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Hello fearsome and fearless poets! It is Toni Spencer (kanzen sakura or hayesspencer) here with you today after a personal haitus. It is good to be back and prompting you for this Haibun Monday again!
First of all, we mourn the death of Leonard Cohen. In my mind, he should have been the winner for the Nobel prize rather than Bob Dylan but that is just IMHO. He was a great writer and singer and his voice will be missed. He was a poet and troubadour – from Canada no less!
So – today for our prompt, I have TWO prompts: birthdays and the upcoming Super Moon. I want you to write a classic haibun (IMHO there is no such thing as a “contemporary” haibun. It either is or it is something else entirely) – non-fiction (true) with a classic seasonal haiku at the end. One or two tight paragraphs is excellent.
I would like you all to write about a memorable birthday: either happy, sad, strange, extraordinary, one everyone forgot – as a child, teen, young adult, or adult – lessons learned, cake eaten, games played, family and/or friends. The seasonal haiku will top it off as one cannot get more seasonal than a birthday!What is a Super Moon? Well, NASA defines it as: A supermoon is a new or full moon closely coinciding with perigee – the moon’s closest point to Earth in its monthly orbit. The technical name is the perigee-syzygy of the Earth-Moon-Sun system. This is the closest the moon has been to the earth in 69 years and this is the closest and most super moon until the next occurs in 18 years. Cool. And it is my birthday November 16. Now how Super Duper Moon is that?
So the number two prompt is to write about a memorable full moon or super moon. Why was the moon memorable? Other than being huge, that is. You have three choices: birthday, full moon, or combine the two.
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Toni Spencer has been studying and writing Japanese poetic forms for about 40 years. She is unpublished and at this point, that is fine with her. She is still learning to write all kinds of poetry.
A little early for the prompt. It’s only Friday.
That’s what I was thinking too! Nice to have the “heads up”, though.
I’m not complaining; my brain’s semi-fried with napowrimo.
I don’t do any of the napo’s. I’m too busy. Good on you though for doing them! Glad the heads up will help you a bit!
Hi misky. What napowrimo are you doing? I did one in April, it really got the creative juices flowing again, and I’m keeen on another. Tanks!
Ahh…I have gone from being behind to being in front….time…it’s all relative right?
Is Mr Linky coming? I’m all written up 😉
Mr. Linky is up and running.
https://weeditty.wordpress.com/2016/11/12/dverse-haibun-monday/
Please post your link on Mr. Linky so it will get read and commented upon. thanks!
https://paulscribbles.wordpress.com/2016/11/12/auspicious-moon/
Please post your link on Mr. Linky so it will get read and commented upon. thanks!
Done. Thanks.
Hello everyone! Well, everyone got a good heads up on the prompt for today. sorry but sometimes, life happens.
Those of you who have written and left links, please put your links up on Mr. Linky so they will be read and commented upon. thanks!
This is wonderful… and I so much enjoyed writing this, and though i was forwarned I wrote it just a short while ago… Is there anything warm in the bar you can serve?
I have spiced cider – hard and soft, glogg, and Irish Coffee. Name your poison!
Ha… some warm cider… glögg is not yet in season I’m afraid.
Hey, in this virtual pub, everything is in season! but you are right, it is a bit early for it although today here in The South is cold, rainy, and raw. I’m opting for some hot chocolate, myself.
Yes, sometimes life happens and certainly there was no harm done with your prompt going up early…not to worry! This was a fun prompt and made me remember that night out on the beach with the family.
I am so glad. It was a delightful read and brought back some teenaged memories for me along with family and friends.
I think you “liked” some photos that I shared from my brother-in-law today. He and my sister are the ones who love the beach and were out there again with another moon rising. This time it was a ‘tiger moon.’ And he had the fire pit going again too! I’m glad you had some nice memories brought up too, Toni.
Yes indeed. I truly liked those photos and it is nice to know where they came from!
Yep, that’ my brother-in-law in the photos and probably at New Smyrna Beach too!
Probably – gazing at the incredible super moon. It has been so gorgeous up this way the past few nights.
It is so good to be back after being away for so long. I missed all of this – the comments, the poems, the sharing. It truly is good to be back.
Very nice to have you back, Toni…where you belong!
Thank you!
So far, for such an early heads up, not many takers on the prompt! I am going to sign off for a bit to do mother and husband duties. I will be back later to read and respond. the bar is open and there is a crockpot full of spiced cider! Help yourselves.
The supermoon has been hidden from view round our way. There’s heavy low lying cloud. It’s a shame – I’ve had some wonderful moon viewing experiences in my time, so I’m gutted to miss this one. It has brought up some old memories, though. I’ll have some cider rather than moonshine tonight…
Sarah, your Mr. Linky goes back to this page instead of your blog post.
Thanks! I will go and sort.
all sorted (I hope) – thanks for letting meknow!
Sorry about the clouds. I’m letting folks help themselves to hot spiced cider. Drink up.
No moon tonight. Thick clouds and light sprinkles.
