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Hi, everyone. It’s Quadrille Monday! This is a dVerse creation—a poem of exactly 44 words, not including the title. It must contain the given word. The poem can take any form: rhymed, free verse, or even a Haibun.
I often think of the quadrille as a sort of fun poem, and perhaps this can be a rest from writing villanelles and other tricky forms. But a quadrille can be serious, too. I’m giving you a word that will allow for all sorts of possibilities. Can you to rise to the occasion?
Yes, I’m asking you to use the word rise. April here is a month of plants rising from the ground. But when I started thinking about it, I came up with so many ways the word can be used. Bread dough rises—and matzoh does not. Balloons, birds, kites, airplanes, and spaceships all rise into the sky. Perhaps a thought arises in your brain? Or more seriously, think about uprisings of protest and rebellion—many which happen in the spring.
Both the sun and moon rise (and set), and sometimes our feelings do, too. John Donne imagines the sun spying on a pair of lovers, and the female narrator complains of how the rising sun means that they must part so that the man can go to work. Donne’s “Break of Day,” I learned is an aubade, “A love poem or song welcoming or lamenting the arrival of the dawn” (Poetry Foundation).
Finally, Maya Angelou’s poem of rising never fails to stir me. Here’s the poem. And here’s a Google Doodle animation with Dr. Angelou and others reading it.
Arise, dVerse Poets! Here’s how to join in the quadrille fun:
*Write a poem, of any style in 44 words, not including the title. Include the word or derivative of the word, “rise”.
*Click on Mr. Linky below. Add your name and the direct URL to your poem.
*Visit the other poets by clicking on the links to their poems. Read and comment.
*Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
*Have fun rising!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello… Easter Monday Evening here… I will rise to this challenge and write something nice
merrildsmith said:
Hi Björn. Happy Easter Monday. You don’t have to write something “nice.” 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Hi, Everyone! The pub is now open! Grab a drink. Maybe something sparkling today to help you rise?
Henrietta Watson said:
Reblogged this on All About Writing and more.
Grace said:
Hi Merril, Thank you for hosting. We had a long Easter weekend, and now it is back to work/regular activities. I look forward to reading Q soon.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Here also Easter Monday is a holiday…. and already next week we have labor day.
msjadeli said:
Hi Merril and All. Very cool to learn there is a name for a poem to the arrival of dawn. I can think of one song that incorporates it: Bonnie Raitt’s “I Can’t Make you Love Me.” Merril do you have lemonade with a shot of frambois on the rocks? That sounds so good to go with this warm summer-like day. Rise is a prompt full of possibilities!
merrildsmith said:
I love Bonnie Raitt. I’ve never had lemonade with a shot of frambois, but it sounds good. An advantage of a virtual bar is that it has everything! 🙂
msjadeli said:
Thanks Merril. Cheers!
kim881 said:
Good evening all and thank you, Merrill, for hosting. I got a bit carried away with the prompt! 🙂
merrildsmith said:
I’ll be by in a few minutes to read. 🙂
kim881 said:
🙂
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Charmed Chaos said:
Hello Everyone- I hope your weekend was lovely. Merril- thanks for hosting and for the fantastic prompt. I think I’ll have glass of Champagne; I feel like celebrating!
merrildsmith said:
Coming right up!
Charmed Chaos said:
Thank you!
merrildsmith said:
🙂
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erbiage said:
hey all, hope you are all doing well. Cranking out the poetry as you do in April. i rose, but its not nice.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you for joining in. It doesn’t have to be nice. 🙂
Mish said:
Happy Quadrille Monday…glad to be home today to take to the poetry trail. I went to the dark side.
merrildsmith said:
Thanks for joining in. I’ll be over to read in a bit.
Frank J. Tassone said:
Evening, Poets! Thanks, Merril, for pubtending Quadrille #78! 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Frank. It’s my pleasure.
jazzytower said:
Hi Merrill,
Thanks for hosting. Came up with something to offer. Not necessarily sweet, but there it is. Happy Easter to all.
