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Hello everyone, Paul here as your host for Poetics at the bar. Tonight folks I am asking you all to go ‘underground’
What, where or who is the underground? Perhaps a renegade group of poets railing against the cultural status-quo? a train-line connecting place A to place B which is very, very busy or very, very quiet? a place of mythical descents? the space where seeds are birthed and where the flowers come from? where the worms and moles live?
I think you will agree that there are many ways to the underground.
Here is a wonderful poem by Seamus Heaney to set you on your way.
The Underground
There we were in the vaulted tunnel running,
You in your going-away coat speeding ahead
And me, me then like a fleet god gaining
Upon you before you turned to a reed
Or some new white flower japped with crimson
As the coat flapped wild and button after button
Sprang off and fell in a trail
Between the Underground and the Albert Hall.
Honeymooning, moonlighting, late for the Proms,
Our echoes die in that corridor and now
I come as Hansel came on the moonlit stones
Retracing the path back, lifting the buttons
To end up in a draughty lamplit station
After the trains have gone, the wet track
Bared and tensed as I am, all attention
For your step following and damned if I look back.
So let’s go to it. Bring me a poem from your underground travels and haul it back to the surface for us all to read. Happy writing.
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- And most importantly, please do stop by to read responses to the prompt and add a short comment or reaction. Everyone likes to be appreciated! The prompt is “live” for several days – as you’ll notice by the comments you’ll receive – so do stop by several times, and read some of the latecomers too!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Paul will come in a bit later but I have promised to serve you gin and chthonc… welcome
kim881 said:
Hi Paul and Bjorn! I think I’ve got in early today, so I’d like a lager shandy please which I might spill because I’m pogo-ing to The Jam!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Lager shandy coming up… do you want some brimstone with that?
kim881 said:
Not sure about brimstone – I don’t usually drink alcohol but the shandy is in memory of my misspent youth!
paul scribbles said:
Bjorn has taken the bar underground 😉
kim881 said:
LOL
paul scribbles said:
The proper response to a classic tune Kim 😉
kim881 said:
My punk days were short and sweet but memorable.
erbiage said:
Hallo Kim, would you post a link to that song? Or others that move you?
paul scribbles said:
Tis the song in the video above 😉
paul scribbles said:
Evening all…I’m here now. Thanks Bjorn for stepping in. I’m kinda in and out this evening as a good friend is leaving Scotland tomorrow and dinner has now turned into a farewell party. I’ll be checking in to read and comment over the course of the next few hours and I look forward to your underground tales. Now where’s that Gin?
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Gin coming up… with some excellent chthonic
paul scribbles said:
Thanks Bjorn.
jillys2016 said:
Hmmm… must pour a cup of coffee and ponder this one – cool prompt!
paul scribbles said:
Looking forward to your response Jilly. Want some Brandy in that coffee?
jillys2016 said:
You are brilliant! Yes, please 🙂
paul scribbles said:
Brandy Coffee coming right up.
lillian said:
Hello everyone! Really enjoyed this prompt, Paul and it came at a good time when I could use our travels in Iceland as a muse. Enjoy your time with your friend….farewell dinners are always bittersweet.
Looking forward to reading everyone’s take on this — mostly tomorrow morning with my hot coffee as per usual.
Although a gin and tonic sounds good now! 🙂 Can you make it with a twist of lime?
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Are you bringing smell of sulfur maybe… ?
paul scribbles said:
Lol. I hope not.
lillian said:
Ugh….that’s a rotten egg smell I’ve always had trouble with! We did run into it in Iceland when viewing the geoghermal fields. There’s photos of that in my previous Geyser – a one sentence poem. So interesting to see…..not so cool to smell!
paul scribbles said:
Yes. I think we should keep the sulphur underground where it belongs 😉
Sabio Lantz said:
Ya know, I have read a whole book of Seamus Heaney’s poems and proved I was a poetic idiot. I could not “get into”, “understand”, “resonante with” or anything with all but a precious few.
And today’s Underground poem was no exception. But it is me, for sure. It seems Heaney want’s the reader to know about the place where he had a ceremony, and wants the reader to know both Greek and German myths and go on a trip of blurred reality and fantasy between all that. It seems he is writing to a very select audience. But certainly not writing to me. Here is where I read about this poem to see the hidden secrets: http://fawbie.com/tag/the-underground/
To show you that I liked something, see this poem called “The Skylight” — but the only reason I liked it, is I understood the allusion. My lover had no idea what he was writing about. Poetry — who do we write for?
I will look to see if I can contribute anything today — and I will strive not to be private.
paul scribbles said:
Every poem is an education of sorts. I enjoy being challenged to go and stretch my vocabulary and understanding of all kinds of things. Context as with works of art is important.
lillian said:
Amen to that, Paul! Well said.
