Poetry Form: Sestina
Welcome aboard, fellow poets. Please fasten your seat belts and open your minds, as we take off to the land of complex poetry and the fun adventure of the SESTINA.
Allons-y to Provence in the south of France, and back in time to the 12th Century. The form is thought to have been developed by a troubadour, “a developer of verse,” Arnault Daniel. As a troubadour, Daniel would have set his verse to music since the theme was often focused on love.
The form is quite complex and the poet is held to a number of strict requirements, based on the repetition of six words which follow a given pattern of repetition as the end words of each line.
The sestina contains six stanzas, each with six lines and concludes with a three line envoi. The pattern of the form is as follows:
1. A,B,C,D,E,F
2. F,A,E,B,D,C
3. C,F,D,A,B,E
4. E,C,B,F,A,D
5. D,E,A,C,F,B
6. B,D,F, E,C,A
7. BE, DC, FA (The envoi of three lines with BDF midline and ECA as the end lines.) Note: The Poetry Foundation gives this variation on the envoi: FB, AD, EC. Use either one.
Rather than rely on rhyme, the end line repetition creates a sense of rhyme. If you are really up for a challenge you may opt to choose rhyming end words. As for meter, it is optional, though you can work with iambs.
A key to success lies in working around a theme, thus choosing appropriate words. If you decide to try for an iambic poem, keep the end words in mind so that you end up with an accented final syllable.
Here is an example of a sestina by the Italian poet, Petrarch:
He Prays God To Guide His Frail Bark To A Safe Port.
Who is resolved to venture his vain life
On the deceitful wave and ‘mid the rocks,
Alone, unfearing death, in little bark,
Can never be far distant from his end:
Therefore betimes he should return to port
While to the helm yet answers his true sail.
The gentle breezes to which helm and sail
I trusted, entering on this amorous life,
And hoping soon to make some better port,
Have led me since amid a thousand rocks,
And the sure causes of my mournful end
Are not alone without, but in my bark.
Long cabin’d and confined in this blind bark,
I wander’d, looking never at the sail,
Which, prematurely, bore me to my end;
Till He was pleased who brought me into life
So far to call me back from those sharp rocks,
That, distantly, at last was seen my port.
As lights at midnight seen in any port,
Sometimes from the main sea by passing bark,
Save when their ray is lost ‘mid storms or rocks;
So I too from above the swollen sail
Saw the sure colours of that other life,
And could not help but sigh to reach my end.
Not that I yet am certain of that end,
For wishing with the dawn to be in port,
Is a long voyage for so short a life:
And then I fear to find me in frail bark,
Beyond my wishes full its every sail
With the strong wind which drove me on those rocks.
Escape I living from these doubtful rocks,
Or if my exile have but a fair end,
How happy shall I be to furl my sail,
And my last anchor cast in some sure port;
But, ah! I burn, and, as some blazing bark,
So hard to me to leave my wonted life.
Lord of my end and master of my life,
Before I lose my bark amid the rocks,
Direct to a good port its harass’d sail!
Francesco Petrarca (Petrarch), Public Domain
There are other more recent examples you can find by using SESTINA as a search word in Google. I have a few on my blog and I know that other dVerse poets have written to this form as well. I trust you will find that this form is quite fun and will fit to any topic, serious or otherwise.
This is Victoria, happy to be guest hosting at dVerse, where the words pour out freely and poets encourage each to write.
To join in, write your sestina and post it on your blog or website. Copy and past the direct URL to your poem in Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post. Return to the pub to read and comment on the work of your fellow poets.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Welcome to the pub, fellow poets, and our on-going challenge for poetry forms. This is the SESTINA prompt…a complex, but fun form. Take your time, order up a glass of fine wine and enjoy yourselves. I look forward to reading all your entries.
Grace said:
Thank you for hosting Victoria.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Always a pleasure, Grace.
kim881 said:
Good evening all and tank you, Victoria, for explaining this tricky form!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
You are welcome, Kim.
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Hello All! Victoria, thanks so much for hosting and sharing your knowledge.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I’ve enjoyed it, Linda. Thanks.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
When I first started to write poetry another poet mentioned sestina as the holy grail of poetry that is the ultimate form… well since then I’ve learned that there are even more complex forms… but the sestina takes so much time to write.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
It does take time…and lots of edits. It helps to choose the right words, though.
lillian said:
Thanks for hosting, Victoria! Phew…..this is just an amazing and challenging form. I wrote and rewrote and rewrote and rewrote. Looking forward to seeing how others work with it 🙂
And oh my yes, a lovely cold cold glass of Chardonnay would be most appreciated!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
As I mentioned on your blog–tons of rewrites! Chardonnay coming up…Rombauer ok?
