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Lillian here. Delighted to host Tuesday Poetics at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets across the globe!
Once upon a time . . .
. . . that phrase begins many a tale. According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the phrase has been used in some form since 1380 in storytelling in the English language. It’s opened oral narratives since 1600.
That phrase, to some, is a cliché, an overused line. Others believe it’s a line filled with possibilities. If you sit in the proverbial circle for story time with a group of preschoolers, invariably they come to rapt attention, all eyes expectantly on you, if you say those magic words. They know a story is coming!
So – here’s what I’m asking for today. Let’s use a bit of poetic license with that phrase. For today’s Poetics, every poem should begin like this:
Once upon a _________ (you fill in the blank with any word except “time”) So a poem starting with Once upon a time would NOT fit the prompt! BUT, poems starting like this, for example, do fit the prompt:
Once upon a lily pad
Once upon a glimmer
Once upon a noodle
Once upon a midnight
You get the idea, right? Every poem should start with this three word phrase: Once upon a AND the next word can not be “time.”
Any form; free verse or rhyming; any topic. Write a love poem or something eerie for Halloween; something fantastical; or whatever your imagination comes up with!
So, it’s Once upon a Tuesday for me……….as I look forward to reading your posts!
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And for those of you new to dVerse, here’s what we hope everyone does:
- Write a poem that adheres to the prompt and post to your blog.
- Click on Mr. Linky below to add your name and enter the direct URL to your poem
- On your blog, please provide a link back to dVerse. This enables others to enjoy our prompts, multiplies our readers and thus the responses to all of our poems.
- If you promote your poem on social media, use the tag #dverse poets
- And most importantly, please do read some of the other responses to the prompt and add a short comment or reaction. Everyone likes to be appreciated! The prompt is “live” for several days – as you’ll notice by the comments you’ll receive – so do stop by another day and read a few of the latecomers too!
Welcome to Tuesday’s Poetics! Hope everyone is in the mood for some “once upon a whatever!” 🙂 Serving up your favorite libations today and ready to have some enjoyable reading too! Step right up!
Hello Lillian… I had some fun with a rhyming poem tonight, thinking that it makes sense to mix in some blood for Halloween.
LOVE Halloween time! Will be right over to read in a minute! 🙂
Welcome to Tuesday Poetics! (somehow my first welcome disappeared?) Ready for some Once Upon A whatevers and offering lots of different libations as well. Step right up to the bar and order up! 🙂
Ha… I see two welcome now… 🙂
GRRRR and ARGH…..well, there you have it! Two welcomes! 🙂 Just shows we’re mighty friendly here!
Also great to be welcomed twice! 🙂 I shall have to ponder. . .
🙂 Ponder away, my friend….and then Once upon a ponder, yonder she writes!
I should be working, but this is more fun. 🙂
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Thanks for hosting, Lillian! It was hard not to, but I did not write “once upon a time”.
Yep —- that word “time” just trips off the tongue, right? Turning the page on a stock phrase takes a mindfulness and some fun too! 🙂
Oh, I’m looking forward to some reading! I went softly romantic.
So glad you joined in Sarah. I’ll get over to read in a short bit! 🙂
Friends, Three years ago I began my blog and not long after that found this amazing pub. It has been an incredible journey so far, one which I would not have believed if you tried to tell me about it back then. So many poems have found their way out of me in that time, and I am delighted to have you all reading them. This poem, my response to today’s prompt, is my gift straight to and exclusively for the pub. It won’t appear on my blog. I hope you like it.
Once upon a space I relished unfamiliar place Now my ego is thoroughly killed And my books are already filled Here I am, now, and seen Despite this mask you call a face
Erbiage, 20181030 Sent from my iPad
What a wonderful post to read here in the chat! I so agree……dVerse is just such an amazing space where folks can be themselves and feel a supportive network for their words. How I’ve wished, so many times…..that somehow….we could have a “reunion” in real time, somewhere in a real place…and everyone would meet at a particular pub on x date, from x to x o’clock….and we’d just see how many showed up and really imbibed some drinks and words in the form of oral conversation! 🙂
Glad to see you here today! 🙂
I feel the same way. Finding dVerse has changed my world. Nice poem.
I realised as I posted that I’m slightly off prompt. I did a ‘once upon the’ instead of ‘once upon a’. Put it down to poetic licence—once upon a wouldn’t fit 🙂
I’ll definitely take it….a for the……sort of an ahhhh moment! Just so folks don’t fall into the stock phrase rut of “time”. Goin’ over to read now!
Glad you’ll stretch a point 🙂
Oh I wear many clothes with elastic these days 🙂
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lovely welcome and prompt Lillian! for a story lover and story teller like me this was irresistible, I wrote a little fantasy tale and mixed up characters into a new setting, hope the poetry gods are forgiving. now curious to read about the other “once upon’s”. early morning here and I’d love a frothy latte and slice of cake to start the day. have a good evening Lillian.
Frothy latte and a slice of delicious homemade pound cake with blueberry compote coming up! Will go over to imbibe your words now. So glad you joined in the prompt, Gina!
that sounds a perfect combination, I am partial to pound cake! it is a wonderful prompt, so very wonderful
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Evening, Poets! Thanks, lillian, for this creative prompt! See everyone on the poetry trail, soon! 🙂
Glad to see you drop by, Frank!
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Once upon a hungry tummy — this pub tender had to step away for dinner and time with my hubby. Will be back tomorrow morning to imbibe your words!
I’ve left the lights on….and key under the doormat….those are pretend spiders hanging above the door in honor of tomorrow’s Halloween so dont be frightened away! Help yourself to libations — sangria pitchers on the bar; coffee and hot chocolate in urns, and all the requisite liquor bottles are available on the shelf….beers and ales there too.
Tomrrow morning, bright and early, I’ll be back to wish you BOO on Halloween day and to peruse your Once Upons ….. till then, enjoy your evening!
Lillian
I snuck my poem in while you were gone, Lillian – afraid I stretched the instructions a bit, having wrestled all day with trying to start the poem with “once upon a…”, I moved it to the middle.
Pub is open and I’m sipping my morning elixir — makes all right with the world. A strong cup of coffee will do that for you! 🙂 So — just glad you posted for the prompt…and so sorry you had a struggle with it. Some times those muses can be devilish — especially during Halloween season!
So true. And I’ll skip the coffee thanks – allergic.
oooooh…..
My muse just had to have her say, I could use a glass of Cabernet.
Cabernet is definitely on the menu! Perhaps garnished with a goat’s tooth and a frog’s kiss for this Halloween day? 🙂
What a most engaging, delicious, delightful prompt idea. And how true – eyes light up – at least for most children, when they hear those (insidious) words …. Once upon a Time …. but for the magic we lose, as we age and end up rolling our eyes instead … so this is just such a fantastic prompt — Once upon a … unfortunately my mind went to “midnight dreary” … but I refrained. I resisted. I sat and just listed, instead, about a hundred possibilities, which could be a poem in and of itself …. but I spared you, and actually wrote a “fairy tale” – of sorts. Knocked off several ideas floating in my head space for a while now. So thank you! Great idea – put the zing in my zang. LOL 😉
and to everyone, – I look forward to wandering about and reading for the wonderful servings sure to be found here …. in the lands of once upon a ….. anything but …… time. 😀
Cheers!
Ah….I’m back tending the pub this morning….with a strong cup of coffee in hand: my morning elixir! So nice to read this and so very glad you enjoyed the prompt! 🙂 For me, I went with the Once upon a glimmer….it had just stuck with me since I wrote the prompt. I couldn’t get past it so decided to follow that memory worm 🙂
I’m thinking I should write a Halloween one today…..Once upon a frog’s foot…..Once upon a witchey caldron…..Once upon a flying broom…..Once upon a bat’s belfry…..Once upon the eye of newt? 🙂 Oh see what a little caffeine jolt will do to me?
Happy Boo! Day to you!
LOL – how creepiliciously delightful! Happy “Boo” Day to you too ~ and oh, the possibilities …. a truly inspired idea to keep us jumping! This is definitely a prompt to stuff into the “be inspired” “to write” jar when things seem too gummed up …. 😀
Terrific prompt Lillian, thank you (was stuck all weekend).
Ah….glad you liked it Peter! Nice to see you here….and BOO! to you this Halloween morn!
I’m sorry I’m a bit late with my poem, Lill, but I wasn’t well yesterday and went to bed early again. I love the prompt, which got me thinking but always led back to the mammoth, which I’ve written about before, but this time it was more a tale than a historical poem.
ooooh….I’m stirring my witchey caldron this morning…eye of newt, black cohash, and a cat tail hair….hoping this elixir sent to you via bubbling cybersphere, will have you feeling better today and saying BOO to everyone you see! 🙂
Pub is open again and I’ll be making my rounds after I hang some skeletons in the window and drape the doors with cobwebs — 🙂
Thank you for the elixir, Lill. It hasn’t quite worked yet but I hope to be back to normal by the weekend. I’m hosting OLN today, so I hope to see you on the poetry trail! 🙂
BOO! Pub’s open folks! I’ve decorated with paper skeletons that glow in the dark; cobwebs in the doorway; and bats hanging over the bar — so enter in the spirit!
Once upon a Halloween day……
PS: How ’bout those Red Sox???? I do live in Boston, after all 🙂
First time here. Loved it! Allowed me to get my silly Halloween hat on 😉
Welcome to dVerse!
Thanks. I’ll be back 😄
Good Morning Lillian- adding my fanciful take on the prompt! And congrats on the Red Sox. 🙂
Just back from the Red Sox parade! We live about a 5 minute walk from where the parade route ends so just sauntered over. So much fun and so exciting!
How cool for you!
I am having difficulty commenting with our WordPress poets. I’m now required to enter my name and password each and every time. Sometimes my comment is accepted, and at other times I get the message my comment cannot be posted. Is there a secret I’m missing?
I’m not sure about this….some folks use Blogger, others WordPress. Sometimes I have to prove I’m not a robot (imagine being a robot in my 7th decade!). I will ask Bjorn about this….he’s our resident expert and founder of dVerse. A suggestion: Bjorn will be late to OLN tonight, but he will be joining us. Perhaps you could pose this question again, in the OLN chat when it opens…and start your question with BJORN: SEEKING YOUR ASSISTANCE….or read his post/poem for OLN and put that in as your comment. I know he won’t mind and he can probably answer this.
PS: so sorry you’re having problems…:(
Lillian, I missed the deadline, too much grown up stuff at work, so I posted on OLN tonight – went back to childhood. Thanks for the prompt, it fit me right now on many levels. 🙂