Hello everyone ! Grace here to introduce you to our guest blogger for today’s Poetics, Jennifer Wagner !
Bros.
My two youngest boys a couple of years ago.
Photo © Jennifer Wagner
Bug you, take your stuff, embarrass you, rat you out. Brothers can be so pesky, but they can also have your back when it counts. I’m the mom of four boys and have a front row seat for this thing called brotherhood—the good, the bad, the wet willies—in this special relationship.
There are some superb poems written for and about brothers. One such poem was written by Robert Frost for fellow poet Edward Thomas, whom he considered to be “the only brother I ever had.” (Click link for quote source and to read more about their relationship).
Spread open as I dropped them half-read through
Like dove wings on a figure on a tomb
To see, if in a dream they brought of you,
I might not have the chance I missed in life
Through some delay, and call you to your face
First soldier, and then poet, and then both,
Who died a soldier-poet of your race.
I meant, you meant, that nothing should remain
Unsaid between us, brother, and this remained—
And one thing more that was not then to say:
The Victory for what it lost and gained.
You went to meet the shell’s embrace of fire
On Vimy Ridge; and when you fell that day
The war seemed over more for you than me,
But now for me than you—the other way.
How over, though, for even me who knew
The foe thrust back unsafe beyond the Rhine,
If I was not to speak of it to you
And see you pleased once more with words of mine?
Do you, like Frost, have a poem to write about someone you were close to like a brother? Or do you have a humorous, or tender, or heartbreaking, or disastrous story to relate about brothers (your own or otherwise) in a poem? There are a number of notable brothers in history that can tickle the muse as well: The Wright Brothers, Frank and Jesse James, Cain and Abel, Isaac and Ishmael, to name just a few.
So that’s our prompt for the day: brothers/brotherhood—from any angle. I’m looking forward to reading what you talented group of poets have to share.
Thanks Jennifer!
If you’re here for the first time, here’s how to participate:
Grace said:
The bar is open & big thanks to Jennifer for the lovely prompt ~
Happy Tuesday everyone ~
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Happy Tuesday Grace.. 🙂
Jennifer Wagner said:
Hi Grace! Thanks for inviting me to guest host today. Looking forward to everyone’s poetics!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Thank you so much for accepting Jennifer.. we all love to have guests behind the bar.
Jennifer Wagner said:
My pleasure! Thanks again~
Grace said:
And such a cute picture of your two boys Jennifer 🙂
Jennifer Wagner said:
Thanks, Grace!
The Course of Our Seasons said:
Jennifer -so good to see you as the guest pub tender. I love the prompt – have two younger brothers and I have written about them and for them over the past few years. I look forward to reading all the great brotherly poetry this evening.
The Course of Our Seasons said:
And thanks for linking my poem in this afternoon ( Grace ? Bjorn?) Was sitting in the Drs office most of the afternoon – sinus infection – tis the season 🙂
Grace said:
No problem Kathleen ~ Good of you to join us ~ 🙂
Jennifer Wagner said:
Wonderful to see you, Kathleen. Enjoyed your lovely piece. 🙂
Gabriella said:
This is a fine prompt and it has triggered a lot of good poems.
Jennifer Wagner said:
I agree, Gabriella–some great reading for sure…your piece really touched me.
MarinaSofia said:
Sadly, I can’t contribute very much to this prompt, as I am an only child (and suffered from that loneliness all my life). Perhaps I should write a message to the little brother I wish I’d had… But it’s the longest relationship (usually) that we have in life and I certainly wanted my children to experience it. No thoughts of having just one child if I could help it…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I have similar experience.. only a sister.. though some sibling rivalry I have grown up with.. love your idea of writing to your imaginary brother…
MarinaSofia said:
I wasn’t that keen on having a sister, somehow. I was a real tomboy and was afraid she would have been girly. I would have loved to have one later on in life, though.
Jennifer Wagner said:
I love your idea of writing to the brother you never had! I’ll look forward to reading your piece of you decide to go there.
