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3-5-3-3-7-5, allure, cult status, enigma, enigmatic form, mystery, paranormal, phantoms, poetry, poetry prompt, shadorma, shadows, syllabic poetry, Tamyka Bell
Ooh, spooky. Doesn’t just hearing that word send shivers right to the source of your poetic inspiration? Every once in awhile I’ll “meet” a word and just the sound/look of it will be so intriguing that I feel it was sent from the realms of the divine to, from that day on, be entwined to my fate, perhaps as a teacher or a ghost revealing something I need to see.
So here’s the thing with the Shadorma: it is a phantom form enshrouded in shadows and mystery. Poetry bloggers who introduce the form seem to copy/paste the definition from Wikipedia’s own vague entry, but fail to back up what the Shadorma says it is. Word on the online street says that it is a Spanish form, though the name doesn’t sound Spanish (like other “true” forms, such as the letrilla or the pareado) and I have yet to find one example written by a Spanish poet. I’m inclined to believe that it is a recent invention that, due to its enigmatic and alluring nature, has drawn in a cult following.
Here is an example of the Shadorma, that also happens to be an acrostic as well.
‘Human Love‘
by Tamyka Bell
Taste the sky
with each breath we draw
into old
lungs lit bright,
illuminated by time’s
travelling sorrow.
Human love
under wisdom’s gaze
never fades;
grief — like us —
ever changing, never still,
runs to meet the sun.
Swirling seas
uncover each night’s
nuances,
skies swept clean,
ending the day as a kiss
trembles between us.
Seasons come,
hidden lovers go —
after all,
dreams are dreams,
only that, no more, and what
we hide becomes lost.
(Source: poetry-in-form.com)
Let us dVerse poets be allured! Shadorma is a syllabic poem consisting of six-line stanzas. The pattern is 3-5-3-3-7-5, and you may write one stanza, twenty, or anywhere in between. In honor of its nebulous origins, I suggest the content explore the fog, the paranormal, the unexplained phenomena of life and death. Ultimately though, let the Shadorma lead you in what you shall write…and reveal.
Thanks for reading and participating in this week’s Meeting the Bar with your host, Amaya. Here’s how to link up your work/secrets:
* Write a poem based on the prompt.
* Click on Mr. Linky. Enter your name and direct URL to your poem.
* Provide a link to dVerse so that your readers can find us and participate. Feel free to share on social media sites as well.
* Leave a comment here.
* Read and comment on other poets’ work. Be sure to check back later for more.
I’ve enjoyed writing this form. Thanks for hosting, Amaya! My post should be ready shortly.
Yours included both mystery and peace — not an easy combo!
Good evening, poets! I must say, it kind of feels like a seance here tonight with this freaky form. I’ll be tending bar and there’s no bouncer tonight so we may be among some, uh, otherworldly patrons.
Hello, a form I have only tried a few times before. I will need to get home first, but I will add mine soon
I am a big fan of tanka, and find this one to be similar in process of composition. And just this once, if you happen to pass a ghostly figure on the side of the darkened road, maybe you should offer him/her/it a ride on the old bicycle. Just for inspiration!
I don’t know what you have to do to host here, but I’d love to man the bar with a prompt sometime.
I’m happy to have the time to read and write today! Nice form, I’m working on mine now. Have a nice weekend all, it’s almost here.
I’m sure everyone would love for you to guest-host sometime. I hope Grace sees this, as she puts the schedule together, but if I don’t see a comment from her, I will most certainly pass on your interest to her. Thank you, Bekkie, and looking forward to your poem!
What a fun form! I went with the ghosts for extra fun and just linked. Thank you, Amaya, hosting would be so much fun we have the best poets, most of us from other mutual groups. Going to read some shadormas now. Hugs!
Thanks for hosting, Amaya! I went with a bit of theatrics on this one. Just getting over a cold, so I found it easy to do a voice. (cackle!)
Hi Jilly, I can hear it and thanks for adding your festive “voice”!
Good evening everyone, and thanks for hosting, Amaya! I have a ghost in the works this evening, with intermittent internet problems. I’ll try to keep up but if I disappear, you know why. I’, looking forward to an eerie read.
Thanks for the heads up, Kim. I’m not up for random disappearances with what all we’re invoking tonight!
Lovely prompt. Just in from a very long day. Posted up and will read in the morning. Night all.
Sleep soundly…
Evening, Poets! Fascinating prompt, Amaya. Thanks! This is my first time writing shardoma. I found a way to make haikai out of it! LOL!
Haha, of course you did!
What else can you expect from such a haijin? LOL!
This is a strange form, with no ambition, formally speaking. I came to think it perhaps was intended for a song. It is a bit odd, though, if so is, since a song would demand an order of stressed syllables. I see, on Twitter, that “shadorma” has a wider relevance than the poetic form. Anyhow, I did my best, and I think I found an order of stressed syllables by which the poem gets readable. Thank you for showing up!
I don’t do Twitter so I’m curious what you mean by a “wider relevance.”
I’m not doing Twitter, either. It happens I make an appearance, though. For the fun of it. 🙂
Thank you for this prompt Amaya. I love shadormas and enjoyed your comments about its mysterious origins. I also found the examples inspiring though I only managed to write 6 lines tonight.
And thank you for your “feline stealth,” Janice. It worked!
LOVE the shadorma! Mine is up, and making a few visits now. Loved your post, Amaya.
Thanks, De. I’ve only ever attempted the form once before this, but I do love syllabic forms. Glad it’s one you enjoy too!
Hey, dVersers! Hi, Amaya. Interesting form, fun prompt! All posted and will read as time allows. Cheers!
Hi Charley, I’m going to have to whip up some concoction quick to get your stomach settled after the undercooked meat and potatoes and other frights!
I initially screwed up the syllable count, but I just fixed it.
Thanks for being here, Barry. I know you have some sort of vow not to do prompts, so the phantom must have really pulled you in tight!
It did indeed. Plus I finished the 1st draft of my manuscript within my targeted deadline! I decided to treat myself, and this prompt was a perfect treat for me.
Life’s been rarther serious of late, so I welcomed the chance to have a bit of fun with this!
🙂
And then I did another one on some of the more serious stuff.
https://eastelmhurstagogo.wordpress.com/2018/03/16/truth-or-fiction/ Here’s mine
Intriguing form. I’ll be back later to check out what others wrote. For now I have to go to work and plan a revision of a book on construction law. Sounds fascinating, I know, but it’s not.
It’s easy! You think, and you make. 🙂
The poem was easy to write. Wish I could spend all day writing what I want to write.
Hi Amaya! Thanks for a great prompt. I pushed myself out of my comfort zone and went with a post that is dark and evil.
Late, as usual with these, but I loved this prompt. Back later to read. 🙂
Oh well, linky closed before I could post… http://qbit.blog/2018/03/18/shadorma