Welcome to the dVerse Poets Pub for Tuesday Poetics with Kim of Writing in North Norfolk.
We are now in the middle of autumn. Soon the clocks will be going forward in quite a few countries across the world and the nights will be drawing in earlier.
I have been thinking about some of the things we associate with this time of year, such as various flowers, nuts, berries, conkers and fallen leaves, and would like you choose one autumnal item, take a closer look at it in all its glory with your poetic microscope and write a poem about it. It could be an ode to whatever it is, a poem from its point of view, or a collage of different types of that particular thing. You can focus on any aspect: sight, feel, taste, sound or smell, or a combination of any or all of them. This will, of course, be a different experience depending on whether you live in the Northern or Southern Hemisphere.
I have found a wonderful example in a poem by the British poet Elizabeth Jennings (1926 – 2011), which spills over with autumn:
The Smell of Chrysanthemums
The chestnut leaves are toasted. Conkers spill
Upon the pavements. Gold is vying with
Yellow, ochre, brown. There is a feel
Of dyings and departures. Smoky breath
Rises and I know how Winter comes
When I can smell the rich chrysanthemums.
It is so poignant and it makes me mourn
For what? The going year? The sun’s eclipse?
All these and more. I see the dead leaves burn
And everywhere the summer lies in heaps.
I close my eyes and feel how Winter comes
With acrid incense of chrysanthemums.
I shall not go to school again and yet
There’s an old sadness that disturbs me most.
The nights come early; every bold sunset
Tells me that Autumn soon will be a ghost,
But I know best how Winter always comes
In the wide scent of strong Chrysanthemums.
Elizabeth Jennings

Image found on chrysanthemums.org
The challenge is to write a poem, of any length or form, about an item of autumn: whole tree or just a leaf or nut; flower, berry, a bonfire in the garden – it’s up to you, just as long as the poem is new.
If you are new, here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem in response to the challenge;
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below;
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join so check back to see more poems;
- Read and comment on other poet’s work, we all come here to have our poems read;
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog;
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
I look forward to seeing autumn in new and different ways through your personal poetic lenses.
Apologies for the earliness of this post but somehow it was scheduled to my (Greenwich Mean) time! It does mean that I have a couple of hours to read early poems, as I have to leave the bar to go to Norwich this afternoon and won’t be home for a few hours. It also means I’ll have some lovely poems waiting for me when I get back. It’s coming up to four o’clock here – anyone for afternoon tea? 🙂
Hi Kim. I couldn’t find the Mr. Linky bar in your posting.
H! It’s right down the bottom below ‘How to join in’. Sometimes you have to click on the title for it to show up.
Wow. That was fast. Thanks.
😉
Thanks, Kim. I was positively blind to it, perhaps because I expected it to be blue as in other Mr. Linky sights.
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Hi Kim, thank you for hosting at a time that suits for this part of the world! A cup of tea sounds lovely and I will swing by to read in a moment :o) xxx
I wonder if I could do that in future. I’ll ask the other hosts and see what they think. dVerse afternoon tea with triangle sandwiches (with the crusts removed), crumpets and scones with jam and cream! Leave the alcohol to the latecomers.
dVerse afternoon tea sounds wonderful Kim, especially with the scones with jam and cream! I rarely have time to hook up in the evenings these days and my posts have already been published for the day by the time the prompt appears in the evening. I will happily go by what suits the crowd because I only post 4-5 times a week and when the dVerse topic does not fit or duplicates something I have recently covered I won’t be able to join in anyway :o) xxx
Thank you for sharing the chrysanthemum poem!
I’m delighted you enjoyed it!
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Hi Kim! Safe travels. A great prompt and beautiful chrysanthemum poem.
Thanks Viv! I got back earlier than expected and will be reading and commenting shortly. 🙂
Kim, thank you for hosting ~ That is such a lovely poem about autumn ~ I have linked up and will be visiting later as I am still in the office ~ Happy Poetics to everyone ~
I’ve just got back, Grace, and am ready to read and comment. I’ll see you on the poetry trail. Happy Poetics!
Thanks for hosting… I will link up in a bit, and then try to man the bar. Need to catch up on the haibun as well.
Bjorn, your link brings me back to this page.
Thank you, now it’s corrected.
I’m back early, Bjorn!
Many thanks for holding the fort!
By the way, some poets liked the early post, which was purely accidental, and I wondered if it would hurt if we sometimes started earlier in Europe. How would you, Grace and the others feel about it?
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Thank you Kim for prompting! This is a truly lovely poetic prompt and I.Never.Get.Too.Autumn! 🙂
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Thanks for hosting, Kim! I like the sound of that poem by Elizabeth Jennings.
I found it in a lovely anthology a friend gave me a few years ago: Read Me: A Poem for Every Day of the Year, chosen by Gaby Morgan, which has four of Elizabeth Jennings’ poems. This is one of two poems about autumn – the chrysanthemums really appealed to me!
It appealed to me as well. I will try to find a copy of her collected poems.
Tad late in the bar … but can soon catch up on the drinks front 🙂 Thanks for the prompt Kim …. just love the season
No problem – I was late back from Norwich. I’m glad you like the prompt. 🙂
Wow, every poem I’ve read so far this evening has been fresh, original and bloody brilliant!
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Thank you for hosting such an inspiring Poetics tonight, Kim! For those of us near the tropics, Autumn is a subtle time sans colors and foliage, but it is a time when the migrating birds return home once again. I toast them and all of my poet friends with a mulled cider. Chers!
Great choice of drink, Jill! It has been interesting to read all the different impressions of autumn.
Indeed, it has!
Hi Kim and everyone here…. I am running two days late. Autumn for me is a combination of sensations, smells, wind, weather. But that limits it a lot.
It’s whatever you want it to be, Jane – no limits!
Thanks, Kim….for your understanding. I’m presently in conversation with Gayle about William Stafford’s poems. Do you know him?
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Very late to the bar but I have penned a poem. I’ll do some reading afore bed and more tomorrow.
I’ve been to be and I’m back again to read!
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Hope I made it before closing time! Autumn is my favorite season! I could wax poetic about foliage, harvest and Oktoberfest. But what could be more Autumn than pumpkins? I’ve uploaded a link to my latest tanka on the subject… 🙂
We’re still open, Frank! I’ve been to bed and got up again in the meantime and am looking forward to reading more poems for breakfast. 🙂
Glad to hear it! 😀
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Great prompt. So many possibilities.
I’m up again and ready for more possibilities – poems!
Sarah, your link didn’t work so I’ll go directly to your site!
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Hi, how do I remove a link from the Mr. Linky? I accidentally linked to the wrong post.
I’ve had this problem myself and will look into it.
In the meantime, you can add the poem you wanted to link. I’m looking forward to reading it!
Autumn reminds me of the festivals we celebrate in India. Many important festivalslike Diwali are celebrated!
Today is Diwali. Happy Diwali! Wishing you much happiness 🙂
Happy Diwali to you too, Anita. I love Diwali, which is also celebrated across the UK. Our local infant school had a special celebration this week.
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