Hey everyone! It’s Mish here tending bar for you today.
Do you have a song in your head?
Wait! Not that one from the radio that you heard a few hours ago and has relentlessly played on repeat. I was thinking more on the lines of your OWN song.

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Songwriting and poetry differ in many ways but there is no denying that there are connections and overlaps between the two. Some of the best lyrics have evolved from some very poetic minds. It is no wonder that artists like Leonard Cohen, Bob Dylan, Alicia Keys, John Lennon, Art Garfunkel, Jewel and Joni Mitchell are only a few who have published poetry in addition to their songwriting. One of my favourite artists is Adam Duritz from a band called Counting Crows. In this particular song “I Am Ready”, he uses some poetic devices such as imagery and alliteration but it is still “sing able”. You can listen to it here.
I Am Ready
I am color blind
Coffee black and egg white
Pull me out from inside
I am ready, I am ready, I am ready
I am taffy stuck, tongue tied
Stuttered shook and up tied
Pull me out from inside
I am ready, I am ready, I am ready
I am fine, I am covered in skin
No one gets to come in
Pull me out from inside
I am folded, and unfolded, and unfolding
I am color blind
Coffee black and egg white
Pull me out from inside
I am ready, I am ready, I am ready
I am fine, I am fine, I am fine
We know that poetry and song lyrics are designed to elicit some type of emotion or response. The power of language prevails in both. Music combined with words can seduce us across the dance floor or flood our minds with nostalgia. There is always that song, the one that tugs at our heart.
So where do we start?
The first part of this challenge is to come up with a tune in your head. Remember, no one will hear you! If you happen to play a musical instrument, then you will have an advantage. Next, write your lyrics to fit your new melody.
As poets, we write from a speaking voice. We have much freedom to tap into an array of creative tools such as imagery, metaphors, alliteration, personification, rhythm, rhyme and more. As songwriters, we will need to adjust our poetic styles. Free verse poetry is not as compatible with music. A song requires more defined verses, often a chorus and refrains. Rhythm and rhyme become paramount to the fusion of lyrics to music. You may want to look at some of your favourite songs for ideas on structure.
We will also need to lighten up our phrases a little to make them “sing able”. As you write, try singing each line or phrase, to see if it sounds too awkward. Keep it simple, concise, and not overly abstract. Don’t be afraid to use repetition, a major part of conveying a clear message in a song. This doesn’t mean that you cannot utilize some of your treasured poetic traits. It’s all about modifying to come up with something in the end that you can hear as a song. YOUR song!
With that said, you will probably find that as we read each others “song” poems, we will be receiving them in a speaking voice since we will not know the writer’s tune that may go along with it. That’s ok. Let’s just have fun!
I will leave you with a little inspiration from Sir Paul McCartney.
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• Write your “song”
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Welcome everyone! It could be a little noisier than usual in here today with everyone’s singing voices. Hope you enjoy the prompt. 🙂
Ha.. Love a challenge.. i have no exact tune in mind but I hope I made something very much singable… but I see that I could have gone a little bit too complicated… Might do a second when I have read the one coming in… thank you for the challenge.
I just went over to read your “song”, Bjorn. Love the chorus. It conjured up a tune in my head. There are no wrong ways to do this. Music can be as creative as poetry. I was just giving a few tips to make some of our poems a little more manageable as a song. Will be over to sing yours again….and looking forward to your next one. I have dusted off my guitar and hope to come up with a new one as well. 🙂
My first time to write a singable poem, smiles ~ Thanks Mish for challenging us to write this ~ I must confess though that I don’t have a singable tune, ha ~
Happy Tuesday to everyone ~
Well Grace, you never know! I have a bit of a knack for coming up with tunes. Will check yours out soon…it could be a hit. 😉
Happy Tuesday to you too!
What a fun prompt, Mish, thank you! It cdertainly helped me while away the time on the train journey home, thinking up a singalonga poem!
Hi Freya..that sounds like a great way to pass the time on a train. Wondering if you’re humming out loud or in your head. 🙂
I have a feeling it was a mixture of both…. 😊
I have a few singable words but no successful tunes yet. Keep hoping my son or my buddy will help me, when time permits
found one that I never finished and tweaked it some~
I will rush over and read…
almost there. I have to record first
Looking forward to “listening” to your songs, Pleasant Street. 🙂 Be over soon.
