Hello poets, this is Gayle from Bodhirose’s Blog and welcome to Form-For-All/Meeting the Bar.
Today we’re going to play with humor and couplets and the form I’m presenting is called a Clerihew. A Clerihew is a comic verse on biographical topics consisting of two couplets and a specific rhyming scheme of aabb that was invented by Edmund Clerihew Bentley (1875-1956) at the age of 16.
- E. C. Bentley was a well known English novelist and humorist. He was a journalist and worked for several newspapers and published his first book of poetry in 1905 titled “Biography for Beginners” which popularized the clerihew. His detective story “Trent’s Last Case” was considered the first true modern mystery. It was adapted to film several times. He went on to write a sequel to that book called “Trent’s Own Case” and also authored a book of Trent short stories.
The poem deals with a person or character on the first line. In most cases, the first line names a celebrity or well-known person and the second line rhymes with the name of the person.
Photo: Edmund Clerihew Bentley; Bing Images
Here are two of the more popular Clerihew that Bentley wrote as examples:
Sir Humphrey Davy
Abominated gravy.
He lived in the odium
Of having discovered sodium.
Sir Christopher Wren
Said, “I am going to dine with some men.
If anyone calls
Say I am designing St. Paul’s.”
George Carlin was one of my favorite comics. He was so clever and his material was very thought provoking. Here is a short (a little over a minute long) video of Mr. Carlin reciting his poem on hair:
My Clerihew on George Carlin:
George Carlin
never caught a marlin
but he lost lots of stuff
and could think off the cuff
I liked the below quote by Mark Twain and wrote a Clerihew referencing his many pen names and the fact that he was born one day after a visit by Halley’s Comet on November 30, 1835. He predicted that he would “go out with the comet” upon his death, and he ended up dying on April 21, 1910 the day after the comet made a return visit.
Photo of Halley’s Comet; NASA file
Mark Twain; Bing Photos
Age is an issue of mind over matter. If you don’t mind, it doesn’t matter. Mark Twain Read more at: http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/m/mark_twain.html
Mark Twain
was a man of many names
a quick wit and humorous posit
who left this world riding out on Halley’s Comet
I hope you enjoy playing with the prompt!
To join in with our prompt today follow the easy steps below:
- Write a poem (or poems) in your blog.
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join during the next 48 hours
- Read and comment on other poet’s work, we all go here to have our poems read
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun!
Welcome to the pub everyone where we’re serving up a Clerihew today!
Pour me something nice
like rhyme on ice
Coming up!
🙂
Hello… I wrote mine earlier today having some fun… actually it ended up a little limerick style… Maybe it’s those pesky anapests that make it a little comical…
Hi Bjorn…thanks for adding your humor today…really enjoyed!
Howdy there! Oh how I love this prompt! That young Clerihew boy must have been quite frisky and clever at 16! 🙂 Had a lot of fun with this — the first one sort of overshadows the second….but I do love the moral of the tale of Rip, if you look at it this way and read those last two lines closely 🙂 she writes with a devlish grin!
Humor can be challenging — but oh it’s nice to create chuckles 🙂 Kind of what I do when I see those little umbrellas inside a drink on the bar!
I agree on humor… and it’s hard to do… and I think it has to be either politics or sex to be funny for me.
Humor is tricky to write…you can’t force it. I think I’ve come by it by accident at times! I’m not finding politics all that humorous these days…and you know the reason why.
You did great, Lillian! Your Houdini poem really did take first place…loved it…so much fun! Thank you for playing today!
Always happy to provide a chuckle!
Very happy that you did…it made my day!
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What a fantastic form – I had some fun with this!
That’s what I wanted to hear! Thanks, Freya. :~)
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I did a second… both politics and sex, sensitive readers be warned.
I loved it, Bjorn, really funny…was not offensive at all!
That was a nice hair poem by George Carlin.
I thought so too…I loved that guy! I’m glad you liked it.
Gayle ~
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“Dying is easy–comedy is hard.”
I bet some people feel that way when asked to write something funny!
Edmund Kean, 19th century Shakespearean actor, on his deathbed. Pretty funny from a man who’s dying. Nerve!!!
Yes, real nerve! Thanks, Bob.
I love Clerihews and I love George Carlin.
Double your trouble and double your pun.
I’ve put my two cents in.
Thanks, I enjoyed it.
Randy
I love Clerihews and George Carlin too! Thanks for coming by, Randy.
