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Have you ever asked yourself, “Of what am I made?” (Yes, because the voices in our writer heads are all of course grammatically flawless;) If so, you’re certainly not alone.
Vedanta philosophy, ancient Greece, modern atomic theory, even the average inquisitive three year old, have attempted to determine what it is that comprises our being and our universe. I find it fascinating and profound that primitive cosmologies find matter in the four basic elements of earth, air, water, and fire, but after more seeking, must include one more element: the mysterious aether. And that this illumination of our own limited cognizance of creation is seen today despite our “advancements” in technological observation: the more we try to penetrate matter, the more empty space we encounter. This scientific or existential journey mirrors the wisdom of the sages throughout time: “the more you learn, the less you know.”
The Chinese also identify elements, being earth, water, metal, fire, and wood, but are specific in defining them as “changes” or “energetic states of being,” a consideration which closely aligns with the dynamic and interconnected world in which we live where nothing is fixed or unhindered by external stimuli. Natural cycles and their interaction with the material play a large part in understanding the physics (and metaphysics) of our world.
Tonight, let’s do a little homework and discover what some of these cosmologies say about you. Depending on your birth year, month, lunar month, or day, these systems attribute a dominant element to that time frame. Explore one or more of the above systems and then write a poem about or tangential to your element. You may also want to write a poem about the dance (or war) among all the elements as you view them within you (or without you.)
Take a look at Torrin A. Greathouse’s new poem and how she could have answered this prompt with how she views the life-giving force flowing within her:
Phlebotomy, as Told by the Blood — Torrin A. Greathouse
Consider these parallel histories: An emperor once declared war on the sea, sent his men drowning toward victory, & the Red Sea is named for the dead algae blooming within it. Can you tell me the difference? Maybe I too am red for all the slaughter carried within me, bastard child of water, lake swelled with rotting fish. What are you searching for when you drag me from you? Your vein a riverbed dredged of impossible children. Cells tested for the echo of your mother’s name. Once you were carried in your mother, her belly a lake. If the child before you & all those after sunk, are you the blood or the water? A boat or the first unfinished wolf, wrenching itself from the sea? A bridge too carries bodies & the water carries it. Does this make the bridge a mother or a child? Your mother once told you that if she gave you life she could take it back. Does this make her the bridge or its necklace of nooses? The river or its surface tension? Liquor is lighter than water & so is gasoline. Both burn. Both stained-glass a surface in the sun. Common language says we drown in liquor, perhaps this means your mother is a lake beneath another’s surface. What does that make me? A bridge or a glass? Your mother’s mother? Sometimes I worry that you’ve forgotten me. Dry & sober as a boat. Your survival a matter of surface tension. Maybe you believe that you are the bridge, suspended above all your dead. Don’t forget, everything erodes. A canyon is just a river’s bastard child. Bruise deep in the dirt. All of man’s inventions topple, each bridge’s arches bullied down to cliché rust. Another history blooming the water red.
Source: poets.org
Here a few links for further study:
Chinese Five Element Theory (Remember, this zodiac is based off of the lunar calendar, so if you’re born in January or February, be sure to check your birthdate. You may have actually been born at the end of the previous year.)
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_astrology
Vedic Astrology
http://www.jyotisha.bhavans.info/elements-of-astrology.pdf
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Pub’s open! I feel like I need to don my wizardry regalia and offer tarot readings or something. (At a poetry club in Denver there was one, purple coned hat and all.)
How fun this was Amaya. I was like – no that is not me, yes, that is me. Thank you for hosting and looking forward to what the others have written.
Glad you enjoyed it, Grace. I was fascinated by some of the ways of looking at the physical world and how certain elements correlate to particular senses. This is a good overview:
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Classical_element#India
Thank you for hosting, Amaya. This is a fun prompt. I’ll join in, if I have time. I love that painting at the top!
Hope to see you back!
Hi Amaya and All. It’s another warmer and sunny day in Michigan which is always cause for celebration. I wonder if loving sunshine is one of the attributes of the sign I was born under? This research could take some bit of time and will spark something for sure.
Same here. Sitting out on the deck in the sun with iced tea while the two youngest nap. Can hardly get any better. I don’t know about the astrology part, but I don’t see how anyone wouldn’t enjoy a little sunshine!
