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Welcome to Prosery – dVerse’s flash fiction prompt. dVerse is the poetry pub, but once a month we have some fun with prose. For this prompt, we ask you to write a piece of flash fiction in 144 words or less, including a quotation from a poem.
This week’s quotation is: No one left and no one came on the bare platform.
This seemed appropriate enough for these lockdown days, but I thought it also gave us a bit of room to breathe, stretch out and spread our story-telling wings.
The lines are lifted from Adelstrop by Edward Thomas, whose poems show great attention to, and delight in, nature. He was a close friend of Robert Frost, and I think both of them have the knack of producing something that can be read on many different levels.Thomas died at Arras in 1917, which adds extra poignancy to his legacy of pastoral poems and depiction of the British landscape.
If you don’t know Adlestrop, you can find it here: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/53744/adlestrop
So here’s what to do:
Write a piece of flash fiction in 144 words or less.
Include that quotation. You can play around with punctuation if you like.
Link it up to Mr Linky.
Take a wander round the other links – we may be socially isolating, but we can still link up online.
Hello Sarah… I have had a bit of break from writing and reading during Easter…. now the holiday has passed and I will be writing once again. I loved to start with prose… and this prompt really put me in the mood for some true melancholy
I’m so glad you liked it, Bjorn. Sometimes a break is good – gives you time to absorb the world.
I think I have looked too much at curves of covid-19… alas.
Yes – how are things in Sweden? I’ve heard you didn’t lock down at all, but I’m sure you metioned you were working from home?
I would say that we are doing most the same like everyone else… enough Swedes follow the advice of social distancing, so we don’t need so many laws forbidding things, so yes we are mostly open, but take care instead. But I would say that most of us are in voluntary lockdown… working from home… doing the groceries once a week when stores are empty… I think the rest of the world had gone crazy with our cries of laws to keep us inside… but I grew up following all recommendations.
That’s interesting. We have a few idiots here, but I think most people are being sensible, looking out for each other, following the rules.
So the difference is mostly that we have recommendations you have rules… I think our ways are more sustainable if we need to keep it going for another six months or so.
Yes, we’ll have to work out something.
Welcome everybody! The bar is open – the only bar in town! Come in and try our fine selection of lockdown wines and socially distant beers. Or maybe a quarantini? We’re here all night.
Thanks for hosting, Sarah! A rainy and BLUSTERY day in Boston — 60 to 70 mile per hour gusts of wind!!! So glad I didn’t buy my pansies for our deck yet. Looking forward to some prosery today….since I have no posies in my house.
Stay healthy everyone!
I will mix up an elderflower cordial for you! We’e had a cold wind, but clear blue skies this afternoon. I saw my first bluebells this morning.
An elderflower cordial sounds just the thing! Yesterday I was sitting at one end of an 8 foot long bench, an old friend at the other end, both of us in masks but still chatting and talking up a story. We marveled at the magnolia trees about to burst in bloom, the big blue jay who kept coming near us and even a robin or two. She lives alone, down the hall from us….and we can not longer have her in or visa versa so the long bench outside was just the thing! I do believe the pub may be the only place we can actually “sit” at stools next to us and clink our glasses too! 🙂
Clink!
Good evening everyone, and thank you Sarah for reminding me of ‘Adelstrop’, which I haven’t read for a while. I enjoyed writing for this prompt. I hope everyone has had a peaceful Easter weekend. We had sunshine until this morning, and it’s been dull and chilly since. Let’s hope the sunshine returns.soon!
Lovely to see you here, Kim. Adelstrop is an old favourite of mine. It’s so cinematic, in a quiet way.
It is!
Hello Sarah and All. It’s been overcast and windy here today. Sipping a hot coffee with unsweetened almond milk (which is running out) and am off to write 144 words…
look forward to reading it! We will all be drinking our tea and coffee black by the end of this…
Thanks for hosting Sarah. South Africa in a severe lockdown. This too shall pass.
Hi Sarah- Thanks for hosting today! I am working on something- love the prompt.
Thanks, Linda. Some great responses so far! Looking forward to seeing what you come up with ☺️
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Thanks Sarah. (K)
Ah, Sarah, I so love those! 🙂 Excellent quote for the prompt, and this story almost told itself …
Left the link with the linky-thingy and will now go read the contributions of others. Is there any club soda with a twist of lime left for me on tap?
Na’ama
https://naamayehuda.com/2020/04/13/according-to-plan/
There is always a club soda for you!
Yum! 🙂
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It has been yearssss since I wrote a 100-word fiction. Happy to have some time to join this session!
The more the merrier. There’s always room here 😊
aww. thank you!
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It’s been so long since I wrote flash fiction! Thanks for this prompt, Sarah. I’ve been writing poems a lot lately but I had almost stopped writing stories. This prompt really set my mood for writing.
Excellent! Come on in 😊
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Hello Sarah and everyone else!
The quote directly took me to the folklore I’m currently reading, so let that steer my story.
What a great line to play with, thank you Sarah
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Thanks for hosting, challenging prompt. Like it. Unsure on how and what to count as words, ats and thes. After all, this isn’t my birth language. So I ended up cutting lots as the word counter showed double the 144. Hope this size is close enough to fit the bill! 🙂
Sorry I didn’t see this before. I’m in awe of anybody who writes in a second language, especially as creatively as you.
no prob, you answered me anyways 🙂
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