the poem and that last paragraph when I get home…I cant access it from work….unless Claudia pops in and gets to it before me….
ugh. i cant get it to fix…
Hi Glenn ~ If you feel like writing another one, then do so ~ I will be around in a bit to read ~
What a challenge it was.. I had missed the additional challenge first — so fortunate that constellations exist.. some great one to choose from.. Thank you Vandana for hosting this.. you always have interesting forms to use.. 🙂
ha. I was trying to link a heavenly body in an oblique way myself….
she does have some really amazing forms….
Thanks to Vandana for introducing us to this celestial form ~
Wishing you all happy day ~
hiya grace….
smiles
Smiles, hi there Brian ~
fir a short little form this was a bit of a challenge…I wanted to go longer…so my last line is a bit forced…I had another last line but it was even more forced….ha….thanks for hosting vandana…I know you will do great…
Thank you so much for the appreciation. Sharing of poetry goes a long way. The great words we say to each other inspire us to work more hard and be perfect. My best wishes to each and everyone.
Its almost 1:00 pm here. will catch the wonderful poems in the morning and I think today I will roam the night sky in my dreams. Good night and take care.
sleep well and see you in the morning vandana….
and thanks again…
Hey Brian – good evening. Thanks for bringing a new face on Dverse – I was talking to Vandana earlier today.
What interests me here is the combination of the theme with the celestial objects – certainly makes it challenging – have some ideas, lets see if I can work it out.
Vandana,
Most welcome.
yeah, I have known vandana for some time and def like all the forms that she uses…something not easy for me….so I thought she might bring an interesting challenge to us…
So nice to have you hosting, Vandana. I love the sound of this form and the example you gave is so good.
cool..hopefully you will get a chance to play…
Oh gosh, this looks so cool. I get so intimidated by “forms” in poetry…which is why I usually stand far away from the bar on these Meeting the Bar nights…this is intriguing…and I might try. Maybe. If I remove my chicken costume. Otherwise I will be a wallflower and have a few rounds by the bathroom away from the bar…lol
ha. no chicken costumes allowed….it is not too bad…the good news is i can count six syllables on two hands….i dont have to take my shoes off….
Good point, Mr. Miller.
ha.
hey you did it!!! smiles.
I know…and it only hurt a little! 😉 Smiles!
Vandana, so lovely to see you hosting! Whu-hoo! This is a very intriguing and challenging prompt, and I needed just such a jog…I will give it a whirl. I am happy to see breaking the rules is allowed as it may become necessary, LOL.
smiles…covering my eyes sherry….
Thank you for this wonderful form and gracious hosting, Vandana. 🙂
heya hannah
Hi there, Brian. 🙂
Fun no brainer.
hey i was just talking about you the other day….
and using science in poems…
Vandana, thank you for this challenge; but I’m confused..the poem above has 7 syllables in each line (except one has 6) and it seems 7 is the number of stars in the constellation and seven the number of lines – we are to write lines with 6 syllables instead of 7? I did use 6 but it would have been better for me to use 7..which is correct, pls?
interesting…i did not notice the example had 7 but you are right…
by the research that i did, it is seven lines….later the six syllable
limit was set by another writer…so i wonder if this one pre-dated the change to six syllables…
Not sure if internal rhyme is allowed, but no mention of it being prohibited. Have always liked the challenges of formatted poetry, but I also admire those for whom writing free verse comes so naturally! Anyways, gave it a shot. Thanks for being our host tonight, Vandana. Love learning and trying something new!
cool. be over in just a bit ginny….
Hi Vandana….so sorry to be late with my poem. I was out of town and didn’t have a chance to write until tonight. I like this form. Thank you for introducing it! Now to read what others have written….
thanks for reading mary…hope your trip went well…
I’m a little late to the party tonight. I’m glad the pub was still open. I don’t often hang on Meeting the Bar nights but as luck the timing was right. Vandana this was a fantastically fun form to play with. I don’t normally stray from my free verse but you made this form too intriguing to pass up.
Thank you,
Delaina
you rocked the form delaina…
Nice to see you here, Vandana! I enjoyed the prompt, though please don’t ask me what my poem means! I’m not sure I know. 🙂
This is a fun form. I chose a celestial phenomenon over a celestial body. 🙂
ha i think i know what that means….smiles.
it’s a great delight to see you hosting here @ dVerse Vandana and with such a fun prompt…added mine 🙂
it’s nice to meet you here vandana..i enjoyed your prompt a lot..thank you.
This is a great challenge, Vandana! I had fun writing. I’ll be back to read tomorrow.
Thank you to all for your warm wishes and response to this prompt. I am too still at a learning stage and its fun to learn along anything new together.
Best wishes.
off to school….will check back in at lunch and see who is playing…
This was a fun prompt. I opted to leave out the reference to something celestial, although I have referred to my wife as an angel many times. 🙂
Thanks for the prompt, Vandana.
:)!!
Hello, Vandana.
Thanks for the prompt that helped me break my poemless spell. 🙂
cool. just got done travelling to my in laws and have some catching up to do…smiles.
Yes, thank you, Vandana…I really enjoyed this new form that you introduced us to. I too have been going through a dry spell with writing and this got me going…at least for today!
woot. good to get going again…
Yeah, Brian…I need something…
:)It is all my pleasure.I too enjoyed reading marvelous poetry.