Sounds like a perfect place to be 🙂
Hello… I drifted into medicine through the elements and then into the four bodily fluids… maybe a bit of side-track but a lot of fun. I actually remember a poem from my time in school that was about disease to the spleen (meaning depression)… but it took me time to sink in.
I immediately think of Traditional Chinese Medicine and spleen Qi deficiency (poor nutrition and/or digestion) being a main diagnosis for the symptom of depression.
It seems like a very old thing to connect depression to the spleen…
and yet we’re now calling the gut “the second brain” and there seems to be some good evidence that gut health can be related to depression…
I know the spleen is not part of the gut, but it’s in the same general area…
Hello Amaya- Thank you for hosting! This is an interesting prompt, and I am looking forward to reading everyone’s poems. Putting the finishing touches on mine and will post soon.
Great, Linda!
Good evening poets! Thank you for hosting Amaya and for an interesting prompt. I’ve just got back from a meal with my husband. It’s his birthday today and we’re making the most of it. I’m also still in the thick of moderation and exam marking so I won’t be writing and posting much for a few months. I will try to join in tomorrow morning. Have a great evening!
I know those busy periods well, Kim. Just take time to breathe and we’ll see you when we see you:)
Thank you, Amaya. 🙂
Thank you for hosting Amaya. A great prompt! Should be very revealing of all of us. For fun, along with my poem, I posted the points of an astrological reading I got online today. Cool prompt…! 🙂
I always seemed to get along with fellow Aquarians and of course poetic Pisceans. You’re the best of both worlds, I guess!
Hello Amaya! Thank you for hosting. I thought and thought about all this astrology…did a bunch of research….and came up with “I am . . .” A very interesting and challenging prompt!
PS: I’m extremely jealous of your sunshine….it is cold, dreary, and rainy in Boston. In April, 20 of its 30 days had rain. It is May 14 and we’e had 10 days of rain thus far this month. Oh well….it’s time to make our own sunshine! And on that note, I’d love a little drink with a cheerful pink umbrella stirrer in it! 🙂
It’s all in good fun. I’m glad you came up with something, Lillian, and here’s to some sunshine in the forecast, meteorologically and astrologically speaking;)
thanks for hosting such an interesting prompt … and what a delightful response so far!
Off to start mine now 🙂
Thanks!
I might have come at this prompt a bit slant-wise, but there you go. In the end, I found it surprisingly tricky. I’m not in the mood to “I am…” at the moment.
I didn’t mean for people to just take this in an “I am” direction, though most did. You can just elaborate on one element, if you wish to.
😊 I used it as a springboard, like all the best prompts.
Wait, am I missing something? I don’t see your post on the Linky…
Oops. I wondered why nobody was commenting!!! I’ve linked it up now.
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This was a killer prompt, revealing even more about each of us. It is amazing how intense our fellowship is, and how cllose we all are in Cyberland. The lovely Lillian mentioned in a comment on my site : How I wish there could be a real pub somewhere central, where we could all decide to meet on one specific day….wouldn’t that be grand?” That would be a day to treasure and savor. I once belonged to another group, and they held a virtual Ball once a year, held at the Host’s web page. She would have imaginary celebrity guests, pick a theme, dictate a menu. It was an all day affair, and a hell of a lot of fun letting our imaginations run wild. We could do it straight up, doing a Pub talk that we attend as a party; food for thought.
Glenn, I think we should bring that idea up in a future Pubtalk, because I’m sure you’re not alone in enjoying our fellowship and in wanting to have a poet’s retreat somewhere/sometime. I say instead of an all-day virtual meetup, we could start to plan a real get-together. I realize how widely we are spread out across the lands and seas, but still. With enough time and planning, perhaps we could make it a reality. A weekend of poetry prompts and face-to-face feedback and of course a lot of laughter!
Evening, Poets! Thanks, Amaya, for this intriguing prompt! Happy trails, all! 🙂
Thanks, Frank!
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Thank you, Amaya! This prompt is so beautiful and thought-provoking! I really enjoyed it. 🙂
I’m glad you felt inspired.
Well it was definitely to the wire but I think I got my poem and post and link all in! First time i’ve been able to participate in a few years, so glad to join the fun – thanks, Amaya! 🙂
Still getting around to reading and commenting myself. I’m glad you made it to this one as I really enjoyed your contribution. Thanks, Felipe!