Pat
merrildsmith said:
Thank you for participating. It doesn’t have to be sweet! 🙂
jazzytower said:
Good:)
merrildsmith said:
🙂
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Dr. Crystal Grimes said:
Thanks for hosting, Merril! I enjoyed this one. 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Crystal. I’m pleased you did. 🙂
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calmkate said:
Hope you’ve all enjoyed your long weekend?
Great prompt thanks Merril!
http://aroused.blog/disillusioned
merrildsmith said:
Thank you!
calmkate said:
welcome!
larry trasciatti said:
here’s mine thanks~: https://eastelmhurstagogo.wordpress.com/2019/04/22/big-trouble/
merrildsmith said:
Thanks you! Did you add it in Mr Linky, too?
larry trasciatti said:
Yes thanks for reminding me. I’m in the habit of always making sure I do that
merrildsmith said:
Thank you. 🙂
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lynn__ said:
Great word for a quadrille, Merril! Mine fits with Easter celebration so I think a red wine would be appropriate…something kosher, of course.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you!
I don’t keep kosher, but I can find some if you want. 😉 Otherwise, I’ll open a bottle of cabernet.
lynn__ said:
Cabernet will be perfect 🙂
merrildsmith said:
🙂
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D. Avery @shiftnshake said:
Hello, thank you for serving up a fine quadrille prompt.
D. Avery @shiftnshake said:
Also, have you heard Ben Harper singing the Maya Angelou poem. Do. And thanks, I also have Janice Joplin singing Summertime in my head. The prompt has given rise to much.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you. I’m not sure if I’ve heard that or not. I will have to go looking. Oh, and “Summertime,” –yes, of course! Now I have that in my head. (Probably Audra McDonald though.) 🙂
merrildsmith said:
You’re welcome. Thank you for participating!
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lillian said:
A quick hello to all my dVerse friends! We are about to leave the ship for an excursion in Hakodate, Japan. So so sorry I cannot read others’ posts. We get home April 28 and I will be back in synch! My post today is about our sobering visit to Hiroshima.
merrildsmith said:
I’ll be over to read in a bit. Enjoy the rest of your journey, Lillian.
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Frank Hubeny said:
Happy Quadrille Monday. Thanks for hosting, Merril!
merrildsmith said:
Thank you, Frank!
robtkistner said:
Thank you for hosting Merril! Very uplifting prompt… oh no, did he really say that?
merrildsmith said:
Hahahaha. Thank you! 🙂
Beverly Crawford said:
I need some wise techno-input with a problem. I use Blogger, but I seem to have no problem commenting on WordPress sites EXCEPT for Rob Kistner. I’m a great fan of his work, but my comments there seem to bounce off into the ether somewhere. I have tried two different browsers with no success. Can anyone help?
merrildsmith said:
My blog is WP, but lately sometimes I get messages that I have to log in to comment–when I am logged in. Usually if I reload the page, then I’m fine. But this sounds like you’re commenting, but the comment doesn’t appear?
robtkistner said:
Hi Bev. So sorry you started having trouble leaving a comment on my blog. I enjoy reading your work, as well as getting your comments. I found 19 comments from you Bev, starting last November. The last comment I can find was one you left on 3-27-19 when you left a wonderful comment about my poem “Enthralled”. i don’t know what to do. You are definitely not blocked by me, so I feel your frustration!? 😦
robtkistner said:
Yes, we have some kind of issue Bev. I noticed my comment on your blog from yesterday did not publiisn? I just tried to post on your blog again just now. It seemed like it published, but then it disappeared? I am stumped!
robtkistner said:
Solved half the mystery Bev. I just fished 6or7 of your comments out of my spam file? I have no idea hiw they ended up there, but they are out and applied to the poems you commented on. I about to go back and read them. Thank you for speaking up on this and I will be on the lookout to make sure this doesn’t happen again. I slso greatly appreviate your support of my work Bev! Thank you!
merrildsmith said:
I love happy endings! 🙂
Truedessa said:
Good Evening – I’ll be around for a bit tonight and back tomorrow to read as many as I can.
merrildsmith said:
Thank you!
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pvcann said:
The juxtaposition of Easter and rise … 🙂
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Laura Bloomsbury said:
a timely prompt yet I’m such a slow late riser with this one – still, I never like to pass up a quadrille
merrildsmith said:
You can join in any time as long as the prompt is open.
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