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For this Meeting the Bar we continue with the dizain poetry form. The dizain is a poem of ten lines with ten syllables per line and a rhyme pattern ababbccdcd.
The variation in the rhyme pattern splits the poem into two parts with different rhymes connecting the five lines in each part. This required variation in sound provides an opportunity to shift the thought much as the volta does in a sonnet. The Petrarchan sonnet has a turn or volta after the eighth line when the rhyme pattern changes for the final six lines. The Shakespearean sonnet turns after the twelfth line leaving a final couplet to complete the poem. For the dizain this turn occurs after the fifth line.
One can optionally add other sound techniques such as meter, repetition and alliteration. One can use internal rhyme when the rhyme sound is not only repeated at the end as expected but also unexpectedly within the line. All of these can help break the reader’s expectation of what sounds will be heard once the reader recognizes the rhyme pattern.
The most important part of a poem is not the sound or the form, but the content, the message the poet is trying to convey. The dizain has only one hundred syllables. This brevity encourages the poet to use each word with care making sure it is saying what the poet intends to say.
As part of the Poetry Form this month the Mister Linky below is the same as the one Rosemary Nissen-Wade used. There are already many examples of this poetry form linked there. Check them out to see how others have approached the challenge. If you have already written a dizain for this challenge, here is an opportunity to write another.
To participate write a dizain poem and post it on your blog. Copy the link to your blog post and paste it in the Mister Linky. Read what others have linked and see how they have met the challenge.
The pub is open featuring dizain poetry.
Hi Frank. Thanks for hosting. This has been a crazy summer for me! I haven’t had a chance to try the form yet, but I’m going to see if I can. 🙂
I hope you do, but I can understand how busy summers can be. I am surprised how much I like this form. I didn’t know about it until Rosemary’s post a couple weeks ago.
Hi Frank and All. Thank you for the additional information on the dizain form. Let’s see if I can do another one.
I am finding it an enjoyable form. I hope you are able to do another one.
Frank, I enjoy this form also. Just finished the new one.
Thanks For hosting Frank! I am going to try to post another one- may be tomorrow though!
I’ve only written three or four so far. The prompt is open for a while even though this meeting the bar lasts a couple days.
Thanks for this prompt, Frank. I love this form; since the first prompt on it I’ve started a half dozen, but onlygot one that worked well enough to post. So here’s to reworking!
The form has a nice sound to it. I haven’t written that many yet, but I think this form will be one of my favorites going forward. I find rewriting is good. I come back to a version of some poem after a night’s sleep and start changing words around. Hopefully for the better, but who knows?
I went ahead and posted, but it’s still not quite there. I had a visit from a neighbor last week and after she left the phrase popped into my head “you never know until they’re gone just who the angels are.” I’ve been trying the write the poem around it ever since.
That’s a very good phrase to keep in mind when meeting other people.
Thamks for hosting, Frank. Summer for me, is truly a distraction so….just posted my first dizain. As always, form and I always have to tangle a bit and rewrite and rewrite to try and have substance win over form. I do enjoy the challenge though!
Good point. Substance has to win over form. I think you succeeded with your description of giving birth.
This form intimidated me the first time, but now I will try my hand at it!
I liked your description of that meal as one of the beauties life provides. The constraint of a form can be intimidating – and then it all comes together.
Thanks, Frank, for this beautifully written elaboration on the dizain form, full of excellent suggestions. The standard has already been very high; I look forward to what people will write now, re-inspired.
Thank you for the initial post, Rosemary. That was the first time I heard of the dizain form although I’ve used iambic pentameter many times before. I hope to write more of them.
Thanks Frank for this post. I will be catching up on my reading of these poems. I will see if I can write another one as I have always to be aware of the rhyzming pattern.
Wishing you all good week and see you in the trail.
Thanks for stopping by, Grace. This is now one of my favorite forms and I just heard about it a few weeks ago.
Once again, I apologize to the few dVerse poet’s with Blogger sites. I read your work, but your Blogger site won’t let me post comments?! Good thing most dVerse poets use WordPress! Thankfully my buddy Glenn’s Blogger site not only lets me comment, it actually recognizes me the moment I click into his comment box. Go figure?
On some sites I remember having to login somehow perhaps through Google or Facebook. I haven’t had the problem recently. Maybe it is because I already have those other accounts.
Can only repeat that your comments do show up on my Blogger blog – but not until I have ‘moderated’ and approved them. So you would not see them immediately after posting. (I do have a message at my blog to the effect that comments will not be visible until approved.) Perhaps it is the same for others too? Might be worth checking back in a day or two to see if your comments have appeared after all.
Thanks Frank! I’m still struggling with the rhythm of this form, but I enjoy the challenge. You make it look easy–the form suits your verse. (K)
Thank you, Kerfe. If there is rhyme that I can fit an iambic meter to I feel comfortable, but I can see how meter can be challenging. The suggestive thought underlying the first line of your poem about unmasking the darkness “beast by beast” seems as if it could be a poem on its own.
Thanks Frank. It could. I’ll file it for future reference!
Good Morning all- Adding one this morning. Happy Friday!
Happy Friday, Linda! Thank you for linking the dizain on passion wanting more. The “tangled and trapped” at the end is still on my mind. I am not sure it that was intentional or not.
Oh, good! That stuck with me as well.
Hi, I am unable to understand how to link our poems.. could you please elaborate? Thank you !
To link a poem, click on the Mister Linky at the bottom of the page. A new page will appear where you can put your name and the link to your post.
“The most important part of a poem is not the sound or the form, but the content, the message the poet is trying to convey.” This is very true, Frank, sometimes meaning gets lost in the form.
It is easy to forget that the reader expects one to have something to say as well as being melodic.