Mary said:
Hi Marina Sofia, I didn’t have a brother either. I always wanted one. I wrote a poem about the brother I wished I had. Smiles.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
A wonderful prompt that really had me thinking… I realize that I have not seen much of brotherhood at all, I only have a sister, and no children.. so I have more been standing outside trying to grasp that secret bond.. (most of my best friends are women)… so maybe I touched more on the negative side of brotherhood… anyway I look forward to read what’s more to read… and maybe learn a little more,
Grace said:
I actually have two brothers but we are now settled all over the world & hardly connect with each other except during occasions.
I wrote about the general theme of brotherhood ~ I think this prompt is very flextible – one can go very general or very specific to one’s own brother ~
Jennifer Wagner said:
I loved your piece, Grace. And I think brotherhood as a general theme, even if one doesn’t have a brother themselves, can be wide open~
Jennifer Wagner said:
Thanks, Bjorn! I too have only a sister, though I did have a cousin who was like a brother to me in many ways. I wonder what your sister would write about you as her brother…smiles…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I think she would mostly tell how I constantly teased her to the verge of explosion… I’m probably a better big brother now than I was then..
Jennifer Wagner said:
ha, Bjorn! I see that quite a bit around my house.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
But I think sisters are easier to tease from what I have seen 🙂
Jennifer Wagner said:
Probably so!
Mary said:
Jennifer, it surprises me that you only have a sister. I would have thought from your poem that you DID have brothers. Smiles.
Jennifer Wagner said:
I used my boys as inspiration! Smiles.
claudia said:
what a cool prompt – and cool to see jennifer behind the bar as well
i would’ve loved to write but this week is so busy that i really cannot make the time to write and esp. to read and comment… so will be back next week hopefully
Grace said:
We are missing you Claudia ~ Yes, next week will be OLN and you can link up the brother poem if you like ~ Have a good week ~
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
We all have those weeks Claudia.. and I hope you come back with a brother poem.
Jennifer Wagner said:
Hi Claudia! Great to see you pop in–I understand being busy! Looking forward to reading you again once things settle a bit for you.
Glenn Buttkus said:
I wondered where you were; funny how our fellowship & brotherhood becomes such a regular vital part of each of our lives. Brian is absent more than most these days; makes me a bit sad, but certainly understand some of the reasons.
Mary said:
Jennifer, thanks for prompting! And, Grace, thanks for arranging it. I will enjoy seeing what people write. I think there are a lot of different approaches people could take to the theme.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I have already seen a very nice variation.. love what I have seen so far… 🙂
Jennifer Wagner said:
My pleasure! I agree, Mary, I do think there are numerous angles to write from. Frost’s poem isn’t to his real brother…and there are lots of famous (and infamous) brothers in history to draw from if that is of interest to anyone as well. I am really enjoying the offerings thus far!
Grace said:
That’s what I love about poetics – same theme but different approaches ~
I will be going home in a bit but will return visits and comments ~
Glenn Buttkus said:
I am lucky, late in life, to still have my brother. We see each other weekly. But alas, I never had a son, just three lovely challenging daughters; & yet over the span of seven decades, somehow brothers of other mothers entered my life, & I cherished their brotherhood. “Brotherhood” is a vast concept, rife with several layers of meaning. thanks, Jennifer, for coming up with this terrific prompt & for stepping up to the bar.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Indeed.. so many dimensions of brotherhood to consider… 🙂
Jennifer Wagner said:
Very cool that you see your brother regularly. I hope my boys will want to do the same, ha. I absolutely agree that “brotherhood” is a vast concept. Thanks much, Glenn.
billgncs said:
I have no brothers or sons – but from what I’ve seen – few can love each other more, and few can hate each other more.
Jennifer Wagner said:
ha, indeed you may be right, Bill 🙂
billgncs said:
I used to end up for dinner often at Jimmy’s and his bedroom wall was full of holes. Oh, those were Paul ( his older brother tried to punch him and he ducked ) – of course nobody said anything about Jimmy when Paul was around. He protected him from all the other kids.
Jennifer Wagner said:
Yup! That sounds like brothers!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I think you are right.. there is a strength in such a bond.. both in hate and love.
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
Alas, I don’t have time to write anything new today, but here’s my old “brotherly” limerick:
“Pick a card,” was a phrase I would hear
As a child, from my brother, all year.
He did card tricks—his hobby.
I’d answer, quite snobby:
“Magician, please go. Disappear!”
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Oh having a sister I can definitely see my sister saying something like that… with a huge sigh.