Hey everyone,
This was such a fun prompt 😀 sharing my poem/song “Neighbourhood” which I decided would be fun to sing as well ❤ Hope you guys like it 🙂
Thank you Michelle for the wonderful opportunity, this one's for you 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Loved to hear you sing Sanaa… I promise I will never sing… my singing singes
Thanks Bjorn 🙂
Bravo Sanaa!! Thanks for taking the prompt even further. I am not sure how to record with my computer, but I was tempted to sing my song with guitar. I might have lost my nerve.
I loved your song and your sweet voice. 🙂
Thank you Michelle ❤
so glad you liked it.
You are awesome, Sanaa! So glad to hear another one! 😀
Thank you so much 😀
I rewrote a ballad I did some time ago… I think almost any ballad can be used to sing it (I take the easy way out, writing to form)
Yes, I think you are right..the rhyme and meter make it easier to put to music. I just sang to your ballad. It could be a beautiful folk song.
I went country on this. Thanks for the distraction. My mother in law is in her final moments as we sit here with her. I’ll respond when I can, but good work so far from what I’ve read.
Walter here.
I’m so sorry, Walt. If a distraction is what you need right now, then I’m happy you came by. Take care of you and family first.
She has passed and found her peace. Thank you.
I am so sorry for your loss, Walt.
Just reading through as have been with daughter all day — and did all the later Haibuns this morning. Will be reading all the songs tomorrow AM. And just read this Walt. My heart goes out to you and your family. I am hoping comfort and rest and sweet memories come your way in the coming days.
Peace and strength to you and family, Walt, take care!
MIsh, I am swoooooooning. Counting Crows is one of my all-time favorites, (especially August and Everything After.) I often turn to their lyrics for inspiration. I’m out of town, but hope to write for this, in the next day or two. Wonderful! 🙂
De….I have never met anyone who liked them as much as me…until now! Not the perfect voice (which I actually like) but his lyrics can be very poetic.
Hi everyone, long time, no see! I’ve missed this wonderful poetry group and decided to re-open my blog.
And such a fun prompt today. I’m off to see what everyone did!
Oh great to have you back… So much poetry in the air right now,
Welcome back to dVerse, Linda. Not sure if we’ve “met” before but so glad you are here to join in!
Enjoy. 🙂
Thank you, it’s a pleasure!
Thanks for this one, Mish! I almost cried with joy when I read the prompt and your insightful post… And with frustration when I had nothing to write! I’m a songwriter by trade if you will, so in a way it’s cheating for me. However, this song is more poetic than many of mine, and still looks and sounds like a poem as much as a song. It’s all in my link, with an mp3 to download. Thanks again, Mish!
Thank you so much! I used to love writing songs with my guitar and I’ve neglected it for awhile. Your opinion means a lot. Thanks for joining in and I look forward to listening to yours. 🙂
Wonderful to hear you sing – it would be so great to be able to comment on your blog,
Be back a little later tonight to read more! So far everything is music to my ears. 🙂
Saw the prompt and I had to sing along!
So glad you did, Truedessa. Loved your song.
A bit late to the party, but I made it again this morning! Thanks for the challenge Mish. I had a few songs in my head, including some heavy metal, but the prevailing song was the ‘Skye Boat Song’, which I hear every week when I watch Outlander, to which I am addicted.
But the song I’ve written is nothing like it!
I have to go out for a while but I’ll be back to read and comment!
Thanks for joining in, Kim. The party is not over yet. 😉
Time to drop in and catch up… and maybe prepare a little for OLN… 🙂
Ended up catching up with all the haibun this AM and then going to my daughter’s for the day. Will read all the tunes tomorrow AM. Looking forward to it!
I am so mad I thought this said Thursday and I had a song! If you want to read it : https://capriciouspoet.wordpress.com/2015/09/25/bent-broke-and-busted-a-blues-song/
I was so excited at sharing a song, I write them sometimes and tweaked this one just for this. I realize it’s Thursday and much too late but can’t get used to the short times to link here at dVerse. It’s my fault and I’m not putting blame on anyone but myself. I came here to look for Thursday hoping it’s an open link and I guess it’s not up yet and read wrong. I will watch for today’s link and hopefully I can link my song then.
I write all week but just can’t seem to time myself properly to post here. I have missed a lot! I hope everyone is having a good week!
Hugs! Bekkie