Hello, this is Frank Hubeny. The challenge for the next two days is to use a polyptoton somewhere in your poem. Outside of keeping the poem under 200 words, which is just to limit the size of the entries, there are no other constraints.
Polyptoton is a rhetorical device used for style and persuasiveness. It is a special kind of repetition where the common base of a word is repeated, but not the whole word exactly.
One example of this is “I dreamed a dream.” Others would be “a song unsung” or “life worth living”.
In the first example, the words “dreamed” and “dream” are not the same, but they are very similar. It might seem odd for someone to not start telling us what the dream was about after saying “I dreamed”. Instead of telling us about the dream, all we get is “a dream”. On one level this is not satisfying, however, this repetition does emphasize the unreality of what one dreamed. It was just a dream. The near repetition also adds a potentially pleasing aural experience much like alliteration, assonance and rhyme. As a stylistic device it focuses the reader’s or listener’s attention on what should be important in the message.
If you wish to know more about this, Wikipedia provides examples of polyptoton and suggests that Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein used polypton throughout her novel. The ifioque site also provides examples and analysis of various contexts where writers have used polyptoton.
Here is Susan Boyle singing “I Dreamed a Dream”. Listen for the polyptotons in the lyrics. Does this stylistic device help make the song more pleasing to the listeners? Let me know in the comments below. Whether it does or not it is useful being aware of the technique.
To participate in this challenge use at least one polyptoton somewhere in your poem of less than 200 words. Post it to your blog, copy the link to that blog post and paste it in the Mister Linky below. The link will be open for 48 hours. Come back and read what other people have posted to see how they approached this challenge
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I like the way these works… thanks for a good tool… may I have a drink to drink.
Frank Hubeny said:
It is a common figure of speech. I didn’t know until recently it had a name.
kim881 said:
Good evening all and thank you for the prompt, Frank. I’m afraid I may be distracted this evening. It’s been very stressful with all the noise and dust from the building work. One of our cats, little Mojo, has gone missing, and Luna ran through wet concrete this evening when the door was left open to the room where all the work has been going on. I have to sleep on the sofa tonight as I can’t get up what’s left of our stairs. I was also hoping that me being downstairs would encourage the cats to stay with me. I’m constantly looking out of windows for Mojo and jumping at any little noise. I’ll read and comment as much as possible, and I’ll try to continue in the morning. Huge apologies.
Frank Hubeny said:
It sounds like you have a mess on your hands. Hopefully Mojo will come back when the dust settles and the place seems like home again. Our cat used to be afraid of strange people in the house and hide under the bed. Once she tore through the cloth and hid in the bed springs.
kim881 said:
Thanks Frank. I think she may be holed up in someone’s shed, sheltering from the rain. I hope so.
lillian said:
Ohhhh Kim. I do hope you find Mojo! So sorry for all the stress you’re having now. Remodeling/building etc can be such a disruption and then to have Mojo disappear too. Ugh. Hoping things settle down for you.
msjadeli said:
Kim so sorry your kitties are being stirred up with the work, and having your stairs in pieces so you can’t get upstairs has got to be stressful. Hoping Little Mojo is hiding in a dark corner of the house until things settle down.
kim881 said:
Thank you, Jade. She’s back this morning and sitting beside me. However, I had a really bad night’s sleep. I’m drinking chamomile tea to settle my stomach. I have to go out this morning, but I’m looking forward to reading and commenting later.
Frank Hubeny said:
I am glad to hear she came out of hiding. I remember how our cat used to turn up from somewhere secret and sit on our laps.
msjadeli said:
Yay on Little Mojo’s Return.
Xan said:
So stressful; when I moved into my house I had to live without a kitchen for two weeks, and then two more weeks for the construction. On the plus side, I got a lot of good poetry out of it.
kim881 said:
Now that’s a good point!
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Hello Frank and Fellow Poets- Happy Thursday! Frank, thanks you for this informative post.
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Aloso, will be posting shortly! I am having trouble accessing my WP.
Frank Hubeny said:
I hope you are able to access WP. I have rarely had trouble with it except when there were internet problems.
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
I can get in on my phone. Going to reboot my computer and see if it helps!
Frank Hubeny said:
Hopefully that helps. Sometimes when I have problems I disconnect the modem and router, wait a bit, and plug them back in. However, I don’t know why that should make a difference.
bearmkwa said:
An interesting device, indeed. First time I’ve ever heard of it. Thanks!
Frank Hubeny said:
It is my first time as well, but now that I know about it at least I can recognize it for what it is.
bearmkwa said:
I gave it a go. Came out to post the link but all I find is the broken link icon under the text so can not access the linky. Sorry.
Frank Hubeny said:
Try refreshing this page and then clicking on the Mister Linky.
I don’t know if that will matter, but today I had problems with some WordPress sites and I had to refresh the page before I could post a comment.
bearmkwa said:
I have done so, many times. It just won’t work on my computer for some reason… same as when I try at the library.
bearmkwa said:
It works for the other wordpress pages, just not this one for some reason.
