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Welcome to the dVerse Poets Pub, an online community that convenes several times weekly to share poems based on that evening’s prompt. It’s Amaya Engleking bartending tonight and I’ll also serve as sous chef for our dVerse holiday version of Stone Soup: Everyone brings one secret ingredient.
Eggnog, pomegranate seeds, orange brandy, clove icing… this time of year is not lacking for palate stimulation but tonight we’re going to dish out poems with a little something extra, unprecedented, and of course delicious that will keep the reader/taster intrigued and coming back for seconds.
Here’s James Tipton to get us in the mood.
Any Poem
Any poem
worth its salt
must have
the sea in it
and at least
a pinch
of sweet flesh,
and it probably
needs a couple
of stray dogs
and some green
jazz, and
those huge rocks
behind the house
we thought
were ordinary
until they surfaced
in our sleep,
and a poem needs
love, but simple,
like coarse mustard
on muenster cheese,
and some light,
like the first cell
that began
our bodies,
and some darkness,
like the center
of bread
before it begins
to rise,
and two strong legs
willing to run off
without us.
(Source: http://tiptonpoetryjournal.com/tpj11/tipton.htm)
And another confectionary-themed poem in this excerpt from Darcie Dennigan’s In the Bakery:
Spring
It was really beginning.
Baguettes made entirely of white peonies.
Brioche from the blood of purple lilacs.
Long lines outside the bakery’s door . . .
What is the secret ingredient?
I confessed: Flower. Flowers! Please, put me away. I am desperate.
Summer
I could not go through another.
The woodbine had barely begun and already the mornings were full of the scent of
them.
Not one honeysuckle would go unsucked—unless—
I closed the doors (every season is too full of longing!) and rechristened myself Flora.
I drank a vat of rose water and put both my wrists through the slicer.
And then I began to bleed—a white powder.
Flour.
And then you came in.
I would have known you even if you were not wearing in your buttonhole a carnation.
The bakery is closed, I said tersely.
I was bleeding profusely.
I loved you even before you said
Nothing breaks more slowly, more silently, than bread.
With my blood pouring out as a fine, dry flour
let me confess before I expire.
There on the counter, in that vase
fresh and pink is the corsage I was keeping for our dance.
(Source: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/55445/in-the-bakery)
Thus far we’ve looked at secret ingredients within the context of recipes, as that is how we usually apply them. However, in our prompt let us venture away from the edible and add our own personal touches to a form. Without giving away any secrets, think about a form you feel confident in — sonnet, free verse, golden shovel, ode, ghazal, cinquain, etc. — and perhaps add a pinch or splash of something uniquely your own, not usually found within chosen form. Think subtle, but noticeable. Perhaps be particular with word choice to hint at the hidden undertones. Or overtones.
In a way, as poets we are always doing this but tonight let’s make it deliberate. Be sommelier of the vintage splashing around in your mouth and try to pinpoint every note. Keep this in mind too, taste-testers, when you comment on others’ poems. And hey, if you just want to go ahead and write a poem directly about a secret ingredient, be my guest. You can’t go wrong with pudding.
Here is one by Ogden Nash that breaks the informal ‘rules’ of love poetry, with its erratic rhyme scheme and, well, you’ll see. Yet it’s both charming and effective; the equivalent to tuna salad with mayonnaise, hard-boiled egg, dill pickle, onion, mustard, and capers. Who would have thought with so many astringent flavors?
To My Valentine
More than a catbird hates a cat,
Or a criminal hates a clue,
Or the Axis hates the United States,
That’s how much I love you.
I love you more than a duck can swim,
And more than a grapefruit squirts,
I love you more than a gin rummy is a bore,
And more than a toothache hurts.
As a shipwrecked sailor hates the sea,
Or a juggler hates a shove,
As a hostess detests unexpected guests,
That’s how much you I love.
I love you more than a wasp can sting,
And more than the subway jerks,
I love you as much as a beggar needs a crutch,
And more than a hangnail irks.
I swear to you by the stars above,
And below, if such there be,
As the High Court loathes perjurious oathes,
That’s how you’re loved by me
(Source: https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/1941/02/15/to-my-valentine)
See? Onion in albacore. And yeah, we’ve circulated back to food as we are wont to do in this last fraction of the pecan pie of a year. So that’s it, friends! Bring a poem featuring a secret ingredient to the table and drop your link in the Mr.Linky below. Then go make the rounds and also stop in below for some mulled wine or cider. (I bet you’ll never guess what I put in it!)
Image Credit: Maria Laura Bratoz
Welcome to potluck night at dVerse! Besides our poetic surprises, I have a couple extra: 1) I just took my dog for a walk along the jetty and saw two pairs of beautiful swans in the near frozen lake. Symbol for something, poets? And 2) A surprise visit from my in-laws so bear with me if I’m slow in responding. Happy reading!
Thanks for hosting, Amaya! I’ve been busy knitting – trying to finish Christmas gifts. Our decorations are up and we went to a Lessons and Carols church service Sunday night. We are in the Christmas spirit!
Interesting prompt — I went metaphorical with it and back to my husband’s Swedish background. Might you have some Glogg or mulled wine at the bar tonight? 🙂
I love this time of year and especially for the sacred music of Advent and Christmas. Of course I have mulled wine and the surprise? Hint: the ingredient is something you would also find in a Chinese hot pot. Cheers!
And oh yeah, is Glogg a stronger version?
Here is my recipe for Glögg
https://brudberg.me/2012/10/28/mulled-wine-glogg/
Thanks. I’m going to have to make that this week. Sounds perfect to come in to after chopping firewood.
That sounds wonderful! I’m definitely going to have to try it!
Glögg can always be mixed on a cold night…
George used to help his grampa make glogg…..It does warm you up! 🙂
I have added my recipe… 🙂
Hey Lillian, I saw your comment on Glenn’s poem and so checked out your son’s ‘Lay Me Low’ on YouTube. I heard it like a meditation on the final goodbye. How wonderful that it was sung today!
I came home a bit late tonight and had to scribble something quite quickly…
I thought about a poem by Carol Ann Duffy when I read your example…
It’s called Valentine http://www.scottishpoetrylibrary.org.uk/poem/valentine/
Had never read this! After two years with dVerse, I am still VERY new to poetry. Valentine is an AMAZING poem! Thanks for providing the reference, Bjorn!
Carol Ann Duffy is an amazing poet… “the world’s wife” is my favorite poetry collection.
Thanks for hosting, Amaya! I hope mine works for the prompt. The secret ingredient I’m referring to is that cake left out in the rain in MacArthur Park.
A lot of latitude with this prompt, Frank:) Hey, did someone say “cake?”
This is such a delicious and tasty prompt (I am referring to the food examples above). Thank you for an intriguing prompt Amaya. Enjoy your walk and your in-laws visit!!!!
I know, bad timing. But they’re understanding. I just left my toddler with them and said, “Gimme an hour to get things rolling.” Thanks for being here, Grace.
Thank you for hosting, Amaya. I have linked up a poem but might have to come back in the morning to read and comment. I know ‘Valentine’ by carol Ann Duffy well, being a fan and having taught it to GCSE classes. I agree with Bjorn but I took my inspiration form ‘In the bakery’ and my husband, who bakes bread rather than buyig it – it’s so much better!
I know you know Carol’s poetry… I remember when you used her poems in a prompt…
I’m glad to hear you liked that poem Kim, and that you are fortunate to get to eat fresh-baked homemade bread on a regular basis.
Hi all. The prompt is challenging and may need the assistance of a glass of cider with secret ingredient or glogg please. Cheers!
Coming right up! (Sorry for the delay. At least all the poets are keeping you fed.)
Thanks, yes. This challenge was beyond my poetic experience in writing or understanding at this point. Reading them shows there is a long way to go to get there.
Interesting prompt and conversation here. Thank you, Amaya. I’m going to have to ponder this. I’m procrastinating–I mean, I’m taking a break from working on a book chapter now. 🙂
Then your secret ingredient can be related to your book! We’re pleased to have you procrastinate here at the pub.
The book is on sexual harassment. Procrastinating at the pub is much more fun. 🙂
Pomegranate seeds, 🙂 made me smile.
I can see you writing a delicious poem about cracking open and deseeding a pomegranate:)
My last post has a pomegranate as part of the back story. Buried buried this week, so I might not be able join y’all in the kitchen, but I will help myself as a taster. Nice prompt Amaya. 💜it.
Silly me. Of course — Ceres! Thanks Lona.
Oh yes, I see, Alt mythoverse, Ceres removes the seeds proactively, foiling the Hades/Zeus conspiracy, saving Proserpina from bondage, hmmm. Deseeding as me too… 🤔💜 sometimes we need to rewrite the endings. 🙂
Haha!
Amazing prompt, Amaya! I’ll come in later, after outdoor chores, for a mug of hot cider. I wrote a quadrille that can fit Monday’s prompt as well. Cheers, poets all!
Great Lynn, here’s that cider for ya!
I believe that swans mate for life, and seems to me they are often referenced in mythology as rising out of suffering – just off the top of my weary head, lol. Thanks for being here and holding space for us.
I appreciate you saying that V.J. Especially about rising out of suffering. It’s been a tough year. I was struck by how gorgeous those swans were today out there in the freezing water, the same color as the winter sky. I felt their presence was most certainly a gift.
They are so majestic. I believe that nature brings us messages through her creatures.
This is a great prompt Amaya! First, because when I read it my mind exploded with possibility. Second, I became overwhelmed by the possibilities. Finally, on possibility finally came shinning through blindingly! I love when that happens because I become confident in my writing. Thank you for hosting, and thank you for the prompt! 🙂
Wonderful to hear that Rob, ‘the process of possibility.’ My heart is glad that you found some inspiration and I can’t wait to read that which shone through!
I really love that bakery poem.
That’s just part of it. You can click the link to read the whole thing.
This seems like a fun prompt. I like all 3 poems that you shared. Thank you.
Thanks Jenna, I’m glad you enjoyed them.
Thank you so much for the “musing” prompt! This one isn’t easy to wade in through but my fingers enjoyed the (messy) process. 🙂
Yes, get messy!
I did!!!
Thanks for a great prompt Amaya. It’s good to be able to get back with you folks again. Time and energy have been in short supply lately. I hope there’s a nap waiting for me somewhere over the rainbow today😂
And today as well. Thanks for coming by, Walter!
Thank you for hosting this lovely prompt Amaya. I have linked a free verse poem and will swing by later to read xxx
You have much to celebrate. Thank you for participating and for sharing your victory with us, Xenia.
Hi Amaya! Thanks for hosting this thought provoking prompt. Joining in today. Will be reading in a bit- time to walk my pup. 🙂
Thanks, Linda!
I have to add the witches song from Macbeth…. it must be the eye of newt that is the secret part…
Song of the Witches: “Double, double toil and trouble”
BY WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE
(from Macbeth)
Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn and caldron bubble.
Fillet of a fenny snake,
In the caldron boil and bake;
Eye of newt and toe of frog,
Wool of bat and tongue of dog,
Adder’s fork and blind-worm’s sting,
Lizard’s leg and howlet’s wing,
For a charm of powerful trouble,
Like a hell-broth boil and bubble.
Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn and caldron bubble.
Cool it with a baboon’s blood,
Then the charm is firm and good.
Ah! I made it to the link, just barely. 🙂 I am not so sure though if my poem has any clear secret ingredient to it. But, thanks a lot, Maya, for the prompt. 🙂
ooops! Sorry for the wrong name there, Amaya. I was editing your name to correct it to *Amaya* but the post button was faster than me typing the correction in.
Your title says it all, but you’re right. When you have it it’s impossible to conceal. Thanks for joining us, Imelda!
Hope I’m not too late: https://myforever.blog/2018/12/06/the-secret-ingredient-is/
Nope, two more hours to go. Glad you made it, and stay for Jilly’s Meeting the Bar prompt next. Off to read now!
Thoughly enjoyed this one, I had a lot of fun with it! Thanks!
Hiya Amaya! I am too late to link, but for Jilly’s prompt I wrote a Terzanelle and added a twist to the form in the Spirit of your challenge here. 🙂