Sabio Lantz said:
Yes, I agree, if one cares to dig, uncode and such and then re-read, it all can be very rich. But because most don’t want to, such poetry remains an obscure past-time like Sudoku for number puzzle lovers. Music lyrics are the poetry of the age it seems, for even if you can’t understand anything, at least you have a catchy tune.
For this reason, I love when writers here tell us in their prose a little about the secrets behind their private poems so we can enjoy them more.
paul scribbles said:
I can’t speak for ‘most’ Sabio, only for myself. I don’t mind bit of digging and I don’t mind sending folk on a magical mystery tour or two either. Horses for courses my friend.
Sabio Lantz said:
For that reason, I hope the link I offered helps those with my lack of skills. Meawhile, I dug up a poem from underground — earlier this summer. Thanx for the prompt.
paul scribbles said:
No problem. Nice poem.
Sabio Lantz said:
You comment on one poem where you said, “nice nod to coleridge.” Illustrate my point. Written for an elite audience.
paul scribbles said:
How do you know I didn’t google it first 😉 Too many assumptions Sabio.
Just relax and enjoy the poetry if you can.
erbiage said:
Hello Sabio. Hardly my intention to be elitist. Honestly I don’t think I would have known about or liked as much, the Coleridge poem, if it wasn’t for the song by the Canadian band Rush (Link in the comment section). You raise interesting questions about the poetic audience.
That’s the thing about a worldwide audience, it can be difficult to be relevant everywhere. We all eat, so that might be a safe topic, but the stuff we do consume varies greatly. There’s the weather, the sun and moon, but where I live there are no typhoon, I’ve never seen a tornado. M company has an educator for our product, who always uses references from tv shows, that his audience hasn’t seen. It’s not terribly effective.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I must say that a favorite imagist and underground poem is by Ezra Pound:
In a Station of the Metro
The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet, black bough.
paul scribbles said:
I don’t know that one Bjorn. Off to check it out now.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
It is the complete poem 🙂
paul scribbles said:
Wow.
paul scribbles said:
Comment approved Sabio. Look forward to your contribution.
frankhubeny said:
Nice prompt, Paul. I should have mine finished later this evening.
paul scribbles said:
Look forward to it as always Frank.
frankhubeny said:
It is finally done.
Rachel Rosenberg said:
Hello all! Allergic to beer…but can share an old poem about a dream I had years and years ago! It’s all “humanity lives underground now” and “humans are the prisoners of some fierce androids now” and stuff.
paul scribbles said:
We can offer a variety of soft fruit punches with a little something extra to ‘spice’ it up if you so desire. Look forward to your poem.
Rachel Rosenberg said:
Oh yes, that’s definitely a “would happily accept” from me!
paul scribbles said:
Okay. Hawaiian Fruit punch coming right up.
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paul scribbles said:
Loving the responses so far everyone. Nipping out to the party for 10. See y’all shortly. Cocktails on the bar until I return. Help yourselves.
erbiage said:
Hey all. Popping in for a quick pint before bed…
paul scribbles said:
Can I interest you in a pint of Old Peculiar?
erbiage said:
Aye, mate. That’s a fine brew
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paul scribbles said:
OK. Time for ma bed. If there’s anyone in the bar still help yourself to a shot of single malt…a fine Highland Park 16 yr old. Until the morrow. Thanks for dropping by and for all your wonderful contributions. May your dreams be filled with poetry.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Sounds yummy but no whisky in the morning.
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crow said:
This is something I can dig in to…
paul scribbles said:
I see you uncovered a beauty.
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paul scribbles said:
Morning all ( well here at least) We will hold the prompt open for the rest of the day so feel free to pen another poem and don’t forget to visit your fellow wordsmiths and share some love. Now where’s that coffee?
sarahsouthwest said:
Nice prompt. Did you seriously post at 3.30am? That’s what it says here. If so, I hope it was a great farewell dinner. Well, I hope that any way, obviously!
paul scribbles said:
It was bout 7.30 am here when I posted and I had been to bed 😉
lillian said:
Thanks again, Paul for this great prompt. I’ve really enjoyed reading all the “takes” on the word.
paul scribbles said:
You are welcome Lillian. Such a dVerse selection 😉
Ryan Stone said:
Is this seat taken? Hello to you all. Cool prompt, I’m looking forward to reading what it has generated so far. Cheers from Oz.
paul scribbles said:
Welcome to the bar Ryan. Take seat. What’s your poison? Do leave us a poem afore ye go too.
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nosaintaugustine said:
I did the linky thing to my post, hopefully correctly. Off to work, I will check back later to read everyone’s creations!
paul scribbles said:
It worked. I’ll pop by for a shufty 😉
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mother wintermoon said:
Love this versatile theme word, Paul.