Jennifer Wagner said:
haha! Good one, Mad. 🙂
Grace said:
Nice one, I recall playing cards with my brothers all summer long 🙂
Madeleine Begun Kane (@MadKane) said:
Thanks Jennifer, Grace, and Bjorn. 🙂
Abhra said:
Hi Jennifer, welcome to Dversepoets. Like your prompt – I will try to join in.
Jennifer Wagner said:
Thanks, Abhra. Looking forward to what you have to share. 🙂
Abhra said:
I just posted, it is kind of late for me – I will come back to read the posts….have a good evening.
Grace said:
See you tomorrow Abhra ~
Jennifer Wagner said:
Thanks for joining in, Abhra. Rest well~
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Time to head for bed.. Hope to find many great pieces in the morning.
Jennifer Wagner said:
G’night, Bjorn.
Grace said:
See you tomorrow Bjorn ~
Raivenne said:
As an only child, yet mother of two suns I found this prompt to be unique. I started out one way, but my muse took this in an unexpected direction.
Grace said:
Thanks for joining in Raivenne ~
Jennifer Wagner said:
Great to see you join in, Raivenne. Heading over now to read your piece.
Jennifer Wagner said:
Thanks to everyone who has joined in so far. I’ll be checking back in for more later. 🙂
Grace said:
Thanks for being our gracious host 🙂
Myrna said:
Thanks Grace for inviting Jennifer to give us this prompt. It made me think back for some sad times, but poetry, can do that sometimes. Jennifer thank you for hosting tonight. With four boys, I imagine you stay pretty busy.
Grace said:
I was moved by your personal share Myrna ~ Thanks for sharing it ~
Jennifer Wagner said:
Hi Myrna–I am enjoying being here. Your superb piece really touched me…thank you for sharing it with us. I do stay busy, ha, but it is good busy.
Glenn Buttkus said:
Only 4 pm PST, but after 7 on the east coast, while Claudia, Bjorn, Abhra, Tony, Viv & so many others in our dVerse international family are off to bed. Oceans apart, time zones on fast forward, already tomorrow down Under–yet somehow we keep those lines of communication & art wide open. The diversity of takes on Jennifer’s prompt are particularly rich tonight.
Grace said:
I too love the various responses so far ~ That is the beauty of having an international group of writers – some are sleeping, some are waking up, smiles ~
shanyns said:
Brothers. Interesting. Thanks for this.
Grace said:
Thanks for dropping by Shanyns ~
Jennifer Wagner said:
Hi, Shanyns 🙂
shanyns said:
Hey. Nice to see you!
Sumana Roy said:
This wonderful topic prompted me to write about a tradition in my part of the world…
Jennifer Wagner said:
Glad you did, Sumana. I enjoy learning something new. 🙂
M said:
Two of my favorite poets on the webs 🙂 Afraid my turn is a bit more melancholy… ~
Grace said:
🙂 Happy to see you linking up M ~
Good morning ~ I will be around to check back on new poems ~ Enjoy your day ~
Jennifer Wagner said:
Great to see you, M! 🙂 Your piece is amazing~
kanzensakura said:
This has been a lovely prompt Jennifer. So many emotions, visions of brotherhood – all shared and given. I, who have no siblings, have found a new depth to this relationship I did not have before.
Jennifer Wagner said:
Thank you, Hayes. 🙂 There really are some gripping pieces written to the prompt, and I’ve had to gulp a few tears more than once. I am so glad you shared the piece about your father and his “brothers”– it really is a unique bond. I’m going to show my husband your piece–he will be so moved.
kanzensakura said:
Thank you! I hope he does like it. You can call me Toni or as many do who follow my blog, Kanzensakura, Kanzen. Either is fine. 🙂
Jennifer Wagner said:
Will do! I thought your name might be Hayes Spencer as it was in parentheses on your link. Thanks for clarifying! Looking forward to more of your work. 🙂
mishunderstood said:
Thanks Grace and Jennifer for a very meaningful prompt. 🙂
I have fond memories of my brother that will last a lifetime. I have to admit that writing this one was difficult, but comforting at the same time. Now to read others….I am sure it will be inspiring.
Jennifer Wagner said:
I’m glad you took up the challenge–your poem is lovely.