An English Breeze –
by Robert Louis Stevenson
UP with the sun, the breeze arose,
Across the talking corn she goes,
And smooth she rustles far and wide
Through all the voiceful countryside.
Through all the land her tale she tells;
She spins, she tosses, she compels
The kites, the clouds, the windmill sails
And all the trees in all the dales.
God calls us, and the day prepares
With nimble, gay and gracious airs:
And from Penzance to Maidenhead
The roads last night He watered.
God calls us from inglorious ease,
Forth and to travel with the breeze
While, swift and singing, smooth and strong
She gallops by the fields along.
Imagine we are already up to our 10th Quadrille, and today it’s my turn to host. I usually like words that can be both nouns and verbs to give you a lot of variations, and today I have chosen breeze. I look forward to the most original usage. Come along and write 44 words exactly excluding title and use breeze somewhere in the main body of your poem.
Come on and write, it’s a breeze.
And when you’ve written, link up your poem below (click on Mr Linky and enter the link to your own poem), make sure to visit, and read the others. The prompt is open for a week so don’t forget to go back and read later. Don’t forget to link back to dVerse.
& have fun.
Welcome all… this is already our 10th Quadrille… I love writing to this prompt, it’s absolutely a breeze.
The poem is lovely to read ~
I need a cool breeze in our summer heat ~ Thanks for hosting Bjorn and looking forward to reading in a bit ~
Here we had some warmth coming, but we do have some breeze as well
Thank you for hosting tonight, Bjorn. A great prompt. I’m so glad I came back to the pub – the gin and tonic is just how I like it 😉
Perfect, we are so glad to have you back at the bar… and the quadrille is our tribute to make it simple… (actually many of us write more than one).. Maybe I can mix up a sea breeze to inspire.
A quadrille is a lovely dance to, well, dance …
Exactly… we thought it would be a fun to call the challenge that.
and the figures of four in the quadrille – 44 words in the poem. A dance of a poem!
And today, after glorious days of sun and warmth, it is steadily raining. A tropical depression stalled off the east coast. My friend in TN is at a picnic today and volleyball and canoeing on the menu. Ah well, my grill still works in the rain and I certainly don’t mind the splish splash – maybe later today the rain will slow. Happy Memorial day to those of us in the USA who have the holiday!
Happy Memorial day… and hope the rain subside or you find some rainshade to enjoy the day.
At least it isn’t 100F with 300% humidity!
Breezing in to say hello, after posting my second Q. Got a funny one simmering, also. Thanks, B! Loving everybody’s gorgeous breezes so far!
I do love the all as well.
My favorite form and with such a lovely word. Hope to be on board for the prompt in the next day or two.
ooops….Take care of you!
Thank you Bjorn for this wonderful word. I have done another and linked it.
Wonderful – I too added a second.
Hope to see you. Take care of you!!!
Spent the entire day at hospital with wife’s family as their mother is in ICU and in grave condition from leukemia, congestive heart failure and a bad heart valve. My poem reflect a small part of that!
Am so sorry to hear this news – so frightening and very hard to have a family member seriously ill. Sending positive thoughts your way.
My prayers and thoughts are with you all. I am so very sorry.
Sending positive thoughts your way, Walt.
Oh you are in my thought. Your words where weighted in lead.
Your poem tells the story too. Prayers and positive thoughts are coming to you.
Good Evening, hoping everyone hears the whispers of their heart in a warm breeze. I actually wrote a couple, but went with this one. Thanks for reading.
Whispers of the heart in a warm breeze….that is so beautiful, Truedessa. 🙂
Hello everyone. We have old college friends from 40+ years ago visiting for the week. Much reminiscing, many laughs and lots of catching up.
I will be reading during my regular early morning time whilst everyone else is still asleep. Looking forward to catching the breeze! Wonderful prompt for this Memorial Day in the USA. We went to Boston Commons – oldest public park in the U.S. To see the display of 37,000 US flags covering a hill – 1 for every Massachusetts soldier killed in battles since the Revolutionary War. Quite a sight.
See you all in the AM over my first morning cup. GREAT word for the prompt, Bjorn!
Oh I loved how you caught the breeze with your flags.
Hoping all of my American friends and fellow poets enjoyed Memorial Day.
Looking forward to reading some breezy quadrilles throughout the week…
…and Good Morning Bjorn! 🙂
Bjorn! The “nature poet” kit on magnetic poetry has “breeze.” I challenge thee.
http://play.magneticpoetry.com/poem/Nature/kit/
Ha, let me see…
Challenge accepted.
Oh you’re kidding me! I learn something so many days at the bar! All this time I thought you really had a magnetic poetry “game” — and had the letters on your refrigerator and arranged them and then put them onto dVerse!!!! Silly me. I MUST get more into these new fangled computer ways — and please don’t tell me this has been around for years! 🙂 Just bookmarked the site! 🙂
It’s perfect, just sit there with virtual poetry… (save the screen and paste)… I included the link.
Hoping folks sleep a little longer so I can get there on my second cup this morning 🙂
Yay! It’s a blast, Lil. I simply take a screen shot when I’m done, and then post the photo. 😉
Good morning.. Soon ready to breeze on my bike to work.
This is my first attempt at the prompt here and am excited and nervous at the same time! 🙂 Looking forward to joining in more often.
We are always happy to welcome new poets… Look forward to know you even better.
Thank you 🙂 I look forward to know you wonderful people too.
Welcme to dVerse! Tipping my morning cup of coffee to you as I’m about to mosey over to the other side of this lovely virtual bar and begin to read! 🙂 Come by often! 🙂 It’s a friendly place.
Thanks, Lillian 🙂 I agree with you. I’ve just joined in and I’m met with such heart-warming responses! Can’t wait to explore more and meet many others too.
Welcome, NJ! (I shall deem thee “NinJa” until I know more. 😉
Loved your piece! Hope you hang out with us more often!
Hahaha! I love the name NinJa 😀 And thank you so much for commenting and for such a warm and loving welcome 🙂 All this amazing feedback is gearing me up and I’m more than ready to join in the fun 🙂
the RLS poem was new to me so thank you for that and the quadrille – could not resist the rhyme
Great to have you join Laura…
found Mr Linky – thanks for the nudge
Victoria and Walt, my thoughts are with you!
I’ve heard the word Quadrille before, but this is my first poem in that form. WHen someone mentioned the dance, it hit me – that’s where I heard it! Mine is linked, but they are not as breezy to write as they first appear… I like the form though, and will try my hand at more.
Next word in two weeks might prove breezier
I adore the rhymescheme you used, and those little boats dancing in the waves fits so well to a dance.
I so enjoy quadrilles! But here at present our breezes are anything but light and summery, lol.
I’m struggling with hotel wifi and a pixie sized keyboard, so deny responsibility for anything! Now mix me a Campari and orange and let me relax!
Arriving late for this great prompt but I do hope some will find time to read.
And I’m even later than Victoria, but I agree it’s a great prompt. I’ll be back tomorrow to read everyone’s lovely words.