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Hello everyone! Since there’s a new moon on September 1, let’s draw inspiration from the Moon. For some writers, the moon is a muse, inspiring myths, stories and powerful symbols. I have selected 2 poems for your appreciation:
BY Annie Finch
Moon has dusks for walls,
October’s days for a floor,
crickets for rooms, windy halls.
Only one night is her door.
When I was thirteen she found me,
spiralled into my blood like a hive.
I stood on a porch where she wound me
for the first time, tight and alive,
till my body flooded to find her:
to know I would not be alone
as I moved through the tides that don’t bind her
into womanhood, like a flung stone.
With each curve that waxed into fullness
I grew to her, ready and wild.
I filled myself up like her priestess.
I emptied myself like her child.
Flooding, ready, and certain,
I hid her—full, fallow, or frail—
beneath each long summer’s rich curtain.
It covered her face—the thin grail
that delivers me now. Now I’m with her.
All cast shadows come home.
I stand in these shadows to kiss her;
I spin in her cool, calming storm.
Now as I move through my own beauty
and my shadow grows deeper than blood,
oh triple, oh goddess, sustain me
with your light’s simple opening hood.
The trees of the mind are black. The light is blue.
The grasses unload their griefs at my feet as if I were God,
Prickling my ankles and murmuring of their humility.
Fumy spiritious mists inhabit this place
Separated from my house by a row of headstones.
I simply cannot see where there is to get to.The moon is no door. It is a face in its own right,
White as a knuckle and terribly upset.
It drags the sea after it like a dark crime; it is quiet
With the O-gape of complete despair. I live here.
Twice on Sunday, the bells startle the sky –
Eight great tongues affirming the Resurrection.
At the end, they soberly bong out their names.
The yew tree points up. It has a Gothic shape.
The eyes lift after it and find the moon.
The moon is my mother. She is not sweet like Mary.
Her blue garments unloose small bats and owls.
How I would like to believe in tenderness –
The face of the effigy, gentled by candles,
Bending, on me in particular, its mild eyes.
I have fallen a long way. Clouds are flowering
Blue and mystical over the face of the stars.
Inside the church, the saints will be all blue,
Floating on their delicate feet over cold pews,
Their hands and faces stiff with holiness.
The moon sees nothing of this. She is bald and wild.
And the message of the yew tree is blackness – blackness and silence.
For poets like Sylvia Plath, the moon is referenced to more than a hundred poems and functions as her emblematic muse- her Moon-muse, which is her deepest source and inspiration of her poetic vision.
The challenge is to write about the moon as if the moon is a person – flesh, sweat and blood. Describe him or her, and tell us about your moon.
If you are new, here’s how to join:
See you at the poetry trail. Grace
Hi everyone! Welcome to poetics and hope you are inspired by the moon.
I will be making my rounds in a bit so in the meantime, enjoy the summer drinks as you read the poems!
Wonderful prompt… I had to do a poem that is almost a follow-up to one I did a few weeks ago… (during our summer break) https://brudberg.me/2016/07/12/when-moon-goes-shopping/
That’s good Bjorn. I don’t think we can write enough of the moon-inspired poems.
Hi Grace! Good to see you. I have linked up my moon poem and will be back later to read and comment on other links.
Hi Toni! I will be hitting the poetry trail myself in a bit. Thanks for dropping by!
Good evening Grace! I’m afraid I read Bjorn’s post earlier today and got writing, not knowing exactly what the prompt was, so I’m not sure if I have addressed it properly. I love writing about the moon and have one to link and two still to post. I hope I’m not too wide of the mark.
Hi Kim! No worries if you have 1 or 2 or more poems. Anything about the moon is good, smiles.
🙂
Ha.. that’s the risk… I do my own interpretations.. so there is a risk.. but I’m sure you are doing great Kim
Always a perennial favorite muse, Grace. Thanks for hosting this. Wonderful poems you share with us in this prompt.
Intimidating poems from great poets. Great to have you around Victoria.
Happy to be “home” again.
We all love the moon… in our own ways…
LOL. I have the dreaded red x’s on my Mr. Linky when I go to it to link. And I can assure you, I am not in Blenza.
