photo by and copyright by kanzensakura
Hello my poetic friends! Kanzen Sakura (Toni Spencer) behind the bar today. Spring is here and along with spring comes….hanami. In Japan, this is the time for viewing cherry blossoms. Hanami has come earlier than usual not only in Japan but also in Washington, DC. The DC Hanami, Sakura Matsuri (cherry blossom festival) is one of the largest and longest outside of Japan. Just like in Japan, crowds of people view the cherry blossoms at all times of the day. Parades, music, art exhibits; several years ago I was able to view a specially loaned exhibit of Hokusai’s Forty Views of Fuji which features the enduring Great Wave at Kanagawa. People picnic under the trees, get married, engaged, and a former professor of mine had his ashes scattered in the DC Tidal Basin during Sakura Matsuri. In Japan, hanami can become one long party and sometimes, festival goers can become rowdy!
The sakura represents to the Japanese, the fleeting brevity of life and beauty, the feeling of mono no aware (mild melancholy at the passing of things). The brief and glorious life of the Samurai is also associated with the blossoms. When the sakura bloom, they often fade and petals fall the same day. But hanami is also a time of food, fun, festival, family, and friends. I have happy memories of hanami in Japan and DC viewing lighted cherry trees at night, mingling with crowds during the day, dancing under the trees, food with friends and…sakura ice cream!
Today, I have chosen some haiku by Issa and Basho about cherry blossoms. Please choose one as the inspiration to write your haibun and to use as the haiku to introduce your haibun. This is an acceptable way to write haibun. Some writers will intersperse several haiku among paragraphs of longer haibun and in particular, travelogue haibun. You will expand on your chosen haiku with your unique take on the haiku with one to three tight paragraphs. You will close with your own haiku that expands on your haibun. You can read my previous post here on dVerse, Ch-ch-changes, for more information on writing your haibun. The post can be viewed in the dVerse archives.
The Prompt:
1. Choose one of the haiku below to begin your haibun of one to three tight prose paragraphs. Please make note of the author.
2. Expand on the haiku with your perspective of beauty, spring, hanami, journey to view cherry blossoms or other spring blooms, when you notice spring’s beginnings, the renewal and hope in spring…fun times relating to spring.
3. End with your own cherry blossom/spring, nature based haiku – not senryu or micro-poem. Line syllable count can be short-long-short or, 5-7-5. Please note: The haiku for the prompt are English translations. In Japanese the line count is 5-7-5. For haiku written in English you can use the 5-7-5 or, short-long-short
Haiku by Issa:
“what a strange thing –
to be alive
beneath cherry blossoms”
“Under the cherry blossoms,
there are
no strangers”
“When cherry blossoms
scatter –
no regrets”
“Without you –
how vast
the cherry blossom grove”
Haiku by Basho:
“Between our two lives
There is also the life
of the cherry blossom”
“If I had the knack
I’d sing like
cherry flakes (petals) falling”
“Come –
see real blossoms
of this painful world”
“A cloud of cherry blossoms
the temple bell –
is it Uneno – is it Asakusa”
“How many many things
they call to mind –
these cherry blossoms.”
If you’re new to dVerse, this is how to participate:
– Use Mr. Linky to link your haibun. You may do more than one.
– And as always, please be courteous and not just link your poem and run or take down your poem’s site.
– Visit, read, comment the other poems and especially, those who read and comment on your link.
– Please link your poem back to dVerse
– Have fun! During this time of cherry blossom festival, let’s have a Poetry Festival!
About Kanzen Sakura (Toni Spencer) I was born and currently live in the southern US. I am a world traveller and haved lived in different places. I fell in love with Japanese culture, food, and have studied and written Japanese poetic forms since I was a teenager. I blog on World Press on my blog Kanzen Sakura where you will find a mashup of South meets East – poetry, haiku, tanka, haibun, recipes, musings. I have never been published but that is fine with me. I observe the changing of seasons with the Japanese view.
Hello, all you beautiful bar patrons. Toni has been unavoidably detained, but she will be swinging by the bar as soon as she can. Wishing you all a happy Haibun Monday, and may your poems blossom with beauty.
Please carefully note the prompt rules, be inspired by these gorgeous haiku, and post your haibuns. Then do some barhoppin’ around to others’ pieces.
Happy Monday, all. And Happy Spring.
Thank you De! I am here and not as late as I had feared. Hello to everyone else! Wish I could send you all this beautiful day of warmth, blue skies, and blooming cherrybtrees!
Please send me the blooming cherry trees right now, all is still bare and lifeless in my part of the world ~
I did my best. the photo is one of my favorites I have taken of my beloved cherry blossoms.
Yay! Gorgeous prompt, Toni!
Thank you…always a personal fave of mine. Thanks again for opening for me!
I love the haiku quotes that you selected Toni ~
I will be around later to post and visit ~
Happy Haibun Monday !!!!
I am glad you do. I love them all too. Amanogawa, hatsuyuki, sakura….wish I had a dollar for the tanka and haiku I’ve written on them. I’D HAVE ENUFF $$$ to fly to Canada a few times!
