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Happy Thursday, poets, and happy Ascension day for all. The prompt today is about opposites.
In April I wrote a number of sonnets that where connected. One of those I linked up at OLN. In that sonnet, which was a passionate love poem there was a line that said:
You are the sudden storm and gentle rain
that received many comments. Especially a comment from Claudia resonated with me, where she said that she liked contrasts, and not an even canvas, and I thought we would try this device. When I wrote it I wanted to describe passion, which to me consists of many contrasting emotions. We need the cold to feel the warmth, and where would light be without the darkness. The world is neither tepid nor grey, we are caught in a whirl-storm of ambivalence between opposite emotions. So when I started to search the internet for what this might be called as a literary device I came upon the term antithesis which when used as a literary or poetic tool is defined as: “a rhetorical device in which two opposite ideas are put together in a sentence to achieve a contrasting effect”.
Examples that can be found are both from prose and poetry. Consider for example this example from Dickens’ “The tale of two cities”:
“It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were all going direct the other way.”
This piece is just loaded with contrasts, and somehow I feel that this is much closer to reality than to try to find that exact point between best and worst or between wisdom and foolishness. The world is not fifty shades of grey but both black and white at the same time, like a photograph is built up of black grains of black silver on the white paper, and only if we don’t look close enough it appears grey.
The concept of yin and yang also comes to mind, but there the opposites or rather complementary parts, where actually completeness is achieved by antithesis.
So today I would like you to include a few examples of opposite terms to get preciseness or ambiguity, or you can use it to build metaphors. Try to find original or even complex opposites that involve many senses. There are no requirement on form here. One way of doing this is to start list a couple of opposites, and expand your poem from that, but you decide yourself.
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Good afternoon / evening, Friends. The bar is now open. Bjorn is at a concert right now, will be a bit late, but let’s begin the discussion! Smiles.
I had never heard of antithesis before, though (of course) I worked with opposites/antonyms at one time or another. This was an interesting challenge really. I think it is a technique to keep on the back burner & use it on a periodic basis in a poem.
This is what I like about Meeting the Bar – the experimental aspect.
I agree. It gives us an opportunity to play with a different technique. We don’t need to be ‘perfect’ but just practice a bit with something new!
Yes, this is exactly how I viewed it – as an exercise in writing.
Yes, it is. I found it interesting and I believe it has opened a different device for future works.
I also was amazed to see what a lot of information there is on antithesis online, and Bjorn, I really enjoyed the examples that you gave us….particularly the Dickens’ quote from ‘A Tale of Two Cities.’
Somehow I think I have used it before but unintentionally.. I was fun to start from the contrast and work outward…
I just finished reading Glenn’s poem. I found his point, as I interpreted it, interesting….we humans really need antithesis in our lives. We wouldn’t know happiness if we didn’t experience sadness. We wouldn’t know joy if we didn’t also experience sorrow. Thanks, Glenn, for this thought-provoking poem!
good evening…. that is a cool prompt björn and when i read it first it brought a poem to mind that we learned as kids and consists of contradictions… i wanted to join but even though we had a bank holiday today the day was too busy to write… maybe a poem finds me during the night…smiles… happy thursday!!
Interesting about the childhood poem, Claudia. I tried to think back if I ever learned such a poem (in English),and none comes to mind. I hope you enjoyed your bank holiday. Ha, today is no holiday here.
When I read some of the contributions from your prompt I found a lot of this technique being used…
I agree. Often, I find folks using devices that we don’t exactly know the names for, but once identified, see it everywhere. This is actually something I’ve tried to exorcise from my writing. I think as a younger poet relying on this contrast became a crutch, so reincorporating it into my poetry now is quite difficult. Exactly what I hoped to find here.
This was an awesome prompt! I love when an idea quickly comes to mind in response to a prompt, as it did with this one. Now off to read what’s been linked so far. Peace, Linda
I liked your approach, Linda. You really worked antithesis into your poem very well.
I really enjoyed that, surprised myself!
I look forward to what the result was… The device is fun..
It is an interesting device, and I have used it many times throughout my writing. I will sleep on it and see if anything comes my way. May pop in and read a few from those that visited me on Tuesday’s prompt.
I think I have used it as well.. But never as a starting point…
Oh, do give it a try! I am very much enjoying reading your poetry.
Hello friends.. I just came from a concert with Nick Cave… Amazing dark.music. I Look forward to read the contributions on my subway trip home..
Ha, nice that you could enjoy a concert, Bjorn. Truthfully, I have never heard of Nick Cave. Is he Swedish….or?
He’s Australian and was probably biggest in the 80s
I like this prompt and have used it – not as a starting point but sometimes as a part of a greater whole. I shall certainly keep this in the front file for future use. I’ve posted but will come back later to read and comment. Guests on the way for a backyard bbq. I’ll save some for you all!
Ah… Sounds wonderful.. I just need to read some poetry.. but then I’m coming right over.
Come on…there’s always plenty.
Toni, you did an amazing job with this prompt really. Your ‘voyage of life’ theme really worked well with antithesis!!
Wonderful prompt, Bjorn. I’m still up to my ears in caregiving and assuming all the chores my husband ordinarily does but hope to at least write something short. Sort of afraid to link, though, for fear I won’t have time to read/respond to comments. Missing all my dVerse friends.
Thank you Victoria, we miss you too.
This is a very challenging and tricky prompt. Thanks, Bjorn, for introducing us to this!
Ah.. Meet the Bar should be a little tricky, but at the same time making us learn something… It was fun to prepare the prompt.
I love writing in antithesis.. and playing a role of devil’s advocate in truly ironic truth is also a way to inspire greater insight into how it all works..:)
But i am complicated anyway.. life is more fun to me like that.. but of course not everyone’s cup of tea..:)
I think everyone are complicated in their own way 😉
Well, I gave it the good, ol’ college try (writing last minute after a haze of alcohol?), and I hope to have met the guidelines. With writing to prompts being difficult for me, I once again feel 50/50 on the accuracy. I’m hoping the play on love and hate/murder couple with common meter expressing something (hopefully) uncommon does the trick. If not, promptly remove me! 😀
Sometimes writing under a doze is what produces the best result.. Many poets have tried that.
good points Bjorn – it’s good to call this tool out. I’m traveling today and tomorrow, but will try to stop in a bit.
I hope you do.. It’s actually nice to just start from a few pairs and then expand from that.
I love everything about this, and I’m a “Bjorn” fan–so I guess I should try to make an effort at contributing. (I have a new blog, so I’m probably not recognizable, by the way…)
Now your blog is recognised 😉 I will swing by and have a look.
Thank you–I’m getting ready to post my offering for your prompt.
Great 🙂
I have several ideas for a poem but so far nothing I’ve written has satisfied me. If I don’t post a poem at least know I have been working on the prompt and will keep this in mind for another time.
I think it’s a tool to keep and do something with once you feel inspired
A good prompt! It is said for the painter, remember, the viewer knows nothing, if you want to show what is small, you must show what is big.
Indeed.. There are a lot of similarities between painting and writing..
an interesting post, Bjorn, thanks for the goad ~
Good that I could inspire you.
I don’t know who might read this as it’s the end of the session, but for what it’s worth, I am having difficulty with my computer…malware (?) keeps me from leaving comments..every time I hit ‘publish’ it takes me somewhere else and erases what I wrote. Sorry I can’t finish visiting the rest of the blogs tonight…it’s taken me hours to post just a few. Frustrated I can’t reciprocate…deleting cookies doesn’t help. Hope to be back and do my part next time. Thnx
Kathy, computers can be very frustrating.. I hope you get it solved.
I was too late for the linky 😦 but hope you’ll still take a look at mine https://voicelessfricative.wordpress.com/2015/05/18/ice-and-fire/
Welcome to dVerse.. hope you return and join the fun. Prompts are Tuesday and Thursdays opening at 3PM EST.
I, too, was too late for Mr. Linky, but:
https://sadlywaiting.wordpress.com/2015/05/25/that-song/
I recommend that you link up at open link next Thursday 😉