(photo by Justin Jackson)
Who else is already ready for fall, y’all? As much as I love our summer getaways, now that we’re back home I am craving cooler days, that crisp air that means a fall evening (even here in Southern Nevada), and the structure and rhythm of regular schedules.
Call it premature, but in honor of the season many of us crave, for today’s Quadrille, I want us to play with the word:
leaves
Here the frailest leaves of me, and yet my strongest lasting:
Here I shade and hide my thoughts – I myself do not expose them,
And yet they expose me more than all my other poems.
– Walt Whitman, from Leaves of Grass
Use it as a noun. Tree leaves. Leaves of paper.
Use it as a verb (he leaves, she leaves.) As a verb, you can lop off the “s” and change it to singular if needed (I leave, you leave.) But don’t use “leaf.” That’s cheating. 😉
Ponder autumn in all its colorful glory. Ponder book pages. Ponder a past departure. Ponder the remains of the day when the sun abandons the sky. Ponder the word leaves, and poem us exactly 44 words (not including your title.)
(photo by Justin Jackson)
I leaves you with this:
Each has a past shut in him like the leaves of a book known to him by heart and his friends can only read the title. – Virginia Woolf
Here’s how to Q44 with us:
Write a poem on your blog in exactly 44 words (excluding title) where at least one of the words is leaves, and link your poem back to dVerse. Visit and get inspired by the other poets. Have fun and remember to come back throughout the week to check out if there are any new entries. We will select one of the poems to be included in our upcoming anthology, and if you are selected we will contact you to get your acceptance.
whimsygizmo said:
Hellloooo, intrepid poets! Happy writing today! I hope it’s more fall-like where you are. We’re pushing 100 today, and I am getting grumpy about it. The first day of school just shouldn’t be this hot. 😉
Looking forward to reading your Quadrilles! Thanks for Q44in’ with us!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Here we had one of these first days that were soaking wet… rain rain and more rain…
whimsygizmo said:
I want rain! Send some my way!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I think I got more than you ever want in my shoes today… I bicycled to work…
lillian said:
oooh….we desperately need rain! Terrible drought our way.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Come on back North, Dee. You can stay with us. During the day it’s still in the 90’s but drops to 40’s at night. Cooling by week’s end! Thanks for taking the prompt, and taking it where you did.
whimsygizmo said:
You’re a doll, Viv. That would be so much fun. Alas, school started today.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I’m not a big fan of autumn… but maybe it’s because our summer are cool anyway… but I do love the colors, and some of the other things that begin in fall… happy quadrille everyone….
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Love your prompt, Dee, and the hint of autumn on its way. So good to be back, at least for now. Looking forward to reading.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I have enough autumn for all of us I think
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Victoria… for some reason I cannot find a place to comment on your poem…
whimsygizmo said:
Victoria, I think your comments might be closed on your blog. I couldn’t find a place to comment, either. LOVE your piece.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Thanks, I closed them when I went south. Will open now.
whimsygizmo said:
Perfect. Heading back over.
Bryan Ens said:
Loved your poem, Victoria. Your comments are still closed, though.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Comments are still closed… Oh I did love that embrace
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
Yes, sorry, still closed. And your poem is lovely.
kanzensakura said:
Love your prompt as well. it is 98F here today and not even a small hint of fall in the air. Still summer until 09/21 !
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
You make me sweat…
kanzensakura said:
LOL, sorry! but it is high summer here until 09/21 and the Vernal Equinox. And then it is finally hot early autumn.
whimsygizmo said:
Ours drops by about 10 degrees a month, IF we’re lucky. Down to the 90s in September, the 80s in October, and usually the 70s by November. Craving a cool fall breeze, right now…
kanzensakura said:
So am I and frost…I want a heavy frost.
whimsygizmo said:
Oh, yes, please. Everybody goes nutso with the slightest hint of snow or frost, or even hail, here. It’s the best.
kanzensakura said:
Everyone goes nutso here with the snow as well but for different reasons!
kim881 said:
Happy Monday, De and Björn! I have to admit I wrote two poems for this prompt after seeing Björn’s post earlier on today. I love autumn and had some scribbles I wrote previously that I had been planning to play around with and this was my chance. Thanks for the prompt De!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
2 or 3… there is no limit on quadrilles.
whimsygizmo said:
Perfect! Can’t wait to read them all, Kim! And I’m so bummed I missed your prompt this past week. Raising teens is no joke, and I just didn’t have the writing/reading time I wanted last week.
kim881 said:
Yes, we missed you. Maybe you could write one for the open link night.
whimsygizmo said:
I will try to do just that! 🙂
kim881 said:
I’m looking forward to it. 🙂
kim881 said:
Victoria, for some reason I can’t comment on your post, which is why I am doing it here. Your response is so tenderly romantic, starting with the title ‘earthbound, today’ and right through to the ‘surrender’ at the end.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I closed comments when I had to leave for a family issue and tried to re-open them right now but not sure I did it right! Please let me know if they are still closed. I didn’t see comments when I looked. Maybe it takes a little while.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I added a comment from my dashboard and now it seems to work. Sorry about that.
Bodhirose said:
I could not leave a comment tonight, Victoria…still not working.