Gayle ~
Hi everyone! I’ve just got back from an interesting session of the Fiercest Light Writing Workshop, which is a collaboration between the Kindness Warriors and the Writers’ Centre Norwich. We have been exploring the concept of kindness , human stories about war and its relationship to kindness. We discussed questions such as: Could a kind society ever go to war? What happens to kindness when people are given a gun and ordered to kill other people and destroy landscapes? Why does war often inspire some of the most extensive acts of kindness between people? Tomorrow evening we’ll be crafting and shaping stories and poems and, at some point, making films about them. I wrote the first draft of a poem, I’m all fired up, I’ve come home to find an interesting new form to play with – the Clerihew – and it’s almost bedtime – I have to get up early for a hospital appointment about my eye – stupid macular degeneration thing – so I won’t get around to writing and posting my Clerihew until tomorrow afternoon. Goodnight and I’ll see you back here tomorrow!
Kim, how fascinating! Really makes you think on the ethics of our behavior and what we would do when pushed to the extreme. Thank you for sharing this with us all and I look forward to reading your Clerihew when you can get to it. Goodnight!
I didn’t make it to bed! I got hung up on the Clerihew! I’m just about to post but I’ll read everyone else’s when I get back from the hospital tomorrow!
Oh my goodness, Kim, that’s amazing. See you tomorrow!
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Okay, I’m heading into the kitchen to prepare some dinner and will check back later…enjoy!
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This is a fun form! Thanks Gayle. I always enjoyed George Carlin’s comedy! 🙂
Hi Barbara…so nice to see you tonight and thanks for linking up your poem on Cher…she’s great! I was a real fan of George Carlin. 🙂
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Gayle, love this form and the fun we can have with it. I’m late–will try to write one tonight–George Carlin’s made my day. Thanks for hosting.
It is fun, Victoria, and not so difficult to write. I look forward to reading yours when you link it up…thanks for being here. xo
Hi Gayle, thanks for introducing me to this comical verse. Just playing with the rhythm and rhyme today lifted my spirits. Will be back later to read. 🙂
You’re so welcome, Mish. It had the same affect on me…I really enjoyed it too. Catch you later.
And I’ve always loved George Carlin! Thanks for sharing that clip.
I always loved him too…he was so aware and smart…you’re welcome!
This sounded like fun, so I had to play along! Thanks for the prompt
I had trouble with my link please delete the first one. Thanks
So glad you wanted to play along, Truedessa….will try and take care of that other link.
Humor is not my forte but geez, this form is a fun one to write. 😀 I might try. 🙂 🙂 🙂
I think it’s fun too, Rosema…so glad you came by!
This is a fun prompt, Gayle; I am posting late and will be making the rounds late as well. Not sure about the number of syllables in the lines, so just went with it 😉
Hi Kathy, so glad you came by. No specific syllables, just two couplets that rhyme with each other for a total of four lines.
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Now that’s a form I’ve never heard of! I’ll have to do the rounds and see what people have written, but not sure I am capable of writing one myself. You know me and humour – always an uneasy friendship!
Me either, Marina, but I did a little search to find some new forms and this one showed up. It seemed fairly easy (we do need a little challenge). I agree that humor can be tricky but it’s always fun to try. So glad you came by…thanks!
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Late to the party. Felt called to write about Mr. Bentley himself. 😉
Thanks, Gayle! Fun stuff today. Around to read a few now, more later. Busy morning.
Hi De, so appreciate your presence today! It did seem like fun and seems that most people have been inspired so I feel good about that. I’ve had a busy morning too with a certain little four year old today.
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I like these and am enjoying reading everyone’s poems! I wrote some years ago I won’t post 😮 but wrote 2 new ones. They’re not the easiest form, I think because of the character/person!
So good to see you. Everyone’s poems have been fun to read, I agree with you, Crystal. You can pick any person you’d like. I went with a couple of comedians that I was familiar with and then the poem kind of wrote itself as I remembered some of their material.
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I’ll be popping in and out today as I’m with my granddaughter and will catch up on the rest of the links a bit later. I’m very pleased that this prompt seems to be well received…yay!
Gayle ~
Have fun with your granddaughter! Am about to make my morning cup and then head over for some clerihews. Looking forward to starting my Saturday with giggles! 🙂
It was a great day with Mira…thanks Lillian and enjoy your giggles…don’t wake hubby!
I didn’t think I would make it since I was out most of the day, but I did! Fun prompt, Gayle. Thank you. Mr. Linky says this is my 2nd, but it isn’t. I didn’t notice the 2.
I’m so glad you did make it, Victoria. I enjoyed your Clerihew very much. I saw that “2” also…no problem!