Hello. I am most happy to welcome you to Haibun Monday. I trust you all have had a good week and are looking forward to a good week ahead. Summer is nearly past but the sky is still glorious above us!
Today, I would like for you to write your haibun about the day sky – from dawn to dusk and any time in between. The Japanese have many wonderful names for clouds and the sky: sora is the word for sky. Haru, aki, natsu, and fuyu are the words for spring, autumn, summer, and winter. So a summer sky would be natsu no sora. The word kumo is cloud. There are many names for clouds: iwashigumo is sardine or mackeral clouds, nyûdôgumo are novice monk clouds, ukigumo are drifting clouds or, impermanence, yaekumo are eightfold-clouds or even more poetically, double blooming cherry.
I have included some pictures of clouds for your inspiration. All of them are mine and are copyrighted. If you choose to use one or more, please give me credit and say copyright by Kanzensakura and used by permission.
And here are some quotes to inspire you as well:
There is the sky, which is all men’s together. Euripides
You must not blame me if I do talk to the clouds. ~Henry David Thoreau
There are no rules of architecture for a castle in the clouds. ~G.K. Chesterton
A cloudless plain blue sky is like a flowerless garden. ~Terri Guillemets
The clouds, — the only birds that never sleep. ~Victor Hugo
Only from the heart can you touch the sky. ~Rumi
From you I am requesting a haibun of one paragraph and one paragraph only. Please make this tight and of course, it is non-fiction. Write about the sky –
the sky the day you were married, a sky from a childhood memory, lying in the grass and looking up at the clouds, a rainy sky, a snowy sky, any daytime sky. End the haibun with a nature based haiku.
Whether or not you have posted on dVerse before, you will need to please:
– Link back to dVerse. This is important so others can follow you here and read as well as perhaps post their own haibun about sky.
– Write your poem and link it to Mr. Linky blow
– Visit other poems linked by other poets and read and comment, especially if they read and commented on your haibun.
– Have fun sky gazing and writing about the sky!
Toni Spencer (hayesspencer, kanzensakura) has studied, read, and written Japanese poetic forms for almost 40 years. She is still learning how to do it correctly!
Good evening, Happy Monday all…
Thank you Bjorn. for some reason, my notification of dVerse, being able to get in here into the pub comes about 3:05 – to 3:10. Have messed wth the settings to try to change it. All I can think of is my wifi is kaflooey!
Ha.. yes I go by my clock… here it’s 9 PM so it’s easy…
I go by my clock too. The clock on my puter says three and at 3:06, up pops the dVerse posting in my email. grrrrrrr
Hello everyone! Good afternoon to you all. I have a connectivity issue so I am grateful to Bjorn being here right when the pub opens and for linking me up. I have spent many wonderful hours gazing up at the sky. How about you?
For me its more a practical thing… to see what might happen, to watch the cloud and seek those harbingers of weather to come…
As a note, the clouds in the third picture, creates a sky known by the Japanese as iwashigumi – mackerel or sardine sky because the clouds look like the scales on a fish. It can occur at any time of the year, not just summer when this picture was taken.
I have not seen it too often… maybe we have other type of weather here.
It could be the weather. We have similar weather to Japan in this area.
And it could be the geographical location, how the light reflects through the clouds. You all are rather high on the globe, quite a bit more than we.
Happy Haibun Monday! So nice to see you Toni and Bjorn at the bar today. We have beautiful sunny skies today here in Boston and the humidity is down so all in all, a very nice way to start the week.
I must say — I shall be in withdrawal now that the Olympics are over. I surely enjoyed watching those amazing athletes!
Thank you Toni for this lovely prompt. It got me thinking backwards to times of my youth — and recalling very special times with my dad when I was a little girl. He was not demonstrative at all — but I always knew his love was steadfast.
And it was indeed beautiful, the sharing you did of that memory. Love manifests itself in so many ways. I remember going fishing with my dad as well. Precious times they were.
Well…I hope that mine fits the rules today…it is not a story, but a speculation (so I would still classify it as non-fiction), and the haiku, while nature based, is based on mythological nature…
I see nothing mythological about dragons…I find them to be firmly based in nature and the natural order of things. In other words, I believe in dragons and glad to see you do as well! 🙂
And the special today at the pub is a blue cocktail – the Aviation, dating back to WWI. It consists of curacao, peach schnapps, and ginger ale. Very summery and very high flying. I have a huge pitcher of them made so help yourselves and enjoy!
As it is rather quiet now at this point in the pub, I am going to leave for a bit to do dinner and husband-y type things. You all enjoy yourselves and help yourselves to the pitcher of Aviations on the bar. I’ll be back later to read and comment on additional poems!
Good evening and Happy Monday to you all. Thank you for the sky prompt, Toni. Coincidentally, today I was rewriting an old scribble for a competition and it had references to clouds and sky. I’m looking forward to autumn and winter skies, which I think are the most beautiful and expressive. By the way, I also believe in dragons!
Hey everyone,
First time writing a haibun 🙂 hope I got it right.. ❤ thank you Toni for the wonderful opportunity as well as inspirational prompt. This one's for you ❤
I ll be around today and tomorrow to read and comment 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thank you dear Sanaa!
Lovely prompt Toni and one I will keep for my future writing.So many ways to describe a sky for different seasons- wow I am learning.
We have got visitors tonight so I am not linking in. Anyway, Happy Haibun Monday and see you tomorrow.
Enjoy your company! You are always so faithful about linking in to all the prompts. I thnk we can let you slide by. 🙂
Please help me get on!
Hello, inspired by Bjorn’s fine writing I thought I would try to stretch. No idea what I’m doing or where the sky is.
I so love writing haibun! And I love taking sky photos, so perhaps I’ll be back with another before the week is over. 🙂
That would be marvelous! I too love taking pics of the sky and I am afraid I have hundreds of them on my poor phone. Another one from you would be delightful.
Just finished reading all those that have been posted by this beautiful morn. Oh what a way to start my day. So many wonderful responses to this prompt!
Yes there were some wonderful and amazing submissions!
Life gets in the way of clouds 😦 but an irresistible prompt Toni so better late than never
https://telltaletherapy.wordpress.com/2016/08/24/gathering-clouds/
Yes it is!