Hi everyone, today it’s the world poetry day and I am pleased to introduce our guest host for today, Paul Dear.
Good evening poets. Tonight I will be guest hosting here at the pub and offering up the theme of ‘The River’. Rivers can signify many things: a place of meeting for both animals and humans, a metaphor for journey or perhaps a mythological place such as ‘The River Styx’. Of course ‘The River’ can be used in many forms as adjective or verb.
Photos by Paul Dear Photography
Here are a couple of my favorite River themed poems for your inspiration.
The River of Bees.
William Stanley Merwin.
In a dream I returned to the river of bees
Five orange trees by the bridge and
Beside two mills my house
Into whose courtyard a blind man followed
The goats and stood singing
Of what was older
Soon it will be fifteen years
He was old he will have fallen into his eyes
I took my eyes
A long way to the calenders
Room after room asking how shall I live
One of the ends is made of streets
One man processions carry through it
Empty bottles their
Images of hope
It was offered to me by name
Once once and once
In the same city I was born
Asking what shall I say
He will have fallen into his mouth
Men think they are better than grass
I return to his voice rising like a forkful of hay
He was old he is not real nothing is real
Nor the noise of death drawing water
We are the echo of the future
On the door it says what to do to survive
But we were not born to survive
Only to live
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“Ask Me” by William Stafford
Some time when the river is ice ask me
mistakes I have made. Ask me whether
what I have done is my life. Others
have come in their slow way into
my thought, and some have tried to help
or to hurt: ask me what difference
their strongest love or hate has made.
I will listen to what you say.
You and I can turn and look
at the silent river and wait. We know
the current is there, hidden; and there
are comings and goings from miles away
that hold the stillness exactly before us.
What the river says, that is what I say.
I look forward to reading your River poems!
If you are new at D’verse, here’s how to play:
- Write a poem inspired by ‘The River’ and post it to your blog
- Click on “Mr. Linky” below and enter your name and direct link to your poem
- Drop in the pub to say hello
- Read and comment on other people’s work
- Share via your favorite social media platforms.
- Have fun !
About the guest host: I’m Paul John Dear, the scribbler. I live in South Lanarkshire, Scotland. I am a husband and father of 3 grown ups. In my work I am a rhythmical alchemist, helping to create and support community through rhythm. Rhythm for me is all about patterns, connection and self discovery. Writing it seems is no different and so I scribble too.
Grace said:
Happy Poetics ! Happy World Poetry Day folks! Thanks to Paul for guest hosting!
whimsygizmo said:
Love love LOVED this, Paul. And your photos are gorgeous. Back soon to make my rounds. Happy writing, everybody.
Grace said:
Looking forward to it De! Happy writing back to you!
paul scribbles said:
Thank You De and Grace. You guys are quick off the mark so I’ll begin my rounds shortly. Welcome Drams on the bar.
paul scribbles said:
Evening all. Thank You for the opportunity to host and look after the bar this evening. Whoever thought it would be a good idea to leave an Irishman who lives in Scotland in charge of a bar ?? 🙂
So in the tradition of my ancestors I’ll be offering drams of the finest single malts and pot still whisky known to man…or perhaps a Heather Ale to welcome in the Spring? Those of you who would like to imbibe a non alcoholic refreshment will be met with a quizzical stare.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Can I have some Irish Cider please 🙂
paul scribbles said:
Of course Bjorn. One cider coming right up. Off to read your poem next.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Off to do my rounds as well.
whimsygizmo said:
Ooooh. Pour me one of these, please. 🙂
lillian said:
I’d like an Irish Coffee please 😊🍀
paul scribbles said:
Coming right up.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello, a wonderful prompt and something I have used before in my poetry… for me the river is a perfect metaphor… and that’s the road I took… Happy World Poetry Day…
Grace said:
Yes, a perfect metaphor! Happy World Poetry Day back to you Bjorn!
paul scribbles said:
Yes you did…with bells on.
whippetwisdom said:
Good evening all and thank you for hosting tonight Paul. I have linked a tanka I posted earlier today and would love a wee dram while I do the reading rounds :o)
paul scribbles said:
Beautiful Tankaa. What can I pour for you? A highland? A Speyside? An Islay?