Frank Hubeny said:
You might try putting your link in a comment here. I will see if I can post it.
bearmkwa said:
Sure.. here it is: http://jellicoswritingnook.home.blog/2019/10/24/a-life-worth-living/
Frank Hubeny said:
One final thing to see what might be wrong. Did you check the box about accepting the privacy policy under the “Your URL” box? I don’t want to check that for you, if you don’t agree with it.
bearmkwa said:
Go ahead… I’m not seeing that, either.
bearmkwa said:
I don’t even get the linky enough to get to that point. It shows either nothing in the place or a broken link icon that won’t connect to anything.
Frank Hubeny said:
There is an unusual problem here. Most people are able t see the icon and click on it.
bearmkwa said:
Yeah, so I find. They’re probably running a Microsoft operating system. I do not.
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Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Whew! Back up and posted! The gremlins are at work today…
Frank Hubeny said:
I have had problems as well with posting comments. Those gremlins do seem to be out.
sarahsouthwest said:
I’ve written a write and poemed a poem and now I’d like to drink a drink!
Frank Hubeny said:
Ahh! Polyptotons even in the comments. Well done!
CaliStray said:
Just found this in my feed, and thought it would be fun to try. I’m trying to become a better writer, though I’m still pretty fresh-faced Thank you for the inspiration!
lifelessons said:
What an original prompt, Frank. I had never heard of a Polyptoton. Thanks for educating me..Now on to meet the challenge.
Frank Hubeny said:
I found out about it only a few weeks ago. I did look it up to make sure there really was such a thing.
lifelessons said:
Well, I actually thought at first that I wasn’t going to be able to think of a root word, but when I hit on the right one, it started to work.
Rob Kistner said:
I wrote a poetic tale of lust and longing under the red roofs of Paris.
Frank Hubeny said:
Very nice. Lust and longing are worthy themes of poetry.
Rob Kistner said:
And thank you for hosting Frank.
Frank Hubeny said:
My pleasure!
lillian said:
An interesting rhetorical device. Since my last post was so long, I went with a tanka this time. Short but sweet as they say.
Sunnier here today….a nice cold glass of chardonnay, please.
Frank Hubeny said:
Here is the chardonnary, Lillian. It was sunnier today in Chicago as well.
msjadeli said:
Hello Frank and All. Way late today, a friend came over and we’ve been sitting in the sun room in the rocking chairs and drinking Magners — our local grocery store just started carrying it, yay! — and chit-chatting. It’s about 50 again outside today but the sun is shining which warms things up inside. Interesting poetic device, Frank, will put my thinking cap on and think I can come up with somethink. 🙂
Frank Hubeny said:
I don’t know what a Magners is, but I’m sure it tastes good. It was a cool, but clear day here. Nice for a walk – or chit-chatting.
msjadeli said:
Magners is hard cider from Ireland. Glad you enjoyed a cool clear day, Dwight.
Xan said:
This prompt has prompted me to think slightly differently about what to work on next.
Frank Hubeny said:
I’m glad it helped, Xan! An opportunity to try something new.
revivedwriter said:
I’ve never heard of a polyptoton before! Thanks for this intriguing post; I will try to respond to the challenge today.
Frank Hubeny said:
It is an unusual term for me as well. I couldn’t find much about it, but enough for a prompt I hope.
calmkate said:
the polypops do help but I can never get past the sheer beauty of her voice! What a powerhouse ❤
Thanks for expanding my knowledge … but no one can compete with Susan
Frank Hubeny said:
Her voice is beautiful. Her singing goes way beyond polyptotons.
calmkate said:
exactly, I’ve watched that clip so many times over the years and it still wrenches my heart everytime!
Rob Kistner said:
Just posted a second piece that deals with sensual love.
Frank Hubeny said:
I liked the phrase “kiss me kisses”.
Rob Kistner said:
I just posted a third piece that deals with forlorn loss of love.
Frank Hubeny said:
Memories bring regrets and tears (as well as joy). I especially can relate to your second stanza.
memadtwo said:
This was a challenge Frank…but always good to try new things! (K)
Frank Hubeny said:
Thank you, Kerfe!
Truedessa said:
Hello Frank! I am a bit late at the bar? It’s been a crazy week. Wishing all a peaceful weekend. I will be around reading today.
Frank Hubeny said:
Glad to see you here, Truedessa! I enjoyed your poem of questions each line containing a polyptoton. You illustrated well the effectiveness of drawing the reader’s attention to each line by using this figure of speech.
Nitin said:
The link widget expired and so, I thought I’d post the link here. I’m sorry I’m late. I hope it’s okay. https://nitinlalitmurali.ghost.io/poetry-if-you-love-me/
Frank Hubeny said:
The prompts on Monday last all week, but the other prompts last only two days. Thanks for posting your link and thinking of dVerse!