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As you might have noticed, I often write about my daily trip to work. I’m fortunate enough to be able to commute with a bicycle. This means being totally exposed to the elements. If it’s raining you really feel it.
This past week we have had a lot of rain, which made me think of a suitable subject for writing a haibun, namely water.
Water comes in many forms. It can be rain or fog, it fills the lakes and make the brooks babble. It can seen vast and endless when you watch the sea. It brings death in flooding and life after drought. Water can be sparkling from the supermarket or simply from the tap.
Water can be absent in a desert or cold and hostile in winter.
The topic for this haibun is really very simple:
Tell me something from real life, something recent or something from your past, and tie it up with one real haiku. The only requirement is that you need to include some aspect of water. Try to limit your prose to not more than 150 words.
I will not count syllables in you haiku but please try to include nature and season.
If you want to use any images from this prompt they are copyrighted to me, so please include a copyright notice.
When you have written your haibun link it up below. It is always appreciated if you leave a comment below, and remember to pass by and read the other linked haibun you might find. Comment what you like and make sure to be part of the community.
Good evening friends… today it’s not raining… but we have spring water in the bar.. and plenty of ice
Thank you for hosting Bjorn ~ We had a sudden storm last night but tonight, its not raining but sunny and very cool ~ Happy Haibun Monday to all ~
Happy Monday back… I hope this very open prompt can inspire to some lovely poetry.
Also your photos are lovely !
Thank you… they came from different occasions of travel and around where I live.
Hello Björn, thank you for hosting. I went the other way and chose tears as my choice of water. I hope I haven’t fallen off a cliff!
Tears are one example of water.
I thought so!😊
Hi Everyone. Thank you Bjorn for hosting. I’m up and posted. I’m afraid I went over the 150 word limit – I got to writing about “my” ocean and the first snow and well….I hope everyone is doing well. Today it seems that fall is finally in the air. We only go up to 78F today. And it rained last night.
Oh A lot of water coming your way soon then… 🙂
Not really. It won’t star being rainy around here until December and then hopefully, it will be snow. In my dreams I see the shifting colors of the part of the Atlantic that washes up on the NC coast is spectacular.
I am excited to write this week’s Haibun. Water is a great prompt!
So many alternatives to write.
I posted. What a great prompt – I suspect we’ll get a lot of different perspectives.
I think so too… so much we can write about the topic.
Thanks for hosting, Bjorn! Water is a great prompt.
To my surprise I found we never did water…
Happy Haibun Monday, everyone! I just got back from choir and am glad to see you all here. I agree that water is a great prompt – there’s so much of it! I’m looking forward to a great read.
We are even watery inside
Thankyou, we had a really funny coloured mist today apparently it has sand from the Sahara in it..I will not get to reading tonight though it will be tomorrow.
Love to all. XXXX
I would be a bit scared of coloured mist
Hi Bjorn and all – thanks again for a great prompt – well, here in Australia drought rules – so I’ve dusted off an older piece – how refreshing. Looking forward to reading everyone’s work later on.
Lack of water is also good for the prompt
Hello~~~~ I am afraid my haibun isn’t and is also ‘anti-water’. But it is the best I could do today and beg mercy.
Anti water is water too… it probably works
Happy Monday Bjorn and thanks for a fine prompt. After much editing I reduced the prose to a 151 words – my it was difficult, trying to retain the sentiments of the post. But tis done!
Cheers!
Anna :o]
I often find that cutting down the words improve my prose though, so I hope it was worth it.
Reblogged this on All About Writing and more.
Late to the bar. Someone pour me a dram please. Loooong day of storytelling, magic and weird skies. Not penned yet so will be back with something soon…ish. Stormy Monday here right now.
Lots of water then… storytelling sounds perfect.
Thanks for the fun – mine is definitely a true story…
Love anything that’s true,
Pulling up a stool now, after a long day that ain’t over yet! I’ll ante up a haibun tale of the Animus in Colorado.
I love Colorado.
Thanks for a lovely prompt! So many possibilities:)
Water is like music.
Oooops, just saw, a Haibun. I don’t have internet at work so I will just link my mistake here: https://yuanfields.wordpress.com/2017/10/17/pani-wani/
Well, I worked in a different clinic today which actually has internet and patient count is a bit low, so I morphed the above poem into a Haibun which actually allowed me to contain the content I had wanted to work in. So I linked that poem. Now off to visit others!
Hello Sabio, glad you could rework it to a haibun… I’m just home from work and will make my rounds.