whippetwisdom said:
Oh an Islay please! :o)
paul scribbles said:
Shall I choose or do you have a favourite?
whippetwisdom said:
I love a Caol Ila if you have it there :o)
paul scribbles said:
Good choice. I have a Festival edition that’ll do the job. Slainte.
whippetwisdom said:
Bless you and slainte! :o)
frankhubeny said:
Nice prompt, Paul. I’m still working on mine, but I just wanted to say hi till I get the poem finished.
paul scribbles said:
Thanks Frank. Happy writing.
frankhubeny said:
And mine is done expressing my sense of a river flooding.
paul scribbles said:
Off to take a peek now Frank.
ladynyo said:
Thanks, Paul, Grace this is a wonderful prompt. William Stafford is my favorite poet.
paul scribbles said:
One of mine too. Thanks for your exquisite contribution. If I remember correctly your preferred dram would be Japanese?
ladynyo said:
Yep. Sake. Warm please. LOL!
paul scribbles said:
Fortunately I have some already to go…Kanpai!
Bev said:
Oh woe is me! I used my very best river story for yesterday’s haibun! I’ll have to improvise . . .
kim881 said:
Hiya Paul! Y’awlright? or even How are ye? Happy World Poetry Day! That’s a great choice of poems for the river prompt and I think we’re going to see some beauties. As soon as I saw the prompt, I started singing the Joni Mitchell song and had to fight the temptation to paste the link from YouTube. Here’s the link anyway!
paul scribbles said:
Grand . Thanks for asking. Wonderful song. Thank You.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
And I started to think of Bruce Springsteen and his the river.
paul scribbles said:
So many river songs to choose from.
frankhubeny said:
That Joni Mitchell song is one of my favorites.
kim881 said:
🙂
sanaarizvi said:
Happy World Poetry Day everyone ❤️ loved the prompt! Sharing my poem “A Poet’s Love” thank you for the lovely opportunity, Paul 🙂
paul scribbles said:
Welcome Sanaa and Thank You for your contribution this evening. A drink whilst you view the poems perhaps Madme?
sanaarizvi said:
That would be nice 🙂 thank you!
paul scribbles said:
A nice Speyside Malt then. Tastes of the wild heather and honey.
frankhubeny said:
Happy World Poetry Day!
erbiage said:
So many river songs! So let’s dance at The River! Seems kind of a cheat, I’ve got one in my own back yard. Nothing like it on the hottest summer days… Paul, a single malt to die for, please, you pick I don’t know enough and need some schooling. thanks all!
paul scribbles said:
We just cross posted…my River song fits your poem…I have a delicious single fill Oloroso cask dram from Bunnahabhain…this is deep and delicious…a nurser. Enjoy.
erbiage said:
sounds magnificent, thank you!
paul scribbles said:
This was the song that I was thinking of when I put up the prompt. Fits with the fantastic poem from Erbiage. Check it out. Funky River.
Grace said:
Nice…I am listening to the music as I hit the poetry trail now ~ Thanks ~
paul scribbles said:
Happy Trails.
erbiage said:
Brilliant! I only knew the Talking Heads version… https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ar2VHW1i2w
paul scribbles said:
I know that one very well too. Thanks for sharing.
Singledust said:
Love the river as a prompt! Lovely photo Mr Dear! Rivers are magical stuff. looking forward to reading the feelings it inspires!
paul scribbles said:
Welcome to the Bar. Settle in and help yourself to a shot of Uisge Beatha. That’s Gaelic for Whisky and translates as ‘The Water of Life’
Singledust said:
Thanks for the warm welcome Paul!
frankhubeny said:
I was looking for a river song and found Moon River, but then I saw this one by Bishop Briggs. (Written by Ian Brendon Scott, Mark A. Jackson, Sarah Grace Mclaughlin according to Google Play Music.)
paul scribbles said:
Nice choice Frank.
