I’m Kim from Writing in North Norfolk, welcoming dVerse poets to Prosery, when we ask you to write a very short piece of prose that tells a story, with a beginning, a middle and an end, in any genre of your choice.
As it’s flash fiction, we have a limit of 144 words; an additional challenge is to hit 144 exactly. The special thing about Prosery is that we give you a complete line from a poem, which must be included somewhere in your story, within the 144-word limit.
It’s several months now since I self-published on Amazon a small experimental volume of flash fiction and short stories, Between Heartbeats, a title borrowed from a poem by Louis MacNeice, entitled ‘Coda’. I’d like you to write a story that includes the following line from that poem:
‘There are moments caught between heart-beats’.
You can read the complete poem here:
Here’s how to take part in Prosery:
– Write a piece of flash fiction of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line.
– Post your Prosery on your blog and link back to this post.
– Link it up to our Mr. Linky.
– Don’t forget to check the little box to accept use/privacy policy
– Visit other blogs. Enjoy some amazing writing, and don’t forget to comment.
Good evening all! The bar is now open. We have a range of drinks and snacks, as well as a range of prose for this evening’s prompt. Welcome!
Hello… this was a wonderful line to weave into prose. There are so many things that can be caught in those moments … but I think many like me will write dark stories to this…
My favourite kind of stories – the ones that walk on the dark side!
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Lill and Bjorn, you beat me to it this evening! I’ll be over to read now.
Hi Kim and all- this is a fabulous prompt Kim. I hope everyone is having a fabulous Monday!
Thank you, Linda. We’ve recovered from Storm Dennis and enjoyed a little bit of sunshine this morning, although it was very chilly in the wind!
We are having lovely weather right now!
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Thank you for hosting, Kim. It’s a wonderful line. I was writing of hearts and heartbeats this morning, so I’m going to have to ponder. 🙂
I’m looking forward to your ponderings, Merril! 🙂
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I think there will be a huge range of stories written to this prompt, Kim. Thank you for hosting. It’s still windy here – Dennis is still on the rampage. Hope you have having a quieter evening.
Do they call the storm Dennis the menace?
Just Storm Dennis, Bjorn, but I prefer Dennis the Menace!
Indeed.
I’m sorry that Dennis is outstaying his welcome, Sarah. I heard him whistling, but we had some sunshine today, so I just ignored him. 😉
Congratulations on you new e-book. I will have to check it out. Your prompt line today is a good one that could go many different ways!
Thank you, Dwight. It’s in paperback too. It was a bit of an experiment, There is such a wide range of stories already, it’s going to be an exciting read tonight.
I am down to editing mine!
Yay!
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Well, it’s my bedtime now, so I’ll say goodnight all! I’ll be back early in the morning to read and comment some more. Thank you for a great evening’s reading!
Dennis is dancing on my internet signal – he’s slowed it down to a crawl. I’m going to try again tomorrow.
Good idea, Sarah. I always worry when that happens, It usually means a power cut. Best to go to bed. 😉
sorry did not make 144 words only got to 130 now to go read some of the others here.
No problem! Meeting the 144 is an additional challenge – 144 is the limit. I’ll be over to read this morning.
Sorry. I do not write flash fiction. You may erase the post if you like. I noticed a couple of other people did not meet the criteria either!
No problem, Toni. I’ll be over to read this morning.
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Hello Kim and All. I was out today, visiting a sculpture park in winter. Wonderful prompt and decided to make it both dark and topical as a certain person’s trial is in process.
Dark is always good and topical is necessary!
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I was able to like your piece, Robin, but am unable to comment on it as I can’t get through the authentication process, it keeps going in a circle. So I’ll comment here.
There’s not much that makes me gasp, but your opening sentences caused a sharp intake of breath. You wrote about a horrific situation without naming or describing it directly. I like the contrast of fingers ‘gripping the silky coat of her dog’ and ‘tangled in a dirty, torn scarf dangling from her pained, bruising wrists’. You made my stomach churn with ‘salty, violent drippings from a shadowed face she could barely see’.
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Hi Kim, Mrityunjay here, Jay in short 🙂 Today I spent an amazing Spring afternoon while I was coming back home from college. Your prompt line resonated with the experience I had and I decided to give it a shot!
Thank you for joining us, Jay! I’ll be over to read later this evening.
Cool, it’ll be early morning here by then, so I’ll be asleep. Enjoy your Spring afternoon Kim!
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Thanks for hosting. For some reason – ‘There are moments caught between heart-beats’- took my muse by storm and sent me writing not one but several pieces. Most of them poetry, so in the end I went with a story about me finding those moments.
That’s a brilliant idea. You could share a poem on Open Link Night.
Thank you. I will.
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