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“Love the sinner, hate the sin,” a quotation that has been attributed to numerous do-gooders throughout history, from St. Augustine to Mahatma Gandhi to your average social media warrior. But curiously, as I was preparing for this prompt and seeking out poetry about sins, a Zen-like underbelly was exposed as I discovered a trend wherein cardinal sin was touted as necessary to precede and even tantamount to embracing beneficence. Vice and virtue, enmeshed together in an eternal symbiotic relationship.
The “seven deadlies” as they are known in pop culture, are:
• Greed
• Lust
• Envy
• Gluttony
• Sloth
• Wrath
• Pride
And the seven virtues are:
• Charity
• Chastity
• Kindness
• Temperance
• Diligence
• Patience
• Humility
I’m asking you to write a poem about one or all of these and how your life has been affected. Do you see a complementary function between vice and virtue? Is there one in particular that has played a key role in your giving in to temptation? Or one that has provided a valuable lesson? Can you personify them and show their relationship in an unforeseen light? Consider one or more of these questions, but the form for your poem is open.
Here is a poem by a beloved blogger poet whom I recently learned passed away in February of this year, Keith Jaret, aka The Existential Baker.
‘Sin Times Seven‘
With a profound yearn I stared
Eyes aching inside my head
Dare I attempt stealing a peek
Peel back the jaded curtain
Glimpse inside the forbidden mind
Will I see my intimate solicitor
Fantasy goddess bathed in lust
In the bedroom of debauchery
Nay it is the reflection of Narcissus
Smiling back at me before the fall
Shall I sip from this abundant pool
Stare naked in the waves of deception
Ingest the water of ravenous virtues
Sate myself on mutual salaciousness
Or shall I keep this bliss for myself
Exile her to my bed chained in apathy
Enslave her tortured devotions as mine
Rage against the betrayal of desire
Exploding fury upon our rapture
Engorge ourselves on pleasure and pain
Until we can consume no longer
Our lethargic bodies idle and degenerate
Lust suffering listlessly in atrophy
Destroyed by each deadly sin
Times seven
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Hi everyone! Just heading out the door to vacation on a lake so I’ll hopefully spend the next few hours reading your sinful confessions (jk?) while my husband drives and babies sleep. Ha! One can dream… So, 7 and 7’s are on me, anything else, you’re on your own!
Have a great vacation with husband and babies, Amaya! and enjoy the lake!
Happy Tuesday to all – another great prompt on our first week back after the break and we’ve hit the ground running.
I agree Kim, we are off to a fantastic and busy year of writing!
We really did just kind of dive right into the deep end, didn’t we?
Enjoy our vacation Amaya! Thank you for giving us a challenging prompt!
Looking forward to hitting the poetry trail in a bit ~ Happy Tuesday !
Thanks, Grace.
Enjoy the lake!
It’s Lake Michigan, Frank!
Don’t drink it all at once. Lake Michigan is fascinating, only a few more feet and the great lakes would have emptied down the Mississippi and not the st Lawrence.
Oo, I snagged the seventh spot! Lol
Winner! Okay, I’ll get your drinks too, no matter what they are!
Lol, thanks!
The poem that you shared is thought-provoking, creative, and profound in the relationship between all of the sins.
Thank you so much for sharing my beautiful husband’s work! XOXO
I’m so pleased you saw this, Maureen. It’s an honor to share your husband’s poetry. Take care! xoxo
-Amaya Engleking
He would be so thrilled that his passion is being shared! xoxo
I just love your turn of phrase
This is an intriguing prompt. I tried it, and I also found myself meditating on attachment and Zen and whatnot and so forth.
The poem shared here is indeed thought-provoking.
I hope you can forgive me for my post… hehe. I am likely to take a light hearted subject and treat it seriously and then take a serious subject and make it a little joke. But I hope it will be bring some smiles. So appreciate you Amaya and the whole dVerse.
Not for the first time with one of your prompts, I looked and thought I wouldn’t manage it, and then I did! And enjoyed the push, too. I just needed to let it brew. Thank you.
Great prompt, although I had to mull on it a bit. Thank you!