Grace said:
Love this one …
Maureen Sudlow said:
I wanted mine to be joyful, but it didn’t turn out that way…
paul scribbles said:
Back in the bar and catching up so i’ll mosy over and take a look.
lillian said:
Happy World Poetry Day! And to Paul: wonderful prompt and so nice to have you tending the bar:)
I was really tempted to post a YouTube video of Tina Turner singing Proud Mary —there’s one of her and Cher singing it together also . What a song — rollin’ on a river’ — really wakes you up! Couldn’t figure out how to add it here.
I went the more serene way with brevity in a haiku.
Shall be makin’ the rounds in the morning with my hot steaming cup of coffee by my side 😊☕
paul scribbles said:
Another great song choice Lillian…lovin all the music in the bar tonight.
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
Oh, that was a great listen!
paul scribbles said:
Well folks. That has been a wonderful last 4 hours of reading, music and whisky. My kinda night. Mrs Scribbles is off on a trip tomorrow at 0530 and I’m making the coffee so off to sleep for now and I’ll be back bright n early to read more. Thanks for dropping by this evening. Whisky on the house from here on in. Night night.
Grace said:
Thanks for the lovely company Paul ~ Have a good night and see you tomorrow ~
rosross said:
Rivers are the veins and arteries of the earth.
paul scribbles said:
So very true. Thanks for your contribution.
crow said:
We all float down here.
he he he
paul scribbles said:
Wrapped in beaver pelt no doubt? Thanks for dropping by.
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
Here’s a prompt I oculdn’t resist, being a great lover of rivers – particularly the one I grew up alongside.
paul scribbles said:
Your poem will resonate with many a childhood memory i’m sure. Thanks for visiting the bar.
paul scribbles said:
Well tis morning here and I’ve been in and done a wee bit of clear up at the bar. How are the heads after all the whisky? Coffee anyone? or perhaps the hair of the dog 😉 I shall be traveling today but will be able to pop in and pick up any new river writes. Here’s a little morning music to start the river flowing.
erbiage said:
great promt paul, thanks. couldnt’ resist, had to add another… And hair of the dog that bit you, please! lol!
sarahsouthwest said:
Nice prompt, Mr Scribbles. Once I’d got past Bruce Springsteen, I managed to write something of my own. It’s early here. I’ll just have a coffee and a sparkling spring water – as that’s how rivers start, after all…
paul scribbles said:
Hair of the dog coming up…a tad lighter…this is a sweet and nutty Speyside malt called Aberlour. 10 yrs old and a sipper.
paul scribbles said:
Coffee and water on the way.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Could not get Eliot’s ‘Dry Salvages’ river out of my mind when I first saw your prompt but have switched to a more rural one. Inspirational theme made more so by your magical waterscapes
paul scribbles said:
Good to have you along Laura. Doing another round of viewing and comments now so will take a peep. Perhaps it’s time for an Irish Coffee. Care to join me?
Laura Bloomsbury said:
nice idea but mush dash off soon – back later to read the many trails of your river prompt
paul scribbles said:
I’ll drink yours too then 😉
Colin Lee said:
Happy World Poetry Day!!
paul scribbles said:
And to you too Colin.
quillfyre said:
Rivers are fascinating as they flow or pool, resting on their way somewhere else. Recently in New Zealand, a river was given status as a living thing. I am pleased to share my river poem here along with everyone inspired by their own particular river. — Carol
paul scribbles said:
Thanks for the visit Carol and for the lovely poem.
Kathy Reed said:
Late to post, but I will be around to read and comment later..off to dental appt!
paul scribbles said:
Thanks Kathy. Will drop by soon.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Wow this prompt was popular… great attendance… and thank you for hosting Paul…
paul scribbles said:
A total joy for me. So nice to read responses to a prompt I offered and to engage in good chat in the bar and have so much music included here too. Mr Linky is still alive for 8 hours so we may well get one or two more. You never know.
Janice said:
Thank you for this prompt. Running water is on my mind as I pass a wonderful rushing creek breaking free from ice on my way home.
paul scribbles said:
Thanks for your addition Janice. Very lovely.
Janice said:
Thank you Paul 🙂
paul scribbles said:
Thank You all so much for your wonderful poems, music and conversation. This was a real joy for me to be host for an evening. I look forward to the next time. Here is a River Prayer for all you beautiful poetic souls.