Well, it will still be super mooning for a few days more so hopefully you can get in on the glorious moon. The next super moon will be 2034.
Glad you are back, Toni! You got rain????? I’ll trade you some dust for a bit of rain. two months here in Atlanta without rain…why bother with a fall garden when it’s like a dust bowl here…and the wildfires north of us are giving us a constant drift of smoke. Two weeks now and it’s getting worse. We need RAIN.
Stupid GeekSquad folk completely deleted my shortcuts to sites, including to my blog. LOL! I thought I had problems but nah….it’s my brakes on my Jeep. Always something. I wrote and posted a haibun that I HOPE adheres to the prompt…but it’s a very early childhood memory and it is the first time I have ever gone public with it. These old people have haunted me all my life. Well, glad to be here. They single handedly started me on the road to ruin with Hershey bars…..Jane
Oh well. I was addicted to coca cola in utero…talk about the road to ruin! Trade you some rain big time, especially since it is bitter cold up this way.
Welcome back Toni! We’ve missed you. Hello to all you dVerse poets on this Super Mooon evening!
I love this prompt and it has come at just the right time for me. I’m off to Poland on Wednesday evening and it’s my daughter’s birthday just after I get back, so my haibun this evening is for her.
I’ve only just got back from choir practice – we’ve been practising for our appearance at the local switching on of the Christmas lights – one of the songs is ‘Bring me To Life’ by Evanescence, which we haven’t sung for a long time – plus the new people didn’t know it – so it was a bit off to say the least!
I’ll post my haibun, read whatever is already up and then come back in the morning for the rest.
Have a wonderful day/evening!
Kim x
It is good to be back. Wow…off to Poland! Have a good trip. The song for tree lighting is a wonderful choice. Love it.
Rather embarrassingly I have yet again created a self-referential vortex in Mr Linky. Please ignore my first posting…I will get on top of this technology thing at some point!
Lol…it’s okay…i think it took me about two months to figure any of the technology out!
Thank you for this post, and your challenge. Ah the beach. My wife is from the jersey shore, and our birthdays are only a few days apart. We celebrated for about a week, started off with some soul searching, a hike, a funeral for a friend, stayed over at her mom, watched the sun rise on the beach, took a drive up the coast, went to dinner with my folks, went garage sailing (ahoy, matey!) and to a few stores she likes, then hibachi with my mammabear and half sister. Wrote her a poem, it’s just behind today’s haibun on my blog. I really like mr linky, may I buy him a drink?
Mr linky alas is a teetotaler but he would enjoy a hot spiced cider. Sounds like interesting times your way!
I just came back from the far east –jetlag is still clouding my hours. Maybe that is why I found this prompt so challenging. 😉
Off to sleep! I’ll make the rounds tomorrow. Happy haibun Monday!
Welcome back! Take your time about getting back into prompts. And here I tought I was giving out an easy prompt! 🙂
Thanks, Toni. Oh, easy and difficult are always relative terms. 😉
Welcome back Toni ~ Just back from work and doing errands ~ The supermoon was just spectacular last night, wow ~
Thanks for hosting and I am hitting the poetry trail ~ Happy Haibun Monday and week ~
Welcome back Toni ~ Just back from work and doing errands ~ The supermoon was just spectacular last night, wow ~
Thanks for hosting and I am hitting the poetry trail ~ Happy Haibun Monday and week ~
Thank you Grace. It is truly good to be back. Happy Haibun Monday to you as well.
Thanks for warm cider and this haibun prompt, Toni! Nice to see you back at the bar. I posted tonight, hope to read others’ offerings tomorrow…the super moon is gorgeous!
that super moon is causing us grief here in New Zealand
I’ve had a busy few days (in the nicest possible ways) so didn’t see the prompt ahead of time. But what a sweet coincidence that I’ve just had a birthday. 🙂
Happy birthday Rosemary! me too. Birthdays are so much nicer when you leave out the number. If i had a daughter i would have named her rosemary. our last name is erb. heh heh heh. (maybe thats why i don’t have a daughter)
Welcome back Toni and thank you for hosting Haibun Monday :o) We had heavy cloud cover for most of the evening until a gap appeared just before bed time and the moon was amazing. I have added my contribution to Mr Linky and will swing by later for a good read :o)
Great on all counts! I was clear here the past few days and last night was cloudy but it is clear again. I love full moons but the super moon is super good. 🙂
Wonderful, great it is clear again! :o)
Late to post, but Happy Haibun Monday. Thanks,Tony, for the lovely prompt. I will attempt to make all the rounds for this and Tuesday’s prompt today as I go along today.
Better a little tad late than never! Good to see you here.
I look forward to writing with you all again, as for now the Super Moon has everyone super stirred up and after taking care of everyone’s needs, I have no energy left for writing. Maybe next week.
Hey Toni! I missed you, oh “Queen of Haibun”. 🙂
I am very late to the party but I loved your prompt(s) and could not miss out. Will catch up on reading over the next few days.