Bodhirose said:
Hi De, thanks for hosting Quadrille Monday! I’m getting grumpy about our ongoing hot weather too. The days are noticeably getting shorter but we are not having any of the hints of coolness. My quadrille was total wishful thinking! 🙂
whimsygizmo said:
We actually had a day last weekend that was under 90 degrees, and so the early morning was actually almost cool. It was heavenly.
Bodhirose said:
Looks like we’re dipping down into the 80s all week I think because of the tropical depression that is bringing rain, rain and more rain all week…keeping it cooler. We need it…not complaining…much.
Truedessa said:
Hello, I am not ready for fall as I enjoy the long summer days. I put a bit of a slant on the prompt. Thanks for hosting. This is rather fun, may do another one.
whimsygizmo said:
Do as many as you please, Truedessa! 🙂
Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa) said:
Hey everyone,
Hope you guys are having an amazing day so far 🙂 thank you so much for the inspirational prompt and wonderful opportunity De ❤ I give you my 300th poem 'Precept' ❤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
whimsygizmo said:
Fun! And what an honor that it falls on your 300th. Congrats!
Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa) said:
Thank you ❤
lillian said:
Love the prompt! Fall is my absolutely favorite season….someone was saying to me n our elevator — it’s almost time for apple cider and fresh doughnuts! 🙂 That is fall 🙂
I took a bit of a different slant with the word. Those of you afraid of snakes, may not like my photo! 😦
whimsygizmo said:
Hi, Lill! I thought I replied to your comment yesterday. Sorry ’bout that. I loved your snake piece. 🙂
lillian said:
PS: Struggling with new iphones and iPad — tyring to get them all working and old ones wiped. Shall do my morning reading on my laptop 🙂
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
Hello all – I love Autumn. Fortunately I also love Spring, which is fast approaching here, and fortunately too the prompt ‘leaves’ can apply equally well to both seasons! 🙂
whimsygizmo said:
Rosemary, I should remember to say “in my part of the world.” 😉
I loved your piece. Isn’t “frangipani” just the best word?
some bad plankton said:
Haven’t submitted anything in close to a year, but thought I’d give it a whirl today. It doesn’t feel like almost September!
lillian said:
So glad you’re joining us again! 🙂
some bad plankton said:
Glad to have something to join!
whimsygizmo said:
Loved your piece! So glad you posted.
some bad plankton said:
Thanks! I’ll try to post a bit more often.
whimsygizmo said:
🙂 Yes, please.
Arcadia Maria said:
Great prompt. I enjoyed reading the many takes on this prompt. 🙂
whimsygizmo said:
Me, too! Thanks, Arcadia.
whimsygizmo said:
All right, y’all. I have followed the amazing Kim Russell’s lead, and double-dipped. Feel free to write a second (or third) Quadrille! I’ll be reading all week! ❤
Also pouring cocktails (and mocktails) now that it's after 5pm here. Cheers!
Walter J. Wojtanik said:
Lucky to find time or one. Coming into my season, inspiration should carry me. You threw me a lob, De. Thanks for that!
whimsygizmo said:
You got it, Sir. Heading over now. I know this is a busy season for you. Thanks for taking time out to write for us. 🙂
Crow said:
I’ve been looking forward to another quadrille. Thank you!
whimsygizmo said:
Welcome, Crow! Glad you’re here! 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Awake early to do some rounds…
Laura Bloomsbury said:
cooler here in London but not ready for summer to leave 😉 managed to kick a few leaves about though
whimsygizmo said:
Welcome, Laura! So glad you’re here. Send me some of that cooler weather, would ya?
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I was hasty – hotting up but at least staying below 80 F/27C this week – those leaves are dropping from exhaustion though –
p.s.many thanks for leaving such an encouraging comment 🙂
whimsygizmo said:
Leaves are always, ever droopy here. 😉 Or evergreen. Sigh.
My hubby and I did the “Leaf Peep” thing back east the year before we decided to get preggers. New Hampshire, Maine. So beautiful. Like a Monet painting.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
my sister lived there for some years & her hubby was a photographer 🙂
Monet should have gone to Maine 😉
sarahsouthwest said:
I love summer, but I also love the feeling that life is starting again that you get in September. Sharpened pencils, new school bag, all that stuff. I have to say, though, that summer has only just kicked in here, so I’m hoping it will hang around for a bit…
whimsygizmo said:
Sarah, neither of your links work, and I can’t seem to find the poem you’ve intended to link up. I will remove the two bum links, as soon as wordpress allows me back into edit mode…be sure to give us a valid link, as we want to read your piece!
sarahsouthwest said:
I’m sorry. I forgot to press “publish”. I actually do it quite often – it’s all that linking that confuses me.Do I need to put the links back in?
sarahsouthwest said:
it should be all sorted now. Thanks for letting me know.
whimsygizmo said:
Perfect now. Thanks, Sarah. And oh.my.goodness. What beautiful poems they are. So happy you got it sorted out. They blessed my morning.
Sasha A. Palmer said:
Hi all,
Enjoyed your post, De. Beautiful pics, quotes, and a fun prompt.
Thank you,
Sasha
whimsygizmo said:
Loved your acrostic, Sasha! A fun approach to the Quadrille!
lillian said:
Victoria: it appears your comments are closed — so I couldn’t post there. Just wanted to say, I found your poem delicious! And yes, the autumn crisp air is my favorite — nothing better than snuggling down in the comforter with my hubby, our noses out to the cool air 🙂 Love your post!
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
I did a second one! And hope to catch up with other people’s before too long. 🙂