Hello everyone! I am pleased to introduce our guest blogger for today, Kim!
Hi, I’m Kim of Writing in North Norfolk.com, and this is my first time hosting dVerse Poets Pub Poetics. I’m nervous, excited and grateful for the opportunity to be here. Please be gentle with me.
Dame Carol Ann Duffy DBE FRSL is one of my favourite modern poets. She is Professor of Contemporary Poetry at Manchester Metropolitan University and has been Britain’s Poet Laureate since May 2009, the first woman, first Scot, and first openly LGBT person to hold the position.
One of her collections of poetry, The World’s Wife, takes characters, stories, histories and myths that focus on men and presents them from the point of view of the women behind the men, with themes such as sexism, equality, bereavement and birth. From Mrs Midas to Queen Kong, from Elvis’s twin sister to Pygmalion’s bride, she has turned well-known stories on their heads.
Although it is hard for me to choose a favourite, the two poems that stand out for me in the collection are ‘Anne Hathaway’ and ‘Elvis’s Twin Sister’.
‘Item I gyve unto my wief my second best bed…’ (from Shakespeare’s will) The bed we loved in was a spinning world of forests, castles, torchlight, cliff-tops, seas where he would dive for pearls. My lover’s words were shooting stars which fell to earth as kisses on these lips; my body now a softer rhyme to his, now echo, assonance; his touch a verb dancing in the centre of a noun. Some nights I dreamed he’d written me, the bed a page beneath his writer’s hands. Romance and drama played by touch, by scent, by taste. In the other bed, the best, our guests dozed on, dribbling their prose. My living laughing love – I hold him in the casket of my widow’s head as he held me upon that next best bed.
The challenge for this week’s Poetics is to take a character, fictional or non-fictional, and re-write their story from the point of view of their husband or wife. To avoid any accusations of libel, no living people please!
If you are new, here’s how to join:
About our guest blogger:
My name is Kim and I live in Norfolk, England, not far from the North Sea coast: the perfect place for inspiration. I have been writing poetry since I was a teenager, a very long time now. When I lived in Cologne in Germany during the seventies and early eighties, I wrote in German and English, and had several poems published. Now I write only in English, with a few translations now and again. Until a few years ago, I was teaching at a high school and didn’t have much time for writing, but since I’ve retired, it seems like I can’t stop! I’m in the process of revising a novel for children, set in Second World War Two London; I’m half-way through a young adult novel set on the North Norfolk coast; and I’ve started developing another young adult novel set in Norwich. My first love, however, is poetry, which is why I’m delighted to have discovered the dVerse Poets Pub, to which I look forward every week.
Hello Kim. this is a wonderful challenge, and one that I have tried my hands on before… The first time I wrote a response to Havisham in the voice of Estella, and the second time I wrote about Lot’s wife with the same intentions… but I did find a new interesting woman for today… from the world of Physics…
Hi Björn! I’m so glad your up for this challenge and I’m anticipating plenty of exciting and unusual responses. I’d love to read your response to Havisham – I’m a huge Dickens fan and Great Expectations is one of my favourites. I’m off to read your poem from the world of physics now!
Here it is, it was written for an earlier dVerse prompt…
https://brudberg.me/2016/01/19/estella/
Thanks, Bjorn!
Very interesting prompt. I also again dipped into Dorian Gray for my inspiration.
Oh those Penny Dreadfuls! I can’t wait to read your Mrs Gray!
Hello everyone and thanks Kim for hosting!
I find the topic very interesting as I have not thought of being someone else spouse. I do love the examples by Carol Duffy though. Stellar and inspired writing by an amazing poet.
It’s worth having a look at the other poems in The Wolrd’s Wife, but I have to say every post I’ve read so far this evening is strong competition for Carol Ann Duffy!
That’s high praise indeed… she is a world renowned poet after all.. I love to read Rapture… but I feel I need to get hold of the world’s wife.
I will certainly read more about her work.
I will be visiting in a bit as I am going home from work now.
Safe home!
Welcome to hosting — so glad to see you doing this Kim! And not to worry — this is a great prompt and one I think that will both challenge folks and let them have fun too. I always like writing in the voice of another. I had some fun with this one 🙂 Old Mother Goose will never be the same 🙂
I’m just amazed at Miss Muffet – never had her down as a feminist!
well….you just never know 🙂
Hey everyone,
Phew! this was quite a challenge! Sharing my poem ‘Brawne’ poetical spouse of John Keats 🙂 thank you Kim for the wonderful opportunity & prompt. This one’s for you ❤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Hi Sanaa! I thought it was a bit quiet at the Poets Pub tonight. Thank you for dedicating your poem to me – I’m going to read it now!
My pleasure, Kim ❤️
Good on you, Kim! Great challenge, and great bar work! I don’t usually drop in on a Tuesday night, but I thought I’d give this one a go.
Hi Sarah,
Will be over in a bit. Thanks for joining us!
Great to see you, Sarah! Pull up a bar stool and join the fun. I can’t wait to see whose shoes you’re wearing! 👠👡👢👞👟
Am so looking forward to reading all of these! As my usual, I’ll be reading everyone’s posts tomorrow early morn with my hot cup of coffee in hand. Going now to a US Air Force Band concert in Boston’s North End…should be quite rousing!!!
See everyone in the AM!
Enjoy the concert, Lillian!
What a fun prompt, Kim, and it’s so nice to have you hosting. I hope to be able to come up with something. Just back home from being with my mom who we now have in hospice care. Could be called back at any time, so if I don’t return comments, I trust you will understand. Now, let’s see…who’s wife (or twin sister.)
Glad you are back, for ever how long. Have missed you Victoria and have been offering prayers for you and your mom.
Thank you, Toni. Still playing catch up. Mom taking her time. She did tend to keep us waiting!
I understand totally.
I hope your mom’s settled and comfortable at the hospice, and that you’re not called back yet.
Thank you, Kim.
Well, it’s almost eleven o’clock and past my bedtime, so I’ll be making tracks until first thing in the morning, when I’ll be catching up with all the latest posts. Goodnight poets at the bar. 🌛
Goodnight Kim and see you tomorrow!
Great topic and examples, Kim.
Thank you and nice to see you from the other side of the bar! It’s morning over here and I’m ready to read some more posts.
Stunning topic. There are very many stories that have to see the light of day. I hope to be able to participate. I got myself a new job (I hope) and need to attend to it.
Congrats on the new job! 🙂
Thanks!
Good luck in your new job!
Thanks, I’ll be the town’s correspondent for the little regional newspaper that appears twice a month. Or is it once a month? I’d better check! 🙂
Now that’s an exciting job! Which town is it for?
A small rural town in the eastern part of South Africa.
😊
Hello, Kim. Wonderful prompt. I’ll read and comment tonight when this ghastly heat simmers down. 🙂
Hello Misky and welcome to the bar! Hope you’re not melting in the heat . It’s another warm day here. They switched on the fans in the library but it didn’t make much difference. I’m so grateful our cottage stays cool. See you later!