Thanks, Grace, for the cool prompt. There are so many possibilities when writing about the moon. I will post and be back later this evening to read and comment.
Looking forward to it Kathy. Indeed, the possibilities are endless. The moon is a great metaphor or symbol for us poets.
I did add a second one… that is also my second quadrille… I had to do a quadrille that uses all the word that we’ve had so far.
Wow!!! I am impressed 🙂
Hey everyone,
I absolutely love the moon! Which is why I was simply ecstatic when I saw this prompt ❤ sharing my poem 'The Moon' hope you all like it.
Thank you for the wonderful opportunity, Grace 🙂 this one's for you ❤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Hi Sanaa!!!! Will be over in a bit. Hitting the poetry trail now!
Strong, powerful poems from two strong poets. I don’t know if I met the goal, but I have other “moon poems”…..but this one might pass. Thank you, Grace for the prompt. d’verse is such fun! I have missed the company of poets.
Hi Jane! We all love the moon as our muse. Thanks for joining us!
Thankyou for inviting me. It’s good to be in the company of poets. I have missed this for a couple of years.
tried to leave a comment, but no go. Perhaps later. These are two powerful and strong poems by two strong poets.
And now, the red x’s are gone….thank goodness.
Hello, Grace (and all). I enjoyed this moony prompt and had fun imagining my moon person-ish being.
Hi Marilyn!!!! Happy to see you have fun with moony prompt. Will be over in a bit!
Grace, I could not love this prompt more. ❤
Thank you.
Hi De! I will be over in a bit 🙂
My first time here via Carol Forrester’s blog. Wasn’t sure if I should leave a link here. I posted this moon poem yesterday.
https://screamingcoffin.wordpress.com/2016/08/29/made-of-cheese/
Hello Brian! I will include it in the Mr. Linky below my post. If you click it, you will find your poem as well as the other poems too. Welcome to D’verse!
Thanks, it was so small I missed it.
I had dinner out with a friend tonight that kept me out too late but wanted to add my poem anyway that I had to finish when I returned. Thank you, Grace, I always love to write of the moon.
Gayle, it’s never too lat until the prompt closes 🙂
True, Bjorn but it was so late at night before I finally got it posted! 🙂
I noticed… it was early morning here.
I’m a night owl…so it worked out just fine. 🙂
moon struck with this prompt Grace – andboth the poems you shared. Again and again Plath’s visuals strikes fresh with her unique perspective on words
Such wonderful poem’s on the Moon prompt. I am so sorry that I haven’t been able to access a number of blogs. Grace, Saana, Sherry Marr, and a couple of others. Where possible…I have emailed my comments to each. And Saana R. I don’t have a twitter account and my email to you got sent back by the Demon Mailer. ( I used to think the Demon Mailer was my post man who pepper sprayed my poor dogs behind our 6 foot fence. Evil man….)
So, I will keep trying to post on your blogs, but my wordpress is failing me mightily. I try Anon. (wasn’t he a 17th century shy author???) and I try Name and URL….to no go. So, please know I am reading you and am bolled over by the Moon poems this week.
Hello Grace and everyone…
Love the idea of “moon musing”. I think it is good for the soul. I cheated with a poem I wrote earlier but I think it is new to dVerse. Will start on the trail soon, while catching up on quadrilles. 🙂
Moon-musing is good Mish!!!
OH, how I have loved reading all of these. Such a stunning prompt, Grace. Thank you. ❤
We got some lovely responses. So happy you can join in. Sorry about missing your quadrille but I will write about it when autumn is finally here.
And the moon prompt doesn’t grow old either – we can have the same prompt next year 🙂
Lovely prompt, Grace. 🙂 It may take me awhile to read the entries, but I will read them between now and Sunday and even later. 🙂
No worries, take your time 🙂 Good to see you Imelda !
I’m over the moon about this prompt in honor of my namesake. I’ll be by to visit and read everyone’s entries soon. I just wrote my second one for this prompt and have a third waiting in the sidelines! If you dropped by before, please stop by again, my poetic peeps. 🙂