Nathan AM Smith said:
Wow! What a cool style!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I hope you have fun with it Nathan.
msjadeli said:
Hi Victoria and All. Thanks for the introduction to what looks like a big something to wrap my mind around. Taking a few breaths to calm down and see what happens. It’s overcast here and the rain is just a wish at this point. See you all on the poetry trail!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I have no doubt that you will wrap it up with great success Ms. Jade
msjadeli said:
Thank you for your confidence in me, Victoria. Just finished it and it was quite an adventure.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I’m off to read in a minute!
msjadeli said:
Thank you, Victoria!
Mary (tqhousecat) said:
I hope this will be up for a while, for it may take a while!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
It’s up for 2 weeks…thankfully.
Grace said:
Mr Linky is open for 1 month.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Thanks for clarifying, Grace.
merrildsmith said:
Thanks so much for hosting and explaining this form, Victoria. I haven’t had a chance to think about it, but I plan to. I’m going to ponder over a glass of red wine.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Red wine coming up…how about a nice Zinfandel?
merrildsmith said:
Sounds great–though I’m just seeing it now at breakfast. Maybe I’ll wait a bit. 😉
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Good idea.
Grace said:
Thanks so much for hosting Victoria. I wrote my first one and I hope I understood the pattern. This took some time as I find writing long poems really challenging.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
It does take a long time to write it meaningfully. Yours was amazing.
Grace said:
Thank you for the encouragement. Your sestina is a fine example.
robtkistner said:
Thank you Victoria for hosting! I am not a big fan of form structured poetry. This form was extremely challenging, so I wrote a tongue-in-cheek sestina in response. Please read this lightheartedly. 🙂
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Can’t wait–will read in a few moments.
robtkistner said:
I tightened up the envoi as you suggested Victoria. This time I approached with a little better understanding. Still not completely happy…
Sabio Lantz said:
I will give this a try for a while, but it seems like such constraints will bring out what I dislike most in much poetry — forced grammar, forced verbosity, lack of real purpose of the poem but to fit the form. It will be hard for me to avoid these pitfalls. And it will be very long. Long poems are painful usually, and now we have forced repeating of words.
Odd form. But I will try for a short while. It is tempting to write a poem making fun of the poem, but I will resist that too.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Definitely not a form for everybody. I hope it surprises you, Sabio.
msjadeli said:
Sabio, will you please read mine and tell me what you think? I chose some rhyming words which I thought would make it sound better but it throws the rhythm and expectation of rhyme into discomfort it seems to me. However it sounds, it was fun to write.
Xan said:
I’m so thrilled to see this form. I actually did a sestina just about a week ago, to tie out my 24 (ish) poem set The Hours. It’s an amazing way to put words together. I cheated on the meter in mine, because it’s so complex, and pretty much free-versed it. Looking forward to my next attempt!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Have fun. No need to do meter or rhyme, Xan.
Xan said:
I’m seven ideas and a full half pad of waste paper in. Might not make the Linky on this one, in which case, if I manage this, I’ll post to an open mic.
Xan said:
OK, nm right after posting this comment I managed it. Whew! Does this burn calories?
Victoria C. Slotto said:
You wish. Look forward to reading in a few minutes, Xan.
robtkistner said:
OK Victoria — I loved this form so much (sound of throat clearing), I wrote a second! This one with a focus on the natural world. 🙂
Victoria C. Slotto said:
See, you love it and you know it!
msjadeli said:
Victoria, I reworked my sestina. I think I tightened it up without losing the meaning.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
“Write tight”–always a good thing. I’m off to read now. That was a motto of a former writing critique group of mine.
Just Barry said:
Oh, this one is pretty tricky. Had to give it at least one spin though!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Glad you did, Barry.
memadtwo said:
A challenge indeed! Thanks Victoria. (K)
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Thanks for dropping by!
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
Oh goody, I love the sestina – although it is indeed a complex and challenging form. (Pour me a Scotch; I’ll need something serious to encourage my Muse!) I’m a bit late starting but I look forward to having a go – and to reading other people’s. Many of you said you found the dizain tricky, yet you all wrote so well to it that I bet you surprise yourselves with the sestina too. 🙂
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Glad you’re going for it Rosemary. I’ll pour you a double scotch, neat..
sarahsouthwest said:
I found this exhausting! Just back from the Italian lakes, so I haven’t been dVersing at all for a few weeks.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
But what a fun holiday and sure to inspire some poetry, right?
sarahsouthwest said:
Oh, definitely. Just need to let it simmer on the back burner for a while.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I’ll be away for a few days and will catch up with reading and comments when I get back. Happy weekend.
Truedessa said:
I decided to give this a go. I am not sure how I did but, I did find it challenging. Thanks for an intriguing prompt.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
You nailed it, Truedessa.
gaia mouse said:
This was a marvelous exercise for me as I usually write free verse. I missed the deadline but had great fun with it.