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Hello dVerse Poets and welcome to Tuesday’s writing feast, also known as Poetics, hosted this week by Kim over at Writing in North Norfolk. This week I hope to inspire you with some music and lyrics.
When I was a teenager, one of my personal anthems was ‘Johnny’s Garden’ from Stephen Stills’ double album Manassas, released in April 1972. Running through the album was the leitmotif of Stills’ unrequited love for Judy Collins. Johnny’s Garden was a real place where Stills could be ‘safe from the city blues’, where ‘it’s green and it’s quiet’ at Brookfield House in Elstead, Surrey, England, owned first by Spencer Tracy, then Peter Sellers, and later Ringo Starr. Stills bought the 350 year old Tudor mansion in 1970 and, as he said, ‘had the most wonderful bursts of creativity there’.
The one constant that withstood the changes in ownership was the gardener, Johnny, who looked after the estate. He was apparently a herbalist who made incredible teas. Stills said he had soul.
It’s also been said that Peter Sellers based the character of Chauncey (the gardener in the Hal Ashby film Being There) on Johnny.
Left to right: Peter Sellers, Johnny and Stephen Stills at Elstead in Surrey. Photo by Henry Diltz.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yz74uyx7B-E
Johnny’s Garden (Stephen Stills/Manassas)
There’s a place I can get to
Where I’m safe from the city blues
And it’s green and it’s quiet
Only trouble was, I had to buy it
And I’ll do anything I’ve got to do
Cut my hair and shine my shoes
And keep on singin’ the blues
If I can stay here in Johnny’s garden
As the swift bird flies over the grasses
Dipping now and then to take his breakfast
Thus I come and go and I travel
And I can watch that bird and unravel
And I’ll do anything I’ve got to do
Cut my hair and shine my shoes
And keep on singin’ the blues
If I can stay here in Johnny’s garden
With his love and his caring
He puts his life into beauty sharing
And his children are his flowers
There to give us peace in quiet hours
And I’ll do anything I’ve got to do
Cut my hair and shine my shoes
And keep on singin’ the blues
If I can stay here in Johnny’s garden.
Source: http://www.4waysite.com/everything-csny/songs/songsbehind-the-songs/
The challenge is to write a poem about a garden. It can be a real garden (yours or someone else’s), a fantasy garden, a fictional garden, such as The Secret Garden, the garden of live flowers in Through the Looking Glass or the garden in Lady Chatterley’s Lover, a biblical or historical garden, for example the Garden of Eden or the Hanging Gardens of Babylon. All you have to do is take us there – and you don’t have to buy it!
If you are new, here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem in response to the challenge;
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below;
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join so check back to see more poems;
- Read and comment on other poet’s work, we all come here to have our poems read;
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog;
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
Fantastic challenge, and though it’s not a season for gardens right now I was pulled into this… had fun, but ended up starting from a quote.
Starting from a quote is always good, Björn. I’ll be reading yours in a moment when I’ve posted my second one, which is a bit of a cheat as I’ve rewritten a poem from last January that just fits the prompt! How’s the snow over in Sweden? I’m off to Poland tomorrow/Thursday morning and so far, touch wood, there’s no sign of snow. I won’t be around and will have no access to the internet so unfortunately I’ll miss Friday’s OLN.
Snow is melting fast now… and there is no real forecast here for more… but in the garden snow still lies…
No snow here yet Bjorn so we are enjoying a cold windy autumn ~
It rained all morning, started to dry up this afternoon and now it’s raining again. Typical British weather.
We had rain as well today, rather in need of it as it has been quite dry
It’s what hides under the snow and under the ground that’s important!
Hi dVerse Poets! I can’t believe this is my second time as a fully fledged host! I hope you’ve all had a good week so far and you’re ready to get writing about some kind of garden! I’ll just post my scribbles and will get back here shortly. 🙂
Doing challenges can be as fun as writing poetry…
True! I had to think one up for Toads for next week too.
I thought this was a timely topic for me as yesterday we were talking about growing a vegetable garden and getting the health benefits of growing them. Of course, for me, it would be difficult during winter but my relatives in Florida and LA were really excited to add more vegetables to their garden.
A lovely challenge Kim, thank you for hosting.
Loved your different gardens today… I hope for many great poems tonight.
Me too!
I love gardens. I spent my early years pottering about with my grandfather in his tiny but well-stocked garden. A very good friend of mine, who was also the head teacher at the secondary school I worked in, took up a gardening apprenticeship when she left teaching and she gardens in two local stately homes – and loves it. I wrote about one of them back in May – Wiveton Hall. I loved your three gardens and can’t wait to see what other poets make of the challenge. Did the link to YouTube work OK for you?
Changing up a gear.
These thoughts, swirling around in my head
Will have to be addressed
Or else I will be driven to distraction
So, too my quill for interaction.
Allowing myself time to ponder
Will scatter these thoughts here, there and yonder
They will eventually make their way home to roost
This in turn gives my confidence a boost.
