Greetings, poem-producers! De Jackson (aka WhimsyGizmo) here. It’s Quadrille Monday again (my favorite!)…when we pen poems of exactly 44 words (not counting the title), including one specific word provided.
My girlie had a big volleyball tournament this weekend, so I’ve got a bit of this on the brain:
In the game of volleyball, a spike is simply a precise, hard, one-handed hit directly over the net. Today, I want us to employ that word – and perhaps that thought – to our poems.
You can spike your drink. You can spike a fever. There are railroad spikes, and spiky hair. And then, there’s this guy:
Maybe you remember this Spike from Buffy the Vampire Slayer? Or maybe you’re more a fan of Spike Lee, or Spike Jonze? Is your blood pressure spiking yet?
Whether you use it as a noun, verb, adjective or adverb (she said, spikily), just be sure your poem of 44 words includes some form of the word spike.
If you like, spike us more than one tale in poetic prose. Remember, hyphen fun is welcome, as are coined words and phrases of your own making. Hope this spikes some creativity in your soul, as you get to it!
New to the Q? Here’s what to do:
Just pen a poem of precisely 44 words, including some form of the word spike. Link it up by clicking Mr. Linky. Then make your way around to the other posts, to find some of the most talented poets around. The prompt is open for the whole week, so remember to come back and read (and write!) some more!
Hey, Spike, what do you like?
– Tom Petty & the Heartbreakers
There were two men down
and the score tied
in the bottom of the eight
when the pitcher died.
And they laid his spikes
on the pitcher’s mound…
– Paul Simon
whimsygizmo said:
Greetings, my amazing poetical peeps! Hope this has spiked your inspiration meter today. I’m pouring fabulous cocktails and mocktails, spiked with cherries. And if you need a little extra poetic nudge, google the poems of Spike Milligan. 🙂
Can’t wait to read your offerings! Have fun with it!
Grace said:
Well I am spiked with excitement with this prompt. Looking forward to the poetic offerings spiked with cherries.
Thanks De for hosting our Quadrille.
whimsygizmo said:
My pleasure, Grace! The imagery in your piece is gonna stick with me awhile. Just so wonderful.
robtkistner said:
Thanks for fixing Mr. Linky, Ms. Gracey! 😉
whimsygizmo said:
She’s da best. 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Fun prompt, De! Thank you for hosting. My younger daughter in particular loved Spike on Buffy. 🙂 I’m going to ponder a bit.
whimsygizmo said:
Fun, Merril! Glad somebody recognized him. Bjorn posted a pic when I offered up the Quardille word, and I must confess, I had no idea who he was. Now that Angel guy, on the other hand…him I know. But I called him Seeley Booth, on Bones. 😉
merrildsmith said:
Our daughters loved Buffy and Angel. “Angel” or Booth was also known around here as the son of a well-known local weather forecaster, Dave Roberts. I think I read he was in the Bones season finale.
whimsygizmo said:
How fun is that? I loved the show Bones. I may have to check out Buffy and Angel, after all this nostalgia and prompting. 😉
merrildsmith said:
🙂
Glenn Buttkus said:
Hello De, thanks for hosting. I, too, love the quadrilles. I’ve always been impressed by how Toni can come up with, a classic tight haibun for this prompt. So I aspired to do the same with mine today. My only gripe is the brevity. Once my Muse gets me cranked up, it’s hard to shut it down. A full page poem blossomed, and I just picked the fruit of it.
whimsygizmo said:
Oh, I love that, Glenn. A poem, pruned. 🙂
Please feel free to share another, as the muse blooms!
kanzensakura said:
LOL Glenn, that is the beauty of Japanese poetic forms – the brevity, the paring down the words to get to the essence of it without all the lahdeedah and blahblahblah of wordiness. Glad you pared down your poem to 44 words. Hey! you can always print it out in its entirety for Open Link night!
jazzytower said:
Happy Monday Everyone!
Mmmm! Spike, interesting choice. Can go so many ways with this. Hope to come up with something soon
Thanks for hosting De.
Pat
whimsygizmo said:
So happy to see you here, Pat! Happy poeming!
robtkistner said:
Thank you De for hosting today! I am back from having the flu – even after having had my annual flu shot. Fever finally broke, and only one day of Oseltamivir (Tamiflu) pills left to take – so today I re-enter society. I am going to do so by puttin’ a spike in that damned flu, and participating in today’s Quadrille. Great word De!
whimsygizmo said:
So sorry to hear you’ve been sick, Rob. Glad you’re feeling a bit back among the living. Can’t wait to see where the word takes you.
robtkistner said:
The instant I read your word, a memory of my father, myself, and my son flashed into my mind. My father had mangaed my hardball team when I was a teenager. Years later I was asked to manage my 16-year-old son’s hardball team. I vividly remember the moment I crossed the sidewalk, which ran along the backstop, stepped on to the freshly chalked field, to hit infield practice before the first game of the season. That is what I wrote about.
whimsygizmo said:
The chalk, the smell of grass. All of it. Memories!
whimsygizmo said:
Link to some Spike Milligan fun:
https://www.poemhunter.com/spike-milligan/
kim881 said:
Wonderful!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Can you spike my drink with moonshine tonight, De?