My computer is running (?) S.l.o.w.w. but will post comments and replies as best I can. I hope you all enjoy this taste of spring in the prompt for today.
Come check out my poetry
If you have a haibun relating to todays prompt, please post here on Mr. Linky or please join us for other poetic prompts and Open Link Night. 🙂
Hey, Trancedlive, we all like our poetry checked out! (Smiles) Hope you will be sharing a haibun and not just self-promoting.
Okie thanks for the info (chuckles)
I think you meant to say, Hey, welcome- it is good to see a new face. This is how it works, would you like to join us?
In the movie, The Last Samurai, the Samurai leader, Katsumoto said, “You can spend your life searching for the perfect cherry blossom and find your life has not been wasted.” Later when was dying, he looked up at the cherry blossoms above him and with his last breath he observed, “Perfect…they are all perfect.” That is indeed the attitude of most Japanese about cherry blossoms. They are indeed magical!
Happy spring, everyone! Indeed cherry blossoms are a good reminder of spring. Thank you for the prompt, Toni.
Thank you for your poem. I like very much your take on the haiku you chose and your closing haiku….perfect.
I was born in DC and have deep feelings about the Cherry Trees! Thank you, Tony for a great prompt!
I am glad to hear this! I lived in DC for awhile myself and still return for Sakura Matsuri. They do a great festival there and I am sure you know the history of those trees there. I am looking forward to your post. It always is amazing to me the parts of a prompt people will choose and then their on take on that prompt portion. I find this so exciting whenever it is time to post and then read. Thank you for becoming part of the crew!
That is my pleasure!
Running behind today after a hectic weekend. Will try to settle down and write my haibun now to this beautiful prompt. Thank you, Toni and I hope/pray all is well.
I hope you can find some calm under the cherry trees today. Hectic can do it to you, can’t it?
Just got home from Mira duty and will be linking my post up, unless someone beat me to it. 🙂 Thanks for an inspirational prompt, Toni!
Thank you Gayle. Mira duty….sounds wonderful to me!
It is wonderful, Toni. She’s a delightful, tiny girl. 😊
🙂
In my part of the world, it is getting to be supper time. I’m off to prepare and will be back a little later to read, comment, and respond to pub comments. I’ll see you all then!
See you later, Toni!
I may find a second to play tonight … crazy-lady / soooo-many-kids-day.
I truly hope you will. The prompt is open all week if that helps!
PROMPT IS OPEN ALL WEEK! Please join us and link your haibun. I have been out on the dVerse trail and have read some incredible haibun with amazing haiku. Thank you all for your amazing talent.
So glad I managed to slide in before it was closed. This is such a beautiful prompt and I could not miss it. Thanks for sharing the magic of Hanami and Sakura Matsuri. We were extremely surprised to have a winter wonderland snowfall yesterday which gently covered my little perennials beginning to bloom. Happy Spring to you!
Be back soon to visit the trail. 🙂
I am so glad you posted!
Sorry I’m late, Toni! Thank you for a lovely prompt. It’s 6.20 am over here in the UK. We’ve just had storm Katie and I am so glad our ornamental cherry tree hasn’t blossomed yet or the petals would be all over the garden now. This is a lovely prompt for a haibun. I will get to work on mine now. Happy Haibun Monday/Tuesday!
You are right on time! 🙂
I enjoyed this exercise very much!
I am glad. I enjoyed your haibun very much!
This is a lovely prompt – just passing by … bit early for the bar for me but try to get back here later on… enjoy the blossoms …
…whoops … should have read I will try to …oh what the hey …see y’all later on…Enjoy 🙂
See you later as well. Looking forward to seeing you.
Good morning, and happy Spring. I hope those who celebrate Easter had a great holiday. My weekend stretched into Monday since everyone was off work and it was really nice. Nothing fancy but nice to relax after the stress of the week.
I really enjoyed the haiku here in your prompt post.
Happy spring to you! I am glad you enjoyed these haiku. “Nothing fancy” but relaxing is perfection.. 🙂
Hi Nan
I see you have technical trouble which I know nothing about but I did want to post your link here to your pretty haibun because it looks like many have not visited because we are getting a dead link page. But you have a list of recent posts which helps 🙂
http://nanmykel.com/2016/03/28/for-dverse-monday/
Thanks ~ I updated her link to show the correct one ~ Enjoy your day ~
Thank you! We often come across such incidence and wlll correct when we can.
Grace updated her link. Links posted here in comments are not always seen as many people do not comment or read this part of the prompt. But your helpfulness is most kind and thank you for attempting to help so an excellent poet gets the chance to be read.
Good morning everyone! I am having a delightful morning reading these haibun – a morning of cherry blossoms and coffee is truly wonderful.
Thanks for the support, everybody! Now can you please tell me how to open up your halibuns to read?
This is our linky, which you can click to read the other poems:
http://www.blenza.com/linkies/links.php?owner=dversepoets&postid=25Mar2016a&meme=12489
Hello, I paired this with Lynn’s Mountain prompt as well…thank you, for the inspiration and I will be back to read with fresh eyes tomorrow. 🙂
I am so glad you did!
Very late to the game!
Prompt is open all week so you are right on time 🙂