Sets me up nicely to create a poem, hopefully not too hollow
For thoughts will in time become its bed fellow
The feeling of relief once I get out of first gear
Is most satisfying, dislodging thoughts of fear?
Those thoughts which swirled around in my head
Have been addressed and are now dead
Buried in the poetry garden
I can now relax and await, another thought to bloom.
©Chris Black 2016
Wow! Scatter your seeds wide and some will always fall on fertile ground!
Hopefully. Thanks for the reply/comment.
I look forward to reading your garden poem 🙂
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mine’s a bit longer than usual. Sorry for the length…but I hope you enjoy anyways!
Mine was a long poem too – no problem Bryan. I’ve been practising some of the songs for our rock and soul choir’s performance on 26th November – we have a 30 minute slot at the switching on of the Christmas lights in a local town. I decided to listen to ‘Johnny’s Garden’ and now I’m having a CSN&Y evening! I’m off to read your poem now.
Does anyone know how to comment on Hamish’s Forestbathing blog? I’ve found a ‘like’ button but no space or button for comments.
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Thanks for a wonderful prompt, Kim! It’s amazing how the same prompt strikes different chords in people! 🙂
How true! It was the same with the birthday /moon prompt.That’s the beauty of it. 🙂
Yes it is wonderful to see the different perspectives. Often I’ll write mine up, then read some of yours and be inspired in different ways, so I’ll create another. Rabbit holes, tangents etc. Check my next and previous posts if you will, I write more than I’ll link to here. Kim you have hedgehogs? That’s cool! thank you for this great prompt.
-Erbiage
Thank you for taking part. I’ve just got up so I’ll be doing some more reading in a while.:)
Well, it’s getting late here and I have to be at the library for Bounce and Rhyme in the morning but I’ll be back to read more poems before we set off for the airport tomorrow evening. Happy writing dVerse Poets!
Hello! Posted a Garden Poem….but Mr. Linky doesn’t seem to like me. But it’s there. Love this prompt. Love gardening, but with this 2 month drought, there is no possibility. First time no fall garden. Sob.
Try some containers in the shade or inside somewhere – flowering herbs perhaps. I’ll find your poem, Jane!
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Thanks so much, Kim. Just a quick tiny poem from me, but I loved pondering some garden life. 🙂 Off to read a few…
It’s not long past six in the morning over here and I’m about to read some more poems.I’m looking forward to reading your tiny one!
good things come in small packages
What a nice prompt! I am enjoying my garden very much, as it is Spring here. And I am practising the trimeric form, so it was good to be given a subject – albeit not exactly a new one for me, lol.
I’m pleased you enjoyed the prompt, Rosemary 😊
Ooops…I’m late i’m late for a very…..busy lst night playing catch up…I love this prompt so much…The song is one of my go to songs for just cheering me up and Being There is one of my all time faave films…so much inspiration…gotta write that poem tonight and do some commenting…I’ll need a stiff drink Bartender…
I’m in Poland at the moment, so vodka would have to be an ingredient!
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I’ve enjoyed your post very much, Kim.
Love all things garden — thank you for the prompt.
Here in Maryland we’re having a long warm autumn: I’m still working in my garden, gradually prepping it for the winter, planted daffodil, tulip and crocus bulbs today 🙂
To pour your soul onto the earth
Shove your fingers into the soil
There you’ll come to know your worth
Forever the city’s foil
In this way are gardeners blessed
To know the workings of this world
With labor pure, the fruits are best
And the flag of love unfurled
I love spring flowers, so fresh and new after winter. Delighted you enjoyed the post!
Internet issues tonight…very intermittent…making commenting tricky…apologies to all.
I am way behind with reading and commenting, Paul, I won’t be able to catch up until Sunday.
I never got caught up, even to reply to comments on my own page. So sorry folks. I do like to read and comment but internet down and busy workload means I’ll just need to start again with the next prompt. If I get ahead I’ll see if I can revisit the Garden thread.
I have another prompt tomorrow, Paul. I’m hosting Poetics, so maybe I’ll see one of your poems then. 😊
If I don’t fall behind with tonight’s Haibun rounds 😉
I’ve only just caught up – don’t worry!
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Can especially relate to Johnny’s Garden with the city blues. I really dug this prompt Kim 😉 also starting with a quote though taking some time to plan and plant
Glad you liked it, Laura. I’m behind with reading and commenting as I’m in Poland and only have access to my husband’s iPad and wonky wifi!
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Hi Kim, I enjoyed this prompt as it nudged me to write about my garden when my excitement has died down…yet there is still so much going on!
I am so pleased you enjoyed it as much as I did!
Hi Janice! The pingback showed up on dVerse but I can’t see your link on Mr Linky, which means that some of the dVerse poets won’t get to see your post!
Thanks for pointing that out. I’ll put my link in if I can.
Ah well, as luck would have it, I managed to miss out on the date. Still, your prompt brought back lovely memories of my childhood. I’d love to invite you for a stroll in my garden 🙂 https://thegratefuldeadblog.wordpress.com/2016/11/21/1572/
Thank you. I’ll be over later today!
Most welcome.