It was a word I had some problems with first, but then once I used it as a verb it worked.
whimsygizmo said:
Moonshine it is, Sir. 🙂
kanzensakura said:
Thank you for the prompt De. I love the wee hedgehog! Adorable! I think the thing most people don’t get about Japanese poetry is the brevity of it! I love Japanese poetry forms as you know well. I will be glad when it gets to be past freezing at night so I can set out my mater planters.
whimsygizmo said:
Hi, Toni. I LOVE brevity in poetry, formless or formed. Your Haibun are simply beautiful.
kanzensakura said:
You do so well with brevity! You can say so much in so few words.
whimsygizmo said:
Thank you, Toni. 🙂
sarahsouthwest said:
I have to say, I’m an Angel girl, not a Spike girl, but I’m willing to give this prompt a go.
sarahsouthwest said:
And the hedgehog is cuter than both of them…
whimsygizmo said:
Right? I cannot agree more. Animals for the win. 🙂
kim881 said:
Good evening all and thanks for hosting, De! I arrived at the usual UK time of 20.00 and it looks like the prompt popped up at 19.00. I didn’t forget the Northern American time change but I thought it would stay the same here. I did the same thing last year! When our clocks change, it’ll go back to 20.00 again.Or did everyone just link up early? hat chilly wind on the platform yesterday definitely affected me.
whimsygizmo said:
Hi, Kim. We had daylight savings “Spring Forward” over the weekend, so here it is the same “time” as usual for linkups, but must have made a difference in your world.
msjadeli said:
Hi De and All. Sorry I’m late to the party. Just reading through the comments and can’t wait to read the offerings. Moonshine sounds perfect, do you have any of that apple pie moonshine (“Justified” oblique reference)? Am about to write about a spike that flipped.
whimsygizmo said:
I don’t know this reference, but it sounds delicious. Might require a little research, but I shall get us some. 🙂
Charmed Chaos said:
Hello De and fellow Poets- great prompt, but I confess, I couldn’t go anywhere but dark. So, this will be a departure from my poems of late (I’ve got spring fever!!)
whimsygizmo said:
Dark is good. Heading over now.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I just had to write a second before bedtime…
whimsygizmo said:
Yay! (And also: Showoff. I am still trying to tune up my first one.)
Jane Dougherty said:
I’m given up on the linky. It won’t post my link correctly and I’m just buggering up the list. I’ll add the link here. Sorry about that, I don’t know what’s wrong with it.
whimsygizmo said:
Jane, there is something glitchy happening on our end. I will link you up as soon as we get it figured out. Sorry for the delay.
Jane Dougherty said:
I assumed it was me 🙂
whimsygizmo said:
Nope. Just checked, and nobody can link up right now. I’ve reached out to Bjorn and Grace for help. Thanks for calling it to my attention.
Grace said:
It is fine now and I have fixed Jane’s poem.
whimsygizmo said:
Thank you so much, Grace. 🙂
Jane Dougherty said:
It’s weird. It’s got itself locked into a 404 error somehow.
whimsygizmo said:
Sorry for the current Mr. Linky glitch, gang. I have reached out to our powers that be to see if they can fix it for me. Please feel free to post your link in the comments, and I will link you up later when it’s figured out.
I have to step away from the bar for an hour or so, but I leave you with lots of yummy spiked drinks. Keep poeming on.
Grace said:
I am checking on it. If people can leave their links, I will update the Mr. Linky.
Jane Dougherty said:
Thanks Grace. I’ve just seen that you sorted it 🙂
Laura Bloomsbury said:
who spiked Mr Linky?
as this was quite a thorny one, I went along with that – thanks De
Laura Bloomsbury said:
nope no link box for me so here’s mine
Grace said:
The Mr. Linky is already fixed. I added yours.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Thank you Grace
whimsygizmo said:
Thanks again, Grace.
mefeedyoume said:
Hello, I wasn’t able to add the link. Here it is:
Thank you
Grace said:
Yours is already added to Mr. Linky.
erbiage said:
Hey all. I may have botched my link. It should be https://erbiage.wordpress.com/2019/03/11/big-top/
Grace said:
It is already added to Mr. Linky. Thanks for joining in.
V.J. Knutson said:
No Mr Linky for me. So here’s my entry. A little somber, I’m afraid, but that is what ‘spike’ conjured for me:
Grace said:
Hello VJ! The Mr. Linky is already fixed.
V.J. Knutson said:
It wasn’t working when I tried – will try again, thanks Grace.
V.J. Knutson said:
Now I’m in twice, lol. A fine mess Ollie.
whimsygizmo said:
I’ve deleted the second entry, VJ. That I DO know how to do. 😉
V.J. Knutson said:
Thank you!
whimsygizmo said:
Thanks again to Grace for fixing Mr. Linky. Did all the same things I always do when creating the post, and somethin’ still went wrong. Sorry for the trouble, y’all.
purplepeninportland said:
That animal is just too cute!
whimsygizmo said:
Right? I LOVE him. Leetle hedgehog.
Robert D said:
I wrote a pair of quadrilles. One was serious to the point it included references to Greek mythology and the other one was about a Pokémon on my phone. I guess you could say I spanned the gambit. Cheers!
whimsygizmo said:
A well-rounded poet, indeed, Robert. Love it! 🙂 Glad you’re here.
calmkate said:
In for a penny, in for a pound as the Brits would say … great prompt, my first effort at this one! As soon as I read Spike I thought of one man alone
whimsygizmo said:
Love it, kate! Welcome!
whimsygizmo said:
For some reason I cannot comment on your site. Here is what I typed (multiple times). 😉
“Such a master of wordplay, indeed! Love this!”
merrildsmith said:
I’m always late to the party! 🙂 We saw August Wilson’s “Gem of the Ocean” over the weekend, and there’s a climatic scene about the Middle Passage–probably why I had to write this poem. I’ll try for one a bit more cheerful, if I have a chance.
whimsygizmo said:
On my way over now, Merril. Sorry for the late visit.
merrildsmith said:
Thanks, De. I’m late